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Re: Helping Households-The Beginning (Chapter 4 - August 29)
« Reply #15 on: September 01, 2012, 02:37:01 AM »
Author's Note: While reading through the final chapters of the Prologue (yes this is all the prologue) I've realized the next two are very short. I apologize or this in advance but the final chapter (Chapter 7) is regular sized. Also, thanks to everyone for reading because so far I've gotten 100 views per chapter. Thanks!
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Re: Helping Households-The Beginning (Chapter 4 - August 29)
« Reply #16 on: September 01, 2012, 01:11:04 PM »
Wow this is just the prologue?!? Not complaining though, I really like this story. Congrats on all the views!



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Re: Helping Households-The Beginning (Chapter 5 - September 2)
« Reply #17 on: September 02, 2012, 01:15:32 AM »
The Beginning
Chapter 5: Ice and Fire
We were the first to the military base, but someone had already been here. The guards were all frozen in large blocks of ice.

Something was wrong, Cam had described the situation as a fireball, not someone with the ability to freeze. Maybe we should have researched Jack Spareow all those years ago. We walked around to the back. The place was a mess. Ice everywhere.  We all looked over to the bomb shed. A blue man was walking in, a blue man who Cam straight away knew was Jack.

Cam teleported in and grabbed him. He teleported back out.
‘I thought you four would never come.’
‘What are you doing Jack?’
‘Destroying the city, and destroying you in the process. Is that a problem?’
‘No it’s okay to cause the city to go boom. Not.’
Kelsey sent a blast and hit Jack hard. He fell backwards but was quick to jump up. He breathed and Kelsey was as frozen as the guards.

Canary jumped and kicked Jack in the stomach. Cam teleported behind him and gave a quick punch before teleported again, repeating the process. Canary screeched a noise into his ear and Cam whacked him with a bit of ice on the floor. Jack retalitated. In seconds he made himself an axe made of ice and whacked Canary and Cam.

‘Alec, it’s just me and you now. It’s about time I got to face the leader.’
I grabbed a hay bale and threw it right at him. He dodged and ran into the bomb shed. I chased after him but he was already so close to the shelter. He was in the shed and was quickly out with a collapse. Cam came out and looked at him.

‘How on Earth did you do that? I thought he had knocked you out Cam.’
‘Who said I was Cam?’ He disappeared. I looked behind and saw Cam still on the floor. Then I blacked out and was soon awoken in a van.

‘Alec, Alec, wake up. Come on Alec wake up.’
‘Kelsey, what’s going on?’ My vision was hazy and Kelsey’s words echoed in my mind.
‘They’ve got us again. It’s the Trickstas.’
Canary and Cam were still knocked out and Kelsey looked half frozen. My head was spinning and my legs were aching. Things weren’t looking up for the Saviours.
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Re: Helping Households-The Beginning (Chapter 6 - September 9)
« Reply #18 on: September 08, 2012, 10:26:23 PM »
The Beginning
Chapter 6: The Trickstas, Again
The van was brightly coloured and made me dizzy. I tried to enter the mind of the driver but it was useless. The separation glass blocked any view of the driver and her passenger. I sent this into Alec’s head.
‘Alec slam the glass. Break it.’
He got up and smashed the glass. The car halted to a stop. I quickly sent my mind into the Trickstas’ and got this information.
Two new members were driving us. Swap can shape shift and Obsidian was someone as hard as Obsidian itself.
Obsidian was getting out of the car and opened the back doors of the van. He was angry.
‘What are you pesky Saviours doing? You owe me a lot of cash to fix that! We’re at the destination anyway. Get out and stay with her.’ He pointed to Swap, who changed into Obsidian.
Swap carried Canary and Cam as Obsidian lead Alec and I into a house. They brought us to a throne room. A woman was in the throne. Tele.

Then the Obsidians strapped us into chairs.
‘What do you want Tele? Why did you capture us?’
‘Oh Kelsey, always jumping to conclusions. I haven’t captured you, just borrowed you. First, look how beautiful my throne is. It’s just darling. This entire estate become so beautiful after the owners died in a ‘crash’. Those Goths were useless anyway, fighting with anyone left right and centre. Anyway ,I need you to get my two friends out of jail. I had less time than them and you can get them out. I might let you go then.’
‘How on earth did you get less time if you were the boss?’
‘I pleaded guilty while my friends said they weren’t guilty multiple times. So back to my question.’
‘What makes you think we’ll do that Tele?’
‘Because, if you don’t Canary and Cam will stay asleep forever.’
It was blackmail.

