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Re: Colt's Return: 09/15/2013 Evil Has Arrived Colt & Raven Meet (UPDATED)
« Reply #1410 on: September 15, 2013, 05:51:06 PM »
I love the picture of Morfran when he confronts Dakota. This is a few updates back, but I just had to mention it. His eyes are just blazing with fire. Was it zealous fire, I wonder? (Due to his creepy mother.)  And is he totally misguided on Providence and Vampires in general?

*deep breath*
I've enjoyed watching the Brooks going from strength to strength. They managed that - not because of inate evilness, but because of their love of, for and from their family. As a reader, I very much enjoyed the upward curve in their sorry story. And, maybe unfortunately so, I started to dream of them overcoming evil to truly become the forestanding citizens they now portray themelves to be.

*another deep breath*
After the last episodes, I am not so sure this will ever happen. As much as I liked the reunion between Morfran, Cross and Silver... I utterly despise his mother and her motives for destruction.

It takes courage to say these things, because I do not want to criticize any turn in a given story or its cross-over story. You must take my comment as a utterly personal view of what transpires here with the Brooks. I had high hopes of them shaking off the shackles of their past and be free... I hope Charity and the 'better guys in her team' will bring this ship to safety.

Fascinating and thought-provoking updates, Shannon! I love you even more for it all! :)

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Re: Colt's Return: 09/15/2013 Evil Has Arrived Colt & Raven Meet (UPDATED)
« Reply #1411 on: September 15, 2013, 06:05:58 PM »
I'm only about halfway through this story, but its awesome. I accidentally on purpose read the latest update and it's awesome to see how far your writing has come since the beginning! Great job. Alsooooo... might you PM me about where to get that outfit Raven is wearing? *innocently whistles*



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Re: Colt's Return: 09/15/2013 Evil Has Arrived Colt & Raven Meet (UPDATED)
« Reply #1412 on: September 15, 2013, 06:15:09 PM »
I'm only about halfway through this story, but its awesome. I accidentally on purpose read the latest update and it's awesome to see how far your writing has come since the beginning! Great job. Alsooooo... might you PM me about where to get that outfit Raven is wearing? *innocently whistles*

Thanks for much for reading and *blushes* Thank you for the compliment ..

That outfit is from the new Stuff Pack Movie Stuff, I just recolored it with a patterned from CASt, If you have the SP the recolor is in my studio, The boots are from Uni.. the recolor of those are also in my studio.. No CC there.. LOL NO secret place to whisper about..


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Re: Colt's Return: 09/15/2013 Evil Has Arrived Colt & Raven Meet (UPDATED)
« Reply #1413 on: September 15, 2013, 06:29:03 PM »
After the last episodes, I am not so sure this will ever happen. As much as I liked the reunion between Morfran, Cross and Silver... I utterly despise his mother and her motives for destruction.


No offense taken and trust me, there is no courage required. Interesting writing sometimes requires flawed characters, despite the tendency to create perfect ones.

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I perfectly realize that IRL Raven Goth is not a role model. But since this is the Sims...

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Re: Colt's Return: 09/15/2013 Evil Has Arrived Colt & Raven Meet (UPDATED)
« Reply #1414 on: September 15, 2013, 06:38:12 PM »
I'm taking that on board, Ilovedolls.
Thank you for your reply. :)

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Re: Colt's Return: 09/15/2013 Evil Has Arrived Colt & Raven Meet (UPDATED)
« Reply #1415 on: September 15, 2013, 06:48:29 PM »
I'm taking that on board, Ilovedolls.
Thank you for your reply. :)

You're welcome. Really, I'm not like Raven at all IRL. I don't bite ;D

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Re: Colt's Return: 09/15/2013 Evil Has Arrived Colt & Raven Meet (UPDATED)
« Reply #1416 on: September 15, 2013, 07:03:48 PM »
I love the picture of Morfran when he confronts Dakota. This is a few updates back, but I just had to mention it. His eyes are just blazing with fire. Was it zealous fire, I wonder? (Due to his creepy mother.)  And is he totally misguided on Providence and Vampires in general?

*deep breath*
I've enjoyed watching the Brooks going from strenght to strenght. They managed that - not because of inate evilness, but because of their love of, for and from their family. As a reader, I very much enjoyed the upward curve in their sorry story. And, maybe unfortunately so, I started to dream of them overcoming evil to truly become the forestanding citizens they now portray themelves to be.

