Elysi Immortal Dynasty - Orange Skies

[RainBeau]

This is one of those updates I have to reply to in a solid block of rambling text. Prepare yourself.

Eddie looks great! I love his colour scheme. Awww, adorable puppy! I want to snuggle and huggle her! I don't think IB is being very nice to Bubba. If she's going to make him wait she shouldn't make out with him in hot tubs and in her lingerie and sleep in the same bed with him. I guess she's just following Rosetta's advice to keep him interested. That may be a good idea then. I like the hat and leather, too! He looks sooo good in it. Kara is still gorgeous as an elder. You did a good job with her. Even her clothes still look her style, which is impressive for an Elder. Juana is gorgeous, even more so with that fabulous makeover. I tremble for the memory issues the makeovers may be causing. but I couldn't resist making over relatives either. Qiana and Cynthia actually look like twins, which seems unusual for The Sims. Aww, what does Kara's door look like? I want to see it! Can't wait for her Ambrosia chapter--it's should be awesome and angsty!

[ve1ocity]

Really nice update! The hot-tub chaperoning was simply hillarious!

Really nice makeovers too! Who would have thought Emma was capable of such lovely kids! I really like Cynthia!!

[azokka361]

Nice update!  I think you managed quite successfully to avoid letting "elderhood" cheat her of her youthful personality.

Trust me, I did nothing! Kara simply refused to become old.

A very nice update. Those fairy makeovers are simply wonderful. Nick has made some lovely daughters!

Well, Juana came from Miles and Bebe, but the rest were all Nick.

Nice, fun, and light hearted update :-)

Yay sim puppy!!

I figured I had made you suffer enough with sad updates. A puppy is just the thing!

This is one of those updates I have to reply to in a solid block of rambling text. Prepare yourself.

Eddie looks great! I love his colour scheme. Awww, adorable puppy! I want to snuggle and huggle her! I don't think IB is being very nice to Bubba. If she's going to make him wait she shouldn't make out with him in hot tubs and in her lingerie and sleep in the same bed with him. I guess she's just following Rosetta's advice to keep him interested. That may be a good idea then. I like the hat and leather, too! He looks sooo good in it. Kara is still gorgeous as an elder. You did a good job with her. Even her clothes still look her style, which is impressive for an Elder. Juana is gorgeous, even more so with that fabulous makeover. I tremble for the memory issues the makeovers may be causing. but I couldn't resist making over relatives either. Qiana and Cynthia actually look like twins, which seems unusual for The Sims. Aww, what does Kara's door look like? I want to see it! Can't wait for her Ambrosia chapter--it's should be awesome and angsty!

It was quite fun, indeed, and I just couldn't resist. Cleo is a cute widdle puppy, and my own Chiweenie is named Chloe, so it all works out! I think her behavior is a combination of keeping him interested, and her confusion because she always thought Woohoo was a waste of time, but now that she wants to "engage in such activity" with Bubba she's basically going against her own principles, and is postponing the conflict by waiting. And she thinks he's funny when she makes him wait. I'm just happy to have the chance to finally use my Seeing Stars store set! Her wardrobe was surprisingly fun, especially for an elder. I saved Juana to my bin, just because she's so gorgeous! Her door is the one that came with Lunar Lakes, colored neon green and black, and ambrosia coming right up!

Really nice update! The hot-tub chaperoning was simply hillarious!

Really nice makeovers too! Who would have thought Emma was capable of such lovely kids! I really like Cynthia!!

Emma's always produced gorgeous kids for me. She's quite good at passing on genes.

[azokka361]

Chapter 71 - An Interesting Life

  I descended the stairs into the hall at an alarmingly slow rate--for me, anyway. I suppose I must become used to walking a little more slowly than I prefer. For the next four generations, at any rate.



  The room beneath the stairs was dark. lit only with two torch-bearing statues and rimmed with mirrors. A mirror in the center of room held the face of the Watcher--silvery pale. It regarded me with a slight smile, as if pleased to see me but unable to express affection.

  "Kara Elysi, the Fourth Generation. It has been interesting."



  "What's that supposed to mean? Are you the one who urged me to get together with Miles, and ended up ruining my life for weeks and made me marry someone who I didn't love?"

  "It was for a good cause. Who would have guessed that you would fall in love with a female alien hybrid? And I was also the one who made sure you ended up with your true love, and helped you have a kid without breaking dynasty rules. You're welcome."



  "I should probably tell you that I moved Miles out before he died."

  "WHAT? You did--and--why--but--I didn't--"

  "Relax, I'm kidding. You can wipe that look off your face."

