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Offline chetanhaobijam

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The Haobijam Immortal Dynasty: Graveyard
« on: June 28, 2013, 02:15:22 PM »
Hi, fellow members. I am Chetan Haobijam from India. Since our state didn't sold eps but only base game, I have to fulfill my sims3 dream with only the base game. Since then, I had become bored and want to do a challenge or a dynasty. Since I have no patches(due to slow internet i couldn't download them), I can't achieve Hof status when I do a challenge or a dynasty. So, for just fun and for testing how immortal dynasty is done, I am doing an unofficial Immortal dynasty(thanks to samoht for allowing me to do it).Truly, I am inspired to start my own dynasty by reading other great writers/players' immortal dynasties.


The rules will be same except that my sim can't own property because I don't have the patch nor the ambitions ep.The remaining rules can be found here.


Please comment if you like. Your comments will be my inspiration to continue the story. Please point me out there is any mistake in the words, I am not fluent in English. To mods/admin: Please move this topic if this doesn't belong here.
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Re: The Haobijam Unofficial Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #1 on: June 28, 2013, 02:33:33 PM »
Founder and Heirs Requirements:
Sim Name- Chetan Haobijam
Lifetime wish- Celebrated Five-Star Chef.
Career-
Supermax skill-
Other max skills-
Building-
3 LTRs-
6 Best Friends-
6 Opportunities-
Portraits-


(Space for other heirs)
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Offline chetanhaobijam

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Re: The Haobijam Unofficial Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #2 on: June 28, 2013, 03:35:28 PM »
Everybody meet Chetan. He is my almost simself.
W: Chetan, say hi to all members of this nice forum.
C: Hi, everyone.

C: How in llama I'm here and who are you?
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W: I am your watcher, controller and also your god. You are created to test the popular immortal dynasty. If you are successful in this attempt then you will be used in the future real hof qualifying immortal dynasty.
C: Real?
W: This is just a test to check your patience and skill building ability and others.
C: Ok then let's start.
W: About you- You are Clumsy(hey!), Friendly(ok), Slob(are you teasing me?), Natural Cook and Green Thumb(that's true). Your LTW is Celebrated 5 star chef(achieve level 10 of Culinary Career). And you like Pop music, Lobster Thermidor(Yum:x, can't wait to make it) and Colour Blue(sky, ocean all are blue).
Your objectives are to become an immortal by eating ambrosia after fulfilling all your requirements + produce a suitable heir.

Next chapter.
Please comment if you like.
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Re: The Haobijam Unofficial Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #3 on: June 28, 2013, 05:47:35 PM »
Glad to see you've started a Dynasty, Chetan! I can't wait to see what will happen next!  :D

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Re: The Haobijam Unofficial Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #4 on: June 28, 2013, 09:45:25 PM »
Glad to see you've started a Dynasty, Chetan! I can't wait to see what will happen next!  :D
Thanks for reading it. The update will come soon.
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Re: The Haobijam Unofficial Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #5 on: June 28, 2013, 09:58:02 PM »
I'm interested to read a dynasty with just the basic game.  I almost forget it's there with all the expansion packs that are out! 

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Re: The Haobijam Unofficial Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #6 on: June 28, 2013, 10:13:21 PM »
Thanks for reading it. This is my first story/dynasty, so I am currently nervous that I couldn't achieve the quality writing of other great writers. But I will try my best to give you all good story to read.
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Re: The Haobijam Unofficial Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #7 on: June 29, 2013, 12:37:43 AM »
It isn't about how you write, its about how much fun you have with the story!  I am a terrible writer, I've tried writing but I write boring details, not fun stories, so I don't write.   :D

Just have fun!


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Re: The Haobijam Unofficial Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #8 on: June 29, 2013, 02:28:40 AM »
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Re: The Haobijam Unofficial Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #9 on: June 29, 2013, 02:35:49 AM »
This looks really good, Chetan! I can't wait to read more.
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Re: The Haobijam Unofficial Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #10 on: June 29, 2013, 05:33:40 AM »
Chapter 1. My First day in Sunset Valley.


C: Now, you all know who I am. When I get there, there was nothing but only grasses at my Summerhill Court house.
Despite I have no proper house, the area I was living was beautiful and full of nice landscape.



Then, magic happens, and my house lot was full of cheap things. When did I get them, i don't know?




Before continuing, every Immortal dynasty sims have to persuade the rich widow women to join the house to get money by selling her car and using her to paint portraits. She must be tired of all this.




But, it has to wait because I have to increase my cooking skill first. After sometime, the paper boy came and give me today's paper. I checked if there is any discount classes and community events.




After leaving the house , I go to the bistro to take a cooking class and apply for the culinary career. It costs me money, so i have to manage the money wisely.




12'o clock came and I go to Park to socialize and grill hotdogs to increase my cooking skill.




Then, I go to Library, there I play video games for fun and read cooking skill books to further increase my cooking skill. The women sitting next to me creeps me out, she was so large.






Night came and i become tired from reading. So, I fell asleep at the nice library sofa. I don't want to sleep in my house cheap bed.




(That's all for now. Please comment if you like).
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Re: The Haobijam Unofficial Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #11 on: June 29, 2013, 06:06:53 AM »
This looks really good, Chetan! I can't wait to read more.
Thanks, Pyro. It's great to hear that my first story is being read by fellow members. I have just now written another chapter of this story. Hope you like it.
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Re: The Haobijam Unofficial Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #12 on: June 29, 2013, 07:41:28 PM »

"I am your watcher, controller and also your god."

Haha, poor sim! Good luck with your dynasty!

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Re: The Haobijam Unofficial Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #13 on: June 29, 2013, 08:42:27 PM »
Nice start so far! Good luck with this! :D

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Re: The Haobijam Unofficial Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #14 on: June 29, 2013, 09:21:57 PM »
"I am your watcher, controller and also your god."

Haha, poor sim! Good luck with your dynasty!
Yeah, poor sim, they have to do the hard work everytime to accomplish our goals. And that's why, they are created. Thanks for reading. Even if i couldn't achieve the immortal goal i will atleast give you a good story to read.
Nice start so far! Good luck with this! :D
Thanks for the comment. I always cheer up when I see that my story/topic has been replied or commented.

Right now, my sims game is fighting against my slow old laptop. But, i will manage it and the next update will come soon.
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