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Hello everyone!
After reading soome really funny stories I decided to start my own Immortal Dynasty.
I hope you will enjoy it! Feel free to correct my English, I'm German and school was some time ago.  ;)
So, let's see what our founder wants to tell us...



Hey there, my name is Rhoio. Rhoio Oceanus.
"What an odd name!", you certainly think. Well, that's true but I was born into a somehow odd family.
There are even people saying I'm odd too...But don't talk about that now.
I have another story to tell so let's start:



This is me. I'm a friendly natural cook. Oh, and I'm a very neat person. My watcher was muttering something about being busy with
cleaning would keep me apart from forbidden things...whatever that means. Another striking trait of me is my bravery. I would'nt run away if my stove is going to burn, but that will never happen. At last I'm family orientated, maybe a good trait if you are going to live
together with a large family. My favourites are black, cookies and Egyptian musik.
Here is my wardrobe:




The watcher send me to Riverview, a nice little neighborhood.
She was talking about the need of an artist so I visited the really interesting young man:



Hiy name is Billy Caspian an I think he is nice.
While standing in his kitchen we were talking a lot...


about the new house I'm owning (little did he now that it is actually an empy lot, but what he doesn't know...)



about the flowers that are growing in my garden (the garden wasn't really existing at this moment...)



of course, we were talking about cooking, too.
I asked him to stay the night and he agreed...thank goodness. I really didn't want to sleep in a firestation or something else...strange thinks you get to know in the CAS bin.




Some interesting dreams, don't you think?



The next morning, I took a taxi to the park an invited Billy.
I couldn't ask him to move in at his own house cause he wouldn't bring his important car with his said my Watcher.
Well, it was ok this way, too. But I really don't know why we were hugging in a bush...

That's what was done with the money from his car:


(I'm really not good at building houses >.<)



The first I did was improving my cooking skills.



Mhmmm...yummie!!



While I was in the kitchen Billy had found his place, too: In front of the easel.
I got to know that we needed some more help for my dynasty, so I was visiting some neighbours.
To be true, I was waiting in front of empty houses since everyone seems to be at work.



I was lucky in the evening. That's Constance. She is a little bit clumsy and neurotic but a nice person after all.
And she seems to be really beautiful.



This is Constances neighbour Meadow. Medow is...well, I can't deny that she is insane. But she is having her heart in the right place.



When I was at home I found this. Seems like Billy changed to be more a sculptor than a painter. Well, why not?



Soon, I invited Constance. I told her that if she well move in, she will get a nice makeover.
That seems to convince her.



After an incredible fast run to the mirror, she is looking really beautiful:









She kept company with Billy. Seems like she isn't only interested in the literally arts.
I did another call and invited Meadow.



She was as happy as Constance to move in, maybe even more. I think she was a little bit lonely. She refuses a makeover.
"My look reflects my personality.", she was saying. Probably she is right.


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Re: Oceanus Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #1 on: February 14, 2013, 08:07:26 AM »
I know that it's not completely intentional, but I love the way Rhoio's voice comes across. Although it's not written with a lot of common English sentence structure (for example, "the new house I am owning" would more commonly be, "the new house that I own," or even, "my new house"), it comes across as very otherworldly and beautiful, and I absolutely love it.  ;D
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Re: Oceanus Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #2 on: February 14, 2013, 08:51:24 AM »
Great start! Your founder is beautiful. :)

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Re: Oceanus Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #3 on: February 14, 2013, 11:59:03 AM »
Your founder is just adorable.
Good luck with your dynasty.

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Re: Oceanus Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #4 on: February 14, 2013, 12:44:46 PM »
Good luck on starting! Your founder is really pretty, and I love her clothes. It's cute that she dreams of romance, and Billy dreams of food.

Great minds think alike -- your Constance's everyday outfit is almost identical to what I gave her.

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Re: Oceanus Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #5 on: February 14, 2013, 01:17:53 PM »
I know that it's not completely intentional, but I love the way Rhoio's voice comes across. Although it's not written with a lot of common English sentence structure (for example, "the new house I am owning" would more commonly be, "the new house that I own," or even, "my new house"), it comes across as very otherworldly and beautiful, and I absolutely love it.  ;D

I'm happy to hear you like the way I'm writing.  :D
Somehow I use this story to improve my English if I'm going to write not only uncommon but odd, please tell me!

