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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 33 – Who Is the Fairest?
« Reply #210 on: December 22, 2013, 09:06:26 PM »
Snow is gorgeous as a teen, I can't believe my eyes *wink wink*
I can't wait to see Ravenna!
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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 33 – Who Is the Fairest?
« Reply #211 on: December 23, 2013, 04:00:37 PM »
Snow is very beautiful, I can see why Rose would hate her and misinterpret the friendship between her and Kamaria. Can't wait to see Ravenna.
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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 33 – Who Is the Fairest?
« Reply #212 on: December 27, 2013, 08:02:48 PM »
Snow is truly fairest of them all! She may be your prettiest sim yet Mel!
Lol I was really happy with how she turned out.

I have seen Snow now I can't wait to see Ravenna. Lol, I laughed when I see the part that she only realized that now, why doesn't she destroy her when she got that chance? Where are you all this time, Rosalie? Hello?

If I am her, I'll destroy Snow as soon as possible. Or, using my fairy magic to make her ugly and she’d never gain her beauty back. Simple as that, evil but charming!
Rose is off her hinges lol.
And hey that could be a plan!  :) But you will find that she doesn't like to get her hands dirty.

Snow is gorgeous as a teen, I can't believe my eyes *wink wink*
I can't wait to see Ravenna!
Haha. I'm working on it.

Snow is very beautiful, I can see why Rose would hate her and misinterpret the friendship between her and Kamaria. Can't wait to see Ravenna.
I'm glad you liked how she turned out.
We should be seeing what Ravenna is up to in chapter 35.

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The Magical World: Chapter 34 – Survive or Perish
« Reply #213 on: December 27, 2013, 08:24:19 PM »
Rosalie

Tonight was the night. I would not spend any more time with a backstabbing schemer in my dwelling. How best to dispose of her? Perhaps I shall have Kamaria burn her with fire while she sleeps away, and then she will be sure to perish screaming.



I called for the witch at once. “I have a task for you. I want you to set Snow ablaze right now while she is resting.” Instead of marching to do as I bid her, or even bothering to respond she just stared at me blankly.





My eyes narrowed and I spoke through clenched teeth, “Are you hard of hearing witch?” Her face still blank she finally answered, “No. I was just awaiting the punch line to your joke. As you know I am from a much older era than even yourself, and I do not always understand when people are joking.”



I shook my head in annoyance, “This is no joke! I want you to burn her. Now!” Emotion was finally drawn on her face, but it was a look of disdain. “You know…very well…that I do NOT…do that sort of work.” She practically spit the words out very slowly. Of course... Snow had already gotten to her. The witch was compromised. I could not make her do this task, or even trust her to be around when it was carried out.



I thought quickly for a moment, and then turned my back to her. “I see...no matter. I have another task for you. I need you to retrieve something for me.” “Your medication?” I hadn’t heard what she had just whispered. I spun around and inquired, “What?” “I only asked what it is that you need me to retrieve.” I turned back around and started speaking slowly, still not entirely certain that I hadn’t just been insulted, “I need you to go the curator of the museum and obtain that item of which we spoke of. Do you remember?” “I do not forget.” “Go quickly then.” “As you wish.”




Kamaria

There was absolutely no way I was leaving without warning the child of her malice, but it appears she had thought ahead. Rosalie coyly followed me all the way to the front door babbling away about utter nonsense, and watched me leave. She was no fool. She wanted to make sure that I had really gone, but I had aces up my sleeve as well.



It was a spell that I hadn’t performed in a very long time, and it took me a few minutes to remember all the words. But after only a couple of hesitant moments there she stood, a perfect doppelganger. I looked at her firmly, “You know what to do.” She nodded and transported herself, hopefully, into the chamber where Snow slept.





Now I had a curator to hunt down. If I came back empty handed, Rosalie would know instantly that I was responsible for what was about to happen. That is…if this all went according to plan.




Snow

“Get up child! Get up now if you want to live!”



I thought I was having a horrible nightmare at first. Why was this person shaking me, and saying my life was threatened? I opened my eyes in a fright, but it was only Kamaria in a weird outfit. I sat up slowly and rubbed my eyes sleepily, “What are you going on about? It’s too late for one of your mental challenges.” She hissed back at me, “This is no game Snow. You need to leave this tower now. Rosalie means to have you killed.”



