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The Starlighter Immortal Dynasty - Graveyard
« on: June 17, 2013, 12:32:33 AM »
Prologue [Part 1]

I am The Last Starlighter. My name is Koryn, and I am the only living Starlighter. I can tell stories, stories that have not happened to me. But yet, are true and have happened sometime in the past. On occasion, I can even tell stories from the future. Most call me a fortune teller. But I am much more than a fortune teller. I have lived more than one life, my world -in my past life- was ruled by dragons. The dragons held the humans slaves. But one dragon, my keeper, along with some people from the other world, helped me escape. So I could do good in the world. Instead of evil, like the dragons wanted me to. And if I complete an immortal dynasty, I will be powerful enough to overthrow the dragons and free the humans. Because they are still overruling, in a different dimension, or world. When I am done, it shall be as it was before the dragons overtook millennia ago. I have grown up from birth again, Jeez when they say Starlighters live twice they aren’t kidding. I will tell you my second backstory later. Anyway, So I have set off to do this. I am Koryn Starlighter, and I shall become immortal and save human kind.


Well, I got bored again now that I am back from camp. So I decided to start again! I went with a story-line inspired by some of my favorite books, The Dragons Of Sratlight by Bryan Davis. Koryn is a sim I made back in Sims 2. I finally re-made her :) Tell me what you think! The rest of her back-story to come soon!

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Re: The Starlighter Immortal Dynasty - Prologue [part 1]
« Reply #1 on: June 17, 2013, 12:32:52 AM »
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Re: The Starlighter Immortal Dynasty - Prologue [part 1]
« Reply #2 on: June 17, 2013, 01:08:06 AM »
Prologue [Part 2]

I suppose you want to know a bit of my back-story.. Well, you know some about my other life. Lets tell you about this one. I was born to two teenagers. Zelda Hillridge and Jason Barbosa. After I was born they married. Here are some pictures.






They were both sixteen at the time. They were happy together. That didn't last very long. Skip ahead about two years, I am almost two now. They are almost eighteen.



They are always fighting. It has gotten to the point where he is beating her.





After their daily fights, my mom would take me on strolls to a nearby park.




Everyday, she looked terrified for her own life. And mine.



Before we would go home every day, she would hold me close and say,



Zelda: Koryn, mommy loves you. Remember that always. Okay? Mommy loves you even though Daddy doesn't. Promise you'll remember?
Koryn: I pwomise, Mommy. I wuv you Mommy.
Then she would hold me and hug me, sobbing. Then we would go home, after my father was in bed. That was our daily routine until I was sixteen. Then my mom decided enough. She ran. She ran until she couldn't run any more. They found her body in Bridgeport.. We lived in Monte Vista... Then it was me being abused. Then I was the one that ran. I was already struggling with my Starlighter abilities. I didn't need him hurting me and making it worse. So I ran to the Valley of the Sunset. On my journey there is when I figured out about my past life. Apparently I was killed in that life, so I was put in this one to right that wrong. To free the humans in that world. Before they took over this one. Well, that is all for my back story.. I will see you next time!


I figured this dynasty was my chance to showcase some of my true writing abilities. Do you think I did okay? Please comment!


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Re: The Starlighter Immortal Dynasty - Prologue [part 1]
« Reply #4 on: June 17, 2013, 06:46:39 AM »
A really awesome prologue! I feel so sorry for Zelda and Koryn :( I really love your dynasties Artsygirl, and I really hope you don't fail this one.
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Re: The Starlighter Immortal Dynasty - Prologue [part 1]
« Reply #5 on: June 17, 2013, 11:34:08 AM »
Awww, such a tragic beginning!  I'll be reading, Artsy ^^

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Re: The Starlighter Immortal Dynasty - Prologue [part 1]
« Reply #6 on: June 17, 2013, 12:32:52 PM »
A really awesome prologue! I feel so sorry for Zelda and Koryn :( I really love your dynasties Artsygirl, and I really hope you don't fail this one.
Thank you Pyro! I have decided that even if I fail I will keep going with this one. I just love this story line too much to abandon it if I fail.
Awww, such a tragic beginning!  I'll be reading, Artsy ^^
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Re: The Starlighter Immortal Dynasty - Chapter 1
« Reply #7 on: June 17, 2013, 09:43:42 PM »
Chapter 1

Here I am, in Sunset Valley at age eighteen..



