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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 28 – Viva Lucky Palms?! Part 4/4
« Reply #165 on: November 24, 2013, 04:22:36 PM »
Hey! Andy looks so manly now! Good job for bringing him back :P
Glad to know that they're having fun there.


Ew ew ew ew, please Andy and Jessie! Just don't show off your privacy moment please! Save that for yourself. And Jessie! You look like barely wearing anything with that outfits.

That's such a cliffhanger ending. You're doing well with this. Where did you learn such a technique ::) ?
Good luck for Jessie. If anything happen to her, I just wish a best place for her in another life.
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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 28 – Viva Lucky Palms?! Part 4/4
« Reply #166 on: November 24, 2013, 05:29:23 PM »
I hope to see that nooboo soon! Be careful Jess!
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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 28 – Viva Lucky Palms?! Part 4/4
« Reply #167 on: November 25, 2013, 12:23:49 AM »
Next installment, please. You left me with such cliffhanger ending! If something happened to Jessie... I... I... :(
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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 28 – Viva Lucky Palms?! Part 4/4
« Reply #168 on: November 27, 2013, 05:52:41 PM »
I wonder what Jessie wished for at the fountain and, of course, I want to know who the next heir will be.
A child, but of course the fountain told her no. It couldn't give her what she already had.   ;)

Hey! Andy looks so manly now! Good job for bringing him back :P
Glad to know that they're having fun there.

Ew ew ew ew, please Andy and Jessie! Just don't show off your privacy moment please! Save that for yourself. And Jessie! You look like barely wearing anything with that outfits.

That's such a cliffhanger ending. You're doing well with this. Where did you learn such a technique ::) ?
Good luck for Jessie. If anything happen to her, I just wish a best place for her in another life.
Yay, you finally approve of his looks. I consider that mission accomplished.
Sorry for the public displays of affection haha.
As for the cliffhanger, I suppose I got it from the many books that I've read that have left me hanging as well.

I hope to see that nooboo soon! Be careful Jess!
There must be an heir somehow.

Next installment, please. You left me with such cliffhanger ending! If something happened to Jessie... I... I... :(
My apologies. My apologies. But I'm afraid everyone will have to wait until after Thanksgiving. I'll post the next chapter on Friday, because...well, things tend to get worse before they get better right?  ;D But there are only two chapters left in the Toy Story Arc. The second of which I will post on Saturday hopefully. Then I will begin on the next heir's arc. Woo progress!

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The Magical World: Chapter 29 – My Decision
« Reply #169 on: November 29, 2013, 08:46:54 PM »
Andy: I don’t think I’ve ever been so scared in my life. When I saw Jessie hit the floor like that, my heart stopped. I tried to rush her to the hospital, but she came to when I got her in the car, and she swore up and down that she didn’t need to go. She said all she wanted to do was rest so I’m just waiting for her to wake up. I called Sebastian to tell him what happened, and he said that they would come from China right away. Just when I was thinking of trying to sneak her into the car, Jessie began to stir.


 
   “How long have I been asleep?” “A few hours.” “I’m sorry. I know you must have been worried.” “I was just worried about you and the baby.” “Me too…” “Then let me take you to the hospital.” She shook her head, “I’m afraid. What if they say something is wrong with the baby or me? What if they tell me I can’t do this? I want a family.” “You have a family. We can always adopt.” “Sure we can do that too, but I want to do it this way first.” I sighed, “Let’s just go and see what they say.” “Fine.”







   To say our visit to the hospital didn’t go well would be a serious understatement. By the time my parents and Sebastian arrived, Jessie wouldn’t even talk to me. The only person she spoke to was my mother. Apparently my mother had lost a child before having me, so she could understand Jessie’s situation better than anyone right now. This was yet another thing that no one had told me, but I could understand them not wanting to talk about it. While my dad got situated, Sebastian took this opportunity to pull me aside. I didn’t know what he wanted to talk about, but from the look on his face I knew I wouldn’t like it.





   “Andrew…” (I knew I was in trouble then, no one had called me that in years) “I know what this child means to you, but I’m going to have to ask that you not go through with this.” “I know things may sound bad - -" “Andrew,” (That name again.) “They don’t just sound bad, they are. There is a reason the doctors have no idea why she blacked out, not the faintest clue as to why she grows weaker with each passing second that baby grows stronger, and that’s because they are in no way equipped to deal with magic. Jessie is a magical being. The only reason she is here is because of magic, magic that you performed back then, and it’s my fault, I should have foreseen it. But all I can tell you now is that the magic is claiming its price by taking from her life force.”





   “You can’t be serious…But she’ll pull through. I know it.” “What about the baby? What if something goes wrong? We are talking about breathing problems, hypotension, or even hydrocephalus. “Hydro what?” “It means fluid accumulation in the brain, but that’s just to name a few issues.”





