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Re: The Churchill Chronicles
« Reply #165 on: January 27, 2011, 09:03:26 PM »
Whoa! Do they both have the family oriented trait??
Yup.
TEN children?  You gotta be kidding!  TEN?  This could get very interesting.
Definitely. Verrrrryy interesting... ;)

Oh, and here's some pictures of Rose.





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« Reply #166 on: January 27, 2011, 09:19:45 PM »
Lol, that is going to be very interesting! Cute kids!!



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« Reply #167 on: January 27, 2011, 10:49:43 PM »
Thanks! I think I'm gonna update today, since I'm feeling motivated. :)
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Re: The Churchill Chronicles
« Reply #168 on: January 28, 2011, 04:26:33 AM »
Can hardly wait for that next update.  It's one a.m. right now so I'll catch it in the daytime.  zzzzzzzzz
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« Reply #169 on: January 29, 2011, 02:18:13 AM »
Chapter Fifteen
     "Happy Birthday, Rose!" Heather congratulated her sister, taking another bite of her cake. Rose had grown up into teenager, and was already shredding the wrapping paper for her presents. Heather had given her another painting, but Raymond and Amanda had gotten her a present that was currently in the corner, with a blanket draped over it.
      "Thanks, Heather!" Rose exclaimed, as she looked at the painting. "Your painting are awesome."
      "You're welcome."
      Rose turned, and ran over to Raymond. "Can I open that big present now? Please?
      "Alright, alright.
       Raymond rolled his eyes, smiling. "Go ahead."
      "Thanks!" Rose yanked the blanked off. "A drum set! Yay!"
      "I'm glad you like it, honey." Amanda told her. But wait until tomorrow to play with it, okay?"
      Rose yawned. "Sure."
      A while later, everyone was in bed and asleep, except Heather. She was thinking. Will I ever get to leave this basement? I want to see how the above looks. She sighed. Her birthday was tomorrow, and she really wanted a change in her life. Slowly, she drifted off into a troubled sleep.
      The next morning, Heather awoke to the smell of pancaked and coffee... and a loud, annoying banging sound. She groaned. "Rose do you have to start playing that thing at six a.m?"
      "Hey, mom said I could play it today." Rose answered, without looking up for her drum set.
      "Whatever..." Heather grabbed her clothes, and walked into the bathroom to take a shower, closing the door all the way to dworn out the obnoxious banging noise Rose was making.
      Time skip...
      "Thanks, Rose" Heather thanked her sister, looking at the large ruby in her hand. "It's beautiful!"
      "You're welcome. And I'm sure you'll like mom and dad's present.
      She directed Heather over to the wall next to the kitchen counter, and pointed to an odd looking object.
      "Um... I have no idea what it is." Heather told her sister, confused.
      "It's a teleported pad, Heather! It'll teleport you anywhere in Sunset Valley!"
      "REALLY?" Heather gasped, shocked. "You mean it? I... I can finally see the real world? ThankyouThankyouThankyou THANK YOU!" She hugged both her parents tightly.
      "You're welcome, sweetie. You deserve it, after all you've been through." Amanda said, ruffling Heather's hair.
      "To use it, choose anywhere on that map right there. Take the remote control with you, because that's how you get back. Got it?"
      "Got it!" Heather stepped onto the teleported pad, and tapped a location on the map, a random location out in the middle of a field. She wasn't ready to handle large crowds of people yet. Then, an orange light engulfed her, and she suddenly found herself in the exact location she had chosen. But more than that. She was outside. She was in the real world. For the first time, wind blew on her, ruffling her ripply brown hair. When she looked up, for the firts time she saw the sky and the clouds, not a stone celling. As kids, when she and Rose had played tag, they couldn't run very far, the basement's stone walls stopped the and forced them to run in the other direction. But now, everything seemed limitless. There were no walls to stop her and turn her the other way, she was free.  She felt tears well up in her eyes; she was so happy. Laughing, she took off running across the filed, with no boundaries to stop her.
      She ran for a long time, until she was to tired to take one more step. She flopped down on her back on the grass, gazing up at the sky. By now, the sky had darkened, and was now an inky black. Then, suddenly, the first star appeared, twinkling against the blackness of the sky. More and more appeared, until the once empty skies now held thousands of glittering lights. I've waited so long for this moment. Heather thought. I can finally see the world and all it holds with my own eyes. She had fulfilled one of her biggest and most unobtainable-seeming dreams. For the first time in her life, she was really, truly happy.
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Chapter Notes:
* See, I got Heather out of the basement like I said I would!~ ^^
* I really did buy a teleported pad for the Chuchills, so now they can get out...
* ...Sort of. I'm only letting them leave if they're YA or older. I know it's kind of cruel, but that's how I want to do it.
* I've got the next chapter all planned out in my head, but I'll post it tomorrow. I'm too tired to write another chapter, and this computer's running low on power.
* Oh, and Daisy and Lily aged up, and they are just thecutest things ever!!! Pictures will be posted tomorrow, along with Heather's YA pictures.
* Aaaand... I don't think the last part was very good. I mean, if I was Heather, I'd probably freak out and scream. I made her way to calm. ^^''
* Tell me what you think of this chapter! Pwease?~ :3
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Re: The Churchill Chronicles
« Reply #170 on: January 29, 2011, 03:32:59 AM »
Yay! I love it! Great writing as always!