Your founder is just adorable.
Good luck with your dynasty.
Great start! Your founder is beautiful. :)

Thank you!!
I was having a lot of fun creating her. It was some kind of a very long process:
The basis was a girl born to Mortimer Goth and a sim made by me.
Then I changed her a little bit into a fairy called Shana Lacas:


And in the end when I wanted to start this Dynasty she turned into Rhoio. ^^

Good luck on starting! Your founder is really pretty, and I love her clothes. It's cute that she dreams of romance, and Billy dreams of food.

Great minds think alike -- your Constance's everyday outfit is almost identical to what I gave her.



Well, that's what men are, don't you think? ;)
I was reading your stories and I have to compliment you. They were one of the reasons for my story.
So, maybe I was having you Constance in my mind but I'm really not sure.
Besides, in Germany the proverb says: Two fools, one thought. Or in better English: Fools seldom differ.
It's funny that it is somehow the total opposite.

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« Reply #6 on: February 14, 2013, 02:53:00 PM »
I like "two fools, one thought."! Maybe German speakers are more modest.

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Re: Oceanus Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #7 on: February 14, 2013, 05:50:27 PM »
Rhoio is adorable, and I like the beginning of your dynasty^^
Is her hair custom content or store, and what is it called if it's store?

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Re: Oceanus Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #8 on: February 14, 2013, 06:55:49 PM »
Congratulations Maisie! Rhoio (or is it Rhoip?) looks great!
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Re: Oceanus Immortal Dynasty: Love is in the air (15.02.)
« Reply #9 on: February 15, 2013, 06:37:20 PM »
I like "two fools, one thought."! Maybe German speakers are more modest.



Well, I really don't know. maybe they only want to differ from other languages?
Cause I can't say that Germans are that modest. I mean we were having Goethe and he was the total opposite to being modest. ;)

Rhoio is adorable, and I like the beginning of your dynasty^^
Is her hair custom content or store, and what is it called if it's store?

Thank you. ^^
Her hair is CC. I can give you the site via private message if that's ok with the rules?

Congratulations Maisie! Rhoio (or is it Rhoip?) looks great!


Well, that's what happens if you concentrate more on the foereign language than on such an easy thing like a name.
She is called Rhoio and I changed my misspelling. Thank you for the hint.  :)



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Hello again!
I have to tell you about the best day in my life since...uhm well, since ever!!
I just wanted to go to bed when something...or better someone kept me from doing so.



Yes that's really Billy kissing me! Isn't it great?
My watcher was saying that it has something to do with his inappropriate trait but who cares whyever he did it?
I mean he was kissing me!!! That's the only fact that counts.
It wasn't even Loveday. At least I think it wasn't. The only thing I know is that he was kissing me...
My first kiss ever!
...
Oh, my watcher seems to be a little bit irritated.
I know I'm kind of ecstatic but there wasn't a man that was romantically interested in me...and what a man Billy is...

By the way, it wasn't only me who experienced her first love:



that's Constance visiting our neighbour Jebidiah Wilson...



and here we have Meadow with her co-worker Aiden Jones. He was already married but seemed to be impressed by her flirting...
What would his wife say about that? Well, I can understand Meadow. He's some kind of a hotty, but Billy is even hotter...

While the girls were having butterflies in their tummies Billy and me were spending some quality time together.



He started with my ice sculptures. I wasn't sure about the pose so I tried some variations.



That's cute, isn't it?
Wow, Billy has a hot butt, don't you think?



No, that's not really convincing.



Maybe I should have use the time to prepare for becoming a 5-star chief?
Well, seems to be the price of immortality: Spending your time posing in front of sculpting stations and easels.



That strange woman visited our lot that night. I really don't know why she stood on our porch for hours.
Hopefully that was her last visit. She scared me a little bit.



Meadow was looking for some special seeds until she felt very sick. She said she hasn't eaten anything strange. I hope so.
Maybe the smell of the odd vegetables she planted made her vomiting.



Constance visited Jebidiah a second time. He had to cancel their first meeting after a few minutes due to his job in the hospital.
Now, he seemed to have more time to do some more intimate actions.
That reminds me of Billy kissing me...Awwwww, what a kiss...
Ok ok, I stop talking about that.
Constance was some kind of euphoric when she was back home. Sadly, that didn't last long.



