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Re: Ghastly Hallows--A Who's Your Daddy Project, Chapter 30: Heading for Home
« Reply #225 on: October 26, 2013, 03:04:14 AM »
I finished reading the last College Daze. Awww, but somehow that I’m glad the result is not my chosen heroine. Congrats, Zheena :P
Now, I already said that I’ll catch up. It took several days to come into this point.

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Re: Ghastly Hallows--A Who's Your Daddy Project, Chapter 30: Heading for Home
« Reply #226 on: October 26, 2013, 11:54:41 AM »
Zombie streaking?!? Holy crap, the funniest things happen in your games, haha!
Yeah, the pixels were just moving by really slowly, and I wondered why a streaker was moving so slowly.  Sure enough, zombie streaker.  Totally cracked me up!

I finished reading the last College Daze. Awww, but somehow that I’m glad the result is not my chosen heroine. Congrats, Zheena :P
Now, I already said that I’ll catch up. It took several days to come into this point.
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Ghastly Hallows--Chapter 31: Many Missing Moments
« Reply #227 on: October 27, 2013, 07:43:18 PM »
"Thanks for coming to University with me, mom," Abbica said once they'd returned.
"Of course," Zheena replied.  "You know you're my favorite."
"It's not right to have favorites, mom," the mermaid girl replied.



"You're right," her mother replied.  "I love all of my children equally...I just love you equally more."  And with that, she embraced her favorite daughter and bid her farewell.  Abbica moved in with her half-sisters in Alfonso's old house.
Shortly after the firstborn child left the home,




Zheena confirmed that the next baby is on the way.
Interestingly, this news came in the early morning hours of Zheena and Alfonso's wedding anniversary.  They put on a nice public display at the same beach where she had proposed.




The paparazzi got a good show.



Meantime, the teen girls were holding down the fort.
"Who's the most adorable girl ever?" Cassidy asked baby Galilaia.
"You are, Cassidy," responded Cosmo.
"It's true," the green girl confirmed.



She then added, "Now make her let go of my hair."
And young Djavon was seeing his little friend again...without Fabala around to pester them.



"So, what do you want to talk about?" Djavon asked.
"I don't know," she replied.  "Let's go say hi to your creepy green sister."
(Sigh)
The next morning found the "happy" couple sharing some time with the still in utero baby.



"Hey, little one," greeted the so-called father, "I love you no matter how much you don't look like me."
"How practical," responded Zheena.
But after the elder siblings and "daddy" had left for their busy days,



Folson finally finished his toddler skills and aged up to look just like his father...which is, of course, Alfonso.
And after she took care of the alien child, Zheena turned her attention to her pink baby.




"Thank you for not being some creepy supernatural freak," she cooed at the non-ghost baby.  Zheena definitely prefers non-supernaturals and daughters.
When the rest of the daughters got home, they set right to work at snacks and homework.




"Can we have a dungeon built on that we can send the freak to?" asked Everly.  "She's giving me indigestion."
"Maybe you're just developing an ulcer from being so obsessed with your own self-image," posed the alien girl.



However, Alfonso didn't head straight home.  He was having dinner out.  With his boss.  His rather attractive boss.  His attractive vampire boss.
That's precisely why he missed this important moment.




And he missed more family time as he and his vampiric boss made a late night of it.



So he also missed this moment.



But a certain werewolf suitor of Zheena's didn't miss exactly why Alfonso was absent from these moments.



Including this very important moment.



But he and the married Mrs. Ithaca checked in at a local resort and had a moment of their own...





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Alfonso, we don't like you, you know. And with Zheena's dress sleeves, it looks like she's wrapping the baby in leather belts when it's born. I was like, That is a bit excessive... I don't know how you have the patience for a challenge like this. I can't even get to 12 babies without wanting to explode!

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Hmm, Pippin this is wonderfully written. I love how you play with reader emotion :P

It's a nice way to make Alfonso become hated people in this story. Well, I don't really care about him anyway :P

Even that I don't care I still love him though; he is part of this story as well our Zheena. He is poorly skill-slave builder, so I thought why not that he’s not having his own way? Maybe Zheena is not the one who destined with him after all. That also work with Zheena, I know that she doing this for the sake of challenge, so that's why Pippins at the start of story worrying about her. Just look at this can explain about this all. I can feel Pippins guilt, somehow...