  "Oh. Haha, that was not cool."



  "Out of curiosity--who are you, exactly? Why are you Watching us, and not some other family? What do you have access to?"

  "Funny. I expected to answer such questions in another generation, when it's your daughter's turn. Suffice to say that I will share more information when you have eaten the Ambrosia, and I can communicate directly with your mind."

  "Say what now?"

  "I'll have access to your brain soon enough. Don't worry about it, I already control all of your actions. Now, hurry up, unless you want to miss the wedding!"



  I walked through the gallery, paying special attention to Grandma Kaylynn's exhibit. Dad and my immortal grandparents swear I look just like her, but the portrait is too blurred to make anything out.



  I also look at Rosa's exhibit. It's strange--the wall is sparse, but she has been with us since toddlerhood and we have been best friends since that time. Sometimes I wonder what might have been, if I had fallen out of love with Miles but never met Bianca . . .



  Those thoughts vanish the moment I look at Bianca's area. The photographs, especially the ones Iris Bianca took of us in Egypt, show just how happy she always makes me. When I'm with her, I feel the weight of the dynasty lift from my shoulders, and I'm just another person with their beautiful wife. Every time I look at her, I'm struck just as I was that first time at the Student Union.



  Despite myself, I must pause at Miles's wall. He was a good man, and he gave me the most beautiful, smart, gifted daughter in the universe. He deserved better than to read the same three medical books over and over until the end of his life. I'm happy that he found some measure of joy with Bebe and the twins.



  At long last, I replicate a plate of Ambrosia, sit, and look at it apprehensively. A colorful aura surrounds it, scented heavily with fragrances I could not place.



  It begins with just a slight tingle. Then I feel a rush of sensation overwhelm me. The bitter cold as Dad rolls my stroller over the snow, my giggling as he makes vroom vroom noises and throws me up in the air, the quiet of long afternoons spent playing in the library, spray-paint rubbing off onto my fingers as I decorate walls and sidewalks, the wonderful ecstasy of a masterpiece of color, the rush of wind against my face on my motorcycle, the world freezing as I looked at Bianca, the joy I felt at our first kiss, the color surrounding me as Iris Bianca fell into my arms . . .



  . . . almost like the color that surrounds me now, as the senses come more and more quickly. The happiness of my little girl as she looked up at me, Bianca's hand holding mine as she agreed to be my girlfriend, the warmth of a ring against my finger as I proposed, the warmth of her skin as it slid onto her hand, petals fluttering against us in the snow . . . coolness of the waterslide against the scorching heat of the Egyptian sun, and the music rolling from my fingertips in the colorful prism that now surrounds me.



  My name is Kara Elysi, and I am the Fourth Immortal.



  Oh, yeah. Now that's what I'm talking about!



  My toddler years were happy ones indeed. I had the most loving family in the world, and they all competed over who got to spend time with me, the usual victor being Dad. As a child, I was so withdrawn and quiet. I spent my time at the library, playing quietly with the teddy bears and dollhouse, and dreaming of a future where I was talented and beautiful.



  My teen years have been erased from time, but I need no record to recall them. Anger and rebellion was my life, with the need to act out just so I could prove I wasn't just another teenager in a line of similar girls. I needed to be unique. And as a young adult, I was so confused--there was Miles, and Bianca, and Iris Bianca. At least it was all sorted out before things became permanent.



  I think . . . I was happiest as an adult. Miles died and Bianca married me, and Iris Bianca became more communicative and began to truly like her stepmother and me. And now I am an elder, with my wife at my side and my daughter's wedding about to happen above.



  It has certainly been interesting.

[Shewolf13]

Another fantastic Ambrosia chapter!  I really don't know how you do it!  But each one is such a treat to read!  Welcome to the Immortal Life Kara!  Also... her messing with the watcher was great *snickers*  Very cute.

