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Re: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1
« Reply #30 on: December 21, 2012, 07:10:34 AM »
That's an amazing structure.  It must have taken you hours to build.  Wow!  I really can't wait to see more of this world.
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Re: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1
« Reply #31 on: December 21, 2012, 07:19:41 AM »
That's an amazing structure.  It must have taken you hours to build.  Wow!  I really can't wait to see more of this world.

Thank you! It did indeed take almost a week. It was a back and forth thing as I worked on other things.

I really need to create some sims and story images but what can I say I like to build and write hah.

Ok so I know I wrote Nore was next but just one more character lol! I forgot about one more storyline I was going to discuss before going back to Nore :)

Chapter - Yonri

"Emperor Gaston is gone, may haps he has abandoned us."
"How dare you Rikarn!" Yonri exclaimed. He had never liked Geoffren Bal'Rikarn much.

Yonri Bal'Lanark had known Gaston since he was a lad. Gaston had appointed him Chairman of the Small Council, to deal in all matters of the Emperor and to be acting Emperor during times when Gaston himself was away from the capital of Dalmasra. Now the Small Council convened here in Yonkori, by order of the Chantry, to deal with this… matter.

"I suppose next you will blame my son Edrion for losing his majesty. Gaston would never abandon us. "
"Do not be ridiculous Yonri."
"Olliana, surely you must -"
"Do not forget yourself Yonri," Geoffren cut him off.
"Sorry… Your Majesty, surely you must see that Gaston would not do such a thing.

Olliana Bal'Neiscan was the eldest and only daughter of House Rikarn. Sister to Geoffren Bal'Rikarn who was now the Neyrn of House Rikarn, she had married Gaston before the coming, an arrangement brokered by her father. If her only child, Ashelia, is crowned Empress, she will become the dowager Empress.

"I … do not know Yonri, you knew my husband longer than I," Olliana replied.
"My Neyrn Chairman, please sit back down, this is not the time for arguments," Grand Chanter Onirias requested.

Yonri had stood without realising, anger overtaking him. He would not sit here and listen to Geoffren slander Gaston's name.

"One thing is certain," Geoffren began, "We cannot let matters remain as they stand."
"Yes, the Chantry is in agreement." Onirias nodded.
"Your Eminence, is there no word from the Judicars searching for His Majesty?" A young chanter asked Onirias.
"No Brother Jirard, not as of yet. As it stands we must decide what we are to do."
"There is but one choice, we must maintain order and crown Gaston's heir, Ashelia." Geoffren exclaimed.

Several of the Neyrns attending nodded in agreement.

"By Neisacan law, the title does go to his eldest child, male or female," Onirias seemed like he agreed as well.

"Surely you jest! Gaston has not been gone more than a fortnight. And I suppose you are to be Regent?" Yonri exclaimed.
"My brother would be a suitable candidate," Olliana began, "He is Ashelia's uncle after all."

Yonri was outnumbered. He looked around the Small Council, half of the Neyrns stood silent, the other half were in Rikarn's pocket he knew.

"Very well, it is decided, we will hold a coronation the week after next and crown Ashelia, first of her name, Empress of Neisacan, Queen of the First Men and Chosen of the Maker, Falhurah." Onirias effectively ended the meeting.

Yonri grabbed his cloak, a large amethyst clasp fastened to its shoulder. As he left, he saw a look of smug satisfaction on Geoffren's face. Yonri slammed the door on his way out.

When he returned to his chambers, he saw his son Edrion had been waiting for him.

"What news father?"
"The Small Council has decided to crown Ashelia."
"Surely you just, she is yet a babe."
"Geoffren means to take the Regency. Edrion, I need you and your sister to leave the castle and return back to House Lanark."
"But why father?"

There was a sudden knock at the door.
"Come in," Yonri answered.

It was the Chanter from before, Jirard was his name.
"What can we do for you Brother?"
"Your Grace, may we speak in private a moment?"
"Certainly, Edrion go look for your sister."

Next chapter - Nore, this time no joke!



