Juan seems to spend a lot of time on fire. Great story though, I'll be reading.
Maybe the story should have been called set the one(Juan) afire.
Rachel
I laughed. Thanks guys.
It's the perils of being an inventor.
I honestly feel bad for Helvete, having that nose. But great story I'll be reading.
Juan's nose is quite the strong gene. I mean, Chris Steel's mouth has nothing on that.
Chapter Five
“Meet Helvete again, everyone. Aren't you so precious?”“Omnomnom.”
“Say words for me.”
“Gah!”
“Nothing says cuteness like getting on your own two feet.”
“You're already doing better than Juan.”
“Again? You're not setting a good example for Helvete, now are you?”“AHHHHH!”
“Oh look, she's discovered bipedality. And the Darer features grow worse each day.”
“Back to the old grind, huh?”“Trip, why inside the diner?”
“Gas leaks are serious business, hun.”
“I forgot how stressful work can be.”
“You'll get a break soon. I'm making Juan put another nooboo inside of you tonight. His request.”“I don't really think I want that right now-”
“Oh hi, hot new jacket. Trip, it's nooboo time again.”
“You always come around.”
“Who's giving mom a nice new round of maternity leave? You are, little Kindle.”
“Watch out, it's mommy's pregnancy hormones! ATTACK!”
"Goo!"
“No fear, Juan. Smoldering Kindle has been expelled from Blaise's body. The pink skin lives.”