[azokka361]

The Fourth Immortal









































Immortal 4 - Kara Elysi
Traits - Artistic, Loves the Outdoors, Photographer's Eye, Avant Garde, Rebellious
Likes - Green
Spouse - Miles Forthright
Unique LTW - Visionary
3 Unique LTRs - Extra Creative, Suave Seller, ExtroardinAIRE-Inator
Career - Painting
Unique Supermaxed Skill - Painting
Other Skills - Street Art, Photography
6 Black Ops - Paint a Still Life, Paparazzi!, Commissioned Street Art, Deliver a Painting to France, The Sphinx, The Business of Decor
6 Unique Best Friends - Bianca Elysi, Bebe Hart, Donte Clemons, Elliot Batista, Sherman Lockwood, Brad Bond, Glen Waterman, Chris Lockwood, Arlo Bunch
Owned Building - K's Criminal Operations
Owned Property - Langraab Sell 'n' Swap
Toddler Museum Pieces - Portrait, Photo, Sculpture
Child Museum Pieces - Portrait, Photo, Sculpture
Teen Museum Pieces - Portrait, Photo, Sculpture
YA Museum Pieces - Portrait, Photo, Sculpture
Adult Museum Pieces - Portrait, Photo, Sculpture
Elder Museum Pieces - Portrait, Photo, Sculpture

[RainBeau]

Wow, the things you remember in the ambrosia post. I had completely forgot, for example, that Kara is older than Rosa. Except duh, Rosa is still not an Elder. So I don't know why I forgot that. Anyway, beautiful

[RaiaDraconis]

Halfway complete! Congratulations on number four!

My bad...I had almost forgotten about Miles's contribution to the gene pool.

[doxxielover]

Great update ! Gosh your ambrosia posts are so good !

[Rhoxi]

I love it! Kara might just be my favorite of the immortals so far--although it's so hard to choose! Her elder wardrobe looks fantastic; she aged quite gracefully. It's also nice to get so see makeovers of the kids! Townies really do have the most unflattering clothes most of the time. I can't wait to see the wedding! Kara and the "watcher mirror" were hilarious. She really has had an interesting life!

[azokka361]

Another fantastic Ambrosia chapter!  I really don't know how you do it!  But each one is such a treat to read!  Welcome to the Immortal Life Kara!  Also... her messing with the watcher was great *snickers*  Very cute.

I try, I try. I thought it would be difficult to have unique Ambrosia chapters, with the pretty much identical layout, but the Immortals have such strong personalities they seem to write it themselves!

Wow, the things you remember in the ambrosia post. I had completely forgot, for example, that Kara is older than Rosa. Except duh, Rosa is still not an Elder. So I don't know why I forgot that. Anyway, beautiful

It's so weird to look back at an elder's baby photos . . . kind of like looking at your grandma's wedding pictures.

Halfway complete! Congratulations on number four!

My bad...I had almost forgotten about Miles's contribution to the gene pool.

Yes! It's the furthest I've ever gotten, and I am completely confident of finishing!

I'm still not entirely convinced that Kara didn't just produce IB on her own. Immaculate conception and all.

Great update ! Gosh your ambrosia posts are so good !

Thanks! To me, the ambrosia eating is kinda the summing up of their entire life, so I try to make it good.

I love it! Kara might just be my favorite of the immortals so far--although it's so hard to choose! Her elder wardrobe looks fantastic; she aged quite gracefully. It's also nice to get so see makeovers of the kids! Townies really do have the most unflattering clothes most of the time. I can't wait to see the wedding! Kara and the "watcher mirror" were hilarious. She really has had an interesting life!

I've decided to just not choose a favorite, since I love them all, but Kara is definitely in the Top 4. I think we all knew that Kara would refuse to go dowdy even as an elder--she's just too rebellious.

[azokka361]

Chapter 72 - Lavender Petals

  I woke up bright and early on my wedding day (three, maybe four?), took a long bubble bath, then hid in the bathroom in a panic while Bubba knocked on the door with increasing desperation, requiring use of the toilet. He finally gave up and went into the main house, while I calmed my nerves with a little chess.



  The party began without me, as I used the excuse of Mother's disappearance to postpone the actual ceremony. But at last, with Mother returned from the basement looking vibrant and refreshed, there was nothing to do but find Bubba and stand under the arch. And, looking into Bubba's deep blue eyes, I was no longer nervous. Just . . . so incredibly excited to begin my life with this amazing man.



  Mother swore that she wouldn't cry, but the wounds of her bawling filled the cool spring air before the guests had even taken their seats. I'm never going to allow her to forget it, either.



  We stood beneath the ancient wooden arch, which had been used for the weddings of four previous generations, and would serve for myself, and my child. Mother had painstakingly painted the wood lilac and wound vines around it, while Grandmother planted purple flowers in the ground nearby.



  It was a good thing I had prepared vows previously, for all thought flew from my brain at the wedding itself, but I scarcely heard the words I was speaking. The only image present was one of Bubba's eyes gazing into mine, deep as the ocean, and just as understanding.



