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Re: The Moonstone Legacy - Short and Sweet
« Reply #450 on: August 14, 2013, 08:13:42 AM »
Wow. I'm so sad for Grace now :'(, she needs to grow a spine and tell them she's not going to do all the work. If you put sims in a room with crying children, they will eventually feed them. I also feel bad for the kids; they seem to know what's going on better then the adults, maybe they will do something about it when Mist dies. Blake could marry Grace, but I think she's better off with-out any of the men in the house.
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Re: The Moonstone Legacy - Short and Sweet
« Reply #451 on: August 14, 2013, 10:08:16 AM »
Maybe the children will team up and break the cycle? Poor kids...I feel so bad for them.



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« Reply #452 on: August 14, 2013, 02:39:20 PM »












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Re: The Moonstone Legacy - Coming Up . . .
« Reply #453 on: August 14, 2013, 03:39:06 PM »
Yay! Can't wait to see what brilliance you have in store for us.  ;D
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Re: The Moonstone Legacy - Coming Up . . .
« Reply #454 on: August 14, 2013, 06:06:21 PM »
I think I'll have to agree with some others, I'm going to have to stop reading for a while. I'm tired of rooting for the party that always gets stepped on... :/

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« Reply #455 on: August 14, 2013, 06:12:05 PM »
Yay! Can't wait to see what brilliance you have in store for us.  ;D

Well, some might call it brilliance, others insanity. Fun!

I think I'll have to agree with some others, I'm going to have to stop reading for a while. I'm tired of rooting for the party that always gets stepped on... :/

(Spoiler) Don't worry, she won't be on the bottom for long. I saw to that several hours ago.
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Re: The Moonstone Legacy - Coming Up . . .
« Reply #456 on: August 14, 2013, 06:15:11 PM »
Well, some might call it brilliance, others insanity. Fun!

(Spoiler) Don't worry, she won't be on the bottom for long. I saw to that several hours ago.

Can't tell if you're tricking me into reading more... or if it will really be true.
Either way, I really doubt I could give up on this story. I do want to see Grace redeem herself.
Can I ask something, just to be curious? I know you're playing this as your own story, but doesn't Grace get final say basically? I mean Mist could overrule her while she's still alive, but Grace (being the heir) should be able to order Treasure around... right? I mean, the story wouldn't be as in-depth.

Also, I thought only the heir could give birth to a potential heir, sorry I just want to be clear on if you're playing your own way or what... and I was personally wondering why Grace wasn't kicking Jason's sorry butt out of the house... or at least putting him in a basement.



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Re: The Moonstone Legacy - Coming Up . . .
« Reply #457 on: August 14, 2013, 06:30:32 PM »
Can't tell if you're tricking me into reading more... or if it will really be true.
Either way, I really doubt I could give up on this story. I do want to see Grace redeem herself.
Can I ask something, just to be curious? I know you're playing this as your own story, but doesn't Grace get final say basically? I mean Mist could overrule her while she's still alive, but Grace (being the heir) should be able to order Treasure around... right? I mean, the story wouldn't be as in-depth.

Also, I thought only the heir could give birth to a potential heir, sorry I just want to be clear on if you're playing your own way or what... and I was personally wondering why Grace wasn't kicking Jason's sorry butt out of the house... or at least putting him in a basement.

I don't think Grace would have the heart to put people in basements and let them rot, since that's how she spent her youth... She's not as evil and confident as Mist was, so standing up for herself will probably take some time. I love the way characters are given depth in this story and how the good ones don't automatically have their happy 'ending'. Kudos for azokka ^^. Stories that frustrate your readers are always considered good and successful :P it's how the strange world of writing works!
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Re: The Moonstone Legacy - Coming Up . . .
« Reply #458 on: August 14, 2013, 06:53:29 PM »
Don't get me wrong, I rather enjoy putting characters through horrible things... One reason why I use the Watcher of Chaos as a title.  I just get really wrapped up in stories at times, and the fact that I want to strangle Treasure means I need to take a breather XD  before bad things happen.  I do enjoy your stories Azokka.  Too much at times lol

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« Reply #459 on: August 14, 2013, 06:54:55 PM »
  The three girls celebrated their birthdays together. Aliya grew into a lovely, pink girl with golden curls and a sunny smile.



