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Scientia Immortal Dynasty (new chapter 04/10/14)
« on: January 30, 2013, 05:55:39 AM »
Hi everyone!
Welcome to the Scientia immortal dynasty, a dynasty of scientists and seekers of knowledge! I chose the surname Scientia, which is latin for knowledge, and the origin of the word science.
My founder is Darwin,and he's going to supermax gardening. The dynasty is in Riverview, so I have moved in Jon Lessen to do sculptures (and provide a car to fund the house). Jon has adopted a daughter, Jo, who will paint, fish and cook. Pictures to follow!
This is the first story I'm ever posting on this forum, so suggestions and comments are all welcomed!

Immortal stats:

Darwin Scientia: Made Immortal in chapter 11

Franklin Scientia: Made Immortal in chapter 24

Pasteur Scientia: Made Immortal in chapter 31

Newton Scientia: Made Immortal in chapter 38

Einstein Scientia: Made Immortal in chapter 44

Faraday Scientia:
Lifetime Wish: Golden tongue, Golden fingers     Done!
Career: Politics
Supermax: charisma                               Done!
Building: doo peas corporate towers     Done!
Property: old town cemetery                 Done!
LTRs: Attractive, observant, legendary host         Done!
6 best friends:
6 Blackops: Young politician's club induction, Hi I'm Chad, Sorting the section, local musician showdown, bestest friends, lobster crisis   Done!
Paintings:To, C, Te, YA, A,
Sculptures:To, C, Te, YA, A,
Photos:To, C, Te, YA, A,
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Re: Scientia Immortal Dynasty (introduction)
« Reply #2 on: February 01, 2013, 09:03:06 AM »
Chapter 1: The Origin of the Species



Darwin: Good day to you ladies and gentlemen of the esteemed forum! My name is Darwin, Charles Darwin, and I am an esteemed geologist and biologist from the age of queen Victoria. I am greatly honored to be-
Betabee: Enough with the introducing yourself already! we need to get on with telling the forum about how day 1 went.
Darwin:Oh great. A watcher.
Betabee: What, you thought a victorian gentleman knows enough about immortal dynasties to run one all by himself? You've got a lot to learn, my friend.
Darwin: I do agree with you on that last point.



Betabee: Oh, and this is your beagle. He's called Watson.
Darwin: Why?
Betabee: Why what?
Darwin: Why do I need a dog? Why is it a beagle? And why the name Watson?
Betabee: Hunting, historical reference, and a clue to generation 2. Now set to!



Betabee: Here's the customary empty field shot that seems to occur at the start of all immortal dynasties.



Darwin: Why am I talking to a musician of all people?
Betabee:We need a sponsor for our scientific research. Plus, you need a painter and/or sculptor. And he's just across the road.
Darwin: What about Billy Caspian?
Betabee: Couldn't be bothered to send you right across town. Besides, good looks aren't everything!



Betabee: After moving in Jon Lessen, selling his car and starting to build the house, I honestly didn't intend to make the floorplan look like anything in particular. But looking from above, who does this remind you of?



So, here comes the house tour! I've only furnished the ground floor so far, the upper floors can wait for later. This is the art studio and bedroom.



The kitchen diner. you may notice a colour theme going on. Since darwin's field of study is biology (the life sciences) the house is going to be green until I get bored of it.



The indoor nursery, where Darwin can tend his large plant collection without them going dormant on him. The trees will be put in an orchard out the back, but for now are by the front door.



The entrance hall and study area. After taking this I also put here some things for Watson to use.



To conclude the first house tour, here's a picture of the outside of the house. I will landscape it properly at a later date.
So, back to the story!



Jon: Yes, it has always been my dearest wish to adopt a little girl to paint portraits of a friend I just moved in with cherish and raise as my very own.



Betabee: Hello Jo, welcome to the Science House!
Jo: What the. . ?
Betabee: Yes, I'm your watcher. Now get to a dresser so we can change those clothes to something better, dear.
Jo: They didn't say anything about watchers when they told me I was being adopted by Jon Lessen!



Betabee: Lovely purple eyes, but that greeny-brown hair has to go, my dear. Any hairdye colour preference?
Jo: Um. . . Just another shade of brown will do.



Jo: You dressed me as a pixie? Really?
Betabee: Make the most of childhood, dear. Now go get some sleep. You've got painting to do tomorrow!



Watson: What?
Betabee: You can talk?
Watson:Yes, and you're disturbing my nap. Go away, watcher!
Betabee: I thought you were friendly!
Watson: Not at naptime.



And so day 1 ends with Jon beginning the lonely and caffine-powered task of producing 25 ice sculptures before Darwin's adult birthday.
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Re: Scientia Immortal Dynasty (introduction)
« Reply #3 on: February 01, 2013, 09:33:38 AM »
If I wasn't in public right now, I would have audibly laughed at Darwin having a pet beagle.