  I'm afraid Bubba was far more comprehensive in his speech, with the natural charisma that he utilizes for his career. He spoke of the moment he emerged from his lamp and saw me, and how his numerous attempts to woo me led to our first kiss, and his eventual freedom. Bubba could have left and gone anywhere in the world, but instead he chose to bind himself to me, for the rest of eternity. And yes, he truly means eternity. We know what the others don't, and we already have plans.



  With the marriage official, we drew into an embrace and kissed as my family and the guests threw rice into the air, and it rained down on us, intermingling with lavender rose petals.





  I plead need to use the bathroom, hurried away to the Love Shack, and waited--rather smugly--as one of my grandparents cornered Bubba and directed him to the little hut across the pond.



  The look on his face was simply priceless, but I had little time for satisfaction. Instead of gloating for the preferred amount of time (I rarely have the opportunity to surprise my constantly-prepared husband) I tugged him onto the bed next to me.



  The experience was . . . enlightening. I was nervous, of course, and may have preferred to wait until the second or third week of marriage, but then I realized that every member of my main line of ancestors had Woohooed often, and far more than necessary, without being required to. So, why not give it a try?

  For the record, I am never telling my Mother, Grandmother Bree, Grandfather Nick, or Grandmother Serena that they were right. At least they're not allowed into my area of the house, so I won't need to cover up our "activities."



  We finally emerged from the blankets, both in our underwear. Bubba--looking quite handsome even without the hat and jacket, if you were wondering--was the first to speak. "You have no idea how long I've been carrying that wish around." 

  "Same. Wait--just popped another one. It seems a shame to not fulfill it, since we're already on a bed and it would be so convenient . . ."



  In any case, my family allowed us to escape into our little house for the next few days. Our time was spent in peaceful, intellectual conversation over pancakes and lobster thermidor, while listening to Grandmother Serena's favorite band on the stereo.



  Peaceful, intellectual conversation, only. After all, we'd hardly waste the two days of vacation from work on kissing and Woohoo! Maybe a little touching, here and there. Gazing into the eyes. Legs grazing under the table. Et cetera.



  And, naturally, as a member of the Sims For A Green Sunset Valley, I conserved water with Bubba's assistance and the cooperation of the high-tech shower in our private lavatory.



  Of course, I insisted we visit the bedroom in order to better appreciate the lovely wedding photographs Aunt Rosalia took.



  I doubt Mother noticed the increasing amount of noise emanating from our area. She and Bianca never came up for air during my honeymoon, as they didn't believe I would do the occasion justice.



  Cleo, now a fully adult dog, finally gave up on making the silly sims have common sense and instead dreamt of the mysteries that lay beneath the surface of the house.



  During the brief interlude in life, I also redesigned the living and dining areas. We could have easily afforded a more expensive television, but Grandmother Serena didn't want her supermax jeopardized.

[Shewolf13]

*cackles* I love that.  Now IB knows why everyone is always all over their significant other kekekekeke.

[Eldridge]

I just have my mood back to do the long-comments thing. You don't have to replied it. Just read it, azokka.
This is what I think and feel about your story. It's just my own way to appreciate someone story

(If I have that mood)

I put on the spoiler because I have my own reason. This is will become nightmare to others

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Prologue

I do love how you decorate the home. The home look so nice.
Where did you get the idea. Do you have any preference or something ?
And it's always nice to see Agnes in another story.
Agnes makeover is quite nice.

Chapter

1. Hmm, I never considered to adopt some children somehow. It's quite nice that turned out the boy has an unusual purple eyes.
That was really nice to have §600.000 in no time! Having a Midas Touch is really something isn't it? I never tried it until now.
And Zelda do looks lovely with her makeover and natural hair. Kalylyn is so meh... in her sleep wear outfit

Serena name herself remind me a lot of Sailor Moon :3

2. The writing is nice, I'm often find myself smiling over the words that written there. I'm loving it.
I found that having Thorntorn as dynasty spouse is really something else.

3. Hahaha, I love how you put the word 'sayonara' Morganna
It's seem the 'sleepwear' in Bachelor/Bachelorette Party is really random isn't it?
I found out in Rosa's story it's red, yours is blue, mine is red.
Just looking Serena dancing there is already hilarious!

4. Oooh, I do love to see what's written in the newspaper. That was funny and entertaining.
Several scene Serena with Thorton too is really something, I am laughing hard!
Umm... Zelda and Agnes. That was unexpected. *shocked*

5. That was really something for a birthing scene! As usual the writing style was hilarious!

6. Looking at Chris as a Fairy is kinda  weird, especially looking at that wing.
It's seem that Serena love woohoo a lot. My Sims rarely do that except if they have specific wish
Woohoo must be fun, huh?

