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Re: The Jawarholal Immortal Dynasty-The Story Begins...
« Reply #15 on: April 14, 2013, 11:19:04 PM »
That was fabulous!
Which Pippin is which?
I'm not fond of plaid, it is too easily offended, stupid pattern.
For further clarification on which Pippin is which, look at the "Libros Decadynasty" link in my signature.  They're first introduced in...I think the third chapter of that story.

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Re: The Jawarholal Immortal Dynasty-The Story Begins...
« Reply #16 on: April 14, 2013, 11:32:53 PM »
That was fabulous!
Which Pippin is which?

Yes, of course he is. If not I will not follow his story and squeal for every updates when I look into My Bookmark List :3
You also can check my cross-over story with Pippin, Squirt. It's like your Nadia's Escape with Pippin's College Daze. I really having fun at it.
Well, there are Pippins there! I will not force you, but here is the link for the cross-over chapter. You really can tell who is do the narrating there :3

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Really, Starlight Shores.  I used Moonlight Falls to "mock out" some ideas for the dynasty set up and the lot layout before I started really playing the dynasty.  That way, I didn't predispose myself towards any particular Sims from the Shores before I was truly investing in Jamal's dynasty.  I wanted it to be based on his approach to things. 
We are constantly vigilant for meteors.

Okay, then. Phew, I'm so glad. That place is somewhat so scary.
Sure, please take your time. It's great to get the feel before the actual story started.
Good luck for Jamal. I can't wait to know what is his career choice, SuperMax and especially for his lucky one!
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Re: The Jawarholal Immortal Dynasty-The Story Begins...
« Reply #17 on: April 15, 2013, 08:41:53 AM »
Love the start Pippin! I too love the fact that Jamal's Mr. Smooch'ems is going to be the mentor / watcher voice makes things interesting! Glad to see you up at it!

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The Jawarholal Immortal Dynasty-A Helper and a New Home
« Reply #18 on: April 16, 2013, 07:03:17 PM »
Jamal:  You didn't bake me cookies?

Mr. Smooch'ems:  No, Jamal, the surprise I got you was a more sensibly ordered lot...with a proper toilet and everything.
Jamal:  Wait, you mean...I get to potty..OUTSIDE?!?!!?

Best.  Day.  EVER!!!!!
Mr. Smooch'ems:  Umm, yes, you're welcome.  Moving on, Jamal, you must go find a wife because...
Jamal:  Okay.
Mr.  Smooch'ems:  Oh...well, okay then.

Jamal:  Hi, do you know where I could find a wife?
Madeline:  Well, cutie...

Or cookies.  I'd really prefer the cookies.
Madeline:  Umm...

Ariella:  Hello, handsome.
Jamal:  Are we in a cage?  Is this a people zoo?  Are animals going to come watch us?!?!?
Ariella:  Goodbye, handsome.

Mimi:  You may be the most handsome man I've ever met.
Jamal:  Do you work here?  I have complaints about your non-purple, un-French toilet paper.
(Voice of Mr. Smooch'ems in Jamal's head):  Try sweet-talking a girl.
Jamal:  Cookies are sweet.
Mr. Smooch'ems:  No, I mean compliment a girl.
Jamal:  Oh, got it.

Jamal:  Howdy.
Becky:  Salutations.
Jamal:  Your hair is like a fire truck.  See?
Becky:  Eeewwwww!  It hit that llama...

that was disturbingly cool.
Jamal:  Your legs look like candy canes.

Jamal:  I found the perfect woman!
Mr. Smooch'ems:  Umm, Jamal?
Jamal:  That's me!
Mr. Smooch'ems:  She's only a teen.
Jamal:  I was a teen once.  I got over it.

...and then the casting director slowly picked up the phone, and he offered the role of Ghost Rider to...Nicholas Cage!!
The Crowd:  AAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

The next day...
Mr. Smooch'ems:  Jamal, you will need help to complete this dynasty...

Jamal:  Abduct someone.  Got it!

Jamal:  Hi, you want to come live with me and my as-yet-a-teenager wife and take care of us and help raise our children while we start a dynasty?
Kirstin:  Only if you can beat me at rock, paper, scissors!

Kirstin:  Aww, man!

Jamal:  I caught one!
Mr. Smooch'ems:  Good, now we shall make usage of her generous contribution to our budget to build an actual house.
Jamal:  A tall one?!?!?
Mr. Smooch'ems:  Umm, sure.

We'll lay it out like this

and put it on stilts so 'tis a tall home for thee.
Jamal:  Yay, ice cream!!!
Mr. Smooch'ems:  Thou art welcome.

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Re: The Jawarholal Immortal Dynasty-A Helper and a New Home
« Reply #19 on: April 16, 2013, 07:14:29 PM »
Bahahaha! This is so much fun. I am enjoying this like crazy. 'I caught one!' I like his teenager wife. I need to go look her up now and find out who she is. I keep having to remind myself that he does not actually have the Insane trait.
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Re: The Jawarholal Immortal Dynasty-A Helper and a New Home
« Reply #20 on: April 16, 2013, 07:42:50 PM »
Be it true love?
But yeah, work on the toilet paper man!

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Re: The Jawarholal Immortal Dynasty-A Helper and a New Home
« Reply #21 on: April 16, 2013, 09:03:12 PM »

Okay, the Nicolas Cage joke was too funny. Now I just keep hearing him from Con Air saying "School is very important" in that horrible, horrible southern accent. No, what have you done?!

Jamal does seem like he should have the insane trait.



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Re: The Jawarholal Immortal Dynasty-A Helper and a New Home
« Reply #22 on: April 16, 2013, 09:05:33 PM »
This is an interesting and hilarious update, Pippin. I love every bit of it :3
So, Mr. Smooch'ems eh who become his guide. That was awesome!

