I gave up, or at least set aside the park for a while, I just can't get it to come out the way I want, especially after seeing the ones in the contest.
I have created a new park, this one feels "right"; there is room for improvment, but no negative feelings as I have with the other park. The main focus is on an adult area, for exercising mainly, but some play sections for family members.
It is in SV, and the lot size is 30 by 30. Cost so far is close to $90,000 It is on the beach area, so you can see the ocean behind the house. Expansion packs needed will be WA, SN and SEA, also includes items from AS and MV. No CC's definitely and for store items, as far as I know none. I do know that there was some free downloads, but I don't think I used anything from there.
First floor has a pool, restroom/shower rooms and at one end of the pool is the playpen (AS) and a toy box for toddlers. I didn't expect for anyone to use it, but was surprised. Also on that wall is a bookshelf, it has all the skill books, fishing books, and recipes for the seven special alchemy elixers.
At the stairs, you can see the fortune cookie machine. Go up the stairs and you will see the restrooms/showers, a section has some exercise machines, a tv and area to work out. Set off on another side is the martial art area, a sparring area, two dummies for praticing and two board breakers.
Outside is the family play area, with swings for young and old. Battle stations for water balloons and snowball fights and a soccer area. There is between the building and soccer section enough room for playing catch or tag. Patio area is simple, just a fountain, bar, a fairy house, and tables to sit at. The trees are money, apple, lime and pomogranate trees, some life fruit, flame fruit and two omini plants. That is all.
So, feedback will be greatly appreciated on any changes that will make it better.
This is the overview of the lot. I think of it as a combination of a gym and a park.
The second floor, exercise and martial art
First floor, pool, rest/shower rooms, playpen and lounge chairs.
Patio area, fountain, bar and fairy house
The fairy house, my sim isn't a fairy, so I was glad to see that one was able to get in and out without a problem.
A different view of the patio area
It was evening when I took this photo, but I think you can see a sim playing soccer.
Another view at the evening time, a couple of kids had been on the swings, some had been playing catch, and I think one person had been using the soccer net for practice.
This is the second time a toddler had been placed there, I was able to catch this one playing in the playpen. I think he wants to be a scientist when he grows up.
I thought I had more photos of the pool, so I will add them later, but you can get an idea of what the gym park will be like. Any suggestions will be apprecated.