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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 9 (Updated: 7-2)
« Reply #60 on: July 03, 2013, 12:42:08 PM »
Whoa! Somebody say sacrifice under the tree? Frozen to death? Lol. Gosh I love you Luther! You're my HERO!!

Cackle, cackle. I would take you under my wing as a padawan, however, you my dear Kase have already gotten the hang of the Sith way. The Empress is *sniff, sniff* proud!

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 9 (Updated: 7-2)
« Reply #61 on: July 03, 2013, 04:40:11 PM »
She is truly a vision!  Great job.  Our little girl looks all grown up.  Must admit, I had still been thinking of her very much in "child" terms given her level of naivety. 

Thanks, Pip! Yes, Oz is very child-like, but I think she'll be doing some growing up soon.

I was glad to see her in her wedding outfit and she is definitely a beautiful woman.  Like Peregrine said, our little girl is all grown up, and quite a vision.

I still think that Luther has hidden a somewhat heart of gold somewhere under all the black covering.

A part of me want Luther to make an obvious change so they can marry and have the HEA (happy ever after) and yet I also want (Oswin) her to have a happy life with Chin.

You want to think the best of Luther! That's nice. I hope he doesn't disappoint you.

Whoa! Somebody say sacrifice under the tree? Frozen to death? Lol. Gosh I love you Luther! You're my HERO!!

Cackle, cackle. I would take you under my wing as a padawan, however, you my dear Kase have already gotten the hang of the Sith way. The Empress is *sniff, sniff* proud!

Thank you, girl! I've been writing evil characters for a long long time now, just not sims, so I'm glad I make you proud! And I'm glad you like Luther.



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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 9 (Updated: 7-2)
« Reply #62 on: July 03, 2013, 06:33:27 PM »
Chapter 10: Freeze Dance

The next day, Jackie's absence was no cause for concern. In fact, Oswin was so caught up with playing with and teaching the baby, that she did not realize there was anything wrong at all.



How could she with such a sweet little gray darling nearby?



Chin noticed how fantastic she was at being a mother. And he was too busy watching Oz to realize that Jackie had not been walking around their home.

And to pretend that he knew nothing of the disappearance, Luther played with Oswin and his daughter. Despite his devious nature, he was protective and loving of his glowing little girl.



She was an expressive girl even before she could speak. She was notorious for the responsive faces she would make to her father and her "Aunt" and "Uncle."

And although Jackie was not having very much fun,



the rest of the house was a bit oblivious of her plight, as the Willow tree obscured her from view.
 


And perhaps, even if it hadn't been there, her frostbitten blue skin kept her hidden in the snow. Her body froze solid over night, and although painfully cold to the touch, she had become sleepy and numb long ago.



But Jackie wasn't the only numb one.



Luther had made himself busy or scarce at the house that day. He had gone down the block to chat up the now young adult Cassidy Wrede.

"I thought you'd just gotten married, Luther," she said with weak suspicion.

"You are stunning, Cass. Let me take you somewhere nice."

"Oh! Well, if you insist."

He did.





Mercifully, that night, Death came to take Jackie away.



Her life force, the weak little spark of it that was left, was kindly taken from her body, and in that moment, she was one with the nature that had taken her away from this world.



"Luther did this to me?" She gasped, her phantasmic tears disappearing through her translucent skin.



"That is how it seems," Death replied, feeling, perhaps, the tinest bit of pity for her.

"But I thought he loved me."

"I know very little of these matters. Love is warm and giving. Death is cold and grasping."

"Tell me about it."

"I'm sorry to do so, but there was no warmth in the gesture of your husband."

Jackie shivered. As a ghost, she no longer physically felt, but she remembered, very suddenly, the cold. "Goodbye, Luther."

And she and Death disappeared into the roots of the Willow.

But where there is an end, sometimes, from the seed in the darkness, there is a beginning.



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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 10 (Updated: 7-3)
« Reply #63 on: July 03, 2013, 11:19:03 PM »
Is it terrible that I'm hoping for ghost Jackie to come back as a nemesis to Luther?  Is that too weird of a stretch?
Anyway, lovely update.  Very well-written.

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 10 (Updated: 7-3)
« Reply #64 on: July 04, 2013, 01:30:13 AM »
I was wondering the same thing, was Jackie going to come back to haunt him?  Of course, the part of me that wants to see good in everyone goes it will make him realize how bad he has been behaving and have him change his ways.

My son says I am too trusting, says I keep looking for the good in people and constantly get burned. 
I guess that is why I keep wanting to see good in Luther, and I can never play a bad sim, it just feel so wrong. 

But I love reading your story about bad boy Luther, still believing that he will change his spots in the end. 

