Author Topic: The Tale of the House of White--Official Hiatus  (Read 71706 times)

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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 11 1/2 21 April
« Reply #120 on: April 26, 2013, 07:28:50 PM »
Yay!  Looking forward to it... I've realized I'm quite the... destructive Watcher... I tend to kinda look forward to finding new ways to make bad things happen XD  Then I feel horrible afterward XD

Hahaha. Your Empire of Evil must be very fun for you then. Yeah, wait until you see all the terrible stuff that happened here. Some of it even autonomous.

The evil witch's plan to prevent Snow from going out of the palace become a sucess. This seems like more evil plans are coming. Great story update.
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Oh, yes. That witch is full of plans.

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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 11 1/2 21 April
« Reply #121 on: April 27, 2013, 06:36:12 PM »
My friend wanted me to pass this message along: Snow is going to have to be a supermodel to top the Queen.

Now for what I wanted to ask. Do the King and Queen have names? If so, what are they?
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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 11 1/2 21 April
« Reply #122 on: April 27, 2013, 08:46:59 PM »
My friend wanted me to pass this message along: Snow is going to have to be a supermodel to top the Queen.

Now for what I wanted to ask. Do the King and Queen have names? If so, what are they?

I think we will all miss the Queen. Rosa, can she come back for flashbacks? Pretty Please?

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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 11 1/2 21 April
« Reply #123 on: April 27, 2013, 10:06:46 PM »
My friend wanted me to pass this message along: Snow is going to have to be a supermodel to top the Queen.

Now for what I wanted to ask. Do the King and Queen have names? If so, what are they?

Aww, thanks! But which Queen are you talking about? The old Queen or the Witch? I will tell you that when Snow grows up she looks very much like her mother. It's cool that your friend read my story too :) I wish my friends in RL would read my stories.

No, no one has names except for Snow and Ellis. I named them King, Queen, and Evil Queen. Partially to be in keeping with the vagueness of a traditional fairy tale, to emphasise that they are more archetypes than characters (the Queen especially), and because I couldn't think of names good enough for them, to really emphasise their characters. I could try to come up with some, if you really wanted me to, but I am comfortable calling them by their titles.

I think we will all miss the Queen. Rosa, can she come back for flashbacks? Pretty Please?

I have no flashbacks prepared, I'm sorry. She was a very sweet, loveable character, wasn't she? I was sorry she had to die so early in the story. Especially since she and the King wanted another baby  :'(


I'm sorry the next chapter is longer in coming than I planned! I took screenshots out of order, so I am trying to organise them so I don't miss anything. This is not the kind of story where I could really bring them back in if I miss them the first time.
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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 11 1/2 21 April
« Reply #124 on: April 27, 2013, 10:17:42 PM »
I'm sorry the next chapter is longer in coming than I planned! I took screenshots out of order, so I am trying to organise them so I don't miss anything. This is not the kind of story where I could really bring them back in if I miss them the first time.

Ooops... wrong Queen. I meant the evil one. (:

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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 11 1/2 21 April
« Reply #125 on: April 27, 2013, 10:37:03 PM »
Ooops... wrong Queen. I meant the evil one. (:

Hold on. You miss the one who's still alive and central to the story?

No! Sorry! I just saw the ever-important 'will' in there. That makes so much more sense. Well, I don't rightly know. I hadn't planned on it, but I'll see what I can do.
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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 11 1/2 21 April
« Reply #126 on: April 28, 2013, 02:47:02 PM »
Hold on. You miss the one who's still alive and central to the story?

No! Sorry! I just saw the ever-important 'will' in there. That makes so much more sense. Well, I don't rightly know. I hadn't planned on it, but I'll see what I can do.

Yes. I think I just phrased it terribly. I am quite sure that you get what I was trying to say, but just in case, here is what I meant.

When your dynasty has actually started, and Snow is living in a fresh new Evil-Queen-less town, I believe that all of us will miss seeing some of her, because she is such an interesting character to read about. I think several of us would appreciate if at some point in the immortal dynasty, the Queen could come back in Snow's dream or something. Just so we get a little opportunity to reminisce about the Back Story.

I hope that I have made my self clear, and I am ever so sorry for the confusion I caused.  :(



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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 11 1/2 21 April
« Reply #127 on: May 14, 2013, 12:45:48 PM »
Yes. I think I just phrased it terribly. I am quite sure that you get what I was trying to say, but just in case, here is what I meant.

When your dynasty has actually started, and Snow is living in a fresh new Evil-Queen-less town, I believe that all of us will miss seeing some of her, because she is such an interesting character to read about. I think several of us would appreciate if at some point in the immortal dynasty, the Queen could come back in Snow's dream or something. Just so we get a little opportunity to reminisce about the Back Story.