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Well, whatever happens to both of them. I just wished the best end for them. And looking at the household, with that many children... It's a totally chaos! I hope that you still having fun, Pippin!
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Alfonso, we don't like you, you know. And with Zheena's dress sleeves, it looks like she's wrapping the baby in leather belts when it's born. I was like, That is a bit excessive... I don't know how you have the patience for a challenge like this. I can't even get to 12 babies without wanting to explode!
Yep.  A hated hubby and belt-bound babies.  That about sums up this challenge  :=)  it's fun, and hiring babysitters and making the teens help makes things far more manageable.

Hmm, Pippin this is wonderfully written. I love how you play with reader emotion :P
It's a nice way to make Alfonso become hated people in this story. Well, I don't really care about him anyway :P
Even that I don't care I still love him though; he is part of this story as well our Zheena. He is poorly skill-slave builder, so I thought why not that he’s not having his own way? Maybe Zheena is not the one who destined with him after all. That also work with Zheena, I know that she doing this for the sake of challenge, so that's why Pippins at the start of story worrying about her. Just look at this can explain about this all. I can feel Pippins guilt, somehow...
Well, whatever happens to both of them. I just wished the best end for them. And looking at the household, with that many children... It's a totally chaos! I hope that you still having fun, Pippin!
I'm glad you're enjoying it!  It's a really fun story to write.  Zheena's very different than any other character I've ever played, so it's a nice stretch to write.

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Hi, I just finished your story. Nice to meet you. I have to say that you're pretty good writer, PeregrineTook.

You make me angry at them both, but I can't hate them, just love 'em. That's funny :)

In my opinion, I think that there's no one who's wrong or right here.

If you want to hate Alfonso, well look at Zheena and her attitude at first. That's no big deal for what Zheena do to Alfonso. And yet, when Alfonso do the same and neglect his 'children' that just make him a bad guy? I think no. Well, just think about how you're in Alfonso situation.

Zheena with Akoni and Alfonso with someone else. I just love how twisted your story is.  Can't wait to found out what in the store next time. Bookmarked! :)
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Just caught up with the story, I was busy writing my own story. Alfonso, you are betraying Zheena trust and missing many happy moments of your family. Why are you staying at a resort with a married woman? I am enjoying it. Looking forward for next chapter.
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Hi, I just finished your story. Nice to meet you. I have to say that you're pretty good writer, PeregrineTook.
You make me angry at them both, but I can't hate them, just love 'em. That's funny :)
In my opinion, I think that there's no one who's wrong or right here.
If you want to hate Alfonso, well look at Zheena and her attitude at first. That's no big deal for what Zheena do to Alfonso. And yet, when Alfonso do the same and neglect his 'children' that just make him a bad guy? I think no. Well, just think about how you're in Alfonso situation.
Zheena with Akoni and Alfonso with someone else. I just love how twisted your story is.  Can't wait to found out what in the store next time. Bookmarked! :)
Why thank you, Luna!  Glad you're enjoying the story.  I'm glad that both Alfonso and Zheena are coming across as lovable characters that you want to hate, but can't.  That was the goal.

Just caught up with the story, I was busy writing my own story. Alfonso, you are betraying Zheena trust and missing many happy moments of your family. Why are you staying at a resort with a married woman? I am enjoying it. Looking forward for next chapter.
Alfonso having an affair with his married boss is even that much worse given that he's now cheating on both his wife and his mistress, Ariel.

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Ghastly Hallows--Chapter 32: Departures
« Reply #234 on: October 31, 2013, 09:15:15 PM »

Some of Zheena's children were a little different than others.



But she only had the one who climbed walls.
Meantime, Zheena's husband was climbing into the bath at his new mistress' house.  After all, everyone who is "just a friend" spends the night frequently and bathes and eats at the "friend's" home.




In the absence of her "father," Hildy was having a rather special day.



As Hildy leaned in to blow out the candles, a couple of things happened.  One was that Everly glared at Fabala.  This surprised no one.



The second thing was that the cake caused a fire, and then Cosmo put it out, so no one other than Cassidy knew where the sudden burst from a fire extinguisher originated.
With that crisis averted, they tried again.




They had a firefighter in attendance this time around, but things went off without a hitch this time.



Before she left, Hildy had a chat with Djavon.
"You know that some of the little ones will need extra care from you since mom is not always quite so...nurturing," Hildy said, trying to be delicate.



"So you want me to watch out for the alien kids?" Djavon asked.
"Yes," sighed Hildy.



Now and again, Alfonso made a point of leaving his mistress' home to make an appearance.
However, Zheena was quite capable of taking exquisite care of the young, impressionable children.




"But seriously, he's not only vomit green, but he also smells like garbage!" she said into the phone.
"I'm sitting right here, mom," Folson replied.  "And I know you're not really talking to anyone."
Well, maybe she did need some help after all.  