‘Nice dress.’ Cam’s voice was comforting. He had woken up and totally surprised Tele.
What Tele didn’t know was that Cam had woken up. He teleported behind Tele and knocked her to the ground. He grabbed the key to our straps and unlocked Alec, Canary and I.
Obsidian and Swap were quick to arrive but Alec easily took out Obsidian with their equal strength and Swap changed into Bang. She ran around Cam and I but Cam teleported in her path and soon she had fallen. I put strain into her mind and scanned Tele’s brain. By nightfall, 4 criminals were sent to jail, Jack, Tele, Swap and Obsidian. We all were back into the car before Canary finally woke up.
‘Great work team. The Saviours are back in action.’
‘You chose a good day for this all Alec. I couldn’t have stopped Jack by myself.’
‘The Trickstas probably would’ve gotten Kelsey and I.’
‘And I probably would be interrogation some sad criminal right now.’
‘But we are back in action. And when we get back to the Saviour Mansion, we will talk about why I wanted to bring the team back once we get.’

Author's Note: This is the penultimate prologue chapter and I have started to play the actual storyline. If you want some clues then the fact that I waited until I got Supernatural to start due to its T _ _ _. The next chapter will give the details but I have to rewrite it because after reading it I am not sure I like it.  :P
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Re: Helping Households-The Beginning (Chapter 6 - September 9)
« Reply #19 on: September 09, 2012, 12:39:14 PM »
Hmm, nope, don't get the hint  :P, that's ok I will wait and see!

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Re: Helping Households-The Beginning (Chapter 6 - September 9)
« Reply #20 on: September 10, 2012, 05:26:57 PM »
Hmm, nope, don't get the hint  :P, that's ok I will wait and see!
Well, here's another hint. M_ _ _L _ _ _ _  F_ _ _ _
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Re: Helping Households-The Beginning (Chapter 6 - September 9)
« Reply #21 on: September 10, 2012, 11:52:13 PM »
Moonlight Falls. ;D This looks pretty good!
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Re: Helping Households-The Beginning (Chapter 6 - September 9)
« Reply #22 on: September 13, 2012, 06:36:14 AM »
Moonlight Falls. ;D This looks pretty good!
Correct! Thank you!

I have already written the first chapter of the next part and it's much better than I expected. I should be posting the final prologue piece on Sunday and the first chapter next Wednesday.
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Re: Helping Households-The Beginning (Chapter 7 - September 16)
« Reply #23 on: September 16, 2012, 07:54:05 AM »
The Beginning
Chapter 7: Becoming Saviours
It took nearly no time to get to the mansion, at least that’s what it felt like. Maybe it was because everyone was tired after the long day and was resting their heads against the plush seats of the limousine. Maybe it was because no one spoke but listened intently to the whispers the driver made into his phone. Maybe it was because the driver didn’t stop at red lights and sped up at yellow lights. The Saviours were in a slim black limousine heading back to the mansion as no one wanted to drive. They left Alec’s car at the military base and no one wanted to go get it, not even Alec.
Kelsey was able to easily organise for this driver to pick us up. The driver was special. He had powers like them. He had great hearing and could hear if the car was being followed, shot or had a bomb in it. After the day’s events, the Saviours didn’t feel very safe but in the limousine, they all felt protected behind the bullet proof windows.
The car parked and one by one, the Saviours stood up and looked at the mansion. It had seen better days, that was for sure. The wooden panels were beginning to grow old and their colour was becoming murky. Alec opened the door using a wooden plank. The door was the strongest money could buy and the hidden steel could still only be opened by a key, or an incredibly strong person. Since only Alec’s manager had a key. Alec was an incredibly strong person.

The four walked in looking at all the surroundings. The place had most items missing. An entire room was missing all of its furniture to make way for a pool table, the dining room had the table moved and chairs taken to make room for some sleeping bags, there were many holes in walls but none on the perimeter walls, the bathroom had no privacy and the kitchen was missing many things a kitchen needs. The four didn’t even look upstairs, scared it would be worse than what they were seeing. It had only been a few years since Alec left the estate to his manager and he knew, his manager would be fired by the end of the day because he hadn’t maintained the property.


The group walked into the kitchen and sat on four stools. Once the four stools all had counters and a wall in the middle. Now they were a mess. The group sat in silence for a moment and Kelsey broke the silence with a question.
Kelsey: Do I have to sit here? I can see the toilet. It’s a bit disturbing, anyone want to swap?
No one replied.
Kelsey: Okay then.
Alec: I gathered you all here to bring the Saviours back. We were once the greatest team and we shall be that again.
Canary: Please don’t say we’ll be staying in this dump.
Alec: No no, don’t you worry. The mansion is actually going to be converted into the second art gallery the mayor always has wanted.
Cam, Canary and Kelsey: Awww.
Alec: I know we all love this place but it’s beyond repair. It’s going to be knocked down as soon as we leave town.
Canary: Leave town?