I hope that I have made my self clear, and I am ever so sorry for the confusion I caused.  :(

No worries. I understand now. Well, I don't know. I don't know what the Evil Queen is going to be doing while the Dynasty is going on. I'll give it some thought and see if I can come up with something, if that is something my readers really want.
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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 12 15 May
« Reply #128 on: May 15, 2013, 03:08:01 AM »
Chapter 12

Although she was not allowed to leave the house, Snow still managed to live a semi-normal childhood.

As she was not allowed to go out and learn with other children, and the Queen, citing enemies as ever, refused to get her a tutor, Ellis taught her to read and do her sums.



Ellis was wise beyond his station and made her a kind and gentle tutor.



Even her most earnest questions found an answer in him.



As she had when she was a toddler, she found comfort in her dearest fairy bear.



She found another escape, as well. Although she was confined by walls, her imagination was not.



Hear ye, hear ye!



I hereby free you, by royal decree!





Unfortunately for the young princess, she did not go unobserved.



She is mocking me! No, worse! She is realising her own royal destiny as rightful heir to the throne. What shall I do? What shall I do?



All too suddenly, the Queen became aware that she was ageing. Slowly, but surely. She was certain she could detect wrinkles in her once-perfect skin.



Nothing seemed to be the same as it once was.



She sat brooding at her vanity.



Then she spoke the words that so often had cheered her to the mirror in her bedchamber.
Mirror, mirror, on the wall: Who is the fairest of them all?
All across the land I seek, from tallest mount to deepest creek,
From fairy glen to dwarven mine, no one's beauty matches thine.




The queen was but little comforted. Surely, she remained the most beautiful in the land, but for how long? She must find some way to preserve her beauty. She sent for a painter of unsurpassed skill, who soon arrived at the castle.





The painter was immediately set to work painting portrait after portrait of the queen.





All this time, while the queen's attention was focused elsewhere and her energies otherwise occupied, the king's bewitchment was growing weaker, and his own native personality showed signs of re-asserting itself. One evening as the queen sat for yet another portrait, he stole out of the castle with Snow White to the garden, where his beloved first wife was buried. They mourned over her together.



My darling child, although I cannot often show it due to the curse upon me, I must have you know that I do love you, deeply. You are still my beloved daughter.
I love you too, Father!
the overcome princess cried.



It is so wonderful to be outside, Father. I miss the feeling so.
Yes, my dear. You have an inherent connection to the earth and nature, as did your blessed mother. My child, I must give to you a warning while I am still able. Beware your stepmother the queen. She is more dangerous than your innocent mind can comprehend.
I will, Father.


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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 12 15 May
« Reply #129 on: May 15, 2013, 12:51:58 PM »
Okay, I have to say the Snow is extremely cute! Especially when playing with the fairy bear.

I fear that she will soon be in grave danger, if she continues to age with this degree of adorableness . . .
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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 12 15 May
« Reply #130 on: May 15, 2013, 01:11:02 PM »
I see trouble for Show, I'm glad a part of the real King come out. Great update!

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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 12 15 May
« Reply #131 on: May 15, 2013, 06:07:10 PM »
Awww!  Snow is just adorable!  Beware the evil Queen indeed!

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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 12 15 May
« Reply #132 on: May 15, 2013, 09:03:58 PM »
Yay! New update! Snow is precious, and I am interested to see how you are going to have the story make her begin her immortal dynasty.

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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 12 15 May
« Reply #133 on: May 15, 2013, 09:45:59 PM »
Okay, I have to say the Snow is extremely cute! Especially when playing with the fairy bear.

I fear that she will soon be in grave danger, if she continues to age with this degree of adorableness . . .

She surely is. And you are very genre savvy, my friend. Her looks are her undoing! But not only her looks.

I see trouble for Show, I'm glad a part of the real King come out. Great update!

Yeah, his personality is so strongly Good that it takes constant upkeep from the witch to keep it submerged. And Snow's situation is only getting more dire.

Awww!  Snow is just adorable!  Beware the evil Queen indeed!

He has no idea. Even more, Snow has no idea. As the King said, she is too innocent to understand.

Yay! New update! Snow is precious, and I am interested to see how you are going to have the story make her begin her immortal dynasty.

I know, it's been a shamefully long time. Plus side, I organised all the screenshots so the others that follow will be easier.

That's the big mystery, isn't it? Hmmm!
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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 12 15 May
« Reply #134 on: May 16, 2013, 10:54:06 PM »
Now I may be seeing things.. But do I by any chance see the gorgeous bachelorette Marielle??? :D -fangirl moment- OMG that would be so awesome! Please tell me it's true??

 

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