I love the way you did the house, I have it for a family where I added a second floor to give room for growth.
I like the couple you chose, I hate to play families that are common to the town, it makes me feel like I am in the movie Invasion of the Body Snatcher's, and I am one of the body snatchers!
But the couple you have chosen isn't a common one, so I think they are a great choice, and I like the way you set up the family, a couple who have traveled and are thinking of adulthood, being a family, not vagabonds. Can't wait to read more.
I was wondering, how are you doing the creation of your story? I am working on mine and I am right now creating a background of the couple, to give a reason for moving from town to town.
What has me stumped is how much of a background story to give, that it will be too much before I start to add the photos.