The Bachelorette: An Interactive Story--Goodbye for Now 18/8

[Blayzen]

It was just a brilliant combination of desperation, nothing to post, a chance comment, and the perfect day for it all to come together on

Isn't that always the way great things come together? And, it really was great! I laughed so hard, it really made my day. There is nothing better than coming home from a long day at work and finding a Bachelorette update...even one that has almost nothing to do with the actual show! 

Seriously, great work! Please don't push yourself too hard...we'll be here, waiting patiently for whatever delicious crumbs your computer allows you to share!

[RainBeau]

I was laughing hard when I see your reply. Your comment alone is make my day lol

I'm still catching up, I'm reading Callahan now. I still have 29 chapters left to read
The comment will follow up in appropriate thread lol.

Oh good. Apparently that's a gift of mine. First Gwendy, now you. I'll take it

Oh good, whew. I have time

Isn't that always the way great things come together? And, it really was great! I laughed so hard, it really made my day. There is nothing better than coming home from a long day at work and finding a Bachelorette update...even one that has almost nothing to do with the actual show! 

Seriously, great work! Please don't push yourself too hard...we'll be here, waiting patiently for whatever delicious crumbs your computer allows you to share!

I suppose you are right, the best things come from hard work or serendipity. This was the latter. I am so pleased to have such a profound impact on your life. You really have no idea what it means to me to come home after a stressful day and see all the comments on my story. The reaction to the park post really baffled me. I'm surprised that something so simple got such a response. I think it has to be because Azo-chan brought it up and I did it. I don't think it would have been funny by itself.

Thank you. The game is finally kind of co-operating with me. I've managed to almost play through the first night, which took two days. I mean in-game days, it took way more real-life days than that. Now I need to take supplemental screenshots and write and edit. I think we're looking at next week for the finished product.

[Swirl-Girl]

Don't worry about too long, it's the deadly too too long you need to worry about, but it seems that you won't have to!

[Eldridge]

Oh good, whew. I have time

Yes, just take your time Rosa. Please make a good story.
I still have 24 chapters to go anyway~~
I can't wait to read Anna's story as well

Question: Do you want me to tell you what I think? Because in the introduction you say something like that (Callahan). If yes, I will write what I think and feel in each chapters. So be prepare to see a loooooooong reply from me

[RainBeau]

Don't worry about too long, it's the deadly too too long you need to worry about, but it seems that you won't have to!

Good! I do want to get this rolling but I'd like to take some time later once I have some stuff in place to play a nice relaxing game...like my Life States Dynasty...yes, that is relaxing in comparison. Trust me.

Yes, just take your time Rosa. Please make a good story.
I still have 24 chapters to go anyway~~
I can't wait to read Anna's story as well

Question: Do you want me to tell you what I think? Because in the introduction you say something like that (Callahan). If yes, I will write what I think and feel in each chapters. So be prepare to see a loooooooong reply from me

Okay Eld, I will do my best.

Yes, I would love to know what you think. In order to cut down on the space that your response will undoubtedly take (I have seen your multi-chapter responses before) would you mind sticking it in a spoiler for me? That way people can read the whole thing if they want to (like me) but they don't have to scroll through it all to get to the story.

[Eldridge]

Yes, milady. That should do it

[RainBeau]

Coming up on The Bachelorette!

Devin: Keep in mind, you do not have to make any final decisions tonight.



The bachelors arrive.
















Some are especially compatible . . .





Others . . . are not.





Some are confident.



While others are more shy.



And the night will only get crazier from here . . .







Look forward to romance . . .



Intrigue . . .



And of course, lots of drama!



One thing is for certain . . .





It's going to be one heck of a party!




Jump to Before the Premiere.

[ladyaya]

It looks like the Bachelorette is off to an explosive start~
...and what is Talus' formalwear? It looks super handsome on him^^

~Anna

[Gogowars329]

The photo of Nathaniel dancing cracked me up. So from this preview I now know that the premiere will be explosive, fantastic and fun. Can't wait!

[azokka361]

I am sooooooo excited, even though I've already seen the next installment (I think) . . . hehehehehe. My cat is looking at me like she's seriously freaked out. It's beautiful!

[RainBeau]

It looks like the Bachelorette is off to an explosive start~
...and what is Talus' formalwear? It looks super handsome on him^^

~Anna

I based this on the actual previews for the show, which always take the most surprising and dramatic parts and make it look like something is going to happen that doesn't happen until much later. So keep that in mind.

Talus' formal wear is Sylvan from the Store, expertly recoloured by Gwendy. He does look quite handsome, doesn't he?

The photo of Nathaniel dancing cracked me up. So from this preview I now know that the premiere will be explosive, fantastic and fun. Can't wait!

I gathered up all the funny stuff that I couldn't fit into the actual update. so, much like real previews, there is a lot that appears here that you won't see in the show! But I don't want to repeat a bunch of things anyway, that's too boring.

I am sooooooo excited, even though I've already seen the next installment (I think) . . . hehehehehe. My cat is looking at me like she's seriously freaked out. It's beautiful!

You have seen parts of it I'm glad your cat is excited about the Premiere as well.

[azokka361]

You have seen parts of it.  I'm glad your cat is excited about the Premiere as well.

I'm glad you didn't show us everything, because it makes it all so much more exciting! And yes, she's a very smart cat. I often think she's plotting my downfall.

[ladyaya]

I'm glad you didn't show us everything, because it makes it all so much more exciting! And yes, she's a very smart cat. I often think she's plotting my downfall.

Rosa's probably being careful to only get input from the sponsors for certain sections involving their bachelor^^

I based this on the actual previews for the show, which always take the most surprising and dramatic parts and make it look like something is going to happen that doesn't happen until much later. So keep that in mind.

Talus' formal wear is Sylvan from the Store, expertly recoloured by Gwendy. He does look quite handsome, doesn't he?

...Really? I didn't recognize it. He does^^
Gwendy~
What's that awesome vine pattern on Talus' formalwear?

~Anna

[RainBeau]

I'm glad you didn't show us everything, because it makes it all so much more exciting! And yes, she's a very smart cat. I often think she's plotting my downfall.

She probably is. Cats are ambitious, morally ambiguous, and highly intelligent.

Rosa's probably being careful to only get input from the sponsors for certain sections involving their bachelor^^

...Really? I didn't recognize it. He does^^
Gwendy~
What's that awesome vine pattern on Talus' formalwear?

~Anna

That's right. Although I am being pretty open so far.

Yes, it looks quite different in the completely different colours.

I'm not Gwendy, but I can tell you it is a swirl pattern from the Fabrics section that she recoloured green and black. And it is highly significant.

[hazelnut]

A highly signiificant pattern?  Very mysterious...

Nice preview.  Thoroughly appetite-whetting  .