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Re: The Tale of the House of White
« Reply #105 on: April 17, 2013, 11:30:43 AM »
I can't imagine why I didn't post Chapter Ten, but I just added it to the Moving Notice Post. Sorry about that   ::)
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Re: The Tale of the House of White
« Reply #106 on: April 17, 2013, 11:33:23 AM »
Yeah, thank you again for sharing your story Rosa :)

Glad that I'm not missing something. So, the reading will be completed as a whole. But, not like that Evil Witch do to the King :3
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Re: The Tale of the House of White
« Reply #107 on: April 17, 2013, 12:23:34 PM »
I could try to mask my secret, but I won't--it is a rabbit hole. I won't tell you which one though. Got to maintain some mystery!

I thought it looked remarkably like [censored] :).

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Re: The Tale of the House of White
« Reply #108 on: April 17, 2013, 01:28:49 PM »
Great story so far, Rosa.  I kinda like the Evil Queen, I hope that's not wrong.  I enjoy her "It's all about me!" attitude.
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Re: The Tale of the House of White
« Reply #109 on: April 17, 2013, 02:08:51 PM »
First thoughts:

1) Yey a fairy tale!

2) Yey Snow White! (Love Snow White the story and now your story)

3) Yey another Rosa story to book mark!

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Re: The Tale of the House of White
« Reply #110 on: April 17, 2013, 04:41:04 PM »
Yeah, thank you again for sharing your story Rosa :)

Glad that I'm not missing something. So, the reading will be completed as a whole. But, not like that Evil Witch do to the King :3

You're welcome. Thank you for pointing out I was missing a chapter! I think it must have made no sense to read that.

I thought it looked remarkably like [censored] :).

Aha, observant!

Great story so far, Rosa.  I kinda like the Evil Queen, I hope that's not wrong.  I enjoy her "It's all about me!" attitude.

Not at all! I'm glad to hear my characters are likeable, even the Evil ones. I like her quite a bit myself. I think I like her better than most Evil Queens in Snow White stories, maybe because I wrote her. She has such a fun combination of traits too :)

First thoughts:

1) Yey a fairy tale!

2) Yey Snow White! (Love Snow White the story and now your story)

3) Yey another Rosa story to book mark!

Love it 😀

I love fairy tales too! They're my favourite! And it's so sweet of you to say no. 3, I'm glad you like my stories :D I like your comments on them.
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Re: The Tale of the House of White
« Reply #111 on: April 18, 2013, 04:54:31 AM »
Yay a update! I can't wait to see Snow White  as a child. ;D



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Re: The Tale of the House of White
« Reply #112 on: April 21, 2013, 03:28:30 PM »
Love this!  I'm a huge Disney fan, as well as loving the medieval fairy tales.  Spectacular!  Poor Snow White!  I felt so bad for her when her mother passed away (just out of curiosity, how did you do that?)  Really enjoying this and can't wait to read more ^^

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Re: The Tale of the House of White
« Reply #113 on: April 21, 2013, 06:49:55 PM »
Yay a update! I can't wait to see Snow White  as a child. ;D

Coming soon! I had to hurry and finish my Building Contest entry, which delayed the update, but I'm going to work on it soon, promise. :)

Love this!  I'm a huge Disney fan, as well as loving the medieval fairy tales.  Spectacular!  Poor Snow White!  I felt so bad for her when her mother passed away (just out of curiosity, how did you do that?)  Really enjoying this and can't wait to read more ^^

Me too! :D Although Belle is my favourite. I wasn't overly fond of Snow White in the movie, but that's one more reason I wanted to write her, to make her someone I like more. Yeah, poor Snow's had a very rough life. First her mother dies young, then she gets a stepmother who is jealous of and hates her and enchanted her father to ignore her. It's all very sad. I can't wait until she has a happier story to report. I will PM you the details of my magnificent death scene :) 

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Re: The Tale of the House of White
« Reply #114 on: April 21, 2013, 08:43:07 PM »
Chapter Eleven and a Half

Hello, Stepmother. Thank you for the lovely party. It was so nice of all those people to come to see me.
(thinking) Ugh! Insolent child! Rubbing her attention in my face, as though it were not apparent enough already!