Alec: Yes, leave town. My vision is not to be superheroes anymore. We are getting older; our powers are beginning to weaken. Soon, we won’t be able to use them. My plan is something we can do, without powers. After a while at least.
Cam: You care to tell us what the plan is. Wait, is that my favourite one-of-a-kind painting on the floor in two pieces!
Alec turned around: Yes, I guess they won’t be using that in the new gallery.
Cam began to sob but soon stopped.
Alec: There are many Sims who are not in the right mind. They are confused about life and just going with the flow. They don’t get to become someone they’ve always wanted to be. They’re put into tough situations and can’t get out. That’s where we come in. We will change people’s lives. Using either animals or objects we can use Kelsey’s power to enter the mind of the animal and see what is happening and from there Kelsey can send thoughts into their minds.
Kelsey: So basically, we are making decisions for people?
Alec: Only the decisions where the person would choose the wrong choice. Like a job or a skill or how to behave in public.

Alec: We will change one household in each town, one town at a time.
Cam: Where will we start?
Alec: Moonlight Falls. I have arranged for ‘The Pilot’ to fly us to Moonlight Falls and ‘The Driver’ to drive us to the airport. Our visit is top secret though. I chose to begin in Moonlight Falls as we’ve never been before and we aren’t really known there.
A brief moment of silence is followed by Alec’s final remarks.
Alec: So is everyone in?

Kelsey: In

Canary: In

Cam: Well I guess if you all are!

Kelsey: SO when do we leave?
Alec: Tomorrow morning at 9 am. Be outside at 8 am, ‘The Driver’ will pick you up then.

Author’s Note: I definitely should of and could have updated earlier but I wasn’t happy with the update and actually rewrote it all. Hopefully everyone will enjoy this.
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Re: Helping Households-The Beginning (Chapter 7 - September 16)
« Reply #24 on: September 16, 2012, 06:48:40 PM »
Can't wait to see what they do in Moonlight Falls

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Re: Helping Households-The Beginning (Chapter 7 - September 16)
« Reply #25 on: September 17, 2012, 04:10:42 PM »
This story is very interesting! I liked the action and the manifestation of special powers.
It must be hard to be super heroes one day, and humble helpers the next.
I admire these four for their tenacity. I hope they will succeed in making the world a better place. :)

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Re: Helping Households-The Beginning (Chapter 7 - September 16)
« Reply #26 on: September 17, 2012, 05:24:58 PM »
Can't wait to see what they do in Moonlight Falls
Thanks Spork. The chapter is sitting in my computer waiting to be posted!
This story is very interesting! I liked the action and the manifestation of special powers.
It must be hard to be super heroes one day, and a humble helpers the next.
I admire these four for their tenacity. I hope they will succeed in making the world a better place. :)

Thanks SimBlip. I tried to give these guys as much as a backstory as possible. Originally the prologue was only 1 Chapter!
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Re: Helping Households-Household 1:Moonlight Falls (Chapter 1 - September 19)
« Reply #27 on: September 19, 2012, 03:20:29 AM »
Household 1: Moonlight Falls
Chapter 1: The Break of Day
As the full moon set another night ended in Moonlight Falls and the werewolves began to settle. The witches returned to their houses after hours of magical mischief and the vampires hide before the sun gets a chance to kill them. The fairies flutter their wings after a night of fun and the zombies roan hopelessly around town, not knowing what is happening. The ghosts end their haunting spree before the sun can illuminate their glow. The zombies struggle to stay up and become once again normal.

As the sun rose, a household of three best friends and 1 newbie began to awaken from their beds. They hadn’t been out all night and enjoyed a long rest. The fairy was the first to awaken. Chloe Great was full of happiness. Her blue wings reflected her favourite colour and she always had high hopes in the world.

Argus Brown was next to awaken after his nap on the couch. Despite having his own bed, sometimes he slept on the couch after his midnight madness. Argus’ fur was beginning to return to a normal state. His werewolf appearance freaked many but he didn’t mind.

Dante Morganthe had ended his feed early when the man he had spotted to suck blood from was a zombie. Zombie blood was not healthy. Dante’s skin was an unusual bright colour since he became a vampire and he found that to be the worst part. Dante finds the new way to sleep awesome.

The final member of the house was the owner, Violet Slymer. She was a master alchemist, so it was only fitting she died doing what she loved. The only reason anyone lived with her was that she was lonely and her two best friends and some random were to heal that lonely gap.