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Re: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1
« Reply #32 on: December 21, 2012, 07:50:19 AM »
The building is beyond awesome! The more I read your story, the more I understand lol.
It better be Nore next time! :P

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Re: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1
« Reply #33 on: December 21, 2012, 08:14:49 AM »
The building is beyond awesome! The more I read your story, the more I understand lol.
It better be Nore next time! :P

Thank you :D Yeah there are so many ideas in my head, I am just trying to reveal them in an interesting way, rather than all at once. So as you read more and more, there will be a huge fantasy story unfolding.

For you, a sneak peak into the next chapter haha :D Nothing too interesting though, saving that for the real chapter :)

Chapter - Nore

Nore looked down at the table and sighed. For having taken everything they owned, the Neisaci were terrible tippers. Before the coming he had been a lawyer. Now there was only one law and that was the royal law.

The two Neisaci were the restaurant's only customers that afternoon, and now that they left, Nore was staring at an empty hall. He fell back onto a barstool and took off his vest. His mind wandered to Will. Nore wondered what he was doing, where he was, if he was smiling that cheeky grin of his. Nore had to believe he was, or he would not be able to get out of bed in the morning.

The bell above the door rang. Nore had to smile despite himself, Krisnof was one of his favourite customers.

"Krisnof! What can I get for you today?"
"Just a tea, Nore."
"Warm tea, not too hot with milk, coming right up," Nore smiled.

Nore liked Krisnof, despite the fact that he was a Neisaci. He was a kind old man, came into the restaurant almost every day and ordered the same thing. Tea first and then some biscuits and a turkey sandwich with a side of soup. He always seemed to come in when no one else was around and told Nore stories of his youth. Nore was not certain he believed all of them, but liked hearing them anyway.

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Re: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1
« Reply #34 on: December 21, 2012, 08:52:24 AM »
You are a meanie! Is that all I get? :P

Did you play the Sims Medieval? Your story make me itch to play it again.

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Re: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1
« Reply #35 on: December 21, 2012, 11:38:19 AM »
The castle looks amazing I certainly would love to live there.

Is there any possibility of you putting it on the swap shop?

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Re: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1
« Reply #36 on: December 21, 2012, 03:42:44 PM »
You are a meanie! Is that all I get? :P

Did you play the Sims Medieval? Your story make me itch to play it again.

I did play Sims Medieval haha, but alas there was no building in it :( Which is definitely my favourite thing to do, you might notice haha. I did like the quests though, that was fun :D And no, of course that is not all you get! lol, I am finishing the Nore chapter soon, I think you guys will really like it :D


The castle looks amazing I certainly would love to live there.

Is there any possibility of you putting it on the swap shop?

Thank you :) I was not intending to, everything was going to be included in the final world, but I certainly can :) It is not done being furnished yet, would you like me to upload it anyway or finish the furnishing :) Cheers!



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Re: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1
« Reply #37 on: December 21, 2012, 06:09:18 PM »
So here it is, the chapter you all are waiting for :D (kidding haha, I am guessing that is actually Will's chapter <.<)

Chapter - Nore

Nore looked down at the table and sighed. For having taken everything they owned, the Neisaci were terrible tippers. Before the coming he had been a lawyer. Now there was only one law and that was the royal law.

The two Neisaci were the restaurant's only customers that Tuesday afternoon, and now that they left, Nore was staring at an empty hall. He fell back onto a barstool and took off his vest. His mind wandered to Will. Nore wondered what he was doing, where he was, if he was smiling that cheeky grin of his. Nore had to believe he was, or he would not be able to get out of bed in the morning.

The bell above the door rang. Nore had to smile despite himself, Krisnof was one of his favourite customers.

"Krisnof! What can I get for you today?"
"Just a tea, Nore."
"Warm tea, not too hot with milk, coming right up," Nore smiled.

