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Black Immortal Dynasty Chapter 2 (6-7-13) GRAVEYARD PLEASE
« on: June 07, 2013, 12:00:03 AM »
 I am the lost. I am the darned. I am the forgotten. I am the song of the lost. The melody of the dreamers. I am Adriana Black. Adriana means “The Dark One”. My real name is Chaya. Meaning “Alive, Living”. I changed it to Adriana. For I am not living. I am alive, but yet. I am not. I have been forgotten. Tossed away to die. I am not wanted. I am doing this so I can live again. So I will not be forgotten. Forgotten in time. But I do fear it may be too late. I must complete this. I must. For if I do not, my soul will die forever. My backstory is rather simple. I grew up with no parents. No siblings. No home. No friends. Nothing. I grew up on the streets. Fending for myself. I have always been forgotten. I was cast away when I was eighteen. They decided I was a disgrace on the town. Though they never knew who I really was. To them, I was “The street corner girl”. They all thought horrible things about me. Eventually I have up on them. I gave up on trying to please them. Now here I sit. In a world where I can’t be forgotten. I have the dreams to watch over me now. I don’t know exactly who they are, or what they are. But they speak to me. I am not alone anymore. I am now in the Valley of the Sunset. Ready to start my dynasty. I am ready for anything they choose to throw at me. I am Adriana Black, and I am ready for this.



I decided to try again! I ditched the old story line and started a new one that I can write easier. Hope you enjoy! Tell me what you think!

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Re: Black Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #1 on: June 07, 2013, 12:00:38 AM »
Immortal Stats

Adriana Black (Adriana means "The Dark One")
Traits: Family Oriented, Friendly, Green Thumb, Natural Cook, Loves The Outdoors
LTW: The Perfect Garden
LTRs:
6 Best Friends:
6 Opps:
Career: Gardener
Portrait: YA , A , E ,
Picture: YA , A , E ,
Sculpture: YA , A , E ,
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Re: Black Immortal Dynasty
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« Reply #3 on: June 07, 2013, 12:53:22 AM »
Chapter 1

Hi. I'm Adriana, for the most part you will see my name as Ana. Adriana is just a lot to say. Anyway, I am standing on my new property, surrounded by the houses of the kind of people I despise. These, grand rich people houses. I am not fond of rich people. They have always looked down on me. You will know why when you see me..



See? I am not the kind of person rich people like. I have been homeless my whole life. I now live in Sunset Valley.. Huge difference from the streets of Bridgeport.. Super nice houses everywhere. Even the freakin' criminal warehouse looks better than the average house in Bridgeport. If that says anything. So I was walking around town, I don't know how, but I ended up down by the beach. At this beach house.

 

This lady greeted me. Her name is Claire. We talked for a few hours. Until she was my friend. (By a few hours I mean all day)




Then I asked her to move in with me. We built a really small house until we could get another housemate.



Not the best, but better than what I am used to. We had a dresser and mirror for a few minutes cause the watcher was desperate to give Claire a new look. I don't know why she had to do it as soon as possible. But oh well. Here is Claire's new look.



Am I the only one that thinks she looks fantastic? Cause I think she really does. Anyway, then the watcher sold the dresser and mirror and bought a treadmill. Claire wanted some more athletics skill, and according to the watcher, she didn't have much time to gain it.



I went to bed during all of this by the way. I was enjoying my first real bed in years. About half way through her workout, Claire got really sick. Overworking herself?



Guess not.. Claire is pregnant!



That is awesome news! I love kids.. I guess you could say that I am rather family oriented, Oh yea.. I never mentioned anything about my personality.. Well, I am really family oriented even though I grew up without one, I am really friendly. Most people think I am a jerk, but that is because they treat me like crap. So I do the same. I have a pretty green thumb, and I am a natural cook. I also really love the outdoors. Anyway, the next morning Claire was passed out from a long night. I got up, I was hungry. Not unusual, but I got a bowl of cereal. I had to sit on the toilet because we have no chairs in this house..



Later in the day, I was trying to go around and make friends, while Claire went to Stony Falls to get some fish. She harvested some vegetables and fruits for me first though.



I met a friend at the art gallery..




He was attractive, but I don't know if he is my type.. We will have to see won't we? Well, I guess I didn't get any pictures. But I spent all day trying to get Agnes Crumplebottom to move in with us. I finally did, at about nine at night.. We sold her very expensive car and built this,



From the top left clockwise, my bedroom and bathroom. As well as my garden behind my bedroom. Then Agnes' bedroom, bathroom. And Claire's bathroom, bedroom. The nursery. It looks like two rooms, but it is one. Then the stairs into the museum, blocked by a fence. Then the guest bathroom. Then the dining room. Then the kitchen, then living room. Then we have the study/Agnes' painting and sculpting room. Then the media room. The house needs a little renovations to be perfect. But I am perfectly content with this. Anyway, I signed up as a professional gardener.



And Claire is still fishing..



And the last thing I have to show you, is Agnes' new look.



There is quite a bit of randomness in this, I know. But I had to start somewhere ya? Well, thank you for reading and I will see you next time!


Thank you for reading! Please comment and tell me what you think!