   “What am I supposed to do?! She wants this, really wants this, and she’s strong. Doesn’t that mean anything? Can’t she pull through, and in doing so help the baby pull through? Can’t you help?” “Maybe Andy. I promise to do what I can, but magic is risky and unstable. You never know what can happen.”







   “I’m having this baby. It’s my body, and it’s my decision.” I could tell that Jessie was either too angry or too afraid to look at me. I hadn’t decided which yet. “There are other ways for us to have a family.” She finally turned to me, her eyes pleading, “I know I can do this. Somehow I know that everything will be ok, even if it doesn’t turn out exactly the way we wanted or planned. I need you to believe that too. I need you to believe in me. When you gave me that potion you gave me life. All I want is a chance to give life to you... Let me.” I took her in my arms, “I can’t lose you.” “Well then, we’ll just have to make it through this together, like everything us.” I hoped it would be that easy.








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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 29 – My Decision
« Reply #170 on: November 29, 2013, 09:49:01 PM »
It looks like Jessie has made a tough decision in this hard time. Hoping all goes well with her and the baby.
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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 29 – My Decision
« Reply #171 on: November 29, 2013, 10:41:50 PM »
It seems like a big decision and it's so real. Every wish has its price. Even this story title called Magical but even in magical world there's always some reality to open our eyes. So, it’s only Jessie or the Baby yes? I wonder if the third option would be available.
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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 29 – My Decision
« Reply #172 on: November 29, 2013, 11:00:03 PM »
I just wonder if Sebastian would sacrifice his life in order to exchange his life for Jessie. That’s what pop out in my head when I reading yours, Mel. This chapter was so serious and sad, especially to know about decision that involved someone life.

Will Jessie survive? I don’t know. To be honest, if she should go I wouldn’t mind. But, she shall be missed because she was my favourite character since I found out that she’s so different, I mean look! She sleeps in class. Somebody needs to die in order to save someone life. I hate that but if another option is available that should be better.

But, if you focus into reality, that would be a different story. Sometimes you need to sacrifice something that really means for you in order to seek happiness. And not all of love story like a fairy tale

It’s very good story that leaving me with so many possibility and cliffhanger ending  ::)
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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 29 – My Decision
« Reply #173 on: November 30, 2013, 02:30:47 PM »
This is a very sad chapter, I want both Jessie and the baby to be alright <3
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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 29 – My Decision
« Reply #174 on: November 30, 2013, 02:45:55 PM »
This is a very sad chapter, I want both Jessie and the baby to be alright <3

Me too!  The wonderful thing about magic is you never know which way it's going to go.  I'm still hoping for no problem that Jessie can't overcome.
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The Magical World: Chapter 30 – The Price of Magic Part 1
« Reply #175 on: December 01, 2013, 01:30:45 AM »
   Andy: Jessie insisted on buying a new home for the baby. She said the loft just wasn’t going to cut it anymore, and besides it was nice to be able to have my family stay with us instead of at the hotel. Most days of the pregnancy were spent with trips to the hospital, or watching Jessie’s favorite cooking show. I refused to leave her side. She tried to put on a good face for me, but I could tell she was tired.







   When Jessie reached her 34th week of pregnancy I suddenly heard her screaming my name, and terror shot through my heart. I woke up to her to find her clutching belly in pain. “Something is wrong... She is too early! She won’t be developed yet! She has to stay in there! Help me keep her up there!” I just stared at her in horror, because I didn’t know what else to do.



   Thankfully, Sebastian came in and snapped me out of it. “Andy, get her on the bed we are going to have to deliver the baby here.” “What about the hospital?” “There is no time for that now!” he snapped. Just as I was about to argue back another ear-piercing scream made my blood go cold, and then for the next few hours I was of little use to anyone.





   We had planned and re-planned, but nothing had gone right when it came down to it. She was born premature and sickly. Thankfully, her lungs had developed enough so she could breathe on her own, but her immune system wasn’t as fortunate, so she was prone to hypothermia and she was so pale. We had to keep her in an incubator to keep her warm.



   “She is so beautiful. You must promise to take good care of her when I am gone.” Jessie had barely made it through the labor, and she was on borrowed time. “You should be lying down.” “Any time that I have left, I want to spend it as close to her as possible.” “Jessie please don’t give up on me. You asked me to believe in you. Now I’m asking you to believe in me. I can save you.” “How?” I threw my hands up, exasperated, “I don’t know! All we know is that the life you’ve been given is transferring into them, and it’s because of the magic I did back then. But that’s just the human life right? You were a living entity before. What if I find a way to reverse it, change you back? It’s not perfect, but at least you would be here.” Her eyes suddenly filled with tears, “D-d-do you really think…could you? I don’t want to disappear.” “I just need time.” “That’s the one thing I’m running out of…”









   I had spent years studying potion making, but I only knew the proper recipe for one potion. There could be hundreds for all I knew. But I knew Sebastian would know exactly what to do. I relayed to him the whole of my conversation with Jessie, and after pacing for a minute he told me there would be some items that he would need.