7. That was really something! I was shocked, why Serena cheat over Ian Bowler? Well...
If she want cheating, there's plenty of charming guy out there
As I am a Hopeless Romantic one, I don't tolerate someone cheating. But, Serena is an exception
Nicholas is adorable, I do love Thornton hair color as well Nick Alto

8. Oh, dear... Magical holiday in a nursery. Geez, go away from Nicholas you two!
It's seem Serena is fond of Unicorn or... Ninja. Glad to know that :3
Morty in my other game usually end up with that horrifying style. Ugh...
Bella as a cashier is too funny.

Do kissing someone in Kissing Both can be count as cheating? If not, then I will do the same
Unexpected for Alex, cheating over Bella to get River. Well, I'm glad though.
Because Morty and Bella is supposed to be one.

9. Haha, magical goose fable. I know that! Nick make an adorable child after all.
And what make me love him more is his unique hair color!

10. Oooh, I intend to give my heir Salvador name when the next generatiom born as a boy!
Hmm... Alex. I'm quite disappointed with you. But, oh well at least that you're happy.
I totally lost about the last screenie. I can't say much. It's from your another story or something?

11. I can't quite follow this one, as I am didn't follow the last story. But, it was written very good.
Some words here are funny, that make me smile. It's nice that you're still considerate the last one so they don't get forgotten.
The idea is quite clever indeed as an interlude. Maybe they are connected somehow.

12. I wonder why some people become a "balloon" in your story. First is Chris, second is Bella. It's some kind of bug?
I ever face the same problem but I'm glad that finally over. Bella in my game ever become "Balloon" like that too.
I'm glad that finally over after I bought Body Sculptor.

I am laugh at this line.

And besides, having a younger wife boosts his self-esteem!

It's strange, I wonder what's wrong with my game. Let aside The Eternal, Faithful things didn't trigger.

Yeah, picture limit is such a... Well, what I can say. Rules are rules

13. Nick. Well, just hearing that I just want to watch Nickelodeon channel again
And Nick, remind me a lot of Altos

14. Hmm... They really love their romantic moment together, aren't they?
I... I... just can't believe this. What Alex do was not my way... I am too hopeless if I ever do something like that.
And yeah! The zombie is look really cool with those tatoos.

15. That was a quite amazing room that you got there!
The museum too is kinda nice. I love to see others belonging.
And Serena as an Elder didn't look so bad. She's still beautiful.

16. Congrats for the first Immortal! The rememberance of Serena is quite funny.

17. That was a nice room re-decoration. I love how you are appreciate their color.
Arlo Bunch always has the same face in every game and stories that I have been read :/
Uh-oh, to see Holly be a victim of Alex o_O

18. Goodbye to three Sim at once. Agnes, Zelda and Thornton.
Lolita is nice. I love her style, glad that Serena bring her back to life!

19. I really love looking at the romantic photo!
That nose mentioning of Arlo is too funny. I laugh at that!
Oooh, Arlo... Why are you have such a nose that everyone envy for
You deserve to be happy too, you know. Don't worry Arlo is happy with Chris right now

20. Ahh, so can't marriage curse can be broken by a travelling?
No wonder that when I ressurected Victor Goth, my Sim cannot be engaged or married!
That was a horrible experience!

That was a nice Vacation home that you picked up! Nice to see Serena and Thornton again.

21. Hmm, I don't have anything in mind. But, it seems that axe is quite something else isn't it.
Congratulations both Nick and Lolita thought.

22. Hmm, I never played around with flowers thing!
That was a really nice screenshot editing.
And it's lovely when pick the same place like the parent.
That was so romantic and super sweet!

23. It's really funny screenie though! Even that she already giving birth to bree but her stomach is still large as she ever pregnant!
Welcome to Bree the third generation!

24. The only thing that I had in mind is. Who is Brandon father? Michael Bachelor?
It's nice though to see Bree grown up nicely. It's really adorable.
Blue and Red... Hmm.

25. That was quite a glitch seeing Nick like that with his chainsaw.
*shakes head( Oooh, Alexander. Can't you just stop that... Ahh...
My Hopeless Romantic side tear apart to see his action -_-
Ooh... So, Brandon is adopted... I thought that he end up with Michael... :/

26. There is a nice photo there. I love to see it.
French Paparazzi and Maid are quite something else.

27. It's seem everyone in Sunset Valley has been become someone victim
Well, nothing to say but making out, kissing thing has become this family tradition.
Still Nick and Lolita can't beat Serena and Thornton when it comes to that kinda things

28. Whoa---whoa---whoa... This family is too much! XD
They didn't hesitate to express their love anywhere!
Poor Bree! Look at you Nick, before you ever said to your parent to get a room.
Explain yourself!

