The Bachelorette: An Interactive Story--Goodbye for Now 18/8

[RainBeau]

Great job on Candy Kane's performance. You did a very good job on her.
And do feel free to use that idea.
Poor...uhm...somebody...

Thank you. I'm going to assume you mean I did a very good job positioning and shooting or that Vinyl did a good job making her. Or both! Thank you! Mazel tov!
Okay, thank you. It's very back-burner though. It'll be awhile coming.
What?

Great performance of acrobat Candy Kane. And what a jump from the second floor. Is it even possible? Can't wait to see the next stunt.
Chetan.

Thank you! No, it is not at all possible. That's why it's so impressive that I set it up (hint hint ) Thank you, if anything I think the next thing actually does top it. Wow, right?

I also enjoyed Candy Kane's show...very energetic! I'm so excited to see what else you have up your sleeve for the rest of the date.

I was also wondering if you'd be doing another "Meanwhile, back on the farm" update? I would love to know what other gossip Leo & Everette might be sharing while they wait for the other Bachelors to return. It can't be easy for them to compete with those young whipper snappers, after all. They must have some things they'd like to vent about! (Narcissistic Fairies, Hydrophobic Martial Artists, Flirtatious (with all the wrong girls) Ladie' s Man...) The list could go on & on!

*Silently begging with puppy dog eyes*

I hope I will not not disappoint you!

No, I will not. There was one piece of information I wanted to convey and I already piled all of that dialogue on one poor little screenshot. I don't have any more screenshots. All they did was play dominoes. They were very boring. I was focused on the action with my camera. And why would they want to vent about Kenshin? What's he done?

Please don't beg. I hate begging. It makes me into a grumpy old man. Three things I am usually not.

[melancholy_anju]

Oh wow wow wow! I've been gone since the middle of the first date so it was a pleasant surprise to finally get back on, and see all of this. Wonderful job Rosa, I can't even fathom how much work this all is, but I greatly appreciate you and all the sponsors of course, making this for us all to read.

[Pyro0001]

OK, so far my favourite is definitely Candy Kane. Jumping off a swing 10 feet off the ground is death-defying! But of course, all the acts are great. And I'll have to use that 'let's get dangerous' quote sometime.

[Blayzen]

And why would they want to vent about Kenshin? What's he done?

I honestly can't think of anything that Kenshin might have done wrong which makes him a prime candidate for complaints. Someone that perfect is bound to cause some jealousy. <evil grin> I'm not usually so superior about one of my favorite bachelor's but couldn't resist this time. 

Please don't beg. I hate begging. It makes me into a grumpy old man. Three things I am usually not.

Ok, no begging. The last thing that I would want Mr. Rosa to deal with his a grumpy old man. I'm pretty sure that's not what he had in mind. Not to mention the fact that *I* don't want a Grumpy Old Man on our hands, we like you just the way you are. Thank you very much. <3

[RainBeau]

Oh wow wow wow! I've been gone since the middle of the first date so it was a pleasant surprise to finally get back on, and see all of this. Wonderful job Rosa, I can't even fathom how much work this all is, but I greatly appreciate you and all the sponsors of course, making this for us all to read.

Good strategy for avoiding suspense! I'm glad you are so enthusiastically enjoying it. We aim to please

OK, so far my favourite is definitely Candy Kane. Jumping off a swing 10 feet off the ground is death-defying! But of course, all the acts are great. And I'll have to use that 'let's get dangerous' quote sometime.

Seriously. So cool. And then she's all blasé about it, too. I didn't make up 'Let's get dangerous' so use it whenever you wish.

I honestly can't think of anything that Kenshin might have done wrong which makes him a prime candidate for complaints. Someone that perfect is bound to cause some jealousy. <evil grin> I'm not usually so superior about one of my favorite bachelor's but couldn't resist this time. 

