Author Topic: Empire of Evil- 4/30/13, Chapter 19  (Read 22082 times)

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Re: Empire of Evil
« Reply #45 on: April 15, 2013, 12:17:50 PM »
Yeah, the pink shoes threw me lol, but I found it hysterical.

Azokka, yeah, Mina is quite the character lol.  She's all over the place XD  In my game, she's a teen now and it's just funny to watch her do stuff.  Between the evil trait, and her daredevil trait, she's always gettin' into something.  But I find her a lot of fun.  Her brothers are too actually.  Will try to have an update up after I get home from work tonight.

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Re: Empire of Evil
« Reply #46 on: April 15, 2013, 07:44:41 PM »
Chapter 12: Entertaining

Dimitri and his dad Yuri come over to the house to get to know everyone.  Yuri is a fairy!  This excites everyone.  While Mina hangs with Dimitri, Yuri talks with the parents




Mina decides to entertain her friend with a ghoststory



Devin is promoted to Cutpurse and here's his outfit.  He had to run while Yuri and Dimitri were there


Mina, after taking a quick nap, talks with Yuri and her mom


It's obvious what Mina wants to do when she's old enough…  Papa will be proud!


Devin's putting Tyler down to sleep.  The poor boy's exhausted.


Mina went to Dimitri's house after school


Devin is a henchman!  He's only 2 away from becoming Emperor of Evil and obtaining his life time wish!


It's the boys' birthday again! 


 
Tyler Abaddon, child



Bracen Abaddon, child



Remodeled the house somewhat by taking out the room that had been Felicia's.


The boys' room


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Re: Empire of Evil
« Reply #47 on: April 16, 2013, 11:18:55 AM »
Mina is so pretty! I love how that gorgeous hair was passed down. Also, her wardrobe is so cool--nerd meets daredevil whose grandma is the Empress of Evil! And yay for her and Dimitri, I love a nice teenage love story.
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Re: Empire of Evil
« Reply #48 on: April 16, 2013, 01:28:39 PM »
Oooh, I love Mina. Her hair and fashion sense is so fit for her XD
Too bad that Dmitri just help her, he should the one do her homework instead.
Poor Mina has something important to do ::)

Yes! Just what I thought! They actually become a lover. La la la, can't wait to see them get married :3
It's good that Dmitri finally removed that ridiculous pink shoes when he is teenager.
I just can't bear it if Evil spouse wearing pink!
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Re: Empire of Evil
« Reply #49 on: April 16, 2013, 06:55:25 PM »
Chapter 13: Empires and Angst

With three kids in the house, things are quite hectic.  So, before they know it, it’s time for Mina to grow up!  Look out, here comes teen angst, mood swings… she’s already a handful… so the next few years should prove… interesting



Mina Abaddon, teen


Now that Mina is a teen, her outlook has changed a bit.  She’s no less a daredevil, of course, in fact, that has grown worse and her mood swings are felt all through the house.  The twins are close with each other and her.
The boys doing their homework together


Though Mina was a conscientious student in elementary school, but finds herself struggling with her homework in high school.  This Watcher is fairly certain that she is thinking of other things.


Mina is still very close with Dimitri and the whole Ivanov family, in fact.  She heads over to their house after school, intending to spend the night since prom was the next day, Saturday and she was going with Dimitri.  Yuri enjoys pestering Mina playfully in his fairy form and Mina avoids homework by reading while Dimirtri and his sister do theirs



Mina is playing rock, paper, scissors with Dimitri's mom


Mina is STILL avoiding homework by taking a quick nap


Hm… why so serious Mina and Dimitri?  Seems since they’ve become teenagers, they’ve been looking at one another as more than just friends!

Their first kiss!

"So uh… does this make us boyfriend and girlfriend?"
“It most certainly does!”

Dimitri sits down to help his girlfriend with her homework

Dimitri promises to protect Mina, always


Mina in her unusual prom dress


Here's a picture of Dimitri and Mina at prom; so cute!


Because Mina is now a teenager and her room is so small, the family added a room upstairs as well as a deck off that room



Mina just can't stay out of trouble… she skipped school and her mom caught her but she's really good at weaseling herself out of trouble again.



