The Aurora Immortal Dynasty - Chapter 216: Alone at last

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Agnes Cecilia "Cia" is now in the SwapShop.

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Elise Aurora is now in the SwapShop.

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Frida Aurora is now in the SwapShop.

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Julia Aurora is now in the SwapShop.

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You can now download Greta and Beata.

[bubbles]

Thanks for starting to put everything up for download. I'm sure many if us will love playing with them (That sounds like we're going to pop them in a 4 year olds dolls house!).

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I'm starting to work on the house but it is slow going. I'm going to recolor everything to make sure it has no CC patterns.

[bubbles]

I'm starting to work on the house but it is slow going. I'm going to recolor everything to make sure it has no CC patterns.

Thanks! I look forward to the house the most.

[olivia71295]

This was a great story; I loved reading it. Can I say one thing? I will tell you if you say you are ok with constructive criticism.

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This was a great story; I loved reading it. Can I say one thing? I will tell you if you say you are ok with constructive criticism.

Of course yu can. This was my first story so I just wrote it as I came along.

[olivia71295]

Of course yu can. This was my first story so I just wrote it as I came along.

Thanks, I didn't want to offend you. You need to reread what you write before you post it. As seen in my quote, you left the 'o'er out of 'you.' Having mistakes like this can throw off readers who would have read your story.

I admit, I don't always have good grammar, but I try to fix it when I see a mistake.

[Snufflesxx]

I do that a lot, too. It's very common to make typos when you're writing quickly (or even when you're not!). Your mind can often play tricks on you and if your mind tells you that you've written it correctly, you just see it that way 

[saltpastillen]

Thanks, I didn't want to offend you. You need to reread what you write before you post it. As seen in my quote, you left the 'o'er out of 'you.' Having mistakes like this can throw off readers who would have read your story.

I admit, I don't always have good grammar, but I try to fix it when I see a mistake.

Thanks.
I have tried to edit the posts but I know I make a lot of spelling mistakes. But sometimes it is hard to see the errors in your own texts. I haven't read this in a while, maybe I can notice more things next time I go through it.

[olivia71295]

Thanks.
I have tried to edit the posts but I know I make a lot of spelling mistakes. But sometimes it is hard to see the errors in your own texts. I haven't read this in a while, maybe I can notice more things next time I go through it.

You must likely will.

[SimBlip]

Hahaha! The odd spelling mistake, or not... your story is one of the most riveting on this forum.
I noticed a few, but it never distracted from your wonderful portrayal of a very unique family.
You wrote it in record time too. Remember me asking you what you have for breakfast?