Little did they know that in 2 hours a lady with a dog would arrive and give Chloe the dog to own. Chloe was an animal lover so there was no way she would refuse. The household were to be the first the Saviours would help, but certainly not the last.


‘Did you get the dog in?
‘Of course I got the dog in! The real question is, will Kelsey be able to see through it?’
‘Hopefully. Besides, regular checks will be necessary to see if the dog can project thoughts and to be sure the household are treating him well. I assume that the fairy and the werewolf will be the main carers.’ Alec paused a few seconds and continued.
‘There’s something else we need to talk about. The reason Kelsey and Cam aren’t here is because they are dropping something off to the police station. Our full report on the Trickstas.’
‘Why do you police want to know about them?’
‘So they can find them. You see a week ago...’

One week after the break out the police still didn’t know where the Trickstas were. They were already miles away from the jail and currently waiting for their newest member. Tele had planned it all well. She knew that the Saviours would defeat them and put them in jail. It was the plan. Tele would make sure that she didn’t have handcuffs on when the police arrived by using her telepathic powers. She would just pretend to have some on her hands when really they were unlocked. They nearly fell off multiple times.
When in the jail she found out where Bang and Laser were and Swap pretended to be hurt. She fell onto the floor. The guards tried to lift her up but in seconds Tele had one guard unlock Obsidian and then Obsidian defeated the guards.
The three ran into the cell rooms before more guards could arrive. It was night so most prisoners were asleep. Bang shook Laser awake when he saw Swap, in a new form, picking the lock off of their shared cell.
It all had gone smoothly until the exit. They had planned to go out through the back door but security was increased since the last time Tele studied the area. Swap was the first to run through the door, but to everyone’s dismay, there were lasers blocking the door. They were invisible and when they touched Swap’s skin, she burned.
The whole group were horrified but nothing could be done. They quickly lifted eachother into a nearby air vent as a few guards deactivated the lasers to move Swaps corpse. They had escaped and had lost one life. But Tele had no care about these people. If they all died, she probably wouldn’t attend any funeral. They were her henchmen, and nothing more.
The new member ran through the door panting. She was always late but the whole team were still very angry.
??? : I’m sooo sorry I’m late! I just got held up.
Tele: Just sit and let’s begin.
It was the first words spoken since the rest of the team arrived. No one spoke.
Tele: It’s come to my attention that the Saviours have left Sunset Valley. They did it all very discretely. They wanted no one to know where they were going. The newspapers only said they were going on vacation. It’s a lie. Obsidian.
No one knew Obsidian’s real name. Obsidian was the name he used as a criminal. If anyone knew his name they would have power against him. Most of the group were the same. They played it safe but the new member wasn’t as bright. Obsidian was the oldest member of the group other than Tele herself and had become the second in charge.
???: Wait, so who are the Saviours? Are they those people we spoke about last time?
Bang: Yes.
Obsidian: When I arrived in town I saw the Saviours heading towards a gate at the airport. I stayed far but close enough to see the gate number. Gate 21, a one stop plane to Moonlight Falls.
Tele: Whatever they are doing in Moonlight Falls needs to be stopped. They need to be killed. The last attempt failed but this time we will succeed at what our friends could not.
Obsidian: So you *points at new member* are heading home. You are going to do some spying. Use that time to also practise your magic.
???:I’m going home for my first mission! I’m so excited! I can’t wait. What should I pack? Extra clothes would
Laser: Shut up. No one really cares.
Tele: Learn as much as you can. You will be leaving in a few days. We will join you after a short while. Session over.
Each member of the Trickstas left and two called cabs, one took the bus while Obsidian drove Tele to her hotel.
Obsidian: Are we sure about this new girl? I mean, she’s not really like one of us.
Tele: But no one will suspect her in Moonlight Falls. Don’t worry, she’s only temperaory.
Obsidian smiled and began to speed down the road and over the lake where he then hit a button on the dashboard. The car sunk into the lake but became a submarine. A small hotel was situated down there. Obsidian parked the car inside and went inside with Tele.

Author’s Note: Hope you all liked that! Chloe is a sim I made and was actually my first ever Supernatural creation. I will be uploading her and two other fairies later this week!
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Re: Helping Households-Household 1:Moonlight Falls (Chapter 1 - September 19)
« Reply #28 on: September 19, 2012, 06:52:57 AM »
It's great. You are entwining the different storylines - Saviours, Tricksters, households - beautifully.
And I like the idea of the dog being instrumental in the rescue action. :)

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Re: Helping Households-Household 1:Moonlight Falls (Chapter 1 - September 19)
« Reply #29 on: September 19, 2012, 04:22:31 PM »
I agree with SimBlip, I love the different perspectives.

 

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