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Re: Colt's Return
« Reply #75 on: August 21, 2012, 08:20:06 PM »
ME: So how's the painting coming along?
Amber: Great, I just maxed Photography with this multitab thing Agnes gave me and Colby when we started school a few yrs ago.
Me: Great!! I love those too, Have you seen Colt?
Amber: He said something about going to Central Park and a fight.
Me: Oh no


Leighton: Try looking on the bright side more, instead of being all evil all the time.

Colt: ME? EVIL? Son your mother is Vampire loving llama. She can only go out at night.


Colt: And you, your supposed to be an Athlete? Please I have more muscle on my big toe. *evil laugh*
Leighton: Ole man I could take you on anyday.

Colt: Oh yeah? Lets see


Colt: Oh no you don't. Come back here...


Colt: Now go back and tell your boss that the Evil of man, done kicked your rear.

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Re: Colt's Return
« Reply #76 on: August 21, 2012, 08:30:52 PM »
Colby: You ready to go to the park babe?
Amber: Sure Ace

Colby: Wanna sit and watch the stars now?
Amber: Sure

Colby: Umm, this is nice. If your cold, you can come over here and I'll keep you warm.
Amber: *scoots closer* Thank you kind sir

Colby: When the moon light hits your face like that, it's just beautiful
Amber: Blushes

Amber: oh look a shooting star



Colby: OH LOOK, right there babe, that's your star..
Amber: OH Colby, it's pretty



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Re: Colt's Return
« Reply #77 on: August 21, 2012, 09:14:15 PM »
THE CONFESSION FROM SIMIS

Colt: Evening ole man
Simis: Colt, We need to talk
Colt: ok lets go inside
Simis: No out here.

Simis: Colt, I've not got much longer here with you guys and I need to tell you something that will change your life,
Colt: OK, but I'm not sure what that could be.

Simis: Before I met Jocasta, I was married, we were just kids at the time.
Colt: Ok, what's this got to do with me?
Simis: Colt, I used to live in Bridgeport.

Colt: OK Go on.

Simis: I was in love with my high school sweetheart, Janice

Colt:Ok so her name was the same as my moms, where's this going Simis.

Colt: Wait a minute, You lived in Bridgeport, your the same age as my mom Janice, if she where still alive.
ME: Colt, back up and breathe
Colt: BUT OUT

Simis: I was married to your mom, Janice, before she met Tony Brooks.
Me: OMG!! Here it goes

Colt: All this time, you've been living under MY roof, pretending to be MY FRIEND, and all along your hiding this kind of secret? Why now Simis? Why?

Colt: Calm down I should rip your head off!
Simis: Calm down and I'll explain. Not long after we married, she started hanging out with a different crowd of ppl then normal. A few months later she met your father, Tony.

Simis: I loved your mother.. but she fell head over heels for Tony and the money he was making. I couldn't compete with that.
Colt: I'm listening.
Simis: Well, We both agree to end our short marriage, but our friendship was a strong one and I told her I would always be here for here. I packed and came here. I met Jocasta a few months later and the rest is history.

Colt: Why are you telling me this Simis? My mother could have cared less about me. She ran off and left me, died in another mans house.
Simis: NOT TRUE COLT!!
Colt: TELL ME THE TRUTH THEN

Simis: *mocking* Tell me the truth, I'm not sure you can handle the truth, son
Colt: Try me

Simis: The night your mother died, She was right here in Sunset Valley with me and Jocasta! She was running for her life!
Colt: What?
Simis: She did it to save you.
Colt: Did what?

Simis: It has to do with The Brooks Family Curse, Colt. She sold her soul to the Grims in order to save yours. That's how much she loved you.

Colt: I don't know what to say?
Simis: Here take this, it has a letter from Janice to you. There's also something else, I'm not so what, but she said if you read your dads book and then what she wrote you, then you would know when and how to use the rest.

Colt: Where is she?
Simis: Excuse me?
Colt: Her body? We read that she died in the bed of her lover and dad left it at that.
Simis: The work of the Grims, my son. When the time is right Jocasta will provide you with that info. It's for your safety and the Safety of your family and their future Colt. You must do what has been put before you, and see it through. If not then Colby and Amber will face the same fate as you.
Colt: Simis, Thank you. I'm sorry I yelled at you like I did
Simis: I deserved it.

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Re: Colt's Return
« Reply #78 on: August 21, 2012, 09:35:59 PM »
I love the backstory! It adds a whole new dynamic to this household.

