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Re: The Moonstone Legacy - Look Into the Future
« Reply #210 on: July 02, 2013, 04:05:38 PM »
Oh my gosh!! I am glad treasure finally understands. But ... Just oh my gosh. I am happy and sad at the same time. I don't know what to think if this. Azokka you are a genius.
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« Reply #211 on: July 02, 2013, 06:06:13 PM »
In response to earlier comments . . . I'm afraid I can't say anything without giving too much away. Suffice to say that I believe you will be quite surprised.

Oh my gosh!! I am glad treasure finally understands. But ... Just oh my gosh. I am happy and sad at the same time. I don't know what to think if this. Azokka you are a genius.

I am indeed a genius, but I'm not the genius in this--no. Can't say it. I'd love to give credit where credit is due, but that will have to wait until after--no. Stoppit. I am not good at this!

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  "Are you sure about this?" Melody asked. They were sitting in her little house, with Bronson at work and Jamie having been stolen long ago. "I know you think this is your only option, but--"
 
  "It is my only option," Grace interrupted firmly. "I've seen the good side of life while my parents are on vacation, but they're coming back tonight and everything will be back to normal. I don't want things to go back to the way they were."



  Melody nodded thoughtfully. "I can understand that. My sister isn't exactly the nicest person in the world, and I'm sure she wasn't happy when she didn't have an heir on the first try." She watched Grace's face for another moment, then said, "There's a boy, isn't there?"



  "If I can't be heir, I don't have a chance at getting him, and then my whole life will go up in flames. If I have the slightest opportunity, I know he'll choose me over her."

  Her aunt just smiled. "When I was a teenager, my boyfriend was Kris Sekemoto. I wanted to be heir because I thought I deserved it, but also because if I didn't Mist would kick Kris and I out. I wanted to raise my children in my home."

  "How did that work out?"

  "I had to break up with him when we moved to Bridgeport, then I was so heartbroken and angry that I did a lot of stupid things. It all worked out for the best, though--I ended up with Bronson, and we're very happy together."



  The blue woman stood, reaching for something in her pocket. "Here, take this--your mom might be angry with you for rebelling, and this will help placate her. I hope. My sister was never good at forgiveness."

  Grace took the package and looked up hopefully. "Does that mean you'll help me?"



  They entered the hospital together. Grace stood at the door for a long moment, trying to decide whether or not to go in. In the end, she made a decision, and stuck to it.



  "Hi! I'm Treasure, Treasure Moonstone. What's your name?"



  "I'm your competition, Goldie. I'm going to be heir, not you!" Grace could hardly believe that Treasure didn't even recognize her--though she wasn't really surprised. The little sister had been trained to never look, let alone speak to, the older sister.



  It was payback time.



  Grace saw two shadows enter the gate, dark and ominous. One figure stood behind the other, docile. The foremost had cold, glowing blue eyes.

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Re: The Moonstone Legacy - Look Into the Future
« Reply #212 on: July 02, 2013, 06:15:04 PM »
Uh - oh. I can't wait to see how Mist reacts to Grace's rebelling
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Re: The Moonstone Legacy - Payback
« Reply #213 on: July 02, 2013, 06:50:28 PM »
Yes! Go Grace!

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Re: The Moonstone Legacy - Payback
« Reply #214 on: July 02, 2013, 07:17:37 PM »
Yay! I love this. I can not wait to see what Mist does. Will she be mad... or in a way happy!? Oh my gosh this is awesome! Although I slightly feel bad for treasure. But not really...
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Re: The Moonstone Legacy - Payback
« Reply #215 on: July 02, 2013, 07:37:32 PM »
Why would Mist be angry about this? Her oldest daughter is rebelling, being devious and competitive, and trying to sabotage and ruin someone's life. You'd think she'd be proud.
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Re: The Moonstone Legacy - Payback
« Reply #216 on: July 02, 2013, 09:39:04 PM »
Bum bum BUM!  Oh this should be good!



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« Reply #217 on: July 03, 2013, 09:35:03 PM »
(Note: I do very much appreciate all the comments, but I don't see any reason to reply to them since you'll receive the answers to your questions below!)

  "I deserve a chance to be heir," Grace insisted, holding her ground in front of her mother. "Now, I fulfill all the requirements and I'm a thousand times worthier than that prissy wimp. I want everything that I should have had since I was little--my own room, whatever clothes I want, and real food every day!"



  Receiving no answer, she hurried on, "I'm a thousand more times like you than Treasure is. I'm smarter, tougher, more capable, and not a goody-two-shoes like she is. I mean, I've been with her boyfriend from the beginning, and she hasn't even noticed!"