  Cyllia remained a sensible, reasonable young lady who chose clothes out of practicality, not based on how pretty they were.



  Kylara became a sweet, intelligent girl who was a wonderful combination of her parents.



  They spent hours playing together in their little room, each pursuing their own interests. Kylara loved to play chess, Cyllia loved to invent, and Aliya just loved to play.



  After dinner, the three girls met in Grace and Aliya's little room and quietly discussed the house's situation. As Cyllia put it, "I love my mom, but she's getting crazier every day."

  "I don't think it's all that bad," Aliya chimed in. "I mean, Mama put her foot down and stopped cleaning up after everyone. She's always working, but she loves her job."

  Kylara and Cyllia met eyes over the table. They were all best friends, but the green and blue girls were more realistic than their pink playmate. Even though Aliya had it worse than either of them, she was so caught up in her so-called perfect world that she barely noticed.



  The very first day, Treasure had "accidentally" gotten rid of one of the beds in the kids' room, so that only Cyllia and Kylara could sleep there. Grace rolled her eyes at her sister's childishness, and ignored her.



  Besides, she loved sharing a room with her daughter. Aliya waited up for her to come home, then they read stories every night, and played games, and Grace stayed up to play guitar for a little while as Aliya fell asleep.



  She told herself quite firmly that she wouldn't sink to Treasure's level and her ridiculous attempts at undermining her, which ranged from putting dirt in the washing machine to running the All-In-One Bathroom early in the morning to wake them both up. Besides, she was certain that the pranks were slowing down.



  Little did she know that Treasure wasn't even close to being done. The golden girl held strategy meetings with Blake and Jason, who were unwilling participants in the ongoing war. Grace's recent counterattack enraged her enough plan the next big step in her demise.



  Treasure and Jason took the girls to the Summer Festival every day, since school was on summer vacation. The three children thought of themselves as sisters, even as Treasure did her best to very subtlety separate Aliya from the others.



  But everything she did couldn't pull them apart, they who shared thoughts and actions, squealing "Ewwww!" simultaneously whenever they saw adults kissing and laughing while watching their favorite cartoons.



  As always, Cyllia was the only one keeping tabs on her mom--the other two trusted her to do so much. The watchful little girl began to relax, however, believing that Treasure really was rehabilitated. She just seemed so normal and happy.



  To anyone on the outside, the Moonstones were a perfectly normal and happy family.



  Parents and children loved each other . . .



  Even Mist, who was the most threatening member (as a criminal mastermind), softened at the sight of her daughter waiting for her to come home from work.



  Grace reminded herself of this every day, and her patience and optimism held out--for a while. Then Treasure surrounded one side of the pool with a fence and put up a sign saying: Animals Grace and Aliya Only.



  "You need to stop this!" Grace snarled. "Now. I am the heir, not you. I have the final say, I am the powerful one in this family, I beat you a long time ago! Get used to it!"



  "You beat me?" Treasure mimicked. "Yeah, right! You may have become heir, but you don't have the guts to actually pull it off. You are nothing more than a weak, pathetic doormat who is so afraid of doing anything that she lets people walk all over her!"



  Grace began to retort, but Treasure leaped forward and tackled her.



  Grace pulled herself to her feet, only to find that she was staring into a mesmerizing, spinning disc . . .



  "Grace Moonstone, I command you to--wait. First act like a chicken." Treasure giggled hysterically. "Okay, that's funny. Hehehehe."



  "All right, stop it." She snapped her fingers, and Grace relaxed into her hypnotized stupor. Treasure glanced behind her, satisfied at the sight of the dresser. "Here's what you're really going to do . . ."



  That evening, the family sat around the living room watching TV. The only one absent was Grace, who was--somewhere. Everyone was enjoying the fun family time, with everyone but Treasure having spent the day at the festival and movies, when there came a sight. That is, perhaps, the only way to describe it: a sight. Blake and Jason gaped. Mist smirked. Aliya gasped. Kylara froze and stared. Cyllia gulped. And Treasure grinned.



  "Kylara, Aliya, can I speak with you in the other room? Please? Now?"