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Re: The Churchill Chronicles
« Reply #171 on: January 29, 2011, 10:48:09 AM »
Thankies! Starting chapter sixteen in a few minutes! :D
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Re: The Churchill Chronicles
« Reply #172 on: January 29, 2011, 12:02:29 PM »
I loved it!!
The last parts where Heather was exploring gave me goosebumps of happiness :P

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« Reply #173 on: January 29, 2011, 12:07:09 PM »
Hee hee. Thanks! ;D
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« Reply #174 on: January 29, 2011, 12:36:24 PM »
Chapter Sixteen
      "Okay, I'm sure you've all noticed the new teleportation pad." Amanda told her daughters. The day after Heather had gotten back, Amanda had called a family meeting. "And I'm sure you're all anxious to use it, but I have to lay down some ground rules. First of all, you can only use it if you are a young adult or older. I don't want you guys getting hurt out there. Got it?"
      "What?!" Rose jumped up, outraged. "You mean the rest of us can't get out of the basement? You mean things will proceed exactly as before? What's the point of that?"
      Amanda sighed. "Rose, I don't want you, or any of you sisters to get hurt out there. It's for your own good."
      "Fine..." Rose groaned sulkily. Daisy, Lily and Violet all nodded, but still looked upset.
      "Well, now that that's done, have you guys though about what you want for you birthdays?"
      "Definitely!" Daisy jumped up from her seat on the floor. "I want a chess set!"
      "Why am I not surprised?" Raymond commented with a grin.
      "I want some books!" Lily called. She'd loved books and reading ever since she'd gotten a hold of Jimmy Sprocket and the Squishy Stone, a book that had once belonged to Heather.
      "That sounds fine." Amanda replied. "I'll go shopping later today, and get a cake as well."
      Time skip...
      Heather was sitting on her bed, reading a composition book that Amanda had gotten her. Daisy, Lily and Violet were playing at the blocks table, and Rose was once again banging on her drum set.
      "Violet, get away from there!" Daisy's alarmed cry jolted Heather out of her concentration, and she looked up to see Violet toddling over to the teleporter pad. Startled by Daisy's warning, she looked over her shoulder at her sister, but tripped on the edge of the teleporter. She tripped, and her hand slammed down on the control panel. In a flash of orange light, she was gone.
      For a few second, they all just sat there, unable to move, in a shocked silence. Then, Heather got up, and bolted over to the teleporter pad.
      "That pea brain! She knows she's not supposed to to near this!" Heather cried, as she climbed onto the teleporter. She picked up the remote control, and tapped the same location Violet's hand had landed on. In a few seconds, she, too disappeared.
      Heather found herself at Crystal Springs, a fishing pond out in the middle of nowhere. She looked around or her sister, and saw her being picked up by a strange young man.
     "Hey!" Heather ran over to him, and grabbed Violet out of his hands. "That's my sister, leave her alone!"
     "Okay, okay, I was just going to see if her family was around here. I'm Zacharay Alvins. What's your name?"
     "Heather Churchill."
     "Ah, I see. Well, nice to meet you. I'll see you around."
     "Sure. Bye!" Heather walked away, and ten hid behind a large tree. She took the remote control out of her pocket, and pressed "Return Home" on it. A few seconds later, she was back in the underground basement.
     "You got her!" Daisy looked up from her complicated block tower. "Is she okay?"
     "She's fine." Heather replied, stepping off the teleporter, and blinking a few times to get used to the new lighting.