I was wondering, Stepmother, may I be permitted to go outside? I would so like to smell the fresh air and run with the wind.
(thinking) Must the child speak only in clichés?




I am sorry, dear Snow, but the outside world is too dangerous for you. As the heir to a great kingdom such as this one, you would be in constant danger of your life. You have too many enemies, child.



Yes, Stepmother.



There, there, child. You know I only desire your safety. I should be devastated if anything were to happen to you.
Of course, Stepmother. Thank you, Stepmother.




So remember, Snow--never, ever leave the castle! Do you understand?
Yes, Your Majesty.
There's a good girl. Run along now.





Author's Notes
I know this update is very short, I'm sorry about that. This just didn't fit with anything else I have planned, so I did it separately as a mini-update.
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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 11 1/2 21 April
« Reply #115 on: April 21, 2013, 09:04:51 PM »
So, did you already found the missing chapter, Rosa? I'll gladly to read that :3

The outfits are so fit for our Snow :3
I hope Step-Mother didn't do something nasty to her.
I hate if I see Snow suffer. But, if she suffer I hope that don't take a long time :D
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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 11 1/2 21 April
« Reply #116 on: April 21, 2013, 09:06:53 PM »
I actually enjoy the stepmother.  I don't mean to, I just do.  There's something intriguing to her conniving nature in that whole "it's a horrible train wreck but I can't look away" sort of morbid fascination.

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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 11 1/2 21 April
« Reply #117 on: April 21, 2013, 10:17:08 PM »
So, did you already found the missing chapter, Rosa? I'll gladly to read that :3

The outfits are so fit for our Snow :3
I hope Step-Mother didn't do something nasty to her.
I hate if I see Snow suffer. But, if she suffer I hope that don't take a long time :D

Yep, I found it and posted it right after you pointed it out. Thank you.

I'm glad you like it. It was harder than the toddler dress. If you know the story of Snow White, you know that nothing good will come of the Stepmother to her. She is suffering, but one can hope she will be happier soon.

I actually enjoy the stepmother.  I don't mean to, I just do.  There's something intriguing to her conniving nature in that whole "it's a horrible train wreck but I can't look away" sort of morbid fascination.

Well, you're not alone. I actually enjoy her very much. It's fun to play Evil characters sometimes. She was such fun to create and play, and just you wait to see what she does next! Ah, so much fun, and I only orchestrated part of it. But yes, my psychoanalysing friend, she is abusive and that's not to be condoned. Then again, she's fictional, so.
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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 11 1/2 21 April
« Reply #118 on: April 21, 2013, 10:22:02 PM »
Coming soon! I had to hurry and finish my Building Contest entry, which delayed the update, but I'm going to work on it soon, promise. :)

Me too! :D Although Belle is my favourite. I wasn't overly fond of Snow White in the movie, but that's one more reason I wanted to write her, to make her someone I like more. Yeah, poor Snow's had a very rough life. First her mother dies young, then she gets a stepmother who is jealous of and hates her and enchanted her father to ignore her. It's all very sad. I can't wait until she has a happier story to report. I will PM you the details of my magnificent death scene :) 



Yay!  Looking forward to it... I've realized I'm quite the... destructive Watcher... I tend to kinda look forward to finding new ways to make bad things happen XD  Then I feel horrible afterward XD

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Re: The Tale of the House of White--Chapter 11 1/2 21 April
« Reply #119 on: April 21, 2013, 11:02:07 PM »
The evil witch's plan to prevent Snow from going out of the palace become a sucess. This seems like more evil plans are coming. Great story update.
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