  "Besides, I've brought an offering to make up for my disobedience . . . three spires of pure Tiberium. Together, they'll be worth over one-hundred thousand dollars." Grace neglected to mention that she had received the Tiberium from Melody--she had the feeling that Mist wouldn't be happy to hear about her sister's involvement.



  Mist analyzed the situation for a moment. Here was the child she had ignored, and bullied, and treated like garbage, and for the first time she really looked at her. And for the first time, Mist saw how identical she and Grace were on the outside.

  Mist didn't love Grace, but she was proud of her for standing up and ordering to be given the opportunity to become heir. She loved Treasure, but she seemed too soft to follow in Mist's footsteps. "Welcome to the competition, Grace. I'm so proud of you."



  "Now, what's this I heard about the boyfriend?" Mist never overlooked an opportunity for a bit of fun, especially at her children's expense.

  "We're in love, but he has to stay with Treasure because she was going to be the heir--until now. Now, I don't know what he'll do."

  "Well, that's simple enough!" Mist grinned widely, a delightful idea forming in her head. "Jason has to stay with whoever becomes the heir, either you or Treasure. That way, it's all nice and fair!"

  "Thanks, Mist. You're the best."



  Treasure and Jason were flirting in the living room, with no idea of the conversation Mist and Grace were having.



  As always, Treasure went off to her room without the slightest hint of paranoia, and the other two teenagers met up in the darkness behind the house. Grace explained the deal to Jason, who assured her that she would win heir but was secretly relieved that he wouldn't have to make the choice.



  She then showed him her new bedroom, the one she had been waiting for since childhood. It was just as wonderful as she had dreamed.



  It still wasn't enough for her, the room and the clothes and the chance to be heir. She needed to take Jason away from Treasure, completely and totally. Grace was confident that she would become heir, but first she wanted to cut off Treasure and Jason so there wouldn't be any loose ends when it was time for Grace to claim her birthright.

  "Look, Goldie," Grace told Treasure one day, cornering her after school. "You're supposed to be smart, even though I've never seen that before. If you're such a genius, you should have already figured out that you're boyfriend has been cheating on you since the beginning of time."



  "Go hide where Jason can't see you coming out, and then you'll see what he's like when you're not around."



  "Jason?" Treasure asked in confusion. "What are you doing?"

  The Imaginary Friend knew he had been caught in the act, but he'd made a plan for this, too. He disengaged from Grace, appearing disgusted, and hurried over to his girlfriend. "Your sister just attacked me! Do you know what's going on?"



  "Oh my God. You're lying to her? You're lying about me? And you know she'll believe you!" This wasn't what Grace had expected to happen, not at all. She had to salvage the situation fast, or be left with nothing. "Tell the truth, Jason. You love me, not her!"



  A little bit of Mist showed itself in Treasure that night, as she stepped up and slapped her sister, so angry that she barely even looked like herself. "Stay away from my boyfriend, you ugly spare! You think you're in the running for heir, but you're not. It's mine, and it always will be! And so is Jason."



  "Girls, girls, I think we should calm down . . ." At this point, Jason was considering the likelihood of both girls killing him if he suggested some sort of deal where he could date both of them--one for the first half of the week, one for the second. It seemed perfectly logical to him, but he had a little feeling that the sisters wouldn't be so agreeable.



  "No! I will not calm down! You know what?" she growled, finally regaining composure. "We are over until you break it off with her. No more kissing, no more midnight rendezvous--I'm done waiting."



  Who is the real loser in this situation? Definitely not Treasure--she hasn't lost anything. Jason? Well, he still has his girlfriend who thinks the world of him, even if he is pining after someone else who he loves just as much and is really quite conflicted. Grace has finally received everything she has wanted since childhood, and she knows she can easily find someone just as good as Jason--besides, he's still pining after her, so that's a nice compensation.

  No, ladies and gents, the real loser is definitely Wogan. You see, after Grace was discharged from maid service, Mist knew she wasn't going to do any of the cleaning herself, so guess who took over the dusting and mopping and cooking?

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Re: The Moonstone Legacy - The Real Loser
« Reply #218 on: July 03, 2013, 10:52:58 PM »
*snorts*  Wow, poor Wogan, he really gets the shaft in this XD  Man, I'm on the edge of my seat with this.  Never know what's gonna happen!  Though I am happy that at least Grace has a backbone and Mist recognizes it.

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« Reply #219 on: July 03, 2013, 10:58:06 PM »
Unacceptable. Though I now respect Grace and no longer consider you all bad people for rooting for her, I now love Treasure more  ;D
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Re: The Moonstone Legacy - The Real Loser
« Reply #220 on: July 03, 2013, 10:59:20 PM »
Eh, Treasure's ok, though I still don't see her as a true heir to Mist, that's all.