Alfonso took the baby for a walk...



but then he got distracted. 
Well, at least there are still two teens around to help out.




At least, there used to be two teens.



After Cassidy had achieved her early age-up requirements,



she said goodbye to baby Galilaia and moved in with Abbica and Hildy at the old Alto place.
Zheena went out to get closer to more potential baby daddies,




and suggested nude sketching.



But she called in some help for Djavon.  A familiar babysitter arrived shortly thereafter.



"Well, you're looking just lovely this evening," Djavon greeted the sitter.
"And you're not as attractive as your sister," replied Hildy's teen girlfriend.
Poor Djavon.



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Re: Ghastly Hallows--A Who's Your Daddy Project, Chapter 32: Departures
« Reply #235 on: October 31, 2013, 09:21:06 PM »
She's a perfect candidate for become the spider-woman, Pippin. Now just gather the requirement ingredient for she become one!

It's a disaster for a birthday party! I just love how that firefighter photobomb your screenshot ;D

Haha! The funny part when I see the distracted part. I shouldn't be laughing but I can't help it :P

Djavon maybe will find his true love somewhere, but I just hoping the relationship will not end up like Hildy :P
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Re: Ghastly Hallows--A Who's Your Daddy Project, Chapter 32: Departures
« Reply #236 on: October 31, 2013, 09:41:14 PM »
That's interesting glitch that I ever seen in my game.

It's sad that your family member has more contribute to extinguish the fire instead that useless firefighter. Wait, is she a Diva? Just look at the screenshot! I can't stop laughing when I see Alfonso took the baby for a walk! That's a genuine idea yet end up hillarious! Poor Djavon? Well, he can snatch a boyfriend just to compare who is better, I bet there is a better looking Sim somewhere. Ahh, nasty idea! Just forget what I said.

Nice update, I look forward to see more!
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Re: Ghastly Hallows--A Who's Your Daddy Project, Chapter 32: Departures
« Reply #237 on: October 31, 2013, 10:42:57 PM »
She's a perfect candidate for become the spider-woman, Pippin. Now just gather the requirement ingredient for she become one!
It's a disaster for a birthday party! I just love how that firefighter photobomb your screenshot ;D
Haha! The funny part when I see the distracted part. I shouldn't be laughing but I can't help it :P
Djavon maybe will find his true love somewhere, but I just hoping the relationship will not end up like Hildy :P
Fabala as Spider-woman.  That could work!
Photobombing firefighters are rather amusing  :=)
I actually didn't know that poor baby Harlen had been left on the ground until the need bar had dropped and the photo background had gone yellow.

That's interesting glitch that I ever seen in my game.
It's sad that your family member has more contribute to extinguish the fire instead that useless firefighter. Wait, is she a Diva? Just look at the screenshot! I can't stop laughing when I see Alfonso took the baby for a walk! That's a genuine idea yet end up hillarious! Poor Djavon? Well, he can snatch a boyfriend just to compare who is better, I bet there is a better looking Sim somewhere. Ahh, nasty idea! Just forget what I said.
Nice update, I look forward to see more!
I was rather amused by my wacky wall-climber as well.
Alfonso appeared to be stepping in as a good dad, but the baby left on the ground kind of changed that heppy moment.  It did make a nice shot for the story, though  ;=)

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Re: Ghastly Hallows--A Who's Your Daddy Project, Chapter 32: Departures
« Reply #238 on: November 02, 2013, 07:38:50 PM »

Now, Alfonso, leaving the baby out to die in the cold is NOT acceptable. Take revenge on Zheena, not the nooboo, even if it's not yours (ps: it's probably not). By the way, what on earth is going on with Zheena's dress in the last birth? Is that a CC dress, with the arm buckles?

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Re: Ghastly Hallows--A Who's Your Daddy Project, Chapter 32: Departures
« Reply #239 on: November 02, 2013, 09:54:41 PM »
Now, Alfonso, leaving the baby out to die in the cold is NOT acceptable. Take revenge on Zheena, not the nooboo, even if it's not yours (ps: it's probably not). By the way, what on earth is going on with Zheena's dress in the last birth? Is that a CC dress, with the arm buckles?
Yep.  CC dress with crazy arm buckles.  It seemed gloriously obnoxious, so I went with it.  I've enjoyed finding all sorts of awesome CC outfits for Zheena and her girls, and a few things for the boys as well.  You'll have several more great outfits to enjoy.  Big thanks to ILoveDolls for helping me to become acquainted with CC.
Yep.  All the children are not Alfonso's...until we finally get to that 26th pregnancy.  That will be his turn to actual father a child rather than simply playing father to them.

 

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