I have to say, I just love all the Doctor Who connections here, as you'll see from this next bit (and you should know I wrote them all at the same time!)
Nice Marjorie moment in there with brushing teeth becoming so very much larger than life :=) She can be a doctor and fight for good. I know a Doctor who does that all the time ;=)
Yeah, she was getting very agitated about it, so I figured I'd better adjust the dialogue to suit. I've realised through my extensive studies on the subject that there are a rather limited number of pictures that pop up when the speaker is seated, which makes for some rather hilarious moments with Marjorie especially. Baha, clever
It seems like an excellent opportunity for Hazel. Visit new places, save the world, and go home in time for tea. 
Exactly! Haha. Well, actually, if she returns the same day, you'll see it's a bit dark, I think it's rather after teatime, she'll have to return in time for a late supper instead
But that just doesn't have the same ring to it at all!
And they have a TARDIS, remember?
Hahaha again, the linking in, you are all too clever for me! Wait until you see this!
0.0 Oh my! Hazel's the new companion!
Now that's a bit closer, I think, but again--just keep a sharp eye and decided for yourselves
Chapter Sixty: GoodbyesHazel: Good-bye, Mother.
Marjorie: Oh, my sweet girl.
Marjorie: Now, you take care of yourself, you hear? Don't forget to--
Hazel: Brush my teeth, I know, I know.
Marjorie: Well, just a quick one then.
Hazel: Ahh!
Hazel: Don't worry, Mother, I'll work hard.
Marjorie: I'm not worried about that! See that you take some time to have fun, too.
Hazel: (laughing) I'll try.
Zack: I can't believe my baby girl is already leaving me.
Hazel (muffled): It's only temporary!
Zack: Well, be a good girl--do what the Watcher tells you--
Zack: You're a smart girl, and we're proud of you.
Zack: Now, you may have to exercise, but just put a good face on it!
Hazel (giggling): Okay, Daddy.
Zack: Let me hug you one more time . . .
Hazel: I'm coming back, you know!
Zack: (sighs)
Hazel: Mr Payne? I'm ready.
Mr Payne: Out front we go, then!
Hazel: This is your vehicle? Isn't that our LLAMA?
Mr Payne: Very similar, but this is actually my TA--LLAMA.
Hazel: TALLAMA?
Mr Payne: No, no, it's just a LLAMA, same as yours.
Mr Payne: Now, no matter what happens, remember that I will protect you.
Mr Payne: Follow me and we'll be off!
Hazel: Are you sure there's enough space? I don't think they're meant for two--
Hazel: Oh my! It's bigger than I expected on the inside!