I was wide awake now. I jumped out of bed, “You must be mistaken. Why would she harm me? Can I just talk to her?” She just started grabbing clothes and throwing them into a bag, “Less questions and more moving.”



She grabbed my hand then and practically dragged me out of the tower. At first I was stunned into silence, but when we got to the door I pulled my hand back in protest. “No. I’m never to leave the tower. This is my home. This is all I know!” “Quiet!” she snarled, “So what? You will stay here and be slaughtered on the orders of a mad woman?” I looked at her, my eyes wide with fright and confusion, “What about you? You stay here and work for this supposed mad woman?” She sighed and rubbed her temples, “What I do is of no concern to you. I am not the one in danger.” “So you say.” I shot back.



Her eyes narrowed then, and she stepped closer to me, “You will leave this tower. Now whether I drag you from it on unconscious or not is the only choice you have. You have 10 seconds to decide.”



An hour later I found myself trudging through a dark forest. Kamaria stopped suddenly and placed a bag in front of me. “There is a magical enchantment on this bag. The inside is a lot bigger than it looks on the outside. You’ll find a tent, food, clothes, water, and a number of random supplies you might need to survive inside.” I shook my head beginning to understand what she was saying, “Are you leaving me here? Alone?” “Yes.”





My heart was pounding in my ears, and I could scarcely breathe. I clutched at my chest, because I thought I would have a heart attack at any moment. “You can’t….I…n-n-need you.” I said gasping for air. But when I looked up at her, her face was stone.



“You will survive. Take this, and keep it with you always. I have a feeling it will be important to you in the future.” I looked down to see what she had just placed on the ground. It was my favorite doll from my childhood. I hadn’t played with it in years.



But when I looked up to ask her why she thought it was important. She was already gone…


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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 34 – Survive or Perish
« Reply #214 on: December 27, 2013, 08:55:39 PM »
I just wonder what kind of works that she did oh, I'm not talking about Rosalie, it's Kamaria ::)

I love the scene when Kamaria plays with her magic. That's a good angle and I love it and Kamaria plan is perfect, she know what Rosalie up to. Oh, interesting beginning for Snow journey I believe her parent would come up and protect her from any danger :)

Now, I need Ravenna's story to read :P
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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 34 – Survive or Perish
« Reply #215 on: January 04, 2014, 09:56:55 AM »
I hadn't thought of Kamaria in the role of the huntsman, good going.
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The Magical World: Chapter 35 – Footsteps in the Dark
« Reply #216 on: January 13, 2014, 06:03:55 PM »
I apologize for the long gap in between chapters. *Hangs head in shame*



Ravenna

I’m suffocating…
No really. I’m suffocating.


I pulled back from my grandmother’s death grip, “Can you let go? I can’t breathe.” She just smiled and exclaimed, “Oh! Your first day of high school, aren’t you excited?” “…No.”

 



She rolled her eyes and sighed, “You’ll have fun. There’ll be tons of new people, and you might even get a boyfriend.” The thought made my stomach turn. “If a boy even looks at me the wrong way I promise to rip his heart out and feed it to him.” I said with a wicked smile.



My grandmother didn’t like my comment, but it was Sebastian’s reaction that surprised me the most. He suddenly began choking and sputtering on his breakfast. “Try not to get into any more fights at school.” “It was just a joke.” What was his problem?

High school turned out to be worse than I ever imagined. There were people everywhere, hormone-filled and rubbing up against each other, or otherwise aiming for some other useless goal or another. I soon decided to skip the whole thing. I had more important things to worry about. You see there was something that I had started thinking lately. What if…what if my parents and Snow were dead? That’s why I started coming here to the graveyard. I guess it helped me to feel closer to their...spirits? Maybe…I don’t really know anymore. I often just sit here and write for hours.





I suppose I must have been really wrapped up into my writing, because the next time I looked up I was looking at a full moon. Thankfully I knew no one would be home anyway. My grandparents both refused to retire, stating only that they still had plenty good years left to give, and Sebastian took long hours at the science facility doing “research”…or so he says. I packed up my stuff, and begin to head off when I heard a noise off in the distance.

