The Jawarholal Immortal Dynasty-Graveyard Please

[PeregrineTook]

I just love how you create those interesting dialogue, Pippin! And hilarious as always. Where do you get them actually? You're seem great with that ^w^ *thumb up*

Yay, for Jamal. I just can't wait to see the nooboo soon :3

Thanks, Eld.  I'm glad you enjoy the randomness that is Jamal's household.  A nooboo will come into the picture before too long, but I'm making sure a few other things are in place first.

[Gwendy]

Jamal:  What's a bachelor?
Becky:  A bad reality show.

Not when Rosa grabs hold of it (or at least the gender-swapped version). 

Funny as always! I like the "squished coal on a circle" part. That was great.   

[RainBeau]

Hey, thanks Gwendy. I was thinking along those lines

Pippin. We need to talk. If you want specific comments, you're going to have to stop making every single line of dialogue ridiculously hilarious. Seriously. I can't even pick anything to comment on. (That said) I must agree with Gwendy, I had to stop scrolling to laugh at that line. And to get it, because understanding took a moment. Your students must die laughing every day. I bet you have to fill out a lot of paperwork.

[Swirl-Girl]

Yay! You remind me of this awesome social studies teacher. He SINGS! Also of my music teacher. Her son made me a DALEK!
In other words, you are funny and one of the coolest people I know. And a TEACHER!

[PeregrineTook]

Jamal:  Fishing.  In style

Mr. Smooch'ems:  Yes, I am certain the fish shall appreciate the plaid tuxedo which adorns your person.
Jamal:  Yep.  I'm a person.

Angler:  Mmmm, cereal.  What are you going to do today, Becky?
Becky:  Oh, just a bunch of adult things.

The adult dolls are so much more fun!

Kistin:  Someone else had better start learning gardening.  I'll be aging up before long.

Agri:  Hello, magical talking horse.
Mr. Smooch'ems:  Salutations...I mean...magical talking horse?  I'm not a magical...talking...horse...
Agri:  It's okay.  I know you're acting as our Watcher.

So, shall I assume we're in the midst of some sort of challenge?
Mr. Smooch'ems:  Well, an immortal dynasty, technically.
Agri:  Okay, I can work with that.
Mr. Smooch'ems:  Since you're the only mature one in the household, will you keep an eye on things for me?
Agri:  On one condition...

Kirstin:  ...and then the wolf said, "that riding hood totally does not go with those shoes!"
Angler:  I know, right?

Becky:  Oh, by the way, I marry you.
Jamal:  Okay.

And now we make the heir?
Becky:  Baby, yes.  And hopefully she will look like me.
Jamal:  Okay.

The next morning...

Mr. Smooch'ems:  Does this appease part one of your conditions?
Agri:  Almost...

Mr. Smooch'ems:  You know, this is actually kind of fun.

Art:  Do you see the strange, random stray poodle in our house?
Angler:  If I do, am I responsible for its messes?
Art:  Maybe.
Angler:  Then no, I don't.

Becky:  Welcome to Starlight Shores!  I made you a fresh batch of Ad Nauseum!  Where are you going?  You could at least say, "Thank you!"

Sleeping potion.  You're welcome!

Agri:  I score again!!
Art:  Just wait 'til I'm shooting!  Then I'll show you!

Or not.
Mr. Smooch'ems:  Umm, Agri, now that you're home, can we chat?
Agri:  Nope.  It's time for a dance party!



Mr. Smooch'ems:  Agri!  Don't you know what day it is for you and Art?
Agri:  Saturday?

Art:  I feel funny!
Agri:  Becky, guess what today is?
Becky:  National body glitter day?

Mr. Smooch'ems:  And when there are birthdays, there are very necessary make-overs.

Agri:  Aww man.  Now I have teenage hormones!

Art:  Real men dress as fairies!

Mr. Smooch'ems:  Ah, great.  A college informational bucket.  Simply place it next to the other one, will you, chap?

[Eldridge]

That was fun reading these!

Fun time that you family got there and hilarious as always
And I'm kinda like Agri anyway. She's the only one who 'mature' and 'aware' about Mr. Smooch'ems, that was cool 

[MarianT]

Pippin, I don't know where to start. Anyway, thanks for all the giggles. "Body glitter day," "another college informational bucket," and my favorite -- "I don't see the poodle, then." I'll have to try that one the next time one of our cats coughs up a hairball. Anyway, Agri is one of the best dynasty helpers ever.

[RainBeau]

Mr Smooch'ems realising he made a mistake: 'I'm not a magical . . . talking . . . horse.' Hahaha. I want to know all of Agri's conditions!

[PeregrineTook]

That was fun reading these!

Fun time that you family got there and hilarious as always
And I'm kinda like Agri anyway. She's the only one who 'mature' and 'aware' about Mr. Smooch'ems, that was cool 

Glad you're enjoying their stories.  I'm a big Agri fan as well!

Pippin, I don't know where to start. Anyway, thanks for all the giggles. "Body glitter day," "another college informational bucket," and my favorite -- "I don't see the poodle, then." I'll have to try that one the next time one of our cats coughs up a hairball. Anyway, Agri is one of the best dynasty helpers ever.

Yeah, I like that Mr. Smooch'ems is limited since he can't actually walk up the stairs to the house, so I had to have him recruit one of the kids.

Mr Smooch'ems realising he made a mistake: 'I'm not a magical . . . talking . . . horse.' Hahaha. I want to know all of Agri's conditions!

You will find out in due time  :=)

[Rhoxi]

This story is just too hilarious! Jamal and his wacky brand of hijinks are just so bizarre. I'd have to agree with Agri. If my watcher wanted my cooperation, I'd definitely extort getting a puppy out of the process!

[shaunta]

Love the update! Agi making conditions on being the inside girl is awesome I like it. The way she rode Mr. Smooch'ems reminded me of Jamals flash back in the competition. Kinda eerie but awesome none the less.

[PeregrineTook]

This story is just too hilarious! Jamal and his wacky brand of hijinks are just so bizarre. I'd have to agree with Agri. If my watcher wanted my cooperation, I'd definitely extort getting a puppy out of the process!

Puppy extortion...that has potential...

Love the update! Agi making conditions on being the inside girl is awesome I like it. The way she rode Mr. Smooch'ems reminded me of Jamals flash back in the competition. Kinda eerie but awesome none the less.

Well, as he is a toy rocking horse and she is a (tremendously mature) child.

[RaiaDraconis]

Oh heavens...why have I only just now started reading this? You had me cracking up from the very beginning! I sort of feel sorry for poor Agri, being the only sane one in a house full of nutcases.

[jennovazombie]

Oh gosh, this is hilarious! I can't wait to see what craziness they all get up to!

[PeregrineTook]

Oh heavens...why have I only just now started reading this? You had me cracking up from the very beginning! I sort of feel sorry for poor Agri, being the only sane one in a house full of nutcases.

Agri's just fine.  She gets to be in charge.  What kid doesn't want that?

Oh gosh, this is hilarious! I can't wait to see what craziness they all get up to!

Thanks, I'm anxious to see how things work out for them too.  I have some ideas, but I like to give the characters some autonomy to develop as well.