The Bachelorette: An Interactive Story--Goodbye for Now 18/8

[PlatnumDymnd]

Oh man that place is fantastic. Does that house in the thread have all the floors that are on the Magic House in Hollywood. I mean it has a lot of detail in it. And looks even more huge in person!

Hmm. Traits. Ok Social Butterfly, Excitable, Supernatural Lover, Good, and Good Kisser?

EDIT: I retract Good Kisser for Bookworm. Did someone say Bookworm already?

[RainBeau]

Oh man that place is fantastic. Does that house in the thread have all the floors that are on the Magic House in Hollywood. I mean it has a lot of detail in it. And looks even more huge in person!

Hmm. Traits. Ok Social Butterfly, Excitable, Supernatural Lover, Good, and Good Kisser?

No, I selected only a few rooms to put in my version. The Magic Castle of Hollywood is much bigger and is actually a different style on the outside, but that's why it's Magic Castle and mine is Magic Manor.

Social Butterfly, Excitable, Supernatural Fan, Good, yes. Great Kisser, no. One more trait to guess, people! It's something she has in common with Talus and I think I showed it pretty clearly in her introduction. Plus it makes sense for her life state. There, I've just given it to you  now.

[Jade]

Yes, Social Butterfly and Excitable are correct. Neither Hopeless Romantic nor Flirty, though.

Oh, I'm delighted to inspire you in any way! This is good, right? Or should I be apologising to your pocketbook?

Yes, this is good. Especially since my birthday is in June. 

[Gwendy]

No, I selected only a few rooms to put in my version. The Magic Castle of Hollywood is much bigger and is actually a different style on the outside, but that's why it's Magic Castle and mine is Magic Manor.

Social Butterfly, Excitable, Supernatural Fan, Good, yes. Great Kisser, no. One more trait to guess, people! It's something she has in common with Talus and I think I showed it pretty clearly in her introduction. Plus it makes sense for her life state. There, I've just given it to you  now.

Night Owl! Night Owl!

[RainBeau]

Yes, this is good. Especially since my birthday is in June. 

Oh, excellent. You're welcome then

Night Owl! Night Owl!

Correct, Gwendy! Marielle's final trait is Night Owl.

[PlatnumDymnd]

NIGHT OWL!! *slaps forhead*

Of Course!!

[RainBeau]

The second magic show

Welcome. For those of you have not yet met me, I am Erika Saenz, but you may call me Charm. And yes, that is a portrait of me on the wall behind you.



Well, enough with the formalities! Let's get started.





Ouch! That hurts!



No, I'm just kidding.





Thank you, thank you. You're too kind.



For my next trick, I am going to turn myself into the bachelorette so I can have all these handsome gentlemen!



No, that's another joke. This is much more impressive.



Now they're just hands . . . and now . . .





For this trick, I need a big fan. Or a small one. (wink) Marielle? Can you come up here please?
Marielle: Yes!



You see this ordinary golden Simoleon?
Marielle: Mm-hmm.



Watch closely!
Marielle: Okay.



Let me just breathe a little of my Charm on it.



There you are, folks! The Simoleon has been transformed into some lovely Zephyr Metalmark butterflies!
Marielle: So pretty . . .



Thank you, thank you. I'll be here all week.



Dominic Confession Cam

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

These magicians are really amazing. I'm sure mamma and papà would like to see this, all they had in their time were rabbits being yanked out of hats! But (scoff) I'm sure Nathaniel thinks he can do better...and he's a singer!

Marielle: One more show, boys! Let's go!

In the basement of the Manor

Marielle: While we're waiting for the next show to begin, let's check out the Museum of Magic!
(murmurs of agreement from the bachelors)

Marielle: Malika Mysteria. What an amazing magician. She hasn't performed at the Manor in ages. I hear she's travelling with the circus now. (sigh) I would love her to see her perform. She's legendary.



Everette: Hmm, the photography on this newspaper article is not bad.



Nathaniel: All right, a mirror! This is my kind of magic! Mirror, mirror, on the wall, who's the most beautiful and glorious of them all?
Talus: . . .



Dimitri: Sawing the lady in half. A classic trick. I think I'd rather romance a lady than bisect her, personally.



Dominic: Hmmm...I wonder if I look into this crystal ball if I could see myself winning over Marielle at the end of the show.



Kenshin: I wonder who these charming people might have been. They certainly look very proper. It's a shame people don't dress like that anymore.



Leopold: Hmmm. I do believe I knew this fellow.




Marielle: Okay, the show is ready to start! Let's go!

Jump to The Final Show, Part I.

[Shewolf13]

Ooooo!  Great magic show!  And I loved the guys' responses!  So fun!  Lol, Nathaniel cracked me up, as did Leo.

[Swirl-Girl]

Leopold: Hmmm. I do believe I knew this fellow.
I liked that part.
Also, Dominic, you can't be too sure about that!

[Pyro0001]

Charm was really good, especially how her finger was on fire. By the way, did anyone else notice the cat in that picture with Dominic and Kenshin?

[PeregrineTook]

I found it odd that she called Marielle up as a volunteer and then had no participation for her in the trick.  Oh well, Charm was still pretty cool

[chetanhaobijam]

Great update, Rosa(Can I call you Rosa?). Hope they enjoy all the shows and have a great first date. Waiting for next update.
Chetan.

[RainBeau]

Ooooo!  Great magic show!  And I loved the guys' responses!  So fun!  Lol, Nathaniel cracked me up, as did Leo.

Thank you!

Leopold: Hmmm. I do believe I knew this fellow.
I liked that part.
Also, Dominic, you can't be too sure about that!

Hey, he said he wonders! Hahaha

Charm was really good, especially how her finger was on fire. By the way, did anyone else notice the cat in that picture with Dominic and Kenshin?

You would like that, Pyro. I didn't even see that cat! Hahaha where did that come from? I suppose that's the Manor's mascot--yeah, that's it.

I found it odd that she called Marielle up as a volunteer and then had no participation for her in the trick.  Oh well, Charm was still pretty cool

I'm as confused as you. I don't know why that trick is an interaction with another person, but it is. So there you are.

Great update, Rosa(Can I call you Rosa?). Hope they enjoy all the shows and have a great first date. Waiting for next update.
Chetan.

Yep, just as it says on the side thing here, Rosa is what they call me. Thank you!

[Lysita]

I think it's because it's in the realm of close up magic, they ask for a volunteer not neccessarily to get help in the trick but as validation that something is real and to prove they can fool someone up close as well as from a distance.

[molly1231]

I love Marielle hair and liked the butterfly trick.