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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 13 22 May
« Reply #165 on: May 26, 2013, 04:20:07 PM »
This story is just going to be pretty long first. You don't mind waiting, do you readers?

Not in the least!  I'm enjoying it all.  ;D
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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 13 22 May
« Reply #166 on: May 26, 2013, 05:50:46 PM »
Not in the least!  I'm enjoying it all.  ;D

Excellent! Glad to hear it.
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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 13 22 May
« Reply #167 on: May 26, 2013, 05:54:11 PM »
Seconded!

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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 14 26 May
« Reply #168 on: May 26, 2013, 06:45:00 PM »
Chapter 14

In a soft voice, quiet and deadly, the king asked, What is the meaning of this?



Oh, my King! You have arrived just in time!



This young scoundrel was attempting to have his way with me!



The king sighed. I am not so blind anymore as to believe that. And Lord Argus? The representative of the wolf-men? Our peoples have always been friendly! Why would my Queen seek to drive such a wedge between us?



My Lord . . . my Lord . . . it was not my fault! He--he seduced me!



Silence, woman! You have spoken nothing but lies since the night you entered my pitiful life! I'll hear no more of them now!



But--
I told you to be silent.




The Queen dropped all pretence of humility. I see. So that's how this is to be.



She sighed and shook her head. I didn't want to do it this way. I wanted more time.



More time for what, you slippery woman? asked the King in disgust.



Slippery, am I? You have no idea whom you are dealing with. You have insulted me for the last time. But I am going to insult you for the first.



The Queen suddenly lunged forward.



She struck the King soundly across the face.



You dare strike your King? Do you not know with whom you are dealing? I am the head of the House of White! The Master of this kingdom! The one who gathered the peoples of this land in peace and harmony! I am no one to be trifled with!



The contemptuous look on the Queen's face showed plainly what she thought of the King.



At that very moment, Lord Argus made his allegiance painfully clear.
Oh! Argus darling, how delightful.



Now go wait over there like a good boy while the King and I have a grown-up talk.



Really? Have I meant so little to you as this? You do not show me the least modicum of respect! I am your husband and your King! You owe me more than this!



What I owe you? What of what you owe me?



If not for me, your subjects would not fear you! You lived in a cottage before I came along! I made you respectable! Without me you are more peasant than king!



But if that is what you wish, then without me you shall be! I want no more of you! You have always been too much trouble! This marriage is no more!



That is not for you to say! I am the King!



I think you'll find that I am in charge now.



You are a madwoman!



I have all the wealth and power I need. I simply don't need you anymore.

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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 14 26 May
« Reply #169 on: May 26, 2013, 08:12:19 PM »
Oooooo... the plot thickens...

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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 14 26 May
« Reply #170 on: May 26, 2013, 08:28:42 PM »
Come on, Queen! Put him in his place! Girl power!

Reclaim your birthright, King, for the sake of yourself and your daughter and your kingdom!
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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 14 26 May
« Reply #171 on: May 26, 2013, 09:04:40 PM »
That king is such an ingrate!  The Queen has been nothing but kind, gentle, understanding...no wait, that's Snow...



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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 14 26 May
« Reply #172 on: May 27, 2013, 12:58:48 AM »
Oooooo... the plot thickens...

Indeed! What could possibly happen next?

Come on, Queen! Put him in his place! Girl power!

Reclaim your birthright, King, for the sake of yourself and your daughter and your kingdom!

Ah ah ah, Azo-chan! Haha, yes, rally the King!

That king is such an ingrate!  The Queen has been nothing but kind, gentle, understanding...no wait, that's Snow...

Haha, right? But I always love it when villains justify themselves, and in their minds they're totally right. So I was glad I got to write some of that in.
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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 14 26 May
« Reply #173 on: May 27, 2013, 01:47:05 AM »
Of course, I don't mind waiting :D! Enjoying this so much and glad Snow will be a dynasty founder.

Argus giving flowers in the middle of the fight was hillarious!

Now, there should be a happily ever after with the queen out of the lives. But then no, then there would be no 'Snow White'!
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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 14 26 May
« Reply #174 on: May 27, 2013, 07:50:27 AM »
That was quite a fight! And Argus with the flowers too funny lol.

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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 14 26 May
« Reply #175 on: May 27, 2013, 11:10:18 AM »
That was quite a fight! And Argus with the flowers too funny lol.

Agreed. Great job on this update, Rosa. Had a great flow to it.

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« Reply #176 on: May 27, 2013, 11:26:39 AM »
That story was so emotianal but it was great

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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 14 26 May
« Reply #177 on: May 27, 2013, 06:31:59 PM »
Of course, I don't mind waiting :D! Enjoying this so much and glad Snow will be a dynasty founder.

