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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 4
« Reply #30 on: June 23, 2013, 12:25:49 AM »
I love your story! You have a wonderful way with words. You definitely have me hooked.

Thanks, Jude! I'm glad my words have snared you.  ;D

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 4
« Reply #31 on: June 23, 2013, 12:48:05 AM »
Loving the intrigue!!  The suggestion of this "other love" and a "second kiss."  Well played.  Consider me to be waiting on the edge of my seat until the next update  :=)



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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 4
« Reply #32 on: June 25, 2013, 01:58:31 PM »
Loving the intrigue!!  The suggestion of this "other love" and a "second kiss."  Well played.  Consider me to be waiting on the edge of my seat until the next update  :=)

I've kept you waiting too long, I think, haha. Consider the update in progress as we speak.

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 4
« Reply #33 on: June 25, 2013, 02:05:14 PM »
Hooray!!!

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 6
« Reply #34 on: June 25, 2013, 04:43:58 PM »
Chapter 6: Behind the Curtain

Before Oswin left the library, she decided to check out another book on her past.



"The Daye Family has been advised for centuries by a long line of men and women from the Knight line, a proud and loyal family of the Ashen race. Thore Daye's right hand man and royal vizier was a man by the name of Andross Knight who, although serving loyally for decades, disappeared a year before the emperor's death. Some theorists speculate that without the advice and input from the man, the Emperor's resulting choices contributed to his own death," the book read next to a picture of the man.



"Hey now. That man looks like... Holy Doppleganger," she gasped. "He's been looking out for me like his father looked out for mine."

She shut the book and checked it out, in a hurry to get home.

"Luther, I just read the most intersting--"

"Yes, yes. Unicorns and butterfly-rainbows can wait, kid. It's time for a test of your skills."

"But--"

"Save the excuses. I know you haven't been practicing nearly enough. This will be a wake up call."



"Take your stance. Ready? Go."



"Nice block! Keep it up!"

"I think I'm getting the--oof!"



"Pay attention," he scolded, ending the spell. "I bet you'll practice more now."

"Yeah, I will," she agreed, shivering with residual cold.

"Now, what is it you wanted to tell me?" He asked her, once they had headed back inside and she had dressed into something warmer.

"Oh! I checked out this book! My history's in it. But, also yours."

Luther looked surprised. "Yeah?" He took the book from her hand to flip through the pages.

"Yeah, your father was my father's advisor."

"I know," he said idly flipping through the pages.

"You know? Why didn't you tell me?"

"No need to tell you more than you need to know at a given time. You were taking in a lot."

"Yeah, well, he protected my father. And you're protecting me. Your family's been doing it for a long time."

"We have."

"I just wanted to say, you know, thanks. I always thought you were great, and I just, now I know it."



"You think I'm great?" He asked with a smirk.

"Of course I do! Look at what you've done for me." She reached out and took her book back. She leafed through the pages, back to the one with the picture of his father. "I feel safe here. I'm sad that I have to find someone else to marry," she said with a blush, looking down at the page.

She gasped softly as she suddenly felt Luther moving quickly forward. The book dropped to the ground and his kiss took her fully by surprise.



"I wish you didn't have to either," he said after he'd pulled back, hands to her arms. "But now's not the time for selfishness. You have a responsibility for your kingdom, and I have to respect that."

"I don't want to have that responsibility."

"You'll sacrifice thousands of people so you can be happy?" He asked incredulously.

"No... no, of course not," she said, head down.

He tilted her head up and shook his. "You'll find happiness. Just a different kind."

Her brows knit and she turned on the spot to leave, the book open on the floor with Luther's father's face staring out into the room. Luther bent and scooped it up, pocketing it and heading to his own room.



"I'm working on it," he said into the receiver. "Calm down. She trusts me completely. I could get away with anything. Yes, you don't have anything to worry about, Mother."

In Oswin's excitement and hurry, she had left the last sentence of the page unread.

"Some theorists speculate that without the advice and input from the man, the Emperor's resulting choices contributed to his own death," she read.

"But most believe that the once-loyal servant had a much more heavy hand in the Emperor's death."

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 6 (Updated: 6-25)
« Reply #35 on: June 25, 2013, 05:28:18 PM »
Ohhhh,

Look at those pants, do they suggest something?  Is he good or evil?  I can't want to read more to find out about him.  She is so sweet, and gullible, which has me worried about her as I read the story.  But then, again, he could be the good guy pretending to be bad and wants to protect her. 
Only the Watcher knows.

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 6 (Updated: 6-25)
« Reply #36 on: June 25, 2013, 09:22:36 PM »
Ohhhh,

Look at those pants, do they suggest something?  Is he good or evil?  I can't want to read more to find out about him.  She is so sweet, and gullible, which has me worried about her as I read the story.  But then, again, he could be the good guy pretending to be bad and wants to protect her. 
Only the Watcher knows.

