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Re: Summer Romance, Winter Love: Autumn Leaves.
« Reply #30 on: January 28, 2013, 05:47:32 PM »
This was a very entertaining update for me, in an odd sort of way. As I was reading, Nick Alto ended up with a strange accent, like a strange New York-Scottish hybrid. Very odd.  :D

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Re: Summer Romance, Winter Love: Autumn Leaves.
« Reply #31 on: January 28, 2013, 06:13:10 PM »
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This was a very entertaining update for me, in an odd sort of way. As I was reading, Nick Alto ended up with a strange accent, like a strange New York-Scottish hybrid. Very odd.

I won't say what accent he had in my head then, because that's a really interesting one, and I'm trying to imagine it now and can't :D Glad this was a bit more entertaining, I thought it was all getting a bit dark, and needed lightening up :) And it was fun getting some more Sunset Valley characters in!



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Re: Summer Romance, Winter Love: Autumn Bonfires
« Reply #32 on: January 28, 2013, 06:58:00 PM »


Erin noticed frost on the ground the next morning, during her workout. Time was passing quickly here. In only a few short months, she'd met so many people, and her life had changed so drastically. She wasn't sure, but she thought she might like it. Claire Ursine, who she'd met out jogging on the beach and eventually started chatting to, was as at first as reserved as Erin herself had been, and was quick to flare up, but had a wicked sense of humour. And Pvt. Langerak was as clumsy and endearing as a Labrador puppy, though a good soldier underneath it.




She'd agreed to meet Langerak at the last night of the Autumn Harvest Festival after work. He'd gone home to pick up his wife and children, but she'd gone straight on to the park. There was a bite in the air, and she shivered, and told herself it was nothing to do with the haunted house next to her. She shivered again, and this time it seemed to go right to the base of her brain, her warning centre.



A woman in a blue hat walked past her. Erin frowned. She seemed familiar, and yet Erin couldn't put a face, let alone a name to her. She chided herself. Small village it might be, but she was hardly the expert on who was who.



There was a cheerful shout, and she looked round to see Langerak, still in his work clothes, his arm wrapped loosely around his slightly prim wife - Iliana? - shambling towards her.

"Come on, there's a pie-eating competition, Sarge," he called. "Blackberry and apple."

Her momentary worry forgotten, Erin grinned, and headed over to the pie table. She didn't notice the woman in the blue hat pull out a camera.



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Erin headed home, her stomach full and her body relaxed. As she turned the corner to her house, she caught the smell of dirty smoke, and her brain flashed that warning tingle so loudly she almost flinched. Before she knew it, she was running towards her house, pulling open the front door... seeing the conflagration in her living room. Twink was hissing and panicking, his hair so on end he was almost circular.



Erin raced to grab the fire extinguisher, and poured it directly onto the fire.



Within five terrifying minutes, she had the blaze under control. She squirted it once, twice more, then dropped the extinguisher, shaking. How had that happened? She had gone straight to the park after work, and the fireplace had been cold and dead when she'd left that morning. She remembered herself thinking that it would be nice to light a fire when she got home that night...

Erin shuddered once, then turned her attention to the doors and windows. Every window was locked, but... hadn't she just pulled the door open when she ran in? Had she locked it that morning? She locked and bolted it as securely as she could, and turned her attention to Twink, who was now running up and down anxiously, and was covered in soot. The room was filled with smoke, but she didn't dare leave a window open. She picked Twink up and went to check the garden gate was locked, resolving to call the locksmith first thing in the morning.

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Far across town, Nancy was blissfully unaware of this unfolding drama. She slipped into her enormous but cold bed. Geoffrey was so often late home that it barely occurred to her to wonder where he was. In any case, these days she almost preferred it when he was.


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Re: Summer Romance, Winter Love: Autumn Bonfires
« Reply #33 on: January 28, 2013, 08:23:41 PM »
Oh dear...methinks that fire was somehow intentionally set. :o Scary, this...