Hahaha! I laughed hard when I see her hairstyle when birthday come.
The game is suck, we are much better at styling thing
It's nice to see Bree has Lolita's hair style.
Hmm, it's seem Nick nightmare become true after all, muahahaha.

29. It's really nice to see new stuff from University life
Good for Alex then that he has a new stuff to taken care of.
Love is one thing that can define Elsy. If there no kissing,
woohoo and another romantic moment on the screen that was not Elsy lol.

30. Well, death is inevitable. Bye, Kalylynn may you rest in peace not in pieces
And as usual love moments everywhere, arrrghh... my eyes!
Aside of that Brandon is more better in his later makeover. He is more cuter like Bree said.

31. What happened to Lolita anyway? She's not even an Elder yet.
Ohh... She is not death. Bree is quite unique, I think that I can give a litle love for her.
But, still don't match Nathaniel though!

32. Huh? How could Nick sculpting naked? It's glitch or somethinhg o_O ?
How the love charm work actually? I never used them. It's can make something wonderful happen?
Like upgrade in relationship status? love and marriage? Or just to find romantic interest thing O_O?
Well, Bree is lovely much more as a young adult. Her makeover is perfect but still can't beat Nathaniel


33. Supernaturals are everywhere. Even Chris. Even Cornelia. This is a nightmare o_O
I turned them off, because I don't want to see something unexpected like Chris with that wing.
After all, the story progression or the game love to make everyone weird when they age up.
Either it's a hairstyle or fashion. But, it's nice to see your favorite one there.
Happy marriage for Brandon and Bree though

34. Oooh, it's nice to see someone that I knew in University.
So many naked Sims... in your party... can't resist... looking a them...
either it is male or female sims... but being naked... is really something...
azokka... what are you doing to my precious little brain

Well, I should consider myself to join being a nudist, lol.

Great update anyway. Loving every bit of it.

35. The sketch is funny! How Brandon got those idea, for Bree with some muscle and bald! lol
Oh, my eyeeeeeessss... Naked Sims everywhere...
It's nice to see other Sim that I knew here.
Well, Woohoo is nice anyway to quick refill the fun. But, to show it freely... is not for me.
That's a private moment! Well, kissing and makeout I can still tolerate lol

36. Oooh! Ooooh! Ooooh! Llama!!
Looking at sketches make me smile. I do love to see the other possibilities that you can have.
I'm glad the naked scene is fewer in this chapter. Phew.
The new room is look so nice! I love red color ?

37. Nice to see some sketches here that was different. (Ignore that naked Sim, ignore that naked Sim)
Well, Alex kid seems resemble him a lot. Welcome to next generation.
Man, it's seem you really love to make reader curious aren't you?
Holding the baby name and keep readers guessing is kinda unforgiveable

38. Congratulation Nick for becoming the next Immortal.
I love the photos in your museum. So many memories that several generation can remember!
So, her name is Kara huh? Okay then, at least that you are telling us here.

Congratulation again. The photo editing is nice! Love to see 'em.
But, I never noticed that Nick has some body hair
I do love body hair for my male Sims, that make them so masculine
Oooh, to see Nick become the second Immortal is kinda something else.

39. You seems love to do makeover for each generation, azokka. I don't think that will be possible in my current game.
Curse for the computer issue . Haha, I can see that you're pretty love to tell unicorn thing! But, where is the ninja part?
Don't tell me that you already forget them since 31 chapters ago

Kara is adorable, love the black hair and black eyes. The games are totally mystery somehow.
Oh, well so sad that Kara live in such corrupted family
Even the poor one must hear something like that from Serena!
Ah, love is everywhere. That was not Elsy if they didn't do romantic moments after all.

Hey! Nathaniel is mentioned here? Where I can find him, azokka?

40. Kara is adorable. Well, toddler is adorable. Nooboo is boring
Oooh, I never knew that you can do something about the hair. Well, just looking at your story make me want to do something else.
It's really Serena child? That Rosa? I thought that Elder can't be pregnant. Huh. I am confused.
And romantic moments again. I am so glad that no naked scene for several chapters here. I am saved somehow

41. Naked Nick again in action, haha! Why this is keep happening to him?
The makeover is quite nice. Love Kara makeover.
Okay. So she is a plant Sim after all! I am confused her for being an Alien or a Plant Sim. Alright...
Rosa too have a nice makeover. So green...