  "Sure, you girls go have fun," Treasure said complacently. "Gracie, dear, would you mind doing the dishes? I'm afraid they're piling up."



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Re: The Moonstone Legacy - Coming Up . . .
« Reply #460 on: August 14, 2013, 07:00:02 PM »
Can't tell if you're tricking me into reading more... or if it will really be true.
Either way, I really doubt I could give up on this story. I do want to see Grace redeem herself.
Can I ask something, just to be curious? I know you're playing this as your own story, but doesn't Grace get final say basically? I mean Mist could overrule her while she's still alive, but Grace (being the heir) should be able to order Treasure around... right? I mean, the story wouldn't be as in-depth.

Also, I thought only the heir could give birth to a potential heir, sorry I just want to be clear on if you're playing your own way or what... and I was personally wondering why Grace wasn't kicking Jason's sorry butt out of the house... or at least putting him in a basement.

Trust me, I love Grace too much to not have her win out eventually. I just like sims more when they go through a lot before succeeding! And technically Grace would have the final say, but I think her real weakness is that she's too nice and good and not a psychopath.

I've decided to have it so that any member of the household who is of the bloodline and would be considered eligible is eligible to be heir--it just makes it so much more fun and competitive.

I don't think Grace would have the heart to put people in basements and let them rot, since that's how she spent her youth... She's not as evil and confident as Mist was, so standing up for herself will probably take some time. I love the way characters are given depth in this story and how the good ones don't automatically have their happy 'ending'. Kudos for azokka ^^. Stories that frustrate your readers are always considered good and successful :P it's how the strange world of writing works!

Precisely, I think you're spot on in your description of Grace. I do so love to frustrate people, it's always been a habit and/or hobby of mine  ;D .

Don't get me wrong, I rather enjoy putting characters through horrible things... One reason why I use the Watcher of Chaos as a title.  I just get really wrapped up in stories at times, and the fact that I want to strangle Treasure means I need to take a breather XD  before bad things happen.  I do enjoy your stories Azokka.  Too much at times lol

N'aw, thanks  ;) . I think that Treasure is a little impervious to intervention from the human world (besides mine, of course) but consider breathing exercises. I love breathing exercises. I also love being mean to my favorite sims when real life is irritating, which is why Grace has been going through so much recently!
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Re: The Moonstone Legacy - So-Called Happy Family
« Reply #461 on: August 14, 2013, 07:05:31 PM »
Oh yes, Grace! That's right! Put 'em in their place.................. right above you, yeah, that's good! Now go make Treasure a sandwich!  ;D
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Re: The Moonstone Legacy - So-Called Happy Family
« Reply #462 on: August 14, 2013, 07:10:23 PM »
I think I somehow missed Grace's "counterattack?" The one Treasure is talking about in the beginning of the post... I'm confused @.@.
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Re: The Moonstone Legacy - So-Called Happy Family
« Reply #463 on: August 14, 2013, 07:15:01 PM »
Oh yes, Grace! That's right! Put 'em in their place.................. right above you, yeah, that's good! Now go make Treasure a sandwich!  ;D

That was actually pretty hilarious. I'm trying to loosen up, and I'm glad to see that Azokka is willing to let go of this generation and move on to the next, I'm excited to see the young girls age up well.
Trust me, I love Grace too much to not have her win out eventually. I just like sims more when they go through a lot before succeeding! And technically Grace would have the final say, but I think her real weakness is that she's too nice and good and not a psychopath.

I've decided to have it so that any member of the household who is of the bloodline and would be considered eligible is eligible to be heir--it just makes it so much more fun and competitive.


Thank you for explaining! I'm so relieved to hear that you're not completely heartless about Grace but I totally feel you on the "I like to push them to succeed above all" thing. I, too, often put my Sims through Misery because I'd like to believe that - in a story sense - they'll grow from it. :)

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Re: The Moonstone Legacy - So-Called Happy Family
« Reply #464 on: August 14, 2013, 10:16:08 PM »
My Jaw dropped at the maids outfit.  I am getting really, REALLY, mad a t treasure right now. How DARE she. I want someone to take charge now! This story is crazy, But azokka that's what keeps me reading it ;)
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