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Re: Empire of Evil
« Reply #50 on: April 16, 2013, 07:07:04 PM »
Hey guys, I apologize XD  There was another chapter before the one I posted.  Sorry!  So, you get a bonus chapter heh... I put it in the correct order.

And I'm glad you guys like Mina.  I love her too ^^  She's a lot of fun.

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Re: Empire of Evil
« Reply #51 on: April 16, 2013, 07:14:22 PM »
Chapter 14: Time Flies!

Trying to overcome the problems in their relationship, Alecia and Devin spend as much time together as they can, often making out in random places…
Alecia and Devin making out in front of everyone as is their wont


Tyler spends a lot of time with his dad, though something is obviously not quite right.  He’s been thinking a lot and he know what he wants to do, but he doesn’t dare tell his father…



Mina's gonna give her father a heart attack… she likes to walk around in her undies… even when fixing the dishwasher…  Teenagers…  She does like spending time with her family, though.

Mina is bonding with Bracen

Alecia, Mina, and Bracen chat outside

Tyler joins them


Mina had been begging her parents to learn how to drive for a while now and they finally gave in.  Alecia takes the responsibility of teaching Mina to drive


Their children have quite the imagination.  Tyler dresses up like a Prince.
Prince Tyler looks down upon his subjects

Prince Tyler has an audience with the Queen


The family decided to buy a trampoline… I think Alecia spends more time on it than the kids do XD
Mom's getting air on the trampoline!


Mina’s pretty close with her brothers; she’s their big sister and takes that responsibility seriously.
The kids ride to school together.  Min and Bracen are pretty tight; they sit together while Tyler sits in the back, looking at them a bit forlornly


After school, Mina and her brothers do their homework together.


Devin has steadily been moving up in the world and in the Syndicate.  He’s so close… his last obstacle was the man who had taken over after his mother’s death.  He had tried to keep Devin away from the position but eventually, Devin disposed of the fool who had taken over after his mother's death!  He is now Emperor of Evil!


There were a string of birthdays, all on the same day.  First, it was the boys, aging into teenagers, then Alecia became an adult as did Devin, while he was at work!  Time had snuck up on all of them!
String of birthdays!




Bracen Abaddon, teen

Tyler Abaddon, teen

Alecia Abaddon, adult

Devin Abaddon, adult


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Re: Empire of Evil
« Reply #52 on: April 20, 2013, 11:28:18 AM »
I must apologize for the quality of the last post.  Been kinda hectic the last week or so.  I'm behind on some updating; I hope to get another one up and I'm gonna try experimenting with the story-telling aspect and try to do it from a character perspective.  Sorry for the delay guys.

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Re: Empire of Evil
« Reply #53 on: April 20, 2013, 12:48:29 PM »
You're forgiven. Take all the time that you need :)
At last while waiting, I can still re-read your story.

I notice, I haven't leave my comment here. So here it is ;D
- I love when they working on homework together, that was lovely
- I love trampoline too! That was fun!
- Congrats to Devin for being Emperor of Evil, so who's next? :D
- Congrats to who have a string birthday
- Mina still the one for me, she is lovely! Can't wait to see her more in action!
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Re: Empire of Evil
« Reply #54 on: April 21, 2013, 02:29:52 AM »
Chapter 15: The Empire Changes

Hey, name’s Mina.  Ya know, oldest daughter of Devin and Alecia Abaddon, heir to a pretty cool job.  I’m gonna be takin’ over for my dad when I grow up.  He’s the Emperor of Evil, just like his mom before him.  That’s right, my grandma Felicia started this little tradition in our family.  I think it’s pretty cool myself and I’m lookin’ forward to it, but ya know what?  I wanna be a kid first… well, in my case a teen.  And I was likin’ bein’ a teen a lot.

Because I’m the oldest, I got my own room up on the second floor of our house.  Since it was a pain to come downstairs, dad also okayed having a little bathroom built up there too.  My brothers groaned a little and asked why they can’t have their own rooms too, but I think they did it more for form than anything.  They’re good kids… unlike me.  *unabashed grin*  See?  They do their homework like good boys… I get the boyfriend to help me with mine.