42. R.I.P, Lolita.
Well, looking at those who came and gone didn't affect me a lot anymore.
Elsy ways is all around again! Poor toddler!
They are corrupted by Elsy since a young age X3
Ohh, I just love Rose paint, nice touch to ending things.

43. Nice makeover for Rosalia. Hmm... I'm kinda disappointed, I thought that Nick will stay faithful to Lolita.
Well (almost but not all) men are the same. So sorry to have a hopeless romantic, azokka
At least that he was happy...

44. The new narration is quite interesting. Hmm.. I just can't agree (just my opinion).
Naked scene here. Well, that was interesting and I am so glad that only one of them
Regardless of that congratulations for being a father again, Nick.

45. Oh noes! To see Nick like a second Alex is horrible. Horrible!
This is a nightmare Miles. Hmm. Nice choice but not my preference.
At least Kara find someone that she loves. I hope that long last.

46. Nothing much to say. But, the way that you're playing this family quite interesting.
The update is nice though. But, seeing someone... you know? Hopeless Romantic reader XD
Make me lost appeal to Kara. I still love her though, but not like other member.
She's kinda a rebel, but she's protective to Rosalia.

Oh, boy... I hope nothing happen with Kara and Miles relationship.

47. Hmm, such a bittersweet story. Poor Kara and Bianca. But, no offence. Still this is not right for me
I hope that Kara didn't do anything funny. She already had Miles and Bianca *deep sigh*

48. Maybe they will be together in an Epilogue or something...
Unexpected thing that I see from Miles is... that muscle!
Still he is not my preference for male Sim

49. The story darker here somehow and depressing even there are Elsy's tradition out there (kissing, woohoo something-related).
Still it's nice to see Nick try to be a best father. But, my opinion for him didn't change a slight bit. *sigh* Poor Kara. Poor Miles.

50. Nice story to cheered up the situation for a bit. Another story, another world.
Nice way to make Kara and Bianca happy. Welcome to Iris, hope you will be a toddler soon, because nooboo is boring

51. Man, you're so intense about the update aren't you. Well, not complaining, but take that as a compliment
I love to read your stories, but reading them non-stop make me exhausted in happy way
Yeah, for love alone there are several definition of them. People just can't stuck and force their belief about what love is into someone.
That what make love so beautiful in a different way. That what I learned from your update this time. Amazing, azokka.

I hope Chris and Arlo in my story are happy too ;

52. Well, Rosalie is beautiful. I love her. Iris as a toddler too adorable, the makeovers fit her.
Ooh, nooo.... Please don't make that happen! Just Kara and Bianca!!! No Kara X Rosalie!

53. The museum is so colorful. And I love how you considerate readers comment in your story
Congratulation for Bree. That was lovely. How each Immortals talk about their flashback.

The Third Immortal section is so nice. I love it. Especially the what that thing? Hmm...
Yes! Collage thing. That was really something.

54. That was a nice interlude. To see different story in different world. Kudos for you, azokka.
It's quite funny to see the same-sex relationship, but that still lovely. Well, love is universal thing
People should be aware that more

55. Well, only love and unicorn? But, where is Ninja? Are you throw that away ?
It has been since chapter 8 and you never mentioned Ninja again.
Well, the Elsy way is still there after all! Looking at Brandon and Bree.
Good luck on Bianca though. I hope that she stay faithful to Kara.

56. There is one picture that missing here. It's the third only, I can see anything.
I will not say oh no again then when actually see Nick as second Alex
That was a nice bonding moment between mom and daughter. I love it! Oh, I just love a family moment!
And I do how you related your story to another story


57. Poor Miles! He had a horrible outfits
Yeah, kissing-woohooing-and all romantic moment related (unashamedly in front of poor children )
just the way of Elsy show their love for the world

That was an interesting explanation from Brandon! Kudos!

So, she never marry Bianca? So, Miles and Kara are still married then? ...or just a friend?
I am quite confused, really. For HOF requirement, both parent just need to be at home right?

58. Poor, Brandon! At least that he has a nice life with Bree.
Nice to see Rosa has find a love. Haha, Iris really grown fond of Rosetta.
So, I see that her supermax is logic. Hmm, I never tried that. Is that difficult to reach?

59. Hmm, that was interesting! I never tried that (pointed at reading thing)
It's so sad to see Miles. Especially when I find that Iris who say about that.
Hope that you will be happy in the afterlife, Miles.