“Hello?” I called out, but after I heard no answer I assumed I was just being paranoid. After I took a few more steps I heard the noise again. It was footsteps I realized. I was being followed. I quickened my pace only to hear the footsteps double, much to my despair. I was outnumbered two to one, and they were closing in on me fast. So I broke out into a sprint with them hot on my heels.



That’s when I broke the cardinal sin: Never look back. I looked back to see how close they were, only for a second. That second was long enough for me to collide into another person. The moment I looked into his scowling, pig-like face, I knew I was caught.



I began to thrash and kick in a desperate attempt to get away. I bit the man. He swore and slapped me hard across the face. The others, also pig-faced men, had caught up now, and one shouted at the one who had hit me, “Oy! Hands off!” “She bit me!” “Aww the baby can’t handle a girl. If you mess up her face we won’t get as good of a price for her. Just tie her up and gag her.”





They were going to sell me?! To who? Why? That was a stupid question. For money of course. I had to get out of here. I had to, but how? Suddenly I felt like my lungs weren’t working fast enough. My heart was racing, it was so hot, and my body ached all over. I looked up, the moon was screaming again, just like in my dreams. Telling me…forcing me. No. It was too much… Too much. I couldn’t take it. I blacked out after that.






Sebastian

As I began to set the table for breakfast I realized Ravenna was taking her sweet time to get downstairs. “Mulan, can you see if you can rouse our little beauty from her sleep? She will be late for school before too long.” She smiled, “Of course.”



However, she soon came rushing back downstairs in a frenzy, “She is not in here room! Could she be somewhere else? Do you think someone took her too?” Panic began to fill me but I tried to keep my voice steady, “Calm down for a moment. We’ll find her.”



No sooner had I said this did the subject of our discussion come stumbling through the front door. Mulan charged right up to her, “Young lady! Do you have any idea…” She was beginning to give her a lecture, but taking a closer look at her quickly changed from anger to concern.



I grabbed Ravenna’s shoulders and lifted her chin, her expression was tormented, and she wouldn’t meet my eye. However, one thing was certain. Those eyes were back, and this time I knew it was a very bad thing. “Ravenna…” I said softly. She slowly raised her eyes to me, and then they closed slower still as she collapsed in my arms.










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The Magical World: Chapter 36 – A Cursed Life
« Reply #217 on: January 21, 2014, 12:56:09 AM »
Sebastian

I took her upstairs to rest in her room. “She should definitely stay home from school today.” Mulan just nodded her head vigorously in agreement still stunned. She then asked, eyes brimming with tears, “What do you think happened? Where could she have been? Was she out all night? Did someone try to hurt her?” I had never seen her like this. She was scared, and to be honest so was I. “Hey. It’s going to be alright. The important thing is she is home now. She is safe.” I took one last look over Ravenna before saying, “Why don’t we go and watch a little television while we wait for her to wake up?” She looked a little reluctant, “Well…ok.”





Half way into the news I managed to piece together what happened to Ravenna. The local police had found the remains of three men who appeared to have been mauled by a large, wild animal. I excused myself from the room. My fears had been recognized, and measures had to be taken.






Ravenna

The moment I awoke I knew that nothing would ever be the same. After I had blacked out in the graveyard I woke up only to find my attackers torn to pieces all around me. What had happened?! Why was I left alive? Why was I always the one? My parents had disappeared. Snow had been taken, and yet I had been left here. Left here to wonder and wallow in self-loathing and loneliness. Everything was so confusing, but one thing was certain. It was time for answers. I stumbled down stairs still deep in thought, and saw my grandmother completely engrossed in some news segment. It didn’t matter, I was headed somewhere else.



I threw open the door to Sebastian’s study, he turned from something he was working on in surprise. For a moment I almost lost my nerve. On the eve of discovering the truth of everything, I wondered if I could handle it. Then I quickly shook off all such fears, decided I needed this, and began, “It’s time. It’s time for you to come clean about all you know of my family, and about me. I know that you are keeping things from me, but I don’t know what. I need to know, because I am losing my mind. I keep having these memory lapses, gaps in time. I find things in my room that I don’t remember owning, and I wake up in places I didn’t fall asleep wearing clothes I didn’t go to bed in.” “You might have just been sleep walking.”





