Author Topic: Nadia's Escape: FINISHED!  (Read 42273 times)

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Re: Nadia's Escape
« Reply #150 on: July 27, 2013, 06:08:45 PM »
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"What, are you doing." Nadia ground out. Still thinking about the supernatural slurs.
"Why, I'm teleporting your dear boy-toy here," He said, obviously pleased at having gotten under Nadia's skin.



It took a moment for Calvin to process where he was. But he quickly rounded on Nadia's captor.
"You son of a chupacabra, I have mind to push you from under your parasol,"



"I fear you won't get to do that," And then he pounced on Calvin.



Samuel must have been relying on his Vampiric Vigor to get him through the fight victorious. He wasn't counting on Calvin's athleticism.
"Fine!" He coughed out. And then he spoke. Nadia couldn't quite understand, she heard him, she remembered hearing him, but the words slipped from her ears. The words must have been enchanted.



A grand archway opened up in the fence. Nadia ran to Calvin and said, "I hate being the damsel in distress."



They left poor Victor feeling rather awkward.



Nadia picked up Samuel's phone, and he was getting a call from, "Science Facility" She answered and said, "The jigs up, stop the reverse global warming, and maybe there won't be any cops."



End-ish
Maybe.

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Re: Nadia's Escape
« Reply #151 on: July 28, 2013, 11:21:52 AM »
Hooray!!  Calvin to the rescue!!



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Re: Nadia's Escape: FINISHED!
« Reply #152 on: July 28, 2013, 12:08:27 PM »
Finally, Nadia has escaped from the cave. And hurrah to Calvin for his heroic action. It is good to see that you have completed this story, Squirt. We had lots of fun reading this story.:)
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Re: Nadia's Escape: FINISHED!
« Reply #153 on: July 28, 2013, 12:20:51 PM »
Very nice ending!  I liked your screenshots too.

Now, you said "end-ish.  Maybe".  So should I move this to the completed stories board, or do you think you'll be continuing on with it?
 
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Re: Nadia's Escape: FINISHED!
« Reply #154 on: July 28, 2013, 12:32:55 PM »
Please move it.  :D It's just hard to say The End, you know?

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Re: Nadia's Escape: FINISHED!
« Reply #155 on: July 28, 2013, 01:05:25 PM »
Please move it.  :D It's just hard to say The End, you know?

Yeah, I know.  ;)

Moving it now.
 
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Re: Nadia's Escape: FINISHED!
« Reply #156 on: August 15, 2013, 05:54:18 AM »
It has been such a long time since I logged on >< nice story I just love it.

And let me end here before I start my literature craze  ;D



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