Ok, no begging. The last thing that I would want Mr. Rosa to deal with his a grumpy old man. I'm pretty sure that's not what he had in mind. Not to mention the fact that *I* don't want a Grumpy Old Man on our hands, we like you just the way you are. Thank you very much. <3

Those two gentlemen are not the jealous types, methinks. Everette is confident enough in his own self that he doesn't need to be, and Leopold is too refined, polite, and good-natured. They're not really gossipy blokes but Everette had information I wanted Leopold to have so there you are.

Hahahaha thank you. And Mr Rosa thanks you. He does not like it when I am a grumpy old man.

[RainBeau]

Ringmaster: And now, cast your eyes . . .



Ringmaster: Upon the beautiful, glamourous . . .



Ringmaster: And above all, mysterious Malika Mysteria!
Marielle: Malika Mysteria? YAY!



Malika Mysteria: Please, you're too kind.



Hmmm, I'm going to need a curtain. Let's see . . .





Excellent.



Now, behind this curtain I am going to conjure something.



Chant with me! Say, 'Currus!'



Malika Mysteria and Audience: Cur-rus!



Cur-rus!



CUR-RUS!





Aha! Well done! A Bwan Speedster! Someone in the audience has excellent taste.



Hmmm. There's just something about this car I don't like.



Mmmm . . . what could it be . . .



Oh, I know! It's the colour! Red is just not my colour.



Shall I change it?
Marielle: Yes, make it lilac!



Lilac! Excellent choice.



Verto hoc casia!





Marielle: Now that is a fabulous car!
Kenshin: Hmm.



Kenshin Confession Cam

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

I must admit that Miss Mysteria's car was a tad disconcerting, especially with Marielle's quite specific comment on it. "Fabulous Car?" Those were the very words that that fool of a seer used to describe my future. For once, it seems that that charlatan was right about something, though I attribute none of it to his own skill. Of course he would know about the car; he works in this place! Of course co-workers would talk to each other about their plans, wouldn't they? This makes him no seer. If anything, knowing that his off-base accusations are based even a small portion in fact infuriate me even more.

See the second part of Malika Mysteria's show here.

[Banana Bender]

Now that's a fantastic feat of magic!     Does Marielle get to keep the car?

[Shewolf13]

Fabulous car indeed!  Very nice.  Lovely update Rosa ^^ 

[Trip]

That is some excellent use of the Midas Touch animation right there.

Malika strikes me as more of a spiceberry lady than a lilac one, though.

[Pyro0001]

Malika's act was very good. I still like Candy Kane though. However, conjuring a fancy sports car from mid-air is still pretty impressive!

[RainBeau]

Now that's a fantastic feat of magic!     Does Marielle get to keep the car?

Thank you! And you will find out in part two.

Fabulous car indeed!  Very nice.  Lovely update Rosa ^^ 

Thank you.

That is some excellent use of the Midas Touch animation right there.

Malika strikes me as more of a spiceberry lady than a lilac one, though.

Thank you, thank you. One of my better ideas.

She is. Marielle picked lilac, didn't she? It's her favourite.

Malika's act was very good. I still like Candy Kane though. However, conjuring a fancy sports car from mid-air is still pretty impressive!

Oh you are free to continue liking Candy Kane, I won't let anyone stop you! I agree with you though, the conjuring is a bold move.

[chetanhaobijam]

Great update/show, Rosa. She(performer) is rather very mysterious. How she can conjure a Bwan Speedster(Agnes's car) in the middle of the show. Anyhow, it was an incredible show. Did Marielle keep it? To me, it looks like it will vanish(poof) upon touch just like other magic.
Chetan.

[Snufflesxx]

Ooh, fantastic!! 
I can't wait to see what she does next!

[PeregrineTook]

Given that Malika didn't give you the movement and motion of the other performers, I thought it was really nice how you used the shots to give her depth through various expressions and playing to the audience as a presenter as much as a performer.

[Swirl-Girl]

I thought it was interesting how stiff Malika appeared, but still seemed very alive. Makes sense with that giant cuff necklace.