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Re: In the bleak midwinter.
« Reply #1 on: November 26, 2012, 06:06:53 PM »
An end?


The graveyard was bleak just like the ache in her heart.She had nowhere left to run and nobody to run too. She was alone...

She was tired so very very tired.Perhaps if she just lay down for a while the sweet blessed release of sleep would take away the all consuming pain.

Grim had never taken the time to care about why those mortal ones did the things they did but he was slightly nonplused by the girl lying in the snow.For a fleeting moment he considered sparing her.But then common sense prevailed and he did what had to be done.

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Re: In the bleak midwinter. Chapter one an end?
« Reply #2 on: November 26, 2012, 06:10:34 PM »
That awkward moment when you can totally recognize Twinbrook's cemetery (or you can see Jeffrey Castor in the background, doing nothing),

Anyways, nice beginning. :D

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Re: In the bleak midwinter. Chapter one an end?
« Reply #3 on: November 26, 2012, 06:15:40 PM »
Yeah he totally ruined my she is all alone in the world thing I had going on. There was an hillarious moment as our young lady was dying Grim started throwing snowballs at Jeffrey.

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Re: In the bleak midwinter. Chapter one an end?
« Reply #4 on: November 26, 2012, 07:30:50 PM »
This sounds like a very UN-Ratchie story...I like it.  I can't wait to read more.

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Re: In the bleak midwinter. Chapter one an end?
« Reply #5 on: November 27, 2012, 06:09:45 AM »
Remember.


Louisa was in that state between dream and reality.As she struggled to regain consciousness she sensed rather then saw the ghostly figure in the rocking chair.With a gasp she lept to her feet memories of last nights dream flashing images into her mind. Had she really seen her own death,she shook her head in denial.

She sort refuge in her own reflection,yes there she was alive and well. It was just a silly dream a nightmare it wasn't real. It couldn't be real.

She recoiled in horror as her face in the mirror paled into ghostly form. It spoke just one word.
"Remember"

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Re: In the bleak midwinter. Chapter two Remember nov 27th
« Reply #6 on: November 27, 2012, 10:08:22 AM »
Hmm Hello?? Don't leave us hanging here!!  :P



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Re: In the bleak midwinter. Chapter two Remember nov 27th
« Reply #7 on: November 27, 2012, 02:28:46 PM »
I'm so hooked.  I don't know Twinbrook well, but I loved your intro.  Can't wait for more.
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Re: In the bleak midwinter. Chapter two Remember nov 27th
« Reply #8 on: November 27, 2012, 03:11:26 PM »
Trying to forget.


As Louisa ran from the house in horror a thought filled her mind,don't look back don't ever look back.But yet for some inexplicable reason she turned and looked. The ghost,her ghost was in the window,then the word echoed throughout her body"remember"

Remember,remember what she thought as unbidden the image of a kiss came to her.She felt drawn to the place where he had first kissed her.She ran to a place that she could not recollect but knew deep in her heart was home. The place she fell in love.

The place he broke her heart. Pushing the memory away into a dark corner of her mind she wandered aimlessly through Twinbrook.It hurt to remember she didn't want to remember.

At long last she found herself at the park as she inhaled the scent of the wild daisy she heard the childish voice raised in song."A ring a ring a rosies a pocket full of posies"

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Re: In the bleak midwinter. Chapter three trying to forget.New Nov 27th
« Reply #9 on: November 27, 2012, 04:21:44 PM »
Oh my! Please don't leave me hanging! I love this so far, ratchie.

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Re: In the bleak midwinter. Chapter three trying to forget.New Nov 27th
« Reply #10 on: November 27, 2012, 05:14:55 PM »
Oh my! Please don't leave me hanging! I love this so far, ratchie.

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Re: In the bleak midwinter. Chapter three trying to forget.New Nov 27th
« Reply #11 on: November 28, 2012, 04:21:31 AM »
Awesome story! I wonder who is the man that broke her heart?

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Re: In the bleak midwinter. Chapter three trying to forget.New Nov 27th
« Reply #12 on: November 28, 2012, 02:55:17 PM »
Etched in stone.


Ring a ring a rosies a pocket full of posies Louisa spun around as the sweet baby voice filled the air. Atishoo atishoo we all fall down. heart beating wildly Louisa ran from the old nursery.

To her shock and horror the ghost child was there too.
Ashes in the water ashes in the sea sang the ghost child.
Please pulls me up with one two three intoned the ghost woman sat in the armchair. Louisa screamed and stumbled towards the door. She needed to escape to get away from the terror that was in her home.

Please keep away from me she begged her eyes wet with tears. The ghost looked at her the blank staring eyes seeming to look deep inside her tortured soul.
"Go"the ghost stated pointing.
"Where I don't understand"
"The place of the dead"
With mounting horror Louisa comprehended what the ghoul was asking of her and she quaked in fear and dread.But with the fear came the certainty that she had to do as she was asked.

Louisa raised her hands to her eyes as the tears swelled from her eyes.But even half blinded by tears she could still see the words etched in the cold stone of death.

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Re: In the bleak midwinter. Chapter four Etched in stone(new Nov 28th)
« Reply #13 on: November 28, 2012, 06:01:58 PM »
Wish I could read Simlish.  Hanging out for the next chapter.
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Re: In the bleak midwinter. Chapter four Etched in stone(new Nov 28th)
« Reply #14 on: November 28, 2012, 08:37:13 PM »
Great ghost story -- why are ghost children so scary?
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