   After that he just sat down and teleported away. I really hoped he wouldn’t be long, but five minutes later he teleported back into the room. “Ok. I should get started.” “Wait… I should do it.” “Andy – “  “This is my task.” “Fine. Do you remember everything I taught you?” “Yes, I won’t fail.”





   Twenty minutes later, with Sebastian closely hovering over my shoulder the entire time, I finally completed the potion. “Right then, you better bring Jessie down here. I’m not sure we should do this around the children.”


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The Magical World: Chapter 30 – The Price of Magic Part 2
« Reply #176 on: December 01, 2013, 02:36:22 AM »
   I raced upstairs only to find Jessie on the floor again. “Stay with me!” I said as I took her into my arms. With her voice barely above a whisper she said, “I found a name for her too now, Snow. She is as pale as ice. I want to name her Snow. Snow Li.” I smiled, “That’s beautiful, but try not to speak okay?”





   As soon as we entered the room Sebastian turned to Jessie, “Can you stand? We don’t have much time.” “Yes.” “You understand what taking this potion means right?” “I’m ready. I just want to watch over them in some way.”



   I was suddenly starting to have second thoughts. I mean would I even be able to talk to her like before? What if things were different? Magic almost never goes the way you expect it to. “I think I made a mistake… We shouldn’t do this.” “Andy, this was your idea.” “It was a bad idea!” Jessie smiled, “You’re afraid. I’m scared too, but it’s ok. It’s going to be ok. I love you.”





   While she was talking I hadn’t noticed she had taken the potion from me until she raised it to her lips, but by then it was too late to stop her. I watched as she turned into a toy and then shrunk down to a miniature size.







   There wasn’t time to settle into shock though, because a change began to come over me as well. “What is happening?” “Oh no… The magic you are performing is claiming its price now. It’s turning you into a toy as well…”







   “…It’s ok…It’s ok. Hey, I just need you to look after the girls, and promise me to keep us near them so that we can watch over them.” “I-I promise… I’m so sorry.”



   He didn’t need to apologize. I had gotten us in this situation. I just hoped that somehow, someday, they could figure out a way to get us out. I felt my joints stiffen and my heart stop. I was just grateful that there was no pain. Suddenly the world began to get bigger, but I knew I was just getting smaller.



   I couldn’t move at all, but I could hear Sebastian sobbing as he picked me up and carried me upstairs. He placed me next to where my beautiful daughters slept, and then placed Jessie next to me. And I felt, as I knew she felt, the life force within. We were together as always, just waiting to be free.




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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 29 – My Decision
« Reply #177 on: December 01, 2013, 02:45:56 AM »
It looks like Jessie has made a tough decision in this hard time. Hoping all goes well with her and the baby.
It seems like a big decision and it's so real. Every wish has its price. Even this story title called Magical but even in magical world there's always some reality to open our eyes. So, it’s only Jessie or the Baby yes? I wonder if the third option would be available.
This is a very sad chapter, I want both Jessie and the baby to be alright <3
Me too!  The wonderful thing about magic is you never know which way it's going to go.  I'm still hoping for no problem that Jessie can't overcome.
I thought it would just be best for me to complete that portion of the baby drama instead of responding and leaving everyone waiting. I hope it wasn't too bad.
A couple of characters made a few decisions that determined this particular outcome, and we will see how they deal with the consequences of those decisions in the future.

I just wonder if Sebastian would sacrifice his life in order to exchange his life for Jessie. That’s what pop out in my head when I reading yours, Mel. This chapter was so serious and sad, especially to know about decision that involved someone life.

Will Jessie survive? I don’t know. To be honest, if she should go I wouldn’t mind. But, she shall be missed because she was my favourite character since I found out that she’s so different, I mean look! She sleeps in class. Somebody needs to die in order to save someone life. I hate that but if another option is available that should be better.

But, if you focus into reality, that would be a different story. Sometimes you need to sacrifice something that really means for you in order to seek happiness. And not all of love story like a fairy tale

It’s very good story that leaving me with so many possibility and cliffhanger ending  ::)
Haha. Your thoughts sway dangerously close to some of my actual plot-line ideas. I love walking the edge of reality sometimes, because while this is a magical world, it is definitely not Disney.

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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 30 – The Price of Magic Part 2
« Reply #178 on: December 01, 2013, 03:08:03 AM »
Ha! I just love how it's turned out. It's not really what I expected, because it seems that you love Sebastian so much! And I can’t blame you for that. This is amazing, Mel. Truly brilliant, now we’re all know that the next generation is Snow, so what’s next?
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Re: The Magical World: Chapter 30 – The Price of Magic Part 2
« Reply #179 on: December 01, 2013, 03:49:51 AM »
Well, there will be bitter first and you can taste the sweet part later. At least they are there with their daughter and they are together in pair. Even it's sad but it's still cute.
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