Dementia is beautiful with those pigtails twin ponytails.
She's going to be a great writer - also, you reminded me that reading books is quite good for those writers! I had almost completely forgotten. Whenever I read your story I just want to rush on and make my own Immortal Dynasty (I've failed about 17 times and counting?), I can't wait to read more of your story, and while I wait, I'm going to go ahead and try another attempt! (I usually only fail because I get bored, I never make it to generation 2).