And for being evil, Colt is a pretty likable dude. :P

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« Reply #79 on: August 21, 2012, 09:43:52 PM »
Oh my! I'm not quite sure, if I'm understanding everything.
1) There is a curse - as such not explained yet - concerning the Brooks family?
2) Simis was married to Janice - Colt's mother - but divorced. So, Tony Brooks is his father?
3) Janice had to run for her life from Tony Brooks, because of this curse, and made a pact with Grim to save her descendants?
Even without affirmation of these questions, I must say... what a brilliant plot! I'm totally in awe of you. :)

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Re: Colt's Return
« Reply #80 on: August 22, 2012, 11:32:18 AM »
Wow! A lot of things have been going on here. I like how you manage to make a great story even while playing immortal dynasty  :)

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Re: Colt's Return
« Reply #81 on: August 22, 2012, 11:52:20 AM »
Wow! A lot of things have been going on here. I like how you manage to make a great story even while playing immortal dynasty  :)

LOL There's a method to my madness.  :o I had learned ALOT after 2-3 failed dynasty's and also reading other stories on here. Tin, I am a Stay At Home Mom. I have some days that I can get a few non stop hours of play time in. I have a notebook beside now that I take keynotes in. I stop and make folders on my desktop and move my screenshots at certain times into labeled folders that go along with the notes/chapters. I'm lucky to have a hubby with OCD and he helps ALOT with housework. I cook, load the dishwasher, he unloads, sweeps and mops. I wash clothes, fold, and he puts up. He also does the dusting.  ;D

I am also a avivd Days of Our Lives Fan. So after watching that for over 40 yrs, it's not hard to figure out this after a bit. The hard part for me is getting my words out and having them sound right. Somedays I go without an update and then bam, updates like crazy. I'm just a sucker for romance and mob stories.. LOL Thanks for reading it.. 



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Re: Colt's Return
« Reply #82 on: August 22, 2012, 03:11:05 PM »
I thought I would show some shots of the Museum so far:

Colts part:


Colby's part"


Extra pics


The backyard:


Cool bus kids:

Colby: hmm, What's wrong with the driver?
ME: Not sure, They are always like that.(hoping to upgrade my RAM this weekend)

Bella: You feeling ok this morning dad?
Simis: Yeah honey, just tired. Grims coming any day now. I can feel it.
Jocasta: How did it go last night?
Agnes: Colt never came home from work.

Simis: I"m sorry Agnes, I told him the whole story, gave him the box. He wants to see her grave. I told him in time, that you, Jocasta, would reveal that to him.
Jocasta: *sighs deeply*

ME: Shooo get, no room for pets right now.. and stop eating the paper!
Stray Cat: MEOWWW HISSSSSSS


Photo booth Photos


Me: How was school?
Colby/Amber: Fine,

Jocasta: Enough of that you two, do your homework, I'm going out to my garden, send your dad out there when he gets back.
Amber: Yes ma'am


Me: Still no sign of your dad Colby?
Colby: nope, What's all this about?
Me:Not my place.
Colby: Someone better tell me soon


ME:*rolls eyes* to be young and in love again



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Re: Colt's Return
« Reply #83 on: August 22, 2012, 03:32:27 PM »
ME/ SIMIS: JOCASTA!!!!

Simis: I feel light and floatie Shannon, will it hurt
ME: *cries* oh Simis, Not that I know.

Simis: Shannon go get Agnes
ME: OK
Simis: Jocasta honey, it's ok, I love you and the kids.
Jocasta: OH Simis, it's not far. Your only 91.  That nasty thing is going to come here.
Simis: I  know.. be brave, don't let him see your fear, he loves that. I wish Colt was here.

Grim: SIMIS BACHELOR, Your soul is mine now. You can't run any longer. I have someone that will happy to see you! *evil griddy laugh*
Jocasta: Your time is coming
Simis: Jocasta, I love you, Do what you need Grim. My time is up and I have no regrets. My life was full of love.


GRIM: Simis Bachelor, YOUR SOUL IS FOREVER MINE, THERE IS NOTHING A MORTAL BROOKS MAN CAN DO TO CHANGE THAT. Your fate was sealed long ago with Janice Brooks.
Simis: I know what I did, and I'd do it again.


GRIM:AGNES BROOKS, TELL YOUR HUSBAND, I'M BACK, IT'S TIME TO PAY THE FEE
Agnes: GET OFF MY LAND

ME: Agnes: You take care of Jocasta, I'll move Simis across the street to the Family Cemetery
RIP SIMIS BACHELOR BELOVED HUSBAND, FATHER AND FRIEND


*Sorry this was a long update. But, Simis' part was important to get in.*  Thank you

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Re: Colt's Return
« Reply #84 on: August 22, 2012, 05:42:42 PM »
How emotional! You are a brilliant writer. But I keep on mixing the Brooks up with the Grims, Great story, you have an understanding of what someone would do at each point depending on their traits.

