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The Nightingale Life States - FAILED
« on: July 26, 2013, 07:18:12 AM »
Introduction

Hi everyone! Welcome to my new thread. I’ve never attempted one of these Life State dynasties before and I think it will be really fun! So let me introduce you to my founder…Craven Nightingale.



Life State: Vampire

Traits: Virtuoso, Bookworm, Childish, Schmoozer, Loner (I know!)

Favourites: Green, Frogs Legs, Country


Even though he didn’t roll the trait Dog Person, I decided to make him a dog anyway for some company. Meet Biscuit.



I will post the first chapter soon. Please comment :)
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Re: The Nightingale Life States
« Reply #1 on: July 26, 2013, 07:18:31 AM »
The Nightingale Life States - Dynasty Stats

GENERATION ONE: Craven Nightingale (Vampire)

[X]One Supernatural Best Friend: Argus Brown
Two Placeable Career Reward Objects: Writing Certificate
Three Unique Opportunities: Correcting Past Mistakes
[X]Four Unique LTRs: Speedy Cleaner, Prepared Traveller, Acclaimed Author, Observant
Five Wishes over 5000 points: Master Writing
Six Skill Challenges: Sports Writer
[X]Seven Skill Items: Books
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Re: The Nightingale Life States
« Reply #3 on: July 27, 2013, 07:14:14 AM »
Yay, another dynasty from Pyro! Craven looks really cool and Biscuit is very cute. Can't wait for the first chapter ;D
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Re: The Nightingale Life States
« Reply #4 on: July 28, 2013, 06:36:13 PM »
Thanks Candy!

I forgot to mention what town Craven is living in. It's Moonlight Falls.

Chapter One - The Early Stages

Firstly, Craven visited to library to practise writing. I plan for writing as his main skill but he might pick up guitar as well.



He worked on a few chapters and then visited Commonwealth Court to become a self-employed writer.



Then he had a bit of fun with Biscuit. The look on Craven's face makes me laugh :P
 


Then I remembered that Craven needs a house. So I built him this. It's quite small but we will manage until later funds come in.




*Sorry about the short chapter. The next one will be longer.

Please comment! I'd like some constructive criticism to help improve my writing.
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Re: The Nightingale Life States - The Early Stages
« Reply #5 on: July 29, 2013, 04:26:53 AM »
I love the look of that house. Are you playing in Moonlight Falls?
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Re: The Nightingale Life States - The Early Stages
« Reply #6 on: July 29, 2013, 05:47:48 AM »
What expansion does Craven's hair come from? I love this dynasty so keep up the good work :)



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Re: The Nightingale Life States - The Early Stages
« Reply #7 on: July 29, 2013, 07:46:40 PM »
I love the look of that house. Are you playing in Moonlight Falls?
Yes, I am.

What expansion does Craven's hair come from? I love this dynasty so keep up the good work :)
It comes from the University Life expansion pack. Thanks
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Re: The Nightingale Life States - Accomplishments
« Reply #8 on: July 31, 2013, 12:44:07 AM »
Chapter Two - Accomplishments

Craven has been writing book after book and is earning a lot of money. His most recent book was a romance novel called “Island of Love” which earned nearly 2000 simoleons in royalties! I bought Craven a new computer, desk and stereo.



He also invited over Marigold Maldano and became her boyfriend.



I asked her to move in and she got a makeover in her favourite colour, yellow. I also changed the colour of her hair to a nicer shade of blonde. She's actually quite pretty!



I built another house as well, I found the other one was too small and cramped.



Soon after, Craven finished his book and accomplished his Lifetime Wish! He was so excited he did a little dance with Marigold, which looked ridiculous.
 


Also, Craven has taken up the guitar.



And I adopted another dog, called Lily. She and Biscuit are trying for puppies so expect pupboos soon. :D



Before I go, I’d like to show you…this.




Remember to comment, please! I really love getting feedback.
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Re: The Nightingale Life States - Accomplishments
« Reply #9 on: July 31, 2013, 04:10:10 AM »
The last picture confused me. Is it some sort of spoiler or...? Anyways, Marigold is very pretty.
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Re: The Nightingale Life States - Accomplishments
« Reply #10 on: July 31, 2013, 05:27:03 AM »
Marigold is really pretty! I've haven't really paid much attention to her in my game but I will now ;D Their dancing was really funny and I think Lily is adorable. Can't wait for their puppy (or puppies)!
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Re: The Nightingale Life States - Accomplishments
« Reply #11 on: July 31, 2013, 08:01:48 PM »
The last picture confused me. Is it some sort of spoiler or...? Anyways, Marigold is very pretty.
No, it's just a random picture of Craven playing video games at someone's house. Thank you! I spent a lot of time choosing and colouring her clothes.

Marigold is really pretty! I've haven't really paid much attention to her in my game but I will now ;D Their dancing was really funny and I think Lily is adorable. Can't wait for their puppy (or puppies)!
Thanks :). I was surprised at the state of their dancing as well! It was even funnier because of the stony faces.
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Re: The Nightingale Life States - Accomplishments
« Reply #12 on: August 01, 2013, 12:49:54 AM »
Gah! *shakes laptop* I failed another dynasty! I just realised I missed a requirment (I was ahead in game). Don't ask me how, because I do not know. Anyway, I'm sorry, and as always I'll start another dynasty soon. Could a moderator please move this to the graveyard?
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Re: The Nightingale Life States - Accomplishments
« Reply #13 on: October 04, 2013, 02:40:05 PM »
Gah! *shakes laptop* I failed another dynasty! I just realised I missed a requirment (I was ahead in game). Don't ask me how, because I do not know. Anyway, I'm sorry, and as always I'll start another dynasty soon. Could a moderator please move this to the graveyard?

I'll move this to the graveyard as you requested, Pyro.  Better luck with your next attempt!
 
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