     "That's good. I was afraid you two wouldn't be back in time for our birthday party." She said, gesturing to the two birthday cakes on the kitchen counter.
     "In a few minutes. I've gotta give Violet a taking-to." She put her sister down, and looked her straight in the eye. "Violet, I do not want you going anywhere near that teleporter pad, got it? It's very dangerous for you to be out there alone." Violet nodded sulkily.
     Time skip... again...
      "Do I have to wear these?" Daisy complained, pulling at her shirt. "I don't like them."
      "C'mon, Daisy. These clothes are awesome! How can you not like them?" Lily told her sister.
      "Speak for yourself. I look like a candy cane!" Daisy grumbled.
      "Geez, stop being so grumpy all the time!" Lily scolded her sister. "Let's go open presents!"
      They both bounded over to their presents, which were in the corner. Lily grabbed hers, and shredded the wrapping paper.
       "Woo! Books!" She read the titles out loud. "Where's Bella, The Adventures of Raymundo, Theoretical Physics for Your Hyperactive Child, Taking Your Lemonade Stand Global, and Passing Your Driving Test Using Your iPod. Thanks you, Mom and Dad!" She grinned up at them.
       Meanwhile, Daisy pulled the blanked off her present. "A chess set! Thank you!"
       "My pleasure, sweeties." Amanda told her daughters. "I'm glad you like them."
       "Yup, I love them!" Lily cried happily. "Thank you!"
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Chapter Notes:
* Sorry this chapter's so short... :(
* Oh, yeah, and Zachary's gonna play a big part in this story. You'll see in due time. ;)
* Despite my affection for Daisy and Lily's adorable sweetness, I didn't like them when they were toddlers. When I was playing the Churchills yeasterday night, I said to my brother, "Alright, I'm just gonna age these monsters up right now." I kid you not.  :P
* Daisy saying "I look like a candy cane!" probably won't make much sense until I post pictures of them. ^^''
* I'll also post pictures of Heather as an adult, since I think she looks pretty.
* Recently, I've been making a ton of spelling and grammar errors that Spell Check doesn't pick up. Please, PLEASE tell me if you see any so I can correct them.
* Oh, and does anyone recognize some of the titles for the books Lily got? ;)
* Tell me what you think of this chapter!~ Pwease? :3
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Re: The Churchill Chronicles
« Reply #175 on: January 29, 2011, 01:00:03 PM »
It seems EeyoreWrite Man has finally made it big!

Fabulous updates, Simstar! Keep them coming.
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Re: The Churchill Chronicles
« Reply #176 on: January 29, 2011, 01:43:33 PM »
Thanks!
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Re: The Churchill Chronicles
« Reply #177 on: January 29, 2011, 03:07:46 PM »
Ok, it's time for a ton of pictures! ;D

Daisy:





Daisy's favorite color isn't red, buy she looks really good in it.
And see why I said she looks like a candy cane? :P

Lily:






Lily's favorite color isn't Spiceberry, but she looks good in it. See a pattern here? ^^''
Daisy and Lily aged up on the day when I bought 2,000 simpoints and went insane buying stuff on the sims 3 store.

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She still looks pretty. ^^
Enjoy, and an update will arrive later this afternoon! ;D
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« Reply #178 on: January 29, 2011, 03:36:01 PM »
Awesome update Simstar! I'm glad Heather got out of the basement!  ;D

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« Reply #179 on: January 29, 2011, 03:49:01 PM »
Thankies! ;D
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