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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 19: Hidden
« Reply #150 on: September 09, 2013, 08:53:12 PM »
Wow, did you make all those sims? Because they're so cool and pretty.
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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 19: Hidden
« Reply #151 on: September 12, 2013, 10:46:36 AM »
This is quite the story :) Do like all the extra story added to an otherwise simple challenge.
Oh, and I especially liked the intro - it was gorgeously shot.





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« Reply #152 on: September 12, 2013, 12:56:22 PM »
I like the look of Luther's new lady friend. Let's see if she's brave enough to deal with Mr. Knight!

Poor Leo. It never ends well for those types... :(

Yes, she's certainly a fancy lady. I wonder if a Batman fan like you picked up on the name reference.

You do have to feel bad for Leo. He is a cute kid though.

And the ashen uprising will soon absorb little Leo and Delilah will take her rightful place as queen...assuming her uncontrollable magic doesn't turn out to be more than ashen lady thought it would be...

I think I'm going to put you in charge of commanding the Ashen uprising.

Wow, did you make all those sims? Because they're so cool and pretty.

Most of the sims you'll see in my stories, I've either made, or have messed around with them in CAS quite a lot. Talia was originally a townie-- a think a Svard-- but as I was playing with her in CAS, I had an inspiration for a better story element, so I changed up her appearance entirely, and changed her name. She ate the Svard she was supposed to be.

This is quite the story :) Do like all the extra story added to an otherwise simple challenge.
Oh, and I especially liked the intro - it was gorgeously shot.

Thanks, Louise! There was definitely a lot of story telling elements added to the intro.

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 19: Hidden
« Reply #153 on: September 12, 2013, 01:29:41 PM »
Yes, she's certainly a fancy lady. I wonder if a Batman fan like you picked up on the name reference.


You mean that her name is a take on Ra's Al's kid? Lol. Yep. Hates Talia with a passion.

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« Reply #154 on: September 12, 2013, 04:29:54 PM »
Yes, she's certainly a fancy lady. I wonder if a Batman fan like you picked up on the name reference.
I just looked back at Talia's name, and nearly peed myself. (This weird fear of her comes from about a year and a half of intense Batman role play, and Talia was the main villain for it. We all took turns being her, so she became quite unpredictable. Add that to the fact she killed her son cannonly, she is in my opinion, the scariest villain ever.)
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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 19: Hidden
« Reply #155 on: September 12, 2013, 05:06:35 PM »
I just looked back at Talia's name, and nearly peed myself. (This weird fear of her comes from about a year and a half of intense Batman role play, and Talia was the main villain for it. We all took turns being her, so she became quite unpredictable. Add that to the fact she killed her son cannonly, she is in my opinion, the scariest villain ever.)

I love me some Talia. Fo so.

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« Reply #156 on: September 18, 2013, 04:00:03 PM »
Chapter 20: Inner Circle

"Every generation or so, we get someone like you, Delilah," Talia said, placing her hand to the girl's shoulder. "It must be a frustrating experience, but its certainly not without its perks. What would you give to be able to use your magic right, pretty girl?"

Delilah frowned softly, her brow knit as she looked up at the woman in front of her. "What-- Anything."

"Good. Now, shh," Talia said, placing her hand to Delilah's forehead.

The younger girl gasped, flinching as she felt heat rushing from the place where Talia's skin touched hers.



Delilah let out a soft cry of pain as the heat grew more intense, light consuming her vision. Her legs gave out from under her and she fell to her knees in the dirt of the garden. The pain grew more intense, the skin across the rest of her body prickling and growing hot.



She screamed like it would save her. The pain was so intense, she felt she must be dying. The light was so bright, she knew she had gone blind. She felt her lungs giving force to her scream, but she no longer heard her own voice, nor the sounds of the wind or birds she had heard moments before. The moment was just a beat, a pulse, and then, all at once, the sound and her vision returned with an actual physical force that propelled her backwards onto the ground. The dirt around her shifted, falling over her arms as she panted on the floor of Oswin's garden.



"Delilah?" Luther asked, stepping forward suddenly. Talia gripped his shoulder, ceasing his movement forward.

"Give her a moment," Talia said.

Delilah placed her hand to her chest, feeling her heart beating steadily, albeit a bit fast, behind her ribs. She placed her hands to the dirt and pushed herself to her feet. "Give your wand a try," Talia said.

She patted herself to find her wand, unable to remember how having a body worked for just a moment. When she pulled the wand out, she knew it immediately felt better than before. When she cast the spell over her head, it came out fluidly. There was no stutter, no explosion, no discharge in an unintended direction. It must have been how magic felt for everyone else!



"It's so smooth! I can control it," she said with a gentle awe in her voice.