Speaking of boyfriends… I was over at his house and lost track of the time so when curfew hit, I didn’t have enough time to dodge the cops…  Lucky for me, dad was the one waiting up for me so it wasn’t bad.  I think the only reason he even yelled at me at all was so mom wouldn’t freak out.  He’s pretty easy to get around anyway.  All I had to do was lay on a bit of a pout and pretend to beg and we were cool.




Maybe my Dad should learn that technique… since his birthday, he’s been goin’ through a major midlife crisis and he and my mom aren’t gettin’ along too well, not at all.  They’re trying to fix things, but it seems to be an uphill battle.  I love my mom, I do.  She’s terrific, but she never understood my dad very well, I don’t think, nor did she ever come to terms with his calling.  Then again… admitting their love life was getting stale was not the best move on his part… Smooth move dad! 




Us kids are trying to ignore it, pretending everything is ok.  Personally, I think it’s great that they’re trying to make things work, but… well, so far, this family doesn’t have a great track record.  Some of my earliest memories of Gram were of her tellin’ me that we shouldn’t really fall in love.  Fallin’ in love was for saps.  Grandpa Rudolph really hurt her I think… I don’t know, to me, if ya don’t take a few chances, then you won’t get anywhere.


Oh cripes… Tyler… Tyler why… I TOLD you not to tell dad that way!  I had known for a little while that Tyler was looking to go the exact opposite of the rest of the family and go into… law enforcement!  He read too many spy novels as a kid…  Cripes… getting in between your father and brother is not cool.  *sighs audibly*




*Sniffling as she writes*  Well, it’s happened… Dad’s midlife crisis just gets worse.  He actually suggested to mom that they see new people.  Between her and Tyler… think my dad finally cracked!  Well, my mom had taken all she could.  I’ve never seen her so angry… she hauled off and let my dad have it right across the face!  She stormed out, sending divorce papers in the mail.  She took Tyler with her.  Bracen and I are just… thunderstruck.


Now that mom’s gone, I’ve taken over in the kitchen.  If I didn’t my dad and brother would survive on cereal, I swear…  *eyes tear up*  I miss my mom, but I try my best, especially for Bracen.  He misses his twin desperately.  None of the three of us has had the courage to try to contact either Mom or Tyler, not really knowing what to say…


Maybe with Mom leaving the way she did, Dad was finally ready to tell me all about the family business, the ins and outs.  Now, his mom had made him get a job in high school, but he wanted me to enjoy myself while he could, so he said when I turned into a young adult would be soon enough, but I should start training now, while I had the chance.  He also gave me some warnings and some strategies to try out.


With all the crap going on, there’s one rock I can depend on and that’d Dimitri.  He’s the only one I can confide in really.  He’s great.  He lets me forget things for a while and just have fun.  Just like any teenagers, we also enjoy the occasional movie and cuddling on the couch.  He doesn’t even mind when my little brother joins us.






I do love the balcony off my room.  It’s a great place to come and watch the stars.  Sharing that with Dimitri is even better.  Dimitri really gets along with the family, even my dad which is kinda odd, considering.  My dad isn’t a bad guy, but he can be a bit scary at times.



Going to school just isn’t the same.  Just me and Bracen on the bus now…  There’s no Tyler.  It’s a very weird feeling, for both of us, but I think Bracen is taking it harder than I am, Tyler being his twin and all.  The poor kid is even having trouble working on homework.  I mean, he and Tyler always did it together, so I think not having him around throws him off his game.  I’m just not a substitute for a twin…



Ya know… I think my dad is seeing someone new… she’s new to the neighborhood and came over to introduce herself one day.  She and dad hit it off and they’ve been doing a lot of phone chats lately…  Not sure how I feel about this yet…  Nor do I even know if it will go anywhere.  Guess we’ll just have to see what the future holds, hm?


