I honestly have to say I really like your story! Chava is going to be a cutie and I know it. Bonnie aged up really well. And wow, do I like your writing style.
Thanks! I actually have an update for you!
Chapter 18
Hey! I'm back and have quite a bit to tell you! First off, the kids' makeovers!
Treasure, sticking true to her personality.
And Omari, basically a teenage version of his child outfit. It suits him, I must say.
Oh, I have a bit of a story to tell you. It's something that happened almost right after Treasure aged up. That afternoon, I walked into her room and caught her sitting on her bed, crying.
Koryn: Treasure? Treasure, what's wrong?
Treasure: It hurts.. it hurts so much mum...
Koryn: What does?
Treasure: My heart.. as soon as I aged up, I felt such sadness.. loneliness.. despair.. What is it?
Koryn: I think I know what's going on.. I know what you are now. You're not a storytelling Starlighter. You're a carrier.
Treasure: *looks really confused* A what?
Koryn: You know how when you feel really sad for a long time, then you feel better for a while?
Treasure: Of course.
Koryn: But then it comes back worse than before?
Treasure: Yeah.. but that's just emotions.
Koryn: Yes, but you'e holding others emotions.
Treasure: You lost me.
Koryn: In that time when you feel better, the sadness literally leaves your body. But it can't just float. It has to be in a human. So the sadness, goes to a carrier. Meaning you.
Treasure: So I'm sad because a bunch of other people are happy?
Koryn: Weird way of saying it.. but sort of. Being a carrier is a big burden, cause you hold the pain so others can be happy. If you know how to control it, you can either ignore it and lock the pain out, or you can hold the pain in you for as long as possible to keep others happy. Another thing a carrier can do is sense peoples emotions. So you can tell when someone is hiding something. You can see their memories to try to find the source of the sadness, and you try to make them feel better.
Treasure: Mum..
Koryn: Yes?
Treasure: I'm doing it right now.. I am seeing your memories.. You're hiding so much pain in your heart..
Koryn: Treasure, stop. Right now. You can't hold my pain.
Treasure: I can't stop it. Just having physical contact with you is making it happen..
Koryn: *lets go of Treasures hand* I've gotta go.. *rushes out of the room*
Sorry it was kinda long, I get carried away when I'm storytelling. I only have one more picture to show you for now,
Omari and Treasure are now dating! They are so adorable. Until next time!
That was a bit random, but oh well! Sorry about it's randomness :p I've been really looking forward to showing you this part. I love when I can randomly just tell a story instead of narrate. Next time, a house tour! Again, sorry about all the text :p