Nore liked Krisnof, despite the fact that he was a Neisaci. He was a kind old man, came into the restaurant almost every day and ordered the same thing. Tea first and then some biscuits and a turkey sandwich with a side of soup. He always seemed to come in when no one else was around and told Nore stories of his youth. Nore was not certain he believed all of them, but liked hearing them anyway.

"You know, when I was a boy, I used to wander around the forests by myself. One time, I saw a llama as big as a house I did. It looked down at me and told me to sleep. So of course I did, right there in the forest."

Nore chuckled, "And what happened to this llama?"

The rest of the day was bland. Nore watched the clock tick away. Neisaci and Simkis came and went, thought usually not at the same time. If they did they sat at other ends of the room. Finally night fell. Nore closed up. He shut the door and took out a giant silver key, nudging it into the ancient lock. Two clicks and he knew it was locked. He began to walk home, back to Boulevard Etoile.

Nore pulled his cloak in tighter, it was a cold Night. He looked towards the city and saw Tower Yonkori over the walls. It was lit a beautiful teal colour this night. He almost yearned to go into the city and see it up close, but thought better of it. Only the Neisaci went there.

As he walked along the edges of Jenforn Forest, Nore's mind went back to Will.

- Where are you Will? Come back to us. -

Thoughts of Will though cleared suddenly as he heard something from inside the forest. Nore turned to look and saw four men and a women just beyond the tree line. He didn't like what he was seeing. Nore edged closer into the forest, quiet as can be. He ducked behind a giant oak when he was near enough to hear clearly.

"Look at that Bracelet Neal, she ain't no ordinary girl, that thing is pure diamond."

"Here just take it please," the woman took off the bracelet and threw it on the ground, "and let me go, I beg you."

"What do you think Burt, she might be worth a shiny ransom."

"I think you might be right Neal, maybe we should take her back to the boss."

The woman looked terrified, her eyes darting nervously from one man to the next, searching for some compassion but seeing none.

Four men, two with their back turned to him, Nore's mind was racing. Two were armed with swords, another with a club and the last with a crossbow. He would need to deal with the crossbow first. Nore checked his coat and yanked out a quill. So much for weapons on his end. He was unarmed but he knew what he had to do.

Nore slipped from the trees and darted towards the first man, slamming an open hand against the back of his head. The man gave out a faint cry as he fell to the ground, unconscious. The others look startled but quickly regained themselves and drew their weapons. Two came at him at once, Nore ducked a wide swing and dashed in between the two men. The other man lunged for him, but Nore sidestepped and turned, jamming a fist into the man's back. The man fell to his knees. Another raised his sword high and brought it down, Nore caught the handle and brought a first down on the man's hands, loosing the sword from his grip.

He felt a sudden burst of pain from his sides, the third man had managed to club him. Nore coughed and fell back against a tree, leaning heavily on it. The second man had picked up his sword and ran towards Nore now. Nore stepped out of the way and the man's sword stuck in the tree.

Nore took the opportunity to slam a fist into the man's stomach followed by a knee to the face as the man kneeled over. Nore turned quickly around in time to see the remaining two men dashing for him together. They were coming at different angles, so Nore ran straight at them, sliding as he neared, tripping one of the two. He flipped back to his feet grabbing a sword as he did, just in time to block a side swing. He parried, knocking the man's sword from his hand. Nore flipped his own sword in his hand, holding onto the steel. He swung the grip of the sword at the man's face knocking him out cold.

Nore looked around quickly, the four men were all down. He knelt down and checked each man's pulse, to make certain they were all yet breathing before turning his attention to the woman who was standing in the moon shadow of a large tree.

She tentatively stepped out into the clearing and Nore could see her face now. Long golden hair fell out of a beige hat in tumbles and quiet purple eyes shone brilliantly in the moonlight. Her left hand was clutching her bracelet, trembling slightly but her eyes were fixed on Nore, gaze unwavering.

Nore took his fingers off the last man's wrist and stood to meet her eyes. "Are you okay?"