Great start. I like the humor and the house looks cool too.

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Re: Scientia Immortal Dynasty (introduction)
« Reply #4 on: February 01, 2013, 09:43:43 AM »
Great start! The house looks fantastic--I do so envy those who are capable of building in a non-box like shape!
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Re: Scientia Immortal Dynasty (introduction)
« Reply #5 on: February 01, 2013, 01:21:01 PM »
Good start! Riverview seems like just the place for Darwin, and I love the title of your first chapter. Is the beagle named Watson after Sherlock Holmes's friend or the Watson of DNA fame?
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Re: Scientia Immortal Dynasty (introduction)
« Reply #6 on: February 01, 2013, 05:55:28 PM »
I am seriously laughing. A beagle! That was perfect!

You've got me hooked already. I can't wait to read more!



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Re: Scientia Immortal Dynasty (introduction)
« Reply #7 on: February 01, 2013, 06:00:04 PM »
Out of curiosity, will Generation 2 either A) Be a doctor, B) Be named Sherlock, C) All of the above, or D) I'm way off?
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Re: Scientia Immortal Dynasty (introduction)
« Reply #8 on: February 02, 2013, 07:23:46 AM »
Great start! I like your sense of humor lol. Can't wait for more! ;D

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Re: Scientia Immortal Dynasty (introduction)
« Reply #9 on: February 02, 2013, 09:33:02 AM »
Bookmarked, Jo's purple eyes are beautiful. :)

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Re: Scientia Immortal Dynasty (introduction)
« Reply #10 on: February 02, 2013, 03:03:41 PM »
I also find it hilariously appropriate that Darwin has a beagle. I'm confused though, is his name Charles Darwin or Darwin Scientia? And if gardening is to be the supermax, why not Mendel? That is all, I quite like this beginning!
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Re: Scientia Immortal Dynasty (introduction)
« Reply #11 on: February 02, 2013, 03:15:17 PM »
Good start! Riverview seems like just the place for Darwin, and I love the title of your first chapter. Is the beagle named Watson after Sherlock Holmes's friend or the Watson of DNA fame?
Out of curiosity, will Generation 2 either A) Be a doctor, B) Be named Sherlock, C) All of the above, or D) I'm way off?

E) Maybe. wait and see!  ;)

I also find it hilariously appropriate that Darwin has a beagle. I'm confused though, is his name Charles Darwin or Darwin Scientia? And if gardening is to be the supermax, why not Mendel? That is all, I quite like this beginning!

He's Darwin Scientia, but you can call him Charles for short. Or Darwin. I didn't think of Mendel!

Thankyou to everyone who has commented! I hope to have another update for you tomorrow.
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Re: Scientia Immortal Dynasty Chapter 2:The Descent of Man
« Reply #12 on: February 03, 2013, 04:53:28 PM »
Chapter 2: The Descent of Man



Betabee: The week started so well. Darwin became a self-employed gardener,



He spent some time at the elixir shop,



He even fully upgraded his property, Lost Willow Park, by placing this fetching statue.
Darwin: Only because you couldn't be bothered to do any actual remodelling of the park.



Darwin: Things went downhill from there. We got zombies,



aliens,



and to top it all off, the consignment store clerk looked a bit too pale.



He even decided to come visit! Aaaaaahhhh!



Betabee: Dear forum members, I hope ou understand that Darwin is a victorian gentleman of delicate and frail nerves. He is naturally rational, and so the apperance of various occulots in town has left him a bit. . . unhinged.



Darwin: Hey! It wasn't just me! It got Jon feeling a bit funny as well!
Betabee: I think he was frustrated at the broken toilet, actually.



Betabee: We managed to restore Darwin to rights through a bit of pet therapy,



including buying him a new puppy. This is Helix.



Darwin: Hi Jo. Happy two-days-before-your-birthday!
Jo: Thanks for the camera Darwin! Though don't you mean 'happy unbirthday'?
Darwin: I was a bit old for alice in wonderland when it was published. I guess it's shorter though.



Jo: How's it going?
Jon: I've done about 10 so far. Only 15 more to go!
Jo: Keep at it. Good work. I'm going to go get some cake.



Jo: I wish for no more pixie costume!




Jo: Watcher! Dresser, quickly!



Betabee: Not bad after a change of clothes and hairstyle. Now back to the easel!
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Re: Scientia Immortal Dynasty (introduction)
« Reply #13 on: February 04, 2013, 11:09:55 PM »
Haha.  I enjoy your sense of humour. It is indeed a very fetching statue.
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Re: Scientia Immortal Dynasty (introduction)
« Reply #14 on: February 05, 2013, 12:37:59 AM »
Nice start Betabee ;)

The house looks great! Jo also looks cool and the dogs are cute
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