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Re: Black Immortal Dynasty Chapter 1 (6-6-13)
« Reply #4 on: June 07, 2013, 01:15:00 AM »
Great start! And that house is really awesome! I will be reading,  its bookmarked!
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Re: Black Immortal Dynasty Chapter 1 (6-6-13)
« Reply #5 on: June 07, 2013, 01:26:04 AM »
Great start! And that house is really awesome! I will be reading,  its bookmarked!
Thank you! I like the houses I build, even if I cheat and use the blueprints ::) Thank you for reading, doxxielover!

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Re: Black Immortal Dynasty Chapter 1 (6-6-13)
« Reply #6 on: June 07, 2013, 01:40:03 AM »
What is a blueprint cheat? I don't think you can use any cheats for the dynasty!
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Re: Black Immortal Dynasty Chapter 1 (6-6-13)
« Reply #7 on: June 07, 2013, 02:09:14 AM »
Great start Artsgirl! Adriana, Agnes and Claire are really pretty, when I was scrolling through your story I went, 'Who's that?' and then I realised it was Claire and Agnes. She's unrecognisable! Can't wait for the nooboo.
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Re: Black Immortal Dynasty Chapter 1 (6-6-13)
« Reply #8 on: June 07, 2013, 01:09:13 PM »
What is a blueprint cheat? I don't think you can use any cheats for the dynasty!
No, no. It is not a real cheat. It is just not building from scratch. Sorry for the confusion.
Great start Artsgirl! Adriana, Agnes and Claire are really pretty, when I was scrolling through your story I went, 'Who's that?' and then I realised it was Claire and Agnes. She's unrecognisable! Can't wait for the nooboo.
Thanks, Pyro0001! I actually never realized Clair was that pretty. It surprised me too ;D Thanks for reading!

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Re: Black Immortal Dynasty Chapter 1 (6-6-13)
« Reply #9 on: June 07, 2013, 01:58:15 PM »
I was just making sure ! :)
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Re: Black Immortal Dynasty Chapter 2 (6-7-13)
« Reply #10 on: June 08, 2013, 12:16:50 AM »
Chapter 2

Hey everyone. Ana is back! I have a lot to say, (sorta) so let's get to it. First things first, Claire has been fishing some more. Her due date is fast approaching, and she still just stands there. In the middle of nowhere. When she could go into labor at any second.



And I have been gardening. Gardening is not my supermax, cause I am scared that I won't be able to do it in time. Cooking is my supermax, I can do that for sure. I don't even know if I can get the gardening career maxed in time. I might switch to the cooking career as well.. We will see.



So I went to the beach to meet a guy I have been talking to.



Want to see who the guy is? It is gonna seem so cliche..



It's Chris.. You can't help who you love right? Once it got dark we watched the stars together.



Me: Is this love? Real love? I have never felt like this before..
Chris: Are you okay?



Me: I am perfect, Chris. Just perfect.
Chris: I have something to tell you..



Chris: (whispers) I love you.
Me:So he feels the same way.. wow I seem like a love-struck teenage girl..


Me: (whispers) I love you too, Chris..
Once we were done watching the stars, I asked him to officially be my boyfriend.



Me: Chris.. We have known each other for a few days, would you be my boyfriend?



Chris: I would love to, Adriana.
Me: This could really be love.. Finally.
Interlude! Sort of! While we were at the beach, Claire went into labor. In the cemetery! She was fishing.



Since I am giving this to you in the actual time that it happened. I am going to show you what happened while she went to the hospital.



Me: Hey, Chris. Do you think you could move in with me. So we can have the perfect wedding? Once we go that far, I mean.
Chris: Uh.. way to ruin the moment. But sure!
Me: I just asked you to move in with me. Saying one day we will be married. That is ruining the moment? Know what, don't answer that.



Claire's baby has been born! It is a boy! His name is Jett. (A/N: I have a strange fondness of that name) Anyway, the next day. Chris and I went on a date. To Summer Hill Springs.



Me: Chris, first thing, I have never been so happy. Second..



Me: You know how we have been talking about getting married soon?



Chris: Yes.. why are you on your knee?
Me: Why do you think?



He just stood there, shocked.



Me: Chris, will you marry me?


What did you think? I know it is not the best cliffhanger. But I did the best with what I had ;D do you like the style where they actually talk? Please tell me what you think!

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« Reply #11 on: June 08, 2013, 12:21:04 AM »
I like having some dialogue in the story, so keep at it.

I'll be more interested to see what an Ursine boy looks like, though!
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Re: Black Immortal Dynasty Chapter 2 (6-7-13)
« Reply #12 on: June 08, 2013, 12:30:14 AM »
I like having some dialogue in the story, so keep at it.

I'll be more interested to see what an Ursine boy looks like, though!
I enjoy coming up with the dialogue as well. I am very interested as well, I haven't played very far ahead XD I have never seen an Ursine boy. Like Claire's kid. It's always a girl. Thanks for reading Trip!

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« Reply #13 on: June 08, 2013, 12:42:06 AM »
Wow a boy!!

I love Chris :)
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Re: Black Immortal Dynasty Chapter 2 GRAVEYARD PLEASE
« Reply #14 on: June 08, 2013, 10:25:00 PM »
Real bad news.. I failed. Sorta. My friends decided it would be fun to destroy my game. They demolished my house, got Jett taken, and Chris on the brink of death by the time I got back. Then, I got called out of my room again. Where my laptop is. They deleted my file! They deleted my freakin' file. No backups. Nothing to get it back. I really strongly dislike my friends sometimes >:( I am so so sorry.. Can someone please move this to the graveyard? Please and thank you..