Talia smirked and nodded. "Yes, not without a few sacrifices, but i know you'll find that the power is worth it."

"Sacrifices?" Delilah asked, noticing for the first time the white marks on her arms.

"Welcome to the inner circle, Delilah."



"Horrible," Delilah muttered as she came upon hour two of staring at her new face in the mirror. "It's so ugly! I'm hideous now. I'm a speckled monster. Loch Ness Delilah."

"I don't think you look ugly, Dee," a voice said from the doorway.



She glared at Leo through the mirror.

"How could you not? Look at my face!"

"Yeah," he said. "I think it's a beautiful face."

She turned around to face him, furious for just a moment before vulnerability took hold. "It... You really think so?"



"Yeah, I do. I always have. There's nothing wrong with you, Delilah," he said with more confidence than she had ever seen from him.

She stepped toward him, her hand to his face. He started, not having expected her to come to close.



"You're a good guy, Leo. I hadn't noticed before."

He smiled crookedly. "Thanks," he said.

"Delilah! Leo! Come down for Obbie's birthday cake!" Oswin's voice called from the base of the stairs.

Delilah smiled back. "Guess we should go, huh?" She kissed his cheek. "Thanks," she said and walked out of her room.

Oblique's teenage birthday went without a hitch. Oswin noted that her sons looked rather similar, but at the same time, there was something very different about them.



Oblique seemed to be much stronger than Leo, in personality and in appearance. There was something disconcerting about her youngest son that she couldn't quite put her finger on.

And he was very much into practicing his magic. HE took the craft much more seriously than Leo ever did.



"And what kind of garbage tinker-toy are you trying to cast magic with?" Aunt Morgan asked the birthday boy when he was upstairs later that night.

"It's the wand my mom gave me," he said, cocking a brow at her.



"It's only true use should be for kindling," she said, rubbing her fingers together as if just the thought of someone touching that wand had soiled her hands.

"So what do you propose I use? I can't practice without one."

"Come with me, Handsome. I have a solution. Auntie always does," she said, bringing him to Luther's room and pulling something out of the dresser.



"Now, try this," she told him.

"It's a bit crooked," he said, taking the wand.

"Yes, you should get along with it famously."



"Now that," she said fiercely. "Is how a wand should feel."

"It's incredible. Much different. Better."

"Of course it is. I'd never steer you wrong, Darling. Just between you and me, you're my favorite," she said with a light smirk.

Oblique grinned as his aunt walked away.



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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 20: Inner Circle
« Reply #157 on: September 18, 2013, 05:22:50 PM »
Beautiful writing my dear, dear Hearts ;D

This is one of the best stories IMHO. Delilah is wrong; she is more beautiful than before! And I have a sneaking suspicion that Obbie is going to be a favorite of mine.

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 20: Inner Circle
« Reply #158 on: September 18, 2013, 07:03:54 PM »
I completely agree with Dolls. With everything she said.
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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 20: Inner Circle
« Reply #159 on: September 18, 2013, 09:49:12 PM »
Beautiful writing my dear, dear Hearts ;D

This is one of the best stories IMHO. Delilah is wrong; she is more beautiful than before! And I have a sneaking suspicion that Obbie is going to be a favorite of mine.

I completely agree with Dolls. With everything she said.

OMG, guys. That is incredibly kind of you to say! Honestly made my night. I'm just really glad you're enjoying reading it. I love these characters, and I love sharing them with you.

Delilah has some big plans set in motion for her, though she might not know what they are right now. And I agree. I think she's beautiful now. I love that skin on her.

Dolls, it only makes sense that Solanine's favorite is your favorite. :D

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 20: Inner Circle
« Reply #160 on: September 19, 2013, 08:02:07 AM »
Awesome to see more of this ^_^ I really do love it when people go beyond normal gameplay to tell stories. This is still awesome :)



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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 20: Inner Circle
« Reply #161 on: September 19, 2013, 10:14:11 AM »
Good enough that I had a dream about it last night.  I don't think what I dreamed is what you have planned, though. 

Really good story, one that I enjoy reading and looking forward to the next chapters.  Some are a bit more evil that what I like although I do read them, they are well written, just the characters are so vicious, for me.  I am a goody-two-shoes according to my family. 

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 20: Inner Circle
« Reply #162 on: September 19, 2013, 06:55:34 PM »
Oblique must be very limber judging by just how tightly he is wrapped around "auntie's" finger  :=)

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 20: Inner Circle
« Reply #163 on: September 20, 2013, 12:38:06 AM »
Delilah looks gorgeous with the scaly specks. They look like bio-luminescent markings. Is that CC?
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« Reply #164 on: September 21, 2013, 03:02:27 AM »
I love this story. I love how fabulous Luther is, and how you portray all of your characters!