*another deep breath*
After the last episodes, I am not so sure this will ever happen. As much as I liked the reunion between Morfran, Cross and Silver... I utterly despise his mother and her motives for destruction.

It takes courage to say these things, because I do not want to criticize any turn in a given story or its cross-over story. You must take my comment as a utterly personal view of what transpires here with the Brooks. I had high hopes of them shaking off the shackles of their past and be free... I hope Charity and the 'better guys in her team' will bring this ship to safety.

Fascinating and thought-provoking updates, Shannon! I love you even more for it all! :)

Well remember, Raven can control whats hers when it suits her. Colts battle is his, she doesn't want anything to do with his parents. He has a mutual hate for vamps as Raven, but he will move heaven and earth for Charity. He's loyalty is to his father, he would do nothing to hurt his families outcome. I'll kill him first!! LOL



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Re: Colt's Return: 09/16/2013 Raven & Charity Get to Know Each Other (UPDATED)
« Reply #1417 on: September 16, 2013, 06:31:41 PM »
Now that Rae Rae and Pookey have their "Business" taken care of, He and Morfran had to leave for work, which left Charity to get to know Raven all on her own..
Colt had Chair brought in special just for his Queen...

Raven: So,  your the one that has Stolen my Morfy's heart are you?
Charity: I guess so, I do love him so much, Mrs. Goth
Raven: Please, call me Raven..


Raven: Let's cut the crap, what's with this vampire creep? Is my son not good enough for you?
Charity: NO, it's not that at all, Thank you very much! I've know Dakota all not of my life. We grew up together, and dated all thru school. I've never felt that way for anyone else until Morfran came along. I also have my grandfather's dynasty to think about.
Raven: Yes, that Watcher forsaken Dynasty that put us back into each others lives! Well if you don't throw caution to the wind my little gypsy, your gonna lose out on a good man. Morfran, he might have Goth blood, EVIL blood running thru his veins, but he also has Brooks blood, and even though Colt is evil also, he does have a heart,*I need to go puke*



Charity: Can I be honest with you?
Raven: I expect nothing less from my family.
Charity: My job, my career is a Foreseer. I have know for a while now that Providence wants me with Morfran, He is my destiny, But after the death of my mother,  was lost, and I needed to feel a familiar ground and Dakota gave me that.
Raven: I understand... trust me I do..


Raven: But Sweets, you can't run your destiny. It will come back to get you. But if you keep running it will be back in a back way and it will not be a way picture. Trust me, I know.. I've made it happen for a few people in my life.



Charity: May I do a personal on you Raven?
Raven: Sure, you might not like what you see.. You've been warned now..



Raven: WHAT THE??
Charity: SHHHHH
ME: OMG!!! IS THAT LEGAL??


Charity: Well, that's not that bad, I see you, my grandfather, he is young, Handsome devil... OH OH THAT'S NOT POSSIBLE..


Charity: EWWWW That's just gross!!! That's it.. I've seen enough!! I need to have my mind cleaned.. That was just GROSS!!!!


Charity: You did THAT with my grandfather?? Okay I'm done!! I've seen things that belong to my grandfather that I don't want to see again!! NEVER!!!


Raven: *chuckling* Well your grandfather and I do have a history together, a rather sorted one at that..

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Re: Colt's Return: 09/16/2013 Raven & Charity Get to Know Each Other (UPDATED)
« Reply #1418 on: September 16, 2013, 06:47:57 PM »
Uhhh. Poor Charity. I don't think anything short of a mind bleaching will clear that from her head!

Why is Raven sick? Dear Watcher, why does she need to puke? Noooooooo

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Re: Colt's Return: 09/16/2013 Raven & Charity Get to Know Each Other (UPDATED)
« Reply #1419 on: September 16, 2013, 06:49:24 PM »
Uhhh. Poor Charity. I don't think anything short of a mind bleaching will clear that from her head!

Why is Raven sick? Dear Watcher, why does she need to puke? Noooooooo

She needs to puke because she is giving advice on LOVE and Matters of the heart.. LOL NOT THAT!!!!!!

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Re: Colt's Return: 09/16/2013 Raven & Colt Pay a Visit to Dakota (UPDATED)
« Reply #1420 on: September 16, 2013, 07:49:18 PM »
Raven meets Colt on the porch:

Raven: Hello there handsome.
Colt: Hello yourself hotstuff..