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Re: Colt's Return
« Reply #85 on: August 22, 2012, 08:15:07 PM »
The story is so interesting and emotional! I wonder what happens next with the dynasty and the curse part. Poor Simis, though :(

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« Reply #86 on: August 22, 2012, 08:42:02 PM »
Your preview of the museum pieces is precious and appreciated. Also, Colby and Amber in the park... so sweet!
But then...
Oh dear! Simis parting for the Netherworld and Jocasta saying:"The nasty thing is going to come here now."
Did she talk about Grim's imminent appearance or something deeper than that?
I loved Agnes' reaction: "Get out of my yard!" Feisty woman!
Great updates, sdhoey! :)

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Re: Colt's Return
« Reply #87 on: August 22, 2012, 08:52:59 PM »

Your preview of the museum pieces is precious and appreciated. Also, Colby and Amber in the park... so sweet!
But then...
Oh dear! Simis parting for the Netherworld and Jocasta saying:"The nasty thing is going to come here now."
Did she talk about Grim's imminent appearance or something deeper than that?
I loved Agnes' reaction: "Get out of my yard!" Feisty woman!
Great updates, sdhoey! :)

Thank you SimBlip, She was talking about Grim. Sometime is The Brooks family past, the oldest male double crossed the Mob boss he worked for. Therefore, sealing the fate of all future males in the Brooks Family line. The Bridgeport Crime Family at that time, has ties to the Netherworld. Hence The Brooks Family Curse. Colt has to talk to Colby soon and tell him what is happening what the Immortal Dynasty involves, so that they can break the curse and ...... that is all for now.. Hope that helps..

Oh Look, speak of the Devil .. LOL


ME: Well look what the cat drug in.
Colt: What?I've had alot on my mind woman.
ME: I see you got a promotion. One step away from the top! Good for you

Colt: Woman, what it wrong with you?
ME: COLT BROOKS, DON'T WOMAN ME!! Your family needed you tonight!! You took off last night without a word, never called. Agnes is beside herself, Jocasta is a wreck.
Colt: WAIT!! What happened here!
ME: Simis passed away, and and THAT THING made threats!!!
COLT: WHAT!!!

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Re: Colt's Return AN ELDER BIRTHDAY, TEEN DRIVERS AND A PROM
« Reply #88 on: August 22, 2012, 09:35:08 PM »
Agnes: What, you think just because you have a hot tub installed in the bedroom, I'm gonna forgive you for not coming home and being here for her?
Colt: I said I'm sorry honey. I had alot on my mind. Lets just get in and relax please. It's almost time for those sparkles that make you my sexy grandma.
Agnes: Sexy Grandma? You better stop while your ahead.


Colt: You know you love me.
Agnes: Your too much

Agnes: I'm starved, lets go see what Micheal's got cooked for Breakfast.
Colt: I have all I need right here!! *growls*

Agnes: *blushes* Lunch already?
Amber: Try Dinner *giggles*
Colt: I see Holly stayed over again Micheal?
Micheal: umm yeah about that. We kinda decided to just be friends.

Me: Well we are gonna leave the love birds in their cage for the night!



Zooms back to room:
Agnes: Woohooo, YEAH!!
ME: Happy Birthday Agnes



*PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT*
Due to a wardrobe malfunction, the photos of Agnes in the Sparkle could be shown... ( no clothes) *giggles*
back to regular programming:
Colt: WOW You still got a hot bod, Mrs. Brooks!!



Ok time to leave!!






Amber: I feel sorry for mom. She loved dad so much.
Colby: You know I named a star for him.
Amber: Really?

Colby: Here babe, let me get up and you can sit down

Colby: I love you Amber Bachelor and I'll always be right here for you
Amber: oh my knight red armour
ME: You two are just too darn adorable..



I hope you have your moms moodlet manager, you both have school tomorrow.
Amber: I know, I just couldn't sleep. I miss my dad so much,
Colby: *pulls her close* I'm here babe

Amber: The sunrise is breathtaking Colby
Colby: Not as breathtaking as you my love



Colby: this thing is Evil, no wonder dad spends so much time on it.
ME: Giggles


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Re: Colt's Return
« Reply #89 on: August 22, 2012, 09:53:29 PM »
Micheal: *humming in the shower*
ME: *giggles that burst into laughter*
Micheal*startled* WHAT ARE YOU DOING?
ME: hmm someone booby trapped the shower. *snickers*

Micheal: your joking right?
ME: check for yourself


Micheal: What the? Teal Green?

Micheal: AMMMMBBBERRRRRR BACHELOR

ME: Better take another one *giggles*
Micheal: G E T O U T N O W



Colby: Before we go to school, I wanted to ask if you like to go to the Prom Friday night with me?
Amber: Of course! Who else would I go with silly?