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 10 (Updated: 7-3)
« Reply #65 on: July 04, 2013, 12:57:05 PM »
Oh, Luther isn't hurting anyone! He probably just has some major destiny and Jackie got in the way of that. He's awesome! And so is Oz ;D

Congrats, by the way, Oz!

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 10 (Updated: 7-3)
« Reply #66 on: July 05, 2013, 11:38:10 AM »
Is it terrible that I'm hoping for ghost Jackie to come back as a nemesis to Luther?  Is that too weird of a stretch?
Anyway, lovely update.  Very well-written.

She died under the effects of a love spell, so we'll see what that will do to a sad, confused ghost. And thank you very much, Pippin! This update was one of the most enjoyable to write.

I was wondering the same thing, was Jackie going to come back to haunt him?  Of course, the part of me that wants to see good in everyone goes it will make him realize how bad he has been behaving and have him change his ways.

My son says I am too trusting, says I keep looking for the good in people and constantly get burned. 
I guess that is why I keep wanting to see good in Luther, and I can never play a bad sim, it just feel so wrong. 

But I love reading your story about bad boy Luther, still believing that he will change his spots in the end.

I love that you believe he will be good one day. He is great with his daughter, so that is something.

Oh, Luther isn't hurting anyone! He probably just has some major destiny and Jackie got in the way of that. He's awesome! And so is Oz ;D

Congrats, by the way, Oz!

Oz says thank you! I'll make you like a Good sim, yet, Dolls.



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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 11 (Updated: 7-6)
« Reply #67 on: July 06, 2013, 12:26:30 PM »
Chapter 11: The Gray-Hearted

News of Jackie's death flew high and fast. Oswin was most suddenly and most strongly affected by this news.



She cried for days in the aftermath, not having truly experienced death in this way before.

"If only I had gone out to see the tree or looked out the window or something. Maybe I could have saved her."

"Oz, there was nothing you could have done. She was under the snow," Luther told her. "Freezing is a very peaceful way to go, you know? After the first couple moments, you just get sleepy and you don't feel a thing. She didn't suffer." She didn't have to.

"I'm so sorry, Luther. I know you loved her. You shouldn't be consoling me."

"It's okay, Oz. I've worked through a lot more deaths than you have. I'll miss her, but she loved that tree. It will remind me of her every day. And Dee will be a reminder too. I can see Jackie in her eyes." Well, not really. Delilah actually had his mother's eyes.

Oswin sniffled and hugged him, whispering a mountain of tangled apologies. He just held her and patted her back.

Delilah, however, was expressing her sadness through different means. She was showing, very early, a distinctive magical ability.



Perhaps being unable to express confusion or sadness over her mother's death caused the explosion of magical energies. Or, perhaps she was just so full of powerful energy that it didn't take more than 3 years to finally burst forth. Either way, Luther was beaming with pride.

Chin was not so naive as Oswin was. He suspected from the beginning that something was strange about Jackie's death. Who in their right mind would wander into the snow in a bathing suit? Well, Jackie had married Luther, so perhaps her mind wasn't exactly right.

"I know you were involved, Luther. I don't know why you'd want her gone, but you don't fool me."

"My dear, sweet Cheek."

"Chin."

"I'm afraid you are looking in the wrong direction. Jackie was not the brightest star in the sky. She made questionable decisions every day."

"Like marrying you?"

"Like clapping when you said 'I do' at your wedding."



"Now you see here, you Ashen piece of trash--"

"Racial slurs now? Ah, Nose. I thought you were better than that."

"My name is Chin! And I know what your people are. And I know what your daughter will be."

"Keep my daughter out of this," Luther said, for the first time, his voice becoming hard, his eyes darkening. "Talk badly about her again, and it will be the last thing you ever say." And with that, he stormed off.

And soon, Delilah was a young girl, ready to take on the world and all that came with it.



But Luther, knowing she would face some resistance, gave her a book on their people, and the history of their kind.

"You have to know what to expect from people so you know how to handle it, Dee. None of their judgments are true. Gray skin, blue skin, it doesn't matter. Without a doubt, you are better than they are. Every time."



"The Ashen people were descended from the economic lower-class centuries earlier. Due to their social and economic limitations, their descendents lived in the river-valley basin, where magical residue was able to run off into the water supply. The change in the drinking water, over time, caused the mutation in skin color. Due to the economic and cultural differences, the Ashen people became a servile race, mostly serving the Royal family for generations. It was not until Layden Daye, the grandfather of Emporer Thore Daye, that the Ashen people were given a placement of power among the kingdom. He had put rules in place to allow their kind more freedoms and social liberties, though is was met with opposition from the public. 3 Generations later, the tensions had dissipated somewhat, though there is still injustices and prejudices rampant among the city-states."

Armed with knowledge of potential hardships, Delilah withdrew. She focused on her magical skills, recognizing them early on and attempting to hone them to varying results.