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Re: Empire of Evil
« Reply #55 on: April 21, 2013, 08:08:25 PM »
I'm so glad I picked up this story! It's an intriguing premise and I like what you're doing with it. I especially appreciate that you are both realistic about the personality conflicts but also don't pigeonhole characters into being a stereotype of only one of their traits. After all, Devin is Nurturing as well as Evil. I understand why you are fond of Dimitri now :)
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« Reply #56 on: April 21, 2013, 10:01:35 PM »
Thanks so much Rosa ^^  I'm having a lot of fun with this family.  And yeah, messing with what might be called conflicting traits is fun.  It's funny watching Devin with the 3rd Gen... he's stealing candy one moment, and feeding/changing/tickling, etc the next XD  All autonomously even...

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Re: Empire of Evil
« Reply #57 on: April 21, 2013, 11:10:17 PM »
Hey, I just love the new writing style, Shewolf! It's really worth waiting ;D

Dmitri is great, I just can't wait to listen the wedding bell ringing and see the nooboo coming ::)
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« Reply #58 on: April 22, 2013, 12:06:47 AM »
Hey, I just love the new writing style, Shewolf! It's really worth waiting ;D

Dmitri is great, I just can't wait to listen the wedding bell ringing and see the nooboo coming ::)

Thanks ^^  Glad you do.  I found it a lot easier to write from a character's perspective, so that's how I think I'm do it from now on.

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Re: Empire of Evil- 4/21/13, Chapter 15
« Reply #59 on: April 23, 2013, 02:03:00 AM »
Chapter 16: Holy Crap!  Where did the time go?

I’ve really been trying to get in shape for when it’s time to start working.  I’ve enjoyed being a teen, but I’m looking forward to growing up too, carrying on for my dad, for our family. 


Time flew!  Can’t believe it’s my birthday already…  Dad threw me a party, inviting all my friends (Dmitri and his family)… and even mom and Tyler.  I hadn’t seen them since they left.  Whoa!  Dimitri, you’re a fairy!  Literally!  Ack!  Nuuuuuuuuu!  Oh my Watcher!  Mirror, dresser, stat!




I decided to go with a hairstyle that I had seen in some pictures of my grandmother.  I look a lot like her and I always admired her, so I think it fits me quite well.  Also think my new outfit is me.  It’s… evil, understated but sophisticated. 


At the party, after seeing Dimitri all grown up… We both knew this was coming.  It was our destiny, he and I.  We’d loved each other since we were kids.  We’d grown up together and our family were friends.  So, it wasn’t a surprise to anyone when the question was popped, nor when our engagement was announced.



The next few weeks were a whirlwind.  Not only did we have a wedding to plan for, but we also had to graduate.  Somehow, despite my… distractions *cough* Dimitri *cough cough*, I somehow was Valedictorian… and voted most likely to Take over the World… which was a given, of course.  Dimitri received most likely to Change the World with words (Watchers’ Note:  I can’t remember what he actually got, but it did have to do with writing XD)



Right after graduation, it was our wedding!  We held it at the Gazebo, keeping it low key.  Mom and Tyler actually came, as did the entire Ivanov family.  Everyone thought it was a great time.  We did the cake cutting at home, since we didn’t have the place for too long.






We decided to stay home for our honeymoon, both exhausted from the planning.  That didn’t stop us from having one heck of a wedding night though.  *smug grin*


Of course… we all know what that kind of activity leads to.  Have to admit, I’m pretty psyched about having a nooboo.  I tell the hubby first, of course, then I tell my dad.  Everyone else is pretty psyched too.  Can’t wait to hold my lil nooboo.





Whoa whoa whoa!  Wait a minute dad!  What are you doing!?  Ok, pregnant lady here!  How could you do this!?  *sniffles*  Ok, ok… yeah, hormonal pregnant lady is a little crazy.  I know, I know… I should be happy for my dad that he found someone.  But… just seems so soon after the divorce, but then I realize it’s been a while.  He and Lydia seem happy together.  He didn’t want to make a big fuss about it all, so they had a private ceremony.  Oh cripes, Dad!  Stop being such a hound!  Let the woman settle in first *eye roll*  Yeah, I know… I’m not one to talk…  Still!  This is my dad, ya know?  Plus… we know what that activity can lead to, right?





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