Phew. 63 Chapters at last.
Yay, for me! Because I could finished reading your story
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I already stunned when I saw the your story about Holly Alto since I read the first chapter. Well, because I am a fans of Altos!
And each chapter that you're written is amazing. So beautiful. So realistic. I almost could felt what they are felt. You really make them alive.
You knew about tissue things, well I need one when I read that chapters, that was so embarrassing when people around me saw me crying for no reason (to them)
I'm smiled when:
* I saw those family-tree. You know, I loved when I saw that everyone were connected.
* I loved to saw Goth family were there
* I saw 'Koffi' at Epilogue. (So, I guess that Gobby has a happy life in your story) See! You made them connected to everyone!
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I wished that I could comments for each chapters, but I couldn't.
There so many things that I want to told you, but so little time.
But, it was awesome for overall, I love every bit on it.
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You're writing like a professional, Raia. Thumb up for you.
I'm still learning about writing, I hope that someday that I can write like you and other writers here
Now, I just can't wait to see Second Chances update, as there are Gobby there :3
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Best wishes for your next story, Raia
Eld
P.S: Would you mind to tell me about Andrew hairstyle? I love his hairstyle.