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Re: The Churchill Chronicles
« Reply #420 on: March 27, 2011, 01:20:14 PM »
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what they get up to in Egypt!  :)
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Re: The Churchill Chronicles
« Reply #421 on: March 27, 2011, 01:38:09 PM »
Thank you! They get into a TON of trouble... ;)
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Re: The Churchill Chronicles
« Reply #422 on: March 27, 2011, 03:07:41 PM »
Cool update!

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« Reply #423 on: March 27, 2011, 03:15:01 PM »
Thanks~! ;D
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Re: The Churchill Chronicles
« Reply #424 on: March 27, 2011, 04:20:14 PM »
Very well written chapter, Simstar, as is your usual! I can't wait to read all about their Egypt adventures.

About the grammar and spelling: there aren't spelling mistakes per se but you may want to reread it carefully (my high school English teacher always said to read it out loud). I found a couple instance of mistypes, such as "wake" instead of "wave", spell check doesn't help with that.
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« Reply #425 on: March 27, 2011, 04:40:20 PM »
Thanks for telling me, I fixed it. :)
It's really annoying when I misspell a word, but spell check thinks it's a real word. >:(
I've really got to start typing more carefully. ^^''
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« Reply #426 on: March 27, 2011, 05:00:21 PM »
I've made Best Friends with my delete button (backspace for you Windows users) because I'm constantly typing words worng (see) wrong, my fingers don't like waiting for their turns. :D
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Re: The Churchill Chronicles
« Reply #427 on: March 27, 2011, 08:22:23 PM »
Awesome chapter Simstar! Actually it should have been Esther that stayed home. Esther doesn't like flying haha. Can't wait to see what kind of trouble they get into!

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« Reply #428 on: March 27, 2011, 11:09:28 PM »
Awesome chapter Simstar! Actually it should have been Esther that stayed home. Esther doesn't like flying haha. Can't wait to see what kind of trouble they get into!
Hee hee. I'll keep that in mind. ;D
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Re: The Churchill Chronicles
« Reply #429 on: March 28, 2011, 05:44:17 AM »
The chapter is awesome, Simstar. As others noted, there were a few mistakes, but nothing to really worry about. Loved the Dong Huo part. Beware mummies - the Churchills are coming! :)
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« Reply #430 on: March 28, 2011, 11:09:52 AM »
Beware mummies - the Churchills are coming! :)
Heck yeah! ;D
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Re: The Churchill Chronicles
« Reply #431 on: March 29, 2011, 02:02:06 PM »
This story is really good, I wanna know what happens in Egypt! By the way I've read the whole story started yesterday finished today. lol ;D
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« Reply #432 on: March 29, 2011, 06:55:00 PM »
This story is really good, I wanna know what happens in Egypt! By the way I've read the whole story started yesterday finished today. lol ;D
Thank you very much~! ^^
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Re: The Churchill Chronicles
« Reply #433 on: April 01, 2011, 11:04:55 PM »
Okay, I finally stopped being lazy, and took pictures of Heather's house.
I call it Pistache Manor.
Keep in mind that this is after Olive grows into a child, and they go to France two times, as well as China one time.



Here's the kitchen. It's a little cramped, but I still like it. Especially the half wall. ^^



Party/Painting area:


Heather and Zach's bedroom.

Digital fish FTW! ;D I want me some of those...

Guest room.


Fireplace. (In guest room)

Awesome! Didn't know you could do that. :D

TV and reading area.


I really like it. ;D

Bathroom.



Upstairs:

Random coffee table to hold some stuff they got abroad.


Styling station.


Olive's room.

I tried to make it olive green, but it didn't work so well. :-\

Olive's sister's room.

Yes, Olive has a sister. That's all I'm telling you guys.

Kid's bathroom.


Outside:

Trampoline.


Fishing pond/outdoor bench/Gnubb/Trampoline/Snake charming basket.


Playground area.


This is why I called it Pistache manor. I think this tree is called a Pistache. If I'm wrong, then I'm a total idiot. :-[

So, whaddya think? I put a lot of effort into this house, I'd love some feedback. :)
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Re: The Churchill Chronicles
« Reply #434 on: April 01, 2011, 11:09:58 PM »
That's an awesome build!

In the pic of the coffee table, there's an ingot. Which metal is it?