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Re: Summer Romance, Winter Love: Autumn Bonfires
« Reply #34 on: January 29, 2013, 02:01:30 PM »
Note - this section is missing a few pictures, but I'll upload them later this evening)



Nancy was humming happily to herself as she touched up her make-up. Geoffrey had been awfully sweet to her since the dinner party. She had been quite upset that he'd been so late home with Malcolm, but Geoffrey had pointed out that it was her idea to have a party, so it was not fair of her to expect him to help. And besides, didn't she want her husband and son to be able to spend some quality time together? Of course she did, Nancy told herself. She did wish that Geoffrey would take Malcolm to things that they could both enjoy, though, rather than just assuming Malcolm had the same interests as a grown man. Malcolm had told her that Geoffrey had taken him to the club. Nancy had never been - had never been asked to go - but it sounded extremely boring for a ten year old boy, even one so precocious as Malcolm.

Anyway, he'd bought her beautiful flowers the next day, which were brightening up the kitchen, and even better, had suggested, quite out of the blue, that she have a night out with her girlfriends. This was, to the best of Nancy's memory, a first, and she was looking forward to it immensely. She'd been right about the party, it had really helped. True, it was a bit irritating that Geoffrey had suggested who she should ask, then stood over her as she called them, but it was always fun to see Susan, and while she did not know Morgana Wolff very well, she worked with Geoffrey, and her husband Thornton worked with Nancy, so it was probably a good idea to get to know her. She pushed down the unworthy thought that Geoffrey had insisted she invite Morgana so he could check up on what they'd done at work the next day. She didn't even know why it had come to mind, it was positively ridiculous. She'd texted Erin as well, when Morgana and Susan had confirmed, and Geoffrey had left the room. Geoffrey hadn't exactly given permission, but then again, he had said a girl's night out, and it wasn't, after all, technically up to him who she invited, although she wasn't quite sure how to put that to him. He'd sighed when she told him that they were going to kareoke, and told her that a cocktail lounge would be far more suitable, but had eventually relented. Frowning slightly, she put the finishing touches on her lipstick, then smiled at her reflection.




The taxi would arrive in a few minutes. She quickly ran through the checklist in her head. The few times she'd gone out without Geoffrey in the evenings previously, she'd come home to a litany of complaints; generally, it was easier to stay home and get on with things. But not tonight! Geoffrey's and Malcolm's dinner was in the oven on a low heat; the house was spotless; she'd got in some nectar for Geoffrey as a treat; she'd helped Malcolm finish his homework (not that she'd been able to be much use to him), and the last of the laundry was in the machine. Yes, she thought that was everything. Just as she reached for her purse, she heard Geoffrey call out her name.

"Nancy! Get down here this minute."

She hesitated, but habit was strong, and she ran downstairs. The kitchen was filled with smoke.

"Nancy, I don't know what you're expecting us to eat tonight," Geoffrey reproved her. "This is burnt to a char, it's not fit for a dog."

"But... it was on a low heat..." Nancy stammered.

"Clearly, it wasn't," Geoffrey snapped. Nancy checked the oven. Sure enough, the oven was on maximum. She frowned, puzzled, but before she could think any more about it, Geoffrey's voice broke through her confusion. "You'll have to make something else. Even you wouldn't leave your son hungry while you insist on going out. Would you? I don't know why you have to go out anyway. I'm going to be terribly lonely without you."

Nancy sighed, and without saying a word, snapped on her apron. Hearing the sound of a taxi beeping outside, she bit her tongue. She had just whipped up a very quick pasta sauce when Geoffrey said innocently "Is the laundry supposed to be pink, dear?"

Nancy shrieked in horror, and turned round to see that, yes, the erstwhile white laundry was swilling around cheerfully, brightly, pinkly in the machine.

"Hadn't you better do something about that, dear?" Geoffrey enquired.

The taxi beeped impatiently again, then she heard it drive off. She looked at Geoffrey hopelessly. He stared implacably back at her. Without a word, she stomped over to the machine, and pulled out the sopping clothing. Right on top was the culprit: a red sock. "Where did this even come from," she muttered to herself.

"You must have not been paying proper attention when you sorted the laundry, Nancy," said Geoffrey patronisingly. She pulled it out, poured some bleach into the machine, and set the washing cycle.

"Right, I'm off out," she said firmly.

"Haven't you forgotten something, Nancy?" She looked at him exasperatedly. He  stared back, looking utterly woebegone.

"Dinner, laundry, clean house... what else is there Geoffrey?"

"Well I thought, as you're leaving me alone for the whole evening while you insist on going out gallivanting like a teenager, you might think of giving your husband a kiss before you go." Geoffrey looked as though he was about to cry, and Nancy was filled with remorse.