Argus giving flowers in the middle of the fight was hillarious!

Now, there should be a happily ever after with the queen out of the lives. But then no, then there would be no 'Snow White'!

Okay, good. I was starting to worry that maybe I was making it too long. But as you've seen, a lot more happened than I planned. She was with Argus because she wished for it, and aside from cueing King to come home for the dramatic shot, everything else happened autonomously. The fight, the slap, the yelling, everything. Even the break-up. All of it. I just tried to keep up with the screenshots.

Yeah, I was surprised by his boldness there. That was a bit of an odd move. The King and Queen hadn't even broken up yet.
Ah, you mean, the Queen will go away and leave them alone to live happily ever after? Well, as you know, that is not going to happen. Snow's life is somewhat far from looking up.

That was quite a fight! And Argus with the flowers too funny lol.

All autonomous! Very interesting indeed. Especially when the Queen thought of money.

Agreed. Great job on this update, Rosa. Had a great flow to it.

Well, thank you very much. I try.

That story was so emotianal but it was great

Oh, yes. This story will probably cover every emotion I can think of. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 14 26 May
« Reply #178 on: July 03, 2013, 07:52:52 PM »
Wow. Just wow. I've been meaning to check out this story for the longest time and never quite got around to it. I am so happy that I made time for it last night. Since I read it all at once, there are far too many comments to post so I will just summarize.

1. Snow is ADORABLE, but you already knew that.

2. My heart broke when the King lost his true Queen, but you probably knew that too.

3. The StepmotherMonster is deliciously Evil, but I'm positive you knew that.

4. I will be eagerly awaiting the next update, but I don't care how long it takes for that to happen. (I mean, really, it's not like you're in the middle of another huge story or anything) ;)

5. I will be back for more, but I'm quite sure you expected that!

6. Awesome, awesome, awesome!
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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 14 26 May
« Reply #179 on: August 27, 2013, 05:55:10 PM »
Wow. Just wow. I've been meaning to check out this story for the longest time and never quite got around to it. I am so happy that I made time for it last night. Since I read it all at once, there are far too many comments to post so I will just summarize.

1. Snow is ADORABLE, but you already knew that.

2. My heart broke when the King lost his true Queen, but you probably knew that too.

3. The StepmotherMonster is deliciously Evil, but I'm positive you knew that.

4. I will be eagerly awaiting the next update, but I don't care how long it takes for that to happen. (I mean, really, it's not like you're in the middle of another huge story or anything) ;)

5. I will be back for more, but I'm quite sure you expected that!

6. Awesome, awesome, awesome!

Thank you for reading it. I'm sorry for abandoning it at the same time :P Forgive me.

1. Yes, she is :) For which I am grateful because made her as a YA for the Dynasty attempt first and this is her aged-down and you know, that doesn't always work out too well.

2. Yes, sad sad moment, but you know in stories the perfect characters always die. Dreadful thing.

3. Haha I'm glad you like her, I tried to put a different kind of Evil spin on her, in keeping with the 'fairest of them all' mindset, and I'm glad it's working out.

4. I'm glad you don't care because it's been over a month, and I didn't even respond to this comment (although I did read it when you posted it), bad Rosa!

5. Good! Thanks for your patience!

6. Thank you!

Okay everyone, thanks for reading, I'm sure you've wondered maybe once in your busy lives if I had just completely abandoned this or what. Well, I haven't. Here are the issues:

- The file is all messed up and I don't understand why. The household I saved with King, Evil Queen, Ellis, Snow, and Aurore seems to be bugged because when I try to place it in a new file the file just breaks down.

- I was waiting to post anything until I got Dragon Valley in case I wanted to swap some things out in better keeping with the theme.

- As you no doubt expected, my priorities have been the Callahans and The Bachelorette and they have been pure madness. On top of that I joined two interactive stories--Ben Oliver and The Mole--so I have been, heh, a tiny bit busy. And most of my Simming time has been consumed with my Island Escape--I started a pirate family when I got Island Paradise and that file has been incredibly absorbing, so I haven't even played anything else unless it was required by one of the interactive stories.

Sigh. It's good to get all that off my chest, finally. I owed you an apology and an explanation long ago, sorry for it being late.

Well, I have Dragon Valley now, so I'll have to look around and see if I need to replace anything. I'll try to find the pre-bug family as well, although it will need tweaking. As far as the actual Dynasty though, I probably (sorry) won't start it until I finish something else. Too much going on right now. Thank you for the patience and understanding. I've seen that the views are still going up, despite me not posting anything, so I hope you readers haven't been too terribly disappointed, and I hope this post doesn't excite you for no reason when you discover there's no story attached  :-\
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