I caught her...with her head half into the toilet.
I started to get worried. Was it something I've cooked? I mean, I'm a natural cook, my skills improved very fast and so on.
But anyone can do a mistake. That was really suspicious. It occupied my mind and I was so afraid that I swore to myself to hang my chef's hat up if Billy would show some kind of illness, too. Maybe fishing could be a better skill for me...
The strangest thing was that my watcher wasn't saying anything about these incidents.
She let me alone with by mountain of headaches. I didn't know why but it came to my mind that she knew something...

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Re: Oceanus Immortal Dynasty: Love is in the air (2/15)
« Reply #10 on: February 15, 2013, 10:45:42 PM »
Yay, oblivious founders, helpers with nooboos on the way and more love in the air!

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Re: Oceanus Immortal Dynasty: Love is in the air (15.02.)
« Reply #11 on: February 16, 2013, 01:24:14 AM »
Wow, Billy has a hot buck, don't you think?
I believe the term you're looking for is, "hot butt."  ;)
She said she hasn't eaten something strange.
"something" should be "anything."

But everyone could misdo.
I think what you're going for here is "But everyone makes mistakes," or, "But anyone can make a mistake."

Good update. I like how Rhoio thinks that it is her food making everyone sick. It's a nice touch.
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Re: Oceanus Immortal Dynasty: Love is in the air (2/15)
« Reply #12 on: February 17, 2013, 07:28:02 AM »
I love the update! Can't wait for the nooboos. :)

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Re: Oceanus Immortal Dynasty: UPDATE (2/17)
« Reply #13 on: February 17, 2013, 10:07:54 AM »
Yay, oblivious founders, helpers with nooboos on the way and more love in the air!

Yeah, private message for CC is in the rules^^

I sent you a pm. Hope you enjoy the hair the way I do.  :)

I believe the term you're looking for is, "hot butt."  ;) "something" should be "anything."
I think what you're going for here is "But everyone makes mistakes," or, "But anyone can make a mistake."

Good update. I like how Rhoio thinks that it is her food making everyone sick. It's a nice touch.

Thank you for all the corrections!! I really don't know why I wrote "buck". Maybe it was a little bit too late. (about 12pm I think...)
I'm going to correct my faults after finishing this update.
Oh yes, Rhoio is a little bit clueless. I thought it would fit her not to know what is going on.  ;)

I love the update! Can't wait for the nooboos. :)

I'm happy to hear it pleased you. The nooboos are really cute but see yourself. ^^


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At first I have to apologize for the kind of way I was writing the last time.
The hormones must have overpowered me.
Now, let's talk about the things that happened.
I have to start with incredible good news.



Meadow noticed that she was pregnant! You can't imagine how happy I was to hear that she didn't feel sick due to my cooking.



The next morning Constance came with another announcement. She was expecting a baby, too.
Wow, two nooboos. I thought I would die with excitement.
Besides, my carreer as a 5-star chief was safe.





Billy aged up to adult in the kitchen. We were too busy thinking about the nooboos to pay too much attention.
Sorry, darling.



Then the long-yarned-for moment came. Meadow screamed in pain for some hours.
Is every birth going to be so painful? It's a little bit frightening since that is waiting for me, too.



When we saw that little cutie in the swing everything was forgotten.
Please welcome Hekabe Carpenter-Rhodes. She is disciplined and loves the outdoors.





Since Meadow was most of the time outside looking for seeds or gardening I  wasn't having the chance to admire her baby belly.
But Constance let me touch it. How incredible to feel the nooboos movements.
Only one moment later Constance was in labor. Billy, as the only man in the house, shipped her into hospital.



The little boy next to Hekabe is called Telamon Shelley, a genius that loves the outdoors.
While looking at the little ones I was strongly wishing for one of my own.
Suddenly, someone grabbed my hands.



It was Billy.
"I would love to see a nooboo with your beautiful lips, what do you think?", he whispered.
There was nothing I wanted more.



One thing led to another.


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Re: Oceanus Immortal Dynasty: UPDATE (2/17)
« Reply #14 on: February 17, 2013, 02:14:32 PM »
I hope that the little one inherits her mother's eyes and hair color! But I'm sure the nooboo will turn out to be good-looking no matter what.
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