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Re: The Name's Oliver - Ben Oliver. Ch. 44: Beauty and the Thief, Part III
« Reply #390 on: March 02, 2013, 10:32:54 PM »
My pick would be Constance, but then I'm prejudiced. They're all lovely ladies. Poor Ben is going to be overwhelmed.
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Re: The Name's Oliver - Ben Oliver. Ch. 44: Beauty and the Thief, Part III
« Reply #391 on: March 02, 2013, 10:45:48 PM »
My pick would be Constance, but then I'm prejudiced.

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Re: The Name's Oliver - Ben Oliver. Ch. 44: Beauty and the Thief, Part III
« Reply #392 on: March 02, 2013, 10:58:52 PM »
 :D I'm so pleased you like Constance. I picked a girl I could relate to myself, being a bookworm and (shh!) a little neurotic and perfectionistic. I thought it would be easier to write someone I could relate to. I got really attached too, so I'm glad you like her like I do! I think everybody chose really well the ladies to represent their towns and did a good job doing the makeovers and writing the back-stories while capturing their personalities. I personally am rather attached to Julienne Knack as I love Twinbrook and since I've played her and know her rather well, I have to say Ausette did a great job capturing her ambitious, workaholic, flirty, snobby personality!

And Schipperke, you did a great job condensing the novel I wrote you for Constance ;) You definitely stayed true to the feeling of it, so thank you for making that effort. As far as Ben's reaction--trying to get to Constance's heart by using a book is probably the best way. But if he wants her to stick around, he should keep his ideas about "explaining any parts she doesn't understand" to himself! She would laugh him off in a heartbeat. The thought of Constance Shelley not understanding a book! 
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Re: The Name's Oliver - Ben Oliver. Ch. 44: Beauty and the Thief, Part III
« Reply #393 on: March 03, 2013, 07:00:48 AM »
Wow, I can understand now how Oliver would be so excited, with all of these lovely ladies. My personal favourite is Julienne, and I'm very curious about which one may be our thief.  ;)

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Re: The Name's Oliver - Ben Oliver. Ch. 44: Beauty and the Thief, Part III
« Reply #394 on: March 03, 2013, 08:30:37 AM »
This was a great unexpected update . I have a feeling that poor Ben just might have a difficult time focusing on his mission this time around . I'm sure he'll have a great time interviewing these lovely ladies . My personal favorite is also Julienne . You all did a great job on their make-overs and stories .  :)  Hope your mending well Schipperke .
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Re: The Name's Oliver - Ben Oliver. Ch. 44: Beauty and the Thief, Part III
« Reply #395 on: March 03, 2013, 01:49:59 PM »
I think poor Ben may be in over his head... Putting all of these lovely ladies aside, am I the only one who sees a potential love match between Ben & DeLuca?
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Re: The Name's Oliver - Ben Oliver. Ch. 44: Beauty and the Thief, Part III
« Reply #396 on: March 03, 2013, 01:52:24 PM »
As DeLuca already told Ben herself, she is happily married!
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Re: The Name's Oliver - Ben Oliver. Ch. 44: Beauty and the Thief, Part III
« Reply #397 on: March 03, 2013, 02:30:45 PM »
As much as I hate to say it, even happily married people can have their judgement clouded when they are placed in such intense living conditions. Just one "life or death" situation and everything could change....
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Re: The Name's Oliver - Ben Oliver. Ch. 44: Beauty and the Thief, Part III
« Reply #398 on: March 03, 2013, 03:53:20 PM »
I don't really have a favorite, but it is so funny that Ben want to buy a book lol. ;D

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Re: The Name's Oliver - Ben Oliver. Ch. 44: Beauty and the Thief, Part III
« Reply #399 on: March 03, 2013, 08:40:38 PM »
This is so exciting  ;D! I can't believe how well all the girls were presented. Schip, you've done a great job condensing the essence of Julienne from the all-over-the-place PM I sent you, and I'm so happy your wrist is healing and feeling better.

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Re: The Name's Oliver - Ben Oliver. Ch. 44: Beauty and the Thief, Part III
« Reply #400 on: March 06, 2013, 04:33:53 PM »
I wish I could operate the mouse for you!
Really nice update, I think that it's great you're stilling managing to give us updates despite your wacked out wrist! Also, should I get you a coffee? ;D
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Re: The Name's Oliver - Ben Oliver. Ch. 44: Beauty and the Thief, Part III
« Reply #401 on: March 06, 2013, 06:02:28 PM »
As far as pretty ladies go, I think Ben would probably do about anything for a pretty lady, whether it would be books, pretending to be sick or whatever the lady was into, lol.  He is such a character and Schipp, you are really making this story so interesting.  Heal fast, ok, haha. :)
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Re: The Name's Oliver - Ben Oliver. Ch. 44: Beauty and the Thief, Part III
« Reply #402 on: March 06, 2013, 06:39:39 PM »
I think poor Ben may be in over his head... Putting all of these lovely ladies aside, am I the only one who sees a potential love match between Ben & DeLuca?
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Re: The Name's Oliver - Ben Oliver. Ch. 44: Beauty and the Thief, Part III
« Reply #403 on: March 06, 2013, 07:54:47 PM »
I wish I could operate the mouse for you!

If only!   :D 

Thanks very much for the comments, everyone.  I'm glad Ben and his adventures haven't been forgotten.

I'm not having too much trouble typing at this point, but the cast makes right-handed mousing impossible, and it's slow and awkward with the left hand.  I've been working on collecting screenshots in hopes of being able to write the next update in a few days.  And the cast comes off at the end of next week, hooray!  I don't know what shape the wrist will be in at that point - probably quite weak, from what I've heard from other people.

Meantime, University has arrived.  Of course Ben is going to be my first student, but I have a dilemma and am looking for advice from the readers of this story.  As I understand it, he can earn two new trait slots through going to university, and I'm very undecided as to what traits to choose for him.  You may recall that his present traits are Good, Brave, Great Kisser, Flirty, and Commitment  Issues.  All of which suit him, in my opinion.  The question is, what two new traits would suit him?  I think he would probably like the new Irresistible trait, although I don't know much about it.  But I am completely stumped about what other trait would be best for him.  Any suggestions?
 
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Re: The Name's Oliver - Ben Oliver. Ch. 44: Beauty and the Thief, Part III
« Reply #404 on: March 06, 2013, 10:28:31 PM »
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