Next chapter - Rybelle - Judicar Magus

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Re: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1
« Reply #38 on: December 23, 2012, 01:40:15 AM »
Nore was quite the hero! I'm glad he rescued the woman.
Great chapter and excellent writing! :)

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Re: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1
« Reply #39 on: December 23, 2012, 03:06:25 AM »
Nore was quite the hero! I'm glad he rescued the woman.
Great chapter and excellent writing! :)

The woman haha, hmmmmm, I thought you might know who it is <.< hehe, go back and read the character descriptions, I think I maybe was a bit too ... secretive about the most exciting thing in the Nore chapter :D

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« Reply #40 on: December 23, 2012, 03:18:29 AM »
Golden hair! Lol I'm a bit slow early in the morning. :P
is Effina? And Nore have blond hair, now you have me thinking. ;)

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« Reply #41 on: December 23, 2012, 03:24:04 AM »
Golden hair! Lol I'm a bit slow early in the morning. :P
is Effina? And Nore have blond hair, now you have me thinking. ;)

haha yes! thinking is good :D you might be right mwahaha

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« Reply #42 on: December 23, 2012, 03:33:29 AM »
Lol! See you are a meanie! :P

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« Reply #43 on: December 23, 2012, 03:41:14 AM »
Lol! See you are a meanie! :P

haha okay, I will give you a hint, zorina has brown hair and brown eyes, nore has blond hair and blues eyes, will has black hair and teal eyes, effina has golden hair and purple eyes, edrion has orange hair and purple eyes, mattheiu has silver hair and blue eyes. Now it should be clear :D

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« Reply #44 on: December 24, 2012, 09:59:48 PM »
Chapter - Rybelle

Rybelle fastened the wolf's head clasp of her cloak and then admired the white silk at length. The golden dire wolf insignia of the Judicars was embroidered on the back.

Rybelle was what you might call gifted. Since she was a girl, her magic had been exceptional, oft times she would be educating her teachers than the other way around. At two and twenty, Rybelle had just become the youngest Judicar in the Imperium. She smiled to herself and walked out the castle doors. Guards and servants alike moved out of her way as she walked by, her brilliant white cloak shining in the sunlight.

As she neared the castle entrance, the guards on watch stood to attention.

"Magister Rybelle, nice to see you, do you have business in the city?"
"Yes," Rybelle lied, "I will return to the castle shortly."

Rybelle had no business in the Reserve, truth be told, she was looking to walk the streets in her new cloak. Rybelle had dreamt of joining the Judicars since she was practicing in the yard with wooden swords. She traced her fingers softly along the gemmed grip of her new sword, fondly remembering the barracks at her family home.

Rybelle moved purposefully as she walked along the river road. Most observers moved quickly out of their way. Those that did not, Rybelle gave a little nudge to the side with her mind. Basic magics like this she could do in her sleep.

She neared the city walls and decided that she was feeling so good today that she did not even mind the smell of Simki. She walked for a bit and took a seat at an outdoor table of a Natrium tavern. A short, skinny man hurriedly walked to her, looking quite nervous.

"Uh… Magister, welcome… uh, w-what can I get you?"

"Get me a glass of your finest wine and a croque-monsieur, and take care that it does not smell of this place."

"Y-yes right away."

The short man hurried off again.

Rybelle looked around as she waited. Ragged Simkis and Simki children ran amok. She normally never ventured to the outer city, but today she was feeling rather good. While she was here, she might as well have a little fun. She noticed a Simki man walking on the other side of the street carrying a large bag of vegetables, likely just coming from the market. Rybelle lifted a hand under her cloak and gently swished her wrist. The man lost his balance and fell over, the contents of his bag with him. Rybelle grinned, looking on as the man hurried to gather his belongings.

She looked around again and noticed a few Simki children kicking around what looked like a soccer ball, but the leather was so old and worn out that Rybelle could not tell. She grinned again as she thought of an idea and lifted her hand again.

"Here you are Magister," the short man interrupted.

Rybelle glared at him and the man stepped back a bit.

"I am no longer hungry," Rybelle courtly exclaimed and turned and left without another word.

Next chapter - Tir

 

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