She was incredibly bright, and incredibly sharp. And it seemed, perhaps, that she had a penchant for destruction.



Much like her father.


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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 11 (Updated: 7-6)
« Reply #68 on: July 06, 2013, 12:33:13 PM »
And Oz is displaced from the throne and Deliah becomes the new queen, and the Ashen people lived happily ever after   :=)

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 11 (Updated: 7-6)
« Reply #69 on: July 06, 2013, 01:14:38 PM »
hummmm,

Or an arranged marriage.  When Oz has her child, what better way to take control of the country than an arranged marriage between the Ashen with the son of the ruler Oz and her husband (consort) Chin.  There won't be that much of an age difference. 

If I were sneaky,  I would ensure that Oz had a male child, either this one or another one and marry my daughter to that one, and set aside a Fountain of Youth elixir drink for her to have so she could outlive her husband.  If the firstborn is a female, well, he arranged for Jackie to die, why not Oz's firstborn?  I still think he means something good to come out of it, it is just his method that is wrong.

Okay, I am definitely second guessing, as usual.

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 11 (Updated: 7-6)
« Reply #70 on: July 09, 2013, 04:29:12 PM »
Awesome. And Jaw Bone had better learn to keep his mouth shut. He really doesn't know who he's dealing with...he has no idea...

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 11 (Updated: 7-6)
« Reply #71 on: July 11, 2013, 05:25:41 PM »
And Oz is displaced from the throne and Deliah becomes the new queen, and the Ashen people lived happily ever after   :=)

You and Breagadoir would certainly like that. He might feel at home with the off-colored Knights.

hummmm,

Or an arranged marriage.  When Oz has her child, what better way to take control of the country than an arranged marriage between the Ashen with the son of the ruler Oz and her husband (consort) Chin.  There won't be that much of an age difference. 

If I were sneaky,  I would ensure that Oz had a male child, either this one or another one and marry my daughter to that one, and set aside a Fountain of Youth elixir drink for her to have so she could outlive her husband.  If the firstborn is a female, well, he arranged for Jackie to die, why not Oz's firstborn?  I still think he means something good to come out of it, it is just his method that is wrong.

Okay, I am definitely second guessing, as usual.

You are the president of the Luther is Good club! I love that. :)


Jaw Bone hasn't shown much of his personality yet, but he's a toughy. Not quite as tough as Luther. He's looking for trouble.
Awesome. And Jaw Bone had better learn to keep his mouth shut. He really doesn't know who he's dealing with...he has no idea...

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 12 (Updated: 7-12)
« Reply #72 on: July 12, 2013, 01:14:09 AM »
Chapter 12: Family Affairs

Oswin returned home from the hospital with a healthy baby boy. She wanted him to be fierce and brave, so she named him Leo.



He grew up fast, and soon he was a darling little boy with a smile that lit up his round face.



He looked somewhat like his father, but despite his coloring, he maintained the happy essence of his mother.





Oswin spent much of her time caring for her boy. She gave him all the love he could want. She'd never thought she would be able to give life to anything, let alone something so sweet and gentle.  She taught him everything she could. She read to him and taught him music.



She was very protective of her boy, and often watched over him as he slept.



He was rarely fussy and he hardly ever woke her up in the middle of the night. Delilah had been much more of a terror. And it certainly hadn't died down during childhood.



She'd learned how to set up pranks around the house, and her favorite target was 'Uncle' Chin. Or as her father called him, 'Uncle' Forehead.

And although Chin wasn't Luther's biggest fan, it seemed like someone else still was in his corner, despite all that he'd done.



Jackie returned every few nights, yawned, and curled up in bed beside her ex-husband. She knew what he had done, and she had an entire afterlife to think about it, but she was unwilling to let him go.

Luther, however, had let go a long time ago.





After seeing Jackie night in and night out, Chin decided that he needed to have a chat with her. As the full moon rose that night, Chin headed over to the graveyard to see the woman he'd hardly known but a few days. However, it only took Chin a few moments to get much more than he bargained for.


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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 12 (Updated: 7-12)
« Reply #73 on: July 12, 2013, 01:18:50 AM »
Chin is just begging to be the next victim.  Jackie only comes back to see Luther?  What a non-attentive mother!  Poor Delilah.

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Re: Knight & Daye: A Dual Town Jump Project - Chapter 12 (Updated: 7-12)
« Reply #74 on: July 12, 2013, 01:31:30 AM »
Chin is just begging to be the next victim.  Jackie only comes back to see Luther?  What a non-attentive mother!  Poor Delilah.

Chin's not a very lucky gentleman! And yeaahh, Jackie's kind of a flake. Also, I guess she got some clothes in the afterlife. That really surprised me.

Also also, you can definitely comment on how freaking adorable Leo is. He's my favorite nooboo I've ever had.