It's weird. Sims are real for me and I always to try to treat them as humane as I can.
To see other cheer that he dying, it's horrible for me. But, oh well... just my opinion.

Well, I am happy though that Bianca can live together with her true love.

60. Well, nothing much to say. But, it's nice to see Bianca and Iris could be get along.
If only that she is more polite, I will more like her more. But. Oh, well...
That thing again what make these Sims wonderful

61. Well. It's a nice way to play with an Alien.
They are quite a handy if I see in your story even that I never played them for a long time!
Some people in foreign world are quite attractive, that goes same when I looking yours

62. It's has been quite a time since I see Bree. She still lovely!
That was a nice screenshot when I see Rosalia!
Well, Iris looks lovely without her glasses, in my opinion!

63. Mario Texas? Is he related somehow to Steve Texas? It's nice to see some reference there.
Although I knew nothing about it. My friend is the fans of the show.
Maybe I will watch it later. Well, I hope that Iris can find her own ideal somewhere.

64. Elsy way through generation!
Although that I see more fewer in this generation. I kinda miss the moment where everyone kissing, woohooing
And the important thing to see Bree streaking
Oh, well... Hope they will be a perfect couple.

65. Oooh, I do love Bubba makeover. But, he is too skinny for me
Rapper-wannabe style too quite cool. Well, Bubba and Iris are lovely.
And welcome back Rosalia

66. Hahaha, a nice screenie that you have there!
And very useful information, I'd say. Well, I learning one or two in your story.
Thanks a lot

67. Oh, love to see older Gator here. He's quite attractive I'd say.
It's seem reading at Rosa's story he's like will never grew up soon.
Hmm, nice bachelorette party. Glad for Rosa though

68. Hmm, I can't comment much. But this is surely a nice addition to the story.
Nice job for an interlude. I love Bree screenie when she was drowned. That face was priceless.

69. Too see different way to die is quite fascinating. I never do this to my Sims.
Hmm, another interesting way to show another side of the character.

70. I see. Elsy way of Love stil here XD
Even too bad because there are fewer than before.
Makeover townies too is great, but my computer cannot handle it. Well...
This is another nice update to read.

71. And again, your museum is still lovely to see.
I wonder what's wrong with the portrait, photo and the sculpture?
That was... really something and you turned them to be something else in your way of storytelling.

It was nice again to see the collage. Nicely done

72. Happy marriage life Iris. Hope that you will be happy with Bubba and always be forever and ever
Elsy way is there again

And here for the polling things.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Favorite Immortal: Bree (Because she loves streaking around)

Favorite Spouse: Lolita (Well, I do love Goth)

Favorite Helper (Not including spouse): Agnes (Because I love Agnes)

Favorite Character Overall: Nathaniel, haha! He's an Elsy after all! Second to that Bree.

Favorite Wedding: It's really hard. Bree's Wedding

Favorite Party (Including Weddings): Serena! That dance is awesome and funny!

Favorite Proposal: Hmm, hard... Serena.

Favorite Dynasty Couple: Brandon & Bree

Least Favorite Dynasty Couple: Serena & Thornton

Saddest Moment: I know that least people and the Watcher itself want him to die. But, that was him. Second to that is Lolita.

Happiest Moment: When I see naked Sims. I think that you make me crazy since that Bree's event. Oh, my God. What are you doing to my precious brain XD

Moment Where You Wish You Could Jump Into the Game and Punch Someone in the Face:
Save Miles just move him out in a better way, so Kara and Bianca can get together faster.

Other: None

*pant*

At least this is finished. I am exhausted for reading 10 chapters each day.
That was beyond my limits.

But, thank you for sharing such beautiful and hilarious story, azokka.
Reading stories always make my day. Includes yours.
You definitely right about Elsy. I love your dynasty as I do love Nathaniel.
But, still can't beat my love for Nathaniel

People might be hate him, but I love him with his flaws.
That's what make me always want to tease him
And I think you should be the one who should take the blame,
because of Nathaniel one of my Sim mimicking him

*just kidding*

Keep up the great work. Good luck with the rest generation!
You almost there :3

Well, for me. I still have other amazing stories to read on.
So, glad that I can follow you until last update. So, I got nothing to lose :p

Say, hello to Nathaniel for me 'kay

Okay, it's time for me to sleep.
Oh, boy... I will be yawning all day, when I wake up I suppose. *yawn*

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Really great chapters azzoka!

Congratulations to Kara for immortality! Really loved how you have assembled all the important moments of her life in the photoshoot!

I love wedding chapters! Another congrats to to the happy couple. The commentary is just so sweet!