I stood in front of my new lot, it's very intimidating.. Standing there, looking out at these big mansions, then looking at your empty lot and you get intimidated.. I wanted to see the town, so I called a taxi and told the driver to take me anywhere in town. Don't ask why but she took me to this woman's house..



Kroyn: Hi, my name is Koryn and-
Agnes: You are a dynasty girl aren't you? And you need my help cause you are new to the town and don't know what you are doing?
Koryn: Yes..
Agnes: Alright, let's go back to your lot so I have my car with me.
Koryn: Okay...



Dang she has a nice car! We got back to my lot and I asked her to move in with me, to make it official. Then I explained why I was doing it.



She thought I was crazy, but still wanted to help me. I wonder if this happens to her often? This is the house we made with her money.



There have been a few changes since this photo. There has been a covered porch added to the back of the house. Anyway, from top left going clockwise, the empty room is going to be a bedroom for kids and teens, then Agnes' studio, where the porch now is, my study (I'm a writer), my bedroom and bathroom (the dark red one in the top left of my room), then Agnes' bathroom and bedroom, hallway going into the main area. On the other side of the main area is going to be the nursery. That's about it. To end this, I give you Agnes' new look! See you next time!






What do you think? Sorry it's short! I wanted to get it started but haven't gotten that much time to play :P Please tell me what you think!

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« Reply #8 on: June 17, 2013, 09:46:17 PM »
Hehehehe, love the fact that Agnes is the one who knows what's going on!  And LOVE her makeover!

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« Reply #9 on: June 17, 2013, 09:58:24 PM »
Hehehehe, love the fact that Agnes is the one who knows what's going on!  And LOVE her makeover!
I have used her so much and have used so many methods to get her in the household story wise, I figured this would be a fun way to do it ;D I also try to give her a different makeover every time, I must admit, this is my favorite so far. Thanks for reading Shewolf!

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Re: The Starlighter Immortal Dynasty - Chapter 1
« Reply #10 on: June 18, 2013, 08:32:46 PM »
Ugh.. Updates will be very scarce for a while.. I am having really bad anxiety issues right now, so I can't actually focus on doing anything in Sims right now. I am too busy trying to hold myself together. So sorry about that.. :-[

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« Reply #11 on: June 18, 2013, 11:07:03 PM »
Ugh.. Updates will be very scarce for a while.. I am having really bad anxiety issues right now, so I can't actually focus on doing anything in Sims right now. I am too busy trying to hold myself together. So sorry about that.. :-[

So sorry to hear that hun!  That's ok though.  Just take care of yourself.  We'll still be here when you get back.  *hugs*

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Re: The Starlighter Immortal Dynasty - Chapter 1
« Reply #12 on: June 19, 2013, 12:21:04 PM »
So sorry to hear that hun!  That's ok though.  Just take care of yourself.  We'll still be here when you get back.  *hugs*
Thanks, Shewolf. :)

Note: Due to my problems, this dynasty is on hiatus for an unknown amount of time. The requirements just end up stressing me out in the end :P I tried playing for a while, I got stressed and it got bad, I'm going to leave it at that. I am really sorry. I am not abandoning it, I haven't failed it. Just taking a break from requirements. I will most likely do a legacy or something until I can get a grip on myself :P Thank you for your patience. :)

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Re: The Starlighter Immortal Dynasty - Chapter 1
« Reply #13 on: June 19, 2013, 10:14:40 PM »
Thanks, Shewolf. :)

Note: Due to my problems, this dynasty is on hiatus for an unknown amount of time. The requirements just end up stressing me out in the end :P I tried playing for a while, I got stressed and it got bad, I'm going to leave it at that. I am really sorry. I am not abandoning it, I haven't failed it. Just taking a break from requirements. I will most likely do a legacy or something until I can get a grip on myself :P Thank you for your patience. :)

Sorry to hear about that. Sounds like no fun. Anyway... Your story is great! I loved reading what you have so far!

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Re: The Starlighter Immortal Dynasty - Chapter 1
« Reply #14 on: June 19, 2013, 11:46:26 PM »
Sorry to hear about that. Sounds like no fun. Anyway... Your story is great! I loved reading what you have so far!
Thanks, Olivia! I hope to be back into playing it soon :)

 

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