No, I object that Jamal should have an insane trait. There are some people who like that, but that is just how they are. Jamal is more suited as a childish and good sense of humor Sim.
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Re: The Jawarholal Immortal Dynasty-A Helper and a New Home
« Reply #23 on: April 16, 2013, 10:14:31 PM »
Haha! Jamal is off the chain! Love it Pippin. Definitely enjoyed the finding a wife segment even more interesting that he caught one using the rock paper scissors social action pretty sweet, even if she still has a bit before she can give him nooboos

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Re: The Jawarholal Immortal Dynasty-A Helper and a New Home
« Reply #24 on: April 16, 2013, 10:41:17 PM »
Bahahaha! This is so much fun. I am enjoying this like crazy. 'I caught one!' I like his teenager wife. I need to go look her up now and find out who she is. I keep having to remind myself that he does not actually have the Insane trait.
The bride-to-be is Becky Lack. She's in the Crash Pad household.

Okay, the Nicolas Cage joke was too funny. Now I just keep hearing him from Con Air saying "School is very important" in that horrible, horrible southern accent. No, what have you done?!

Jamal does seem like he should have the insane trait.
It's always fun to poke fun at Nicholas Cage :=)

This is an interesting and hilarious update, Pippin. I love every bit of it :3
So, Mr. Smooch'ems eh who become his guide. That was awesome!

No, I object that Jamal should have an insane trait. There are some people who like that, but that is just how they are. Jamal is more suited as a childish and good sense of humor Sim.
Insane or childish might fit him, but I think "random" should be a Sims trait.  That would suit him.

Haha! Jamal is off the chain! Love it Pippin. Definitely enjoyed the finding a wife segment even more interesting that he caught one using the rock paper scissors social action pretty sweet, even if she still has a bit before she can give him nooboos
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The Jawarholal Immortal Dynasty-Engagement and a Party
« Reply #25 on: April 18, 2013, 07:59:41 AM »
Mr. Smooch'ems:  Jamal, let us take a moment to speak
Jamal:  I do that with my face!

Mr.  Smooch'ems:  Yes, indeed you do.  Now, you brought an art-hating Sim into the house when we need someone to paint portraits, so...
Jamal:  I'm on it!

Kirstin:  Yeah, this isn't going to work for me, Jamal.
Jamal:  Okay, plan Q, I've been reading up on child labor laws.  We should order some children!
Kirstin:  Wait...what?

Jamal:  We'll make this one do art.  I'll call him...Art.
Art:  Actually, my name's Steve...
Jamal: Yes it is, Art!

Kirstin:  Don't we need one to be an angler to cach deathfish?
Jamal:  He'll be Angler.

Angler:  You guys have cereal?!?!?  I'm in!!

Kirstin:  Oh, this one's adorable!

Jamal:  She'll help you garden.
Kirstin:  Yeah, she can handle the agriculture.
Jamal:  Agri it is!

Mr. Smooch'ems:  You know our intent was not the origination of an orphanage, correct?  Is this even legal?  Would this not possibly constitute exploitation of minors?

Is there anyone other than the undead gentleman listening to me?
Jamal:  Silly zombies don't know how stairs work.  Good night, zombies.

Agri:  That's fine, Jamal.  You just sleep in while I take care of this mess you left in the bathroom.

Jamal:  Kids, be in charge.  I've got to go get my not-quite-as-much-of-a-teenager-anymore wife.
Agri:  I've got it.
Kirstin:  Why doesn't he leave me in charge?
Agri:  Shouldn't you be learning gardening, young lady?
Kirstin:  Yes, ma'am.
Agri:  You, back to the easel.
Art:  Yes, ma'am.

Agri:  And off to the pond with you, cereal boy.

And why is that zombie still here?

Jamal:  Hi, future wife.  Your new outfit is ugly.
Becky:  So's your smiley face.

Jamal:  I'm a rocket man.

Becky:  I'm an alien.
Jamal:  I've been to France!!

This is a video of my left shoe in France.
Becky:  So it's still there?
Jamal:  Yes, that's why I said left.
Becky:  I'm moving in with you

and getting my stripes back.
Jamal:  Candy canes!!

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Re: The Jawarholal Immortal Dynasty-An Orphanage and Not-As-Much-A-Teen
« Reply #26 on: April 18, 2013, 01:04:39 PM »
They seem like a cute couple.  At least child Agri is a competent adult.

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Re: The Jawarholal Immortal Dynasty-An Orphanage and Not-As-Much-A-Teen
« Reply #27 on: April 18, 2013, 01:10:31 PM »
Yeah, it sounds like she's the only one in the house.
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Re: The Jawarholal Immortal Dynasty-An Orphanage and Not-As-Much-A-Teen
« Reply #28 on: April 18, 2013, 02:09:18 PM »
Becky was in one of my challenge practice files -- I'm glad to see she's getting a "real" life this time!
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Re: The Jawarholal Immortal Dynasty-An Orphanage and Not-As-Much-A-Teen
« Reply #29 on: April 18, 2013, 02:44:16 PM »
They seem like a cute couple.  At least child Agri is a competent adult.
Agreed, they're kind of adorable.  I needed to find someone who was enough of a character not to disappear next to Jamal.
Agri's pretty much awesome.

Yeah, it sounds like she's the only one in the house.
Nothing wrong with this house being run by a child and a magical spring-loaded horse.  Nope.  Perfectly normal.  Nothing to see here.

Becky was in one of my challenge practice files -- I'm glad to see she's getting a "real" life this time!
This dynasty is the first time I've even ventured into Starlight Shores, so it was rather a fun surprise when this young lady suddenly showed up at the library.  I'm glad to let her be a featured character