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Not-So Lucky Palms -- Chapter 1
« on: October 27, 2012, 11:14:58 AM »
((Hello. I'm sorta taking a break from my decadynasty, and read many stories lately. It inspired me to write this. Enjoy.  :D))

What if he thinks I'm not attractive? What if he thinks I'm fat? What if-

"Ms. Sparks, can you please solve the equation?"

"W-What?"

Laughter.

"I said: Can you please solve this equation?"

"Umm...Sorry Ms. Price, but I don't know what methods to use."

"We just reviewed all the methods."

More laughter.

"Umm....Um..."

"Never mind Ms. Sparks, just don't come running to me when you fail your exam."

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"Were you thinking about Sahan again?" Abrielle asked.

"Yes." I answered meekly.

Abrielle stabbed her mashed potatoes with her fork. "Girl, you got to stop thinking about him! Your only gonna humiliate yourself."

"I can't Abrielle. I can't stop thinking about him. I don't know what to do."

"If you like him so much, why don't you just tell him?"

"What?"

Abrielle mocked Ms. Price's voice. "I said: If you like him so much, why don't you tell him?"

"I can't do that. What if he says he doesn't like me?"

"Stop saying 'what if'. Just tell him and you'll find out."

I sighed. "Alright. I guess I'll do that."

Abrielle patted me on the back. "Your making the right choice Piper. Tell me how it works out tomorrow in 3rd period."

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Yep, that's me! The one, the only, Piper Sparks. You can probably guess that Sahan is my crush and Abrielle is my best friend. I know, it's obvious.



That's my house. Big, isn't it? My dad makes quite a large amount of money.



Speaking of Dad, where is he?



Ah, there he is.



He's outside. Ignoring me as usual. Seriously dad, Could you at least say a 'Hi Piper' or a 'How was school Piper?'
Then I remembered. I had to tell Sahan that I liked him! I quickly made a plan: I would invite him over, and tell him that I like him. What could go wrong?



I made my way up to my room. When I got there, I ran to the mirror to evaluate my face. Oh dear. I wear too much makeup. I quickly took a bottle of makeup remover and splashed it all over my face. That's taken care of. Next, I looked at my hair. Not bad, but how can it be..........cuter?



Pigtails to the rescue! Next, I looked around my room. My eyes fell on my Special Immortal Dynasty poster. The poster showed Christopher Steel (Played by Matthew Hamming) kissing an immortal dynasty founder (Played by Emmy Starr). That would have to go. I didn't want Sahan to think I watch cheesy romantic films! I tore the poster apart, and stuffed it in the trash can. Now what more is there? Oh! My eyes fell on my Mark, my teddy bear. Sahan will think I am very childish if I leave it out. But I have owned that bear since I was 4. I couldn't throw it away. Instead, I hid Mark in my closet. There! All done! This room is clean! Now to clean the other rooms.............

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"Hello, this is Piper Sparks. Can I speak to Sahan? Okay, thank you."

.........

"Hi Sahan! I was wondering if you want to hang up-I MEAN OUT!"

"Okay. Uh....Sure Ethan can come too. I hung up.

Ethan was Sahan's best friend, and a good friend of mine. Maybe I can make him occupied with something and then tell Sahan...

The doorbell rang. I ran and answered the door. There on the front lawn, was Ethan.


 
"Hi Ethan! Is Sahan with you?"

"Uh..No. He'll be here in a little bit. Anyway, I haven't seen you in a long time." He pulled me into a hug.



Awkward!

I pulled apart the first chance I got. He was about to say something when...



Sahan showed up!

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Re: Not-So Lucky Palms -- Chapter 1
« Reply #1 on: October 27, 2012, 03:09:17 PM »
Great start! I'm looking forward to read more. :)



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Re: Not-So Lucky Palms -- Chapter 1
« Reply #2 on: October 27, 2012, 03:58:42 PM »
Wow, this is defiantly going to be a good story.

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Re: Not-So Lucky Palms -- Chapter 1
« Reply #3 on: October 27, 2012, 06:28:03 PM »
Thanks for your wonderful comments Anna and Louise!  ;D

Unfortunately, updates will be slow due to writer's block.... :(

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Re: Not-So Lucky Palms -- Chapter 1
« Reply #4 on: November 27, 2012, 02:24:31 PM »
Unfortunately, updates will be slow due to writer's block.... :(

No problem kiddo, whenever you're ready, I'd certainly like to hear more.
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Re: Not-So Lucky Palms -- Chapter 1
« Reply #5 on: November 27, 2012, 02:48:21 PM »
Ooh, I like already. :)

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Re: Not-So Lucky Palms -- Chapter 1
« Reply #6 on: December 05, 2012, 05:04:56 AM »
talk about wrong time...

Sahan will get the wrong idea, isn't it?

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Re: Not-So Lucky Palms -- Chapter 1
« Reply #7 on: June 09, 2013, 10:47:53 PM »
I just read through your story and I love it! I hope you will update.:)
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Re: Not-So Lucky Palms -- Chapter 1
« Reply #8 on: September 10, 2014, 09:17:44 PM »
I'm moving this story to the Graveyard due to inactivity. The author can revive it at any time by contacting a moderator.
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