"I'm sorry, dearest," she said gently, kissing him on the cheek. "I'll be back later, but I'll have my phone on me if you need anything."

"I'm not a child, Nancy," said Geoffrey, irritable again. "I can take care of myself, you know."

Nancy sighed again, and headed out of the door. Geoffrey watched her leave, his face impassive.



With all the household problems, Nancy was half an hour late to the kareoke bar, and absolutely fuming. Within minutes of arriving though, she'd left Geoffrey and the house far behind her, as the other three women cheered and toasted her arrival with luridly coloured drinks - apparently not their first of the evening.

"You made it," cackled Susan. "We thought Geoffrey was keeping you prisoner!"

Nancy blushed, and hoped it wasn't noticeable in the pink light. "Just a last minute crisis, you know how it is. Now, who's for kareoke?"




The four women howled their way through various classic pop songs, almost crying with laughter. Erin saw a familiar blue hat at one point, but did not think too long about it. The colourful drinks slipped down rather easily, and it seemed like no time at all before Morgana looked at her watch, and gasped in shock. "I have an early shift tomorrow, I have to be up in five hours!" She stumbled over to grab her bag and coat. "Susan, you're on my side of town, do you want to share a cab?" Susan grinned rather lopsidedly, saying "Shuuuuure, Morgana! These two can look after themselves." They left the bar, still laughing and singing.

Nancy looked over at Erin. "I suppose you have to go too?"

Erin thought a moment. "Nah. I have to be in tomorrow afternoon, but I don't have an early start. Want a game of pool?"



Nancy nodded. The evening had been so much fun, she did not want end it just yet, to go back to her cold house and husband. The bar was quieter now, just a few patrons, and music was pouring softly from the speakers. Without noticing, they had drifted closer together. Nancy closed her eyes and smiled. "I love this song. I haven't heard it years."

Erin snorted. "Really? 'Build Me Up Buttercup? Nancy, I thought you had better taste."

Nancy groaned. "Don't, Erin. You sound just like Geoffrey."

Erin was overcome with guilt. "I'm so sorry Nancy. Here, let's dance." They clasped each other, dreamlike.



Too soon, the song ended, and they stepped away from each other, suddenly embarrassed.

"Come on," said Erin abruptly. "If you want to have this game of pool, we're going to have to step on the gas a bit; it is getting late." Silently, they left the bar together.

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Re: Summer Romance, Winter Love: Autumn Bonfires
« Reply #35 on: January 29, 2013, 02:11:27 PM »
It look like someone don't like Erin. Great updates! :)

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Re: Summer Romance, Winter Love: Autumn Bonfires
« Reply #36 on: January 29, 2013, 06:21:33 PM »
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It look like someone don't like Erin. Great updates! :)

Looks that way, doesn't it? These chapters were a lot of fun to write, thanks guys :D



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Re: Summer Romance, Winter Love: Autumn Bonfires
« Reply #37 on: January 29, 2013, 07:08:21 PM »


Nancy had gone to the bathroom. Erin was cueing up at the pool table, thinking hard. She barely noticed the woman in the blue hat until she was right opposite her. She stood up slowly, and walked around the table towards her.



"You know, I keep seeing you around," she said. "That blue hat is hard to miss."

The woman looked at her levelly. "Erin, you have to know that Nancy Landgraab is bad news. You should probably stay away from her."

Erin stepped back, alarmed. "Who are you? How do you know my name? And what do you mean by bad news?"

"My name really isn't relevant. I do know Nancy and her husband, and have learned your name. That's all there is to it. Trust me when I say that getting involved with her is probably not the healthiest move you could make."

Erin looked at her levelly. "Why are you telling me this?" she asked.

The woman sighed. "Because you seem like an ok kind of woman, and this is not something you should be around for."

Erin narrowed her eyes. "What shouldn't I be around for? Some kind of fight?"

"Something like that. Anyway, take it or leave it, that's my advice." The woman walked off.

Erin's instincts were aroused. Something was brewing, and soldiers didn't run from the fight. Advice from strangers was a risky business, especially following a mysterious house fire. Nancy walked up.

Erin looked over at her sharply. "Hey Nancy. Do you know a woman in a blue hat?"