“DO NOT…patronize me!” I shouted, finding myself shaking with rage and perhaps fear. What if I really was imagining all this? Was I crazy? I noticed a flicker of terror in his eyes at my sudden outburst. What was he afraid of? Telling me the truth or…me? I took care to soften my voice before continuing, “It is out of my character to have such memory lapses. I am never one to forget, even since I was a child. I remember my parents’ faces and the way they smelled. I remember Snow, she cried too much. I even remember that wretched fairy whose face still haunts me. I remember screaming at the top of my lungs for help until you came.” I turned back to look at him. His face had lost all of its color. 





I pushed on, “I understand that you only wanted to protect me. To keep me from all these…burdens, but you don’t have to carry them alone. I am ready to take on my share.” I looked at him, my jaw set, and my face determined, “Now tell me. Tell me everything.”






Several hours later…

It’s not real…and yet it is.
I listened as he told me what really happened to my parents, that I held my mother in my hands all these years. I listened as he told me about the evil fairy Rosalie and all she had done to my ancestors. Just thinking that Snow was taken by such a creature gave me chills. Creature…




He also revealed to me what really happened last night. What I had done. What I had become…or rather what I had always been. I’m still not sure I completely understand, but he said magic demands a life for a life. Such is the balance of things. My mother was never meant to bear children so in order to do so she was to give her life for her child, but my father saved her so magic took from his life instead.

That would have been the end, but there was more than one child. If I was to be given life it would be a dark life, a cursed life. A life granted only by dark magic. There was a beast inside of me, a wolf. And on nights of the full moon I found myself unable to resist the change. I hurt those men, the three pigs who tried to take on a wolf. It sounded like something out of a fairytale gone horribly wrong. That’s why Sebastian made this hood. Supposedly it keeps me from turning, even on a full moon. I don’t really get the significance of a hood, or know if it will really work, but I don’t want to hurt anymore people…without my knowledge that is.




As terrible as all this was, and it was indeed terrible, I gained something invaluable out of it all: hope. If my parents were still alive then maybe…just maybe Snow was still out there somewhere too. I owed it to her to search. So in that moment I decided that I would use this…whatever I am…to find her and bring her home. And anyone who dares get in my way will know the same fate of the pigs.


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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 36 – A Cursed Life
« Reply #218 on: January 21, 2014, 03:04:23 PM »
Ravenna becomes Red?  Cool!
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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 36 – A Cursed Life
« Reply #219 on: January 22, 2014, 01:51:29 AM »
Shock twist! Red riding hood is actually the wolf! I'm really loving this story, not sure if I've commented yet but I've been reading for a while. Keep up the good work, this is awesome!

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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 36 – A Cursed Life
« Reply #220 on: January 22, 2014, 08:38:46 AM »
This part reminds me of Once Upon A Time, the T.V. show.  Do you have that where you are from? Ravenna looks good in a hood!  ;D
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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 36 – A Cursed Life
« Reply #221 on: January 26, 2014, 08:32:09 AM »
Hi, I'm a long-time lurker on this story and I just wanted to say that I LOVE it. You have an amazing talent for story-telling.


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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 36 – A Cursed Life
« Reply #222 on: February 11, 2014, 06:49:07 AM »
Ravenna becomes Red?  Cool!
Lol I thought it would be fun.

Shock twist! Red riding hood is actually the wolf! I'm really loving this story, not sure if I've commented yet but I've been reading for a while. Keep up the good work, this is awesome!
This part reminds me of Once Upon A Time, the T.V. show.  Do you have that where you are from? Ravenna looks good in a hood!  ;D
Yeah lol I actually got the idea of Red being the wolf from Once Upon A Time, because I LOVE that show.
And I like the hood too, but it was super hard to find one lol.

Hi, I'm a long-time lurker on this story and I just wanted to say that I LOVE it. You have an amazing talent for story-telling.
Oh my gosh. Thank you so much!! That really means a lot. I was actually wondering if I should continue writing, but now I think I will.

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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 36 – A Cursed Life
« Reply #223 on: February 11, 2014, 10:56:46 AM »
Oh, please do continue, I'm checking back here every day for a reply, and I love this story. I'm sure I speak on the behalf of many others.


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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 36 – A Cursed Life
« Reply #224 on: February 22, 2014, 09:26:50 PM »
Oh, please do continue, I'm checking back here every day for a reply, and I love this story. I'm sure I speak on the behalf of many others.
Lol. Thanks for the encouragement.

 

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