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« Reply #221 on: July 04, 2013, 01:19:44 AM »
I like both girls. Although I am rooting for grace. Always have been, always will be. I find treasure snotty a little bit. I do however feel bad for her. I just wish the girls come together and agree. Or at least agree to disagree. Together they would make a great team. Apart they are powerful, but not as powerful as they would be together. If only Cassie could see what her family has become. Melody although she messed up in teen hood, really has her act together. I am just waiting for Mist to fail, or to at least dislike her past decisions. Or something.... And poor Wogan. Although he is so disoriented that it doesn't really matter ;) haha just kidding! I feel like grace has a right to be acting this way. And Mist likes her now, because she is evil like her. She wants revenge (reminds me of the show...). Treasure is not evil. She is just a pampered girl who is again, a tad snotty. This is all my opinion of course, but its kind of how I look at your characters. I have never really liked Treasure because I felt so bad for Grace. If Treasure would have been an only child I am sure I would look at her differently. All in all your story is amazing and so unexpected that it just awesome. Please post 5 chapters a day ;) Please.... (come on don't leave me hanging ;) :) )
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« Reply #222 on: July 04, 2013, 02:17:30 PM »
(Thanks for all the comments! You guys make me laugh so much. I'm afraid I can't respond to them, because I'm A) Afraid of giving anything away and B) You guys are choosing the heir, not me, so I can't show any favoritism.)

  "So . . . have I ever told you how lovely you look in that outfit? Why don't we discuss it later on tonight--I can move up Treasure's bedtime?" Jason knew immediately that he had said something wrong, but he couldn't tell what. Why were girls so prickly about everything?

  "Shut it, you load of trash. You are so . . . so . . . wrong that I can't stand to look at you."



Later That Evening

  "Jason, did you get the answer to #5?"

  "Yeah, Treasure, it's forty-three." He added, in an undertone, "Grace, have I ever told you how lovely you look in your sleepwear?"

  "Shut up, scum."



  Grace might have been angrier at Jason than ever before, but at the same time she was over the moon. She knew that she was the fan favorite, she knew that she would become heir, and then Jason would have to dump Treasure. Maybe she wouldn't even want him, maybe she would find someone a million times better!

  Grace spent every day doing whatever Grace wanted, going to movies and concerts and plays (alone and loving it). She was hit on by all the cute guys at school who used to ignore her, and she spent hours playing guitar at the summer festival.



  Ever the romantic, Jason followed her to the festival and watched her from afar . . . in the men's bathroom. He ended up being cornered by one of their male classmates, Virgil. "Do you know if that girl, Grace, is single? I'm thinking about asking her to the Prom."

  "Oh, no . . . I hear she's dating this ultimate fighter from, erm, Autopalliniaroona. I wouldn't mess with him."



   Virgil shrugged. "Whatever, man. I like her, and I think she likes me, too. We have a total connection."



  "So, Grace . . . would you like to go to Prom? With me?"

  Grace smiled apologetically. "Sorry, Virgil, I'd really love to go with you, but my ex is going to Prom and I don't want to deal with all the drama. Do you want to go dance?"



  Jason looked on wistfully as Grace shared a romantic evening with someone else. Sure, he had chosen Treasure, but what if Grace was his soulmate? They were so different . . . one golden and bubbly, the other dark and mysterious.



  Next, Jason followed Grace and Mist to their dinner at the local diner. Mist was embracing her boredom with Wogan and Mid-Life Crisis to the fullest.



  Grace had met another . . . person. "Sorry, you're a really great guy, but I'm not going to Prom. Maybe we could go out sometime?" She glanced over and saw a very familiar and unwelcome person trying to appear discreet. "See you later."



  She made her way over to Jason, who said nonchalantly, "Nice night. Very romantic. Fog and such." Silence. "Look, can we just talk?"

  Grace sighed and kissed him. "This is a moment of weakness, just so you know. Nothing is fixed between us, I haven't forgiven you, and I'm not making any promises--but yeah, we can talk. Later. Meet me in my room at midnight."



  Jason spent the rest of the night contemplating. He had been missing Grace since the moment she had decided he wasn't good enough for her, but he didn't want to betray Treasure again. She had been his best friend since she was a toddler and he was just a doll--she had given him his life.



  "It's 11:45. You're early. "

  "Yeah, I know . . . I couldn't wait."

  "Are you breaking up with her?"

  "No, but--"

  "Get out."

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Re: The Moonstone Legacy - Someone Better
« Reply #223 on: July 04, 2013, 02:21:17 PM »
Oooo, Jason, Jason, Jason.  *shakes head*

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« Reply #224 on: July 04, 2013, 03:18:48 PM »
Thanks for updating so much  ;D You make me happy!

 

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