Oh, those fire pants. He was really into them, even if I wanted him to have gray or black. I'm glad my character makes you wonder. Those are the most fun to write, and hopefully read. So many possibilities for Mr. Knight.



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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 6 (Updated: 6-25)
« Reply #37 on: June 25, 2013, 09:31:47 PM »
If he turns out to be evil, it could mean that the "mean" people from the introduction were simply trying to hide her so he couldn't locate her.  What if they were protecting her?  Intriguing.

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 6 (Updated: 6-25)
« Reply #38 on: June 25, 2013, 10:56:38 PM »
I've been slacking. This is great, Kase! Ooh, and I like Knight. So...I guess that means he is e-ville! Lol. I'm rooting for Luther all the way!!

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 6 (Updated: 6-25)
« Reply #39 on: June 26, 2013, 05:53:25 PM »
If he turns out to be evil, it could mean that the "mean" people from the introduction were simply trying to hide her so he couldn't locate her.  What if they were protecting her?  Intriguing.

You pick some pretty awesome things to think about. I hope all of the twists and turns turn out to be half as cool as your speculations, haha.

I've been slacking. This is great, Kase! Ooh, and I like Knight. So...I guess that means he is e-ville! Lol. I'm rooting for Luther all the way!!

Thanks, Dolls! Luther is excited to be developing a fanbase. He appreciates the love, e-ville or not.

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 6 (Updated: 6-25)
« Reply #40 on: June 26, 2013, 06:56:38 PM »
Chapter 7: Vices

The very next morning, Oswin's sadness had melted away as the rest of the world became a frozen wonderland. Much like she had on the morning of her first rainfall, Oswin barely dressed from her PJs to run out onto the grass as the first snowfall of winter descended upon Aurora Skies. With Luther in another room, he did not hear her cries of joy from her bed, but he certainly heard them when they were right outside his window.



"They're like cold little melty pillows," she breathed, her mouth open wide to taste the flakes as they fell.

"What are you doing?" Luther asked from the window. "Singing Gospel to the Snow Watcher?"



"No, I'm dancing. Come dance with me."

Luther shut the window in response.

Eventually, Oswin pulled herself away fromt he snow to fulfill her responsibilities at work. It was good that she did because that day she came home with some exciting news.



"I'm an officer now, Luther!"

"Wow, they must be in desperate need of law enforcement."

"Shh, be nice. I'm doing a great job."

"I'm sure you are, Kid. Just don't bring your job home." That was the last thing he needed.



Perhaps there was a way to keep Oswin from snooping around.

That night, he decided to pay his boss a visit. If Oswin was getting promoted, well, why shouldn't he be?



There was more than one way to skin a cat.



Unfortunately, his boss' husband was going to make it a bit difficult on him. Frustrated from the day's events, he decided to take the easy route.



A haunting spell might instill a little fear into Sir Husband, allowing Luther to get away with schmoozing his way to the top. As everyone knows, a good relationship with one's boss is a sure fire way to get a promotion in the Business World.

However, it didn't seem to be Luther's day. When he returned home, an infuriated Jackie Elliot was waiting at his front door.



"And what's crawled inside you and died?" He asked.

"Real classy," she hissed. "Where have you been? You haven't called me in months!"

"It's only been like... a few weeks, I guess. Calm down, you're not pretty when you're angry."

"A few weeks? I can give you an exact time frame."



"Yeah? Go ahead."

"Nine months."



"He what? No, I think there's been some mistake. No, I-- No, it--. I wasn't aware that-- No, no. I appreciate it. Thank you for calling."

Some men turn to juice in times of trouble. Some to books or games or puzzles. Some turn to others for a word of support. And some men need something a little more fast-paced.



"I don't think the Peaceful Protection Agency will miss this one tiny thing."



"In fact, they have thousands of patrol cars. I'm really not sure why they would need a civilian vehicle."



"But I have to commend them. They do a great job of serving the public."

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 7 (Updated: 6-26)
« Reply #41 on: June 26, 2013, 07:04:53 PM »
Hmmm, a suspicion.  He hasn't called her in "nine months," which just might suggest a baby?
I'm wondering what dark secret Luther (the kleptomaniac, we now know) is hiding.

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 7 (Updated: 6-26)
« Reply #42 on: June 26, 2013, 10:11:38 PM »
Hmmm, a suspicion.  He hasn't called her in "nine months," which just might suggest a baby?
I'm wondering what dark secret Luther (the kleptomaniac, we now know) is hiding.

Nine months suggests exactly that, my dear Pip. The Gray Man's starting to show some new colors.

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 7 (Updated: 6-26)
« Reply #43 on: June 26, 2013, 10:14:50 PM »
That being the case, the "What crawled inside you and died" line is pretty darn mean!

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 7 (Updated: 6-26)
« Reply #44 on: June 26, 2013, 10:50:18 PM »
That being the case, the "What crawled inside you and died" line is pretty darn mean!

Ahahahahhhahaha, well, to be fair. He did not know at the time.

 

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