Raven: Now serious Colt, I need to find this Dakota kid and set him straight. No one and I mean NO ONE gets in the way of what my son wants..
Colt: I agree, I'll take you there.


Raven: Oh by the way, your granddaughter did a personal reading and say some imagines of us in my mind!!
Colt: *blood drains from face* Your kidding me..
Raven: Nope, She'll be more careful next time.. *cackles*


Raven: But on a deadlier note, I want this kid out of Morfran's life, He has been through enough and What a Goth wants a Goth gets.. You of all people should know that my love..



Colt: No blood shed here Rae Rae.. Promise me that much!! Yes he needs to be out of their life. He needs to know just who is dealing with when it comes to our son. But NOTHING ELSE.. Morfran has come a long way since he has arrived here.
Raven: Only for you I promise ... Only if you promise to reward me with something good before I go tonight!!!
Colt: OH you can bet your evil behind on that!!!



Within seconds, Raven and Colt teleported outside Dakota's house....



Raven: What a quaint little shack, I hear him inside, get up here Colt, we're teleporting in for a surprise attack!! *cackling*
Colt: Yes dear


Dakota: What the?
Raven: Evil is what this is Goth is the name, Raven Goth, and I believe you know Colt.


Dakota: Look, I've already told Morfran, I'd stay away from Charity. I'm engaged to someone else anyway.
Raven: That's nice, but you see, I'm his mother and that's his father, I'm here to make sure that you got the message loud and clear.


Raven: You see, where I'm from, Vamps hide from me, that fear me.. I will cut you down and never think twice about you again. You are worthless.
Dakota: I get it, I understand. I'm sorry, I ......


Raven: Hold it right there, I'm not done, I've not given you premission to speak..



Raven: You as much as step foot on Brooks land, look, call, or even think of her, I'll know it. I have two trusted grandchildren with Colt that are staying behind with their father and Charity, they have orders to do whatever it takes to keep you inline. So remember your family that next time you want to pay Charity a visit..


Dakota: My family? You'd go after my family?
Colt: * from the back ground* Trust me son, she'd do it, I've seen it..


Raven: Stop right there, this ends here, I think you have gotten my point.


Raven: I summon all the power within me and all the dark powers of the Goths gone before me,
Dakota: What are you doing? *nervous*


Raven: Just a simple Bladder Spell


It was right then and there that Dakota wet himself..

 
As he steps out of the bathroom from "freshening up" Raven begins to cackle








Raven: That should keep you in line for now..


Raven: My work here is done..


Back at Casa Del Brooks:
Charity has already left for work, so Raven summons the other three to livingroom to see her and Colt.

Raven: Morfran, My son, Dakota Fox, will no longer be of a threat to you and that lovely young lady. He understands how we as Goths work and How I will protect my own. Now, Cross and Silver, this is Colt Brooks, Your grandfather. I am leaving you two here with them as you asked. You have served grandmother well and it's the least I can do. The only thing I ask is for you to keep an eye on that Fox kid. If he even thinks of Charity or coming near her or here, You know what has to happen, and I trust you carry it out if need be.

Cross/Silver: Yes grandmother, Thank you
 
Raven:Now I have some unfinished Business with your father Morfran before I leave, if you'll excuse us..



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Re: Colt's Return: 09/16/2013 Raven & Colt Pay a Visit to Dakota (UPDATED)
« Reply #1421 on: September 16, 2013, 08:04:52 PM »
Poor Morfran. I'm pretty sure he knows what that means and must also be very nauseated at the idea :P

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Re: Colt's Return: 09/16/2013 Raven & Colt Pay a Visit to Dakota (UPDATED)
« Reply #1422 on: September 16, 2013, 08:08:08 PM »
Poor Morfran. I'm pretty sure he knows what that means and must also be very nauseated at the idea :P

As nauseated as Charity when she read Ravens mind earlier!! LOL

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Re: Colt's Return: 09/16/2013 Raven & Colt Pay a Visit to Dakota (UPDATED)
« Reply #1423 on: September 16, 2013, 08:10:20 PM »
Wow, that ending was spooky. Can't wait for what happens next!
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Re: Colt's Return: 09/16/2013 Raven & Colt Pay a Visit to Dakota (UPDATED)
« Reply #1424 on: September 16, 2013, 08:22:04 PM »
Wow, that ending was spooky. Can't wait for what happens next!

Well what do you think happens next??