Nancy looked confused. "Doesn't ring a bell. So, are you breaking?"

Erin picked up her pool cue, and headed over to break.



"So, how's things with Geoffrey?" she asked, before cracking the cue ball and sending balls scattering over the table.

Nancy shifted uncomfortably. "Oh, you know, fine. He let me off the hook tonight, which was good of him."

Erin snorted. "Let you off the hook? You are allowed to go out with friends. I can see why, with me, it would be a lot more complicated, but Susan and Morgana are great."

"Yeah, they are," said Nancy warmly. "But no, I am not 'allowed' out with friends. I can have friends, sure, because we have a position in the community, but they don't come over for coffee, and I don't go round to theirs, because he prefers to stay home."

"That's my point, Nancy. You can go out without him. Heck, I've seen you do it."

"You don't understand," said Nancy, her pitch rising. "He wouldn't forbid it if I asked, but he can make it so I don't ask by being unbearable about it."

Erin stood up and looked at her. Nancy brightened.



"Oh, is it my go now?" she asked hopefully.

"No. I potted two balls in the break. So, if he's unbearable, why do you let him get away with it?"

Nancy's shoulders sagged slightly. "Because what are my alternatives?"

Erin looked at her again, thoughtfully and tenderly. "Nancy, how can you ask that? You've got friends who care about you, a job of your own - which is, believe me, no small thing - you've got Malcolm to think of, and you've got yourself. You have alternatives."

"I can't leave him, you know. We've been married for eleven years. All our friends are married. My boss and my colleagues are friends with him. Or at least, he seems to see them more than I do, at that club of his. And you're right, I do have Malcolm to think of."



"What is Malcolm seeing, though? He's seeing his father make his mother miserable. That's not a healthy environment for a child."

Nancy stopped a moment, and seemed to think. Then she started again, slowly. "He could not do without me. He needs me. He loves me. I'm scared of... I don't know what he'd do if I left."

Erin walked round the table, and took Nancy by the shoulders. "Nancy, only you can take your life into your hands. Trust me when I say, people who care about you want you to do the right thing for yourself. It's not loving behaviour to be cruel to someone, or try and keep them shut off from other people. It's not up to Geoffrey, and it is certainly not up to me to tell you what you need to be doing with your life. Only you can decide that." Unaccustomed to such speeches, she backed off and took up her pool cue. Nancy stood and watched in silence.




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Re: Summer Romance, Winter Love: Autumn Chill
« Reply #38 on: January 30, 2013, 02:25:14 PM »
I think I know who the woman in the blue hat is. I play AP all the time, so I'm quite sure. And great job, I've been enjoying this from the begining!
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Re: Summer Romance, Winter Love: Autumn Chill
« Reply #39 on: January 31, 2013, 09:50:57 AM »
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I think I know who the woman in the blue hat is. I play AP all the time, so I'm quite sure. And great job, I've been enjoying this from the begining!

Thanks :D I've never seen her in AP personally, but maybe she hangs around there too :)

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Re: Summer Romance, Winter Love: Autumn Fires
« Reply #40 on: January 31, 2013, 02:42:25 PM »


The pale afternoon light was dying in the sky. Nancy watched as a flying V of geese cackled their way overhead. She wondered how it would feel to soar high above the ground, with nothing between oneself and the horizon. The clouds opened overhead, and the rain pounded down, its dreary rhythm echoing her heart.



She thought about how angry Geoffrey had been earlier. She had been wandering around the pond in the rain, thinking deeply about her position. She hadn't heard him come up behind her until he was right up close.



He had known. How he had known, she didn't have a clue. But he had raged at her for what seemed like hours - deservedly so, she knew in her heart. He had said all sorts of things about Erin, the least of which was "homewrecker" and the worst of which she wished she hadn't heard.



After it was over, he had stood very close to her. "You are my wife, Nancy, and I am not letting you go. You will come home after work. You will behave as a woman in your position ought to. You will be a good mother to Malcolm, and above all, you will be a good wife to me. I have been good to you Nancy, and I demand that you are good to me too. Do you understand, Nancy?"

"Geoffrey, I.... we have not been very happy for some time now. I feel... I feel like you don't like me any more, that you only want me to... well, to be a wife, to cook, to clean, to look nice and smile at you and your friends. And... Geoffrey, I'm not just your wife, I'm Nancy."



Geoffrey narrowed his eyes. "Nancy, who you are, is my wife. And if you do not behave, there will be consequences. Not just for you. For Malcolm. And Erin. Especially for Erin. She may be a soldier, but I know everyone in this town, and I could make life interesting, if not outright dangerous, for any person in it. Any person, Nancy. Do I make myself clear?"

She had nodded mutely. She knew she had done wrong. She knew what she had to do. And though her heart wailed in anguish at the thought, she would do it.

The next day, she left work early, so that she could be at home on time. The rain still poured, but she had to go somewhere first.



Erin opened the door almost instantly.

"Come in and warm up. Nancy, I've been so worried about you, I haven't heard from you in weeks. Are you ok?"

Nancy stood tall with all the practiced confidence she had honed over the years.

"I'm sorry Erin, I've been very busy at work, and of course at home."

"Of course. Come through to the kitchen and have a cup of tea, it's getting very cold out."

Nancy followed her reluctantly. She had come with one purpose, and every moment in Erin's company was sapping her will.

Erin flicked on the kettle. "Nancy, I know you're very busy, but the last time we spoke, you were almost in pieces. Of course I've been worrying. I want to know that you're ok."



Nancy sighed. The kitchen was warm and comfortable and she felt safe... and ever less inclined to do what she had to do. For everyone's sake. Erin stepped towards her, interrupting her thoughts.

"It's ok Nancy," she said gently. "You don't have to talk about it. I just think it might help you."

Nancy took a small step forward, and her head rushed with Erin's scent - fresh, leafy with a hint of sweat and smoke. Before she knew it, they were kissing passionately.



Nancy broke away and stumbled back. "I can't..."

"You're right. You don't need another complication right now, I'm so sorry."

"No, you don't understand. I can't see you any more. Ever. Geoffrey... Geoffrey knows."

Erin was silent, and Nancy continued. "I don't know how he knew, but he... I'm staying with him. We are married, and I owe it to him to make it work, no matter what it takes."

"Nancy..."

"No! My decision is made. You said that only I could decide what to do with my life. Well, I have chosen my path, and it is out of your hands."

Erin stepped back as if slapped.



"Well, Nancy," she croaked. "You've made your decision, and you must live with it. I suppose that you have decided that leaving a husband is not something the First Lady of Sunset Valley would do."

"I'm sorry, Erin," Nancy said quietly.



"You're terrified of stepping out of the gilded cage, that's what it is. It's far too comfortable, and the outside is so scary, even though the scariest person you know is in the cage with you."

Nancy recoiled. "Don't."

Erin snorted, and stormed out of the back door. Nancy followed her. There was an enormous pile of leaves out there, and Nancy thought of the patience it must have taken to rake them all.



Nancy's voice was steady. "This is for the best for both of us Erin."

"Just go home, Nancy. Go home to your husband." Erin's voice was cracking, and Nancy left. She thought that Erin would never forgive her if she cried then and there, in front of Nancy.

Erin listened to her go, half crouching as if to catch her breath. She looked at the pile of leaves in front of her, and pulled out a lighter.

As it burned, she stood and watched where Nancy had been. She was almost panting with emotion, although she couldn't tell whether she was more angry or hurting.



She stood there until she was calm. The smoke filled the air and her head, burning away the detritus of the year. As she stood quietly, the tingle in her brain started, low but persistent. She did not know where the danger was. All she could feel was the pain.


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Re: Summer Romance, Winter Love: Autumn Fires
« Reply #41 on: January 31, 2013, 05:27:02 PM »
How did you set those leaves on fire? I've never seen that before.  ???

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« Reply #42 on: January 31, 2013, 06:53:27 PM »
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How did you set those leaves on fire? I've never seen that before.  ???

It's just an option that came up - when the pile of leaves is big enough to woohoo in, you can also make it a bonfire :)

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« Reply #43 on: January 31, 2013, 07:50:33 PM »
It's just an option that came up - when the pile of leaves is big enough to woohoo in, you can also make it a bonfire :)

Oh..... my mind is planning. Thanks for the information! ;)

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Re: Summer Romance, Winter Love: Autumn Fires
« Reply #44 on: February 01, 2013, 12:56:51 AM »
Poor Erin and Nancy! Very emotional update, I love it. :)