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Re: In The Dark- It's Still Dark
« Reply #45 on: June 25, 2012, 09:56:27 PM »
Wow! That was a really good update! How did you get the mist and stuff to surround them like that?!
I could say it was magic, but..... I just put a bunch of fog machines, and since it was a really enclosed area, it filled up the room. I was even surprised by how much fog there was! Then they just posed for me, good simmies!

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Re: In The Dark- It's Still Dark
« Reply #46 on: June 25, 2012, 09:58:25 PM »
I could say it was magic, but..... I just put a bunch of fog machines, and since it was a really enclosed area, it filled up the room. I was even surprised by how much fog there was! Then they just posed for me, good simmies!

Well it looked cool! And yes, I love when they do the right poses!
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Re: In The Dark- It's Still Dark
« Reply #47 on: June 25, 2012, 10:00:08 PM »
While reading the last update I found myself leaning closer and closer into the screen as I read. This is so good. I hope they find someone that can explain a little about what has happened.

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Re: In The Dark- It's Still Dark
« Reply #48 on: June 25, 2012, 10:01:06 PM »
While reading the last update I found myself leaning closer and closer into the screen as I read. This is so good. I hope they find someone that can explain a little about what has happened.
Hm, time can only tell.... I'm not given anything away!
Well it looked cool! And yes, I love when they do the right poses!
Thanks! It makes our lives so much easier when they pose! I think my sims just want to be famous, they always seem to smile.

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Re: In The Dark- It's Still Dark
« Reply #49 on: June 25, 2012, 10:02:40 PM »
Hm, time can only tell.... I'm not given anything away!Thanks! It makes our lives so much easier when they pose! I think my sims just want to be famous, they always seem to smile.
Don't give anything away!

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Re: In The Dark- It's Still Dark
« Reply #50 on: June 25, 2012, 10:03:25 PM »
Don't give anything away!
I'm trying not too! It's just so hard! Is it too soon to post a quick update? I don't want to update so close together, I just feel so inspired today!

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Re: In The Dark- It's Still Dark
« Reply #51 on: June 25, 2012, 10:20:21 PM »
I'm trying not too! It's just so hard! Is it too soon to post a quick update? I don't want to update so close together, I just feel so inspired today!

I say no it isn't! Haha
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Re: In The Dark- It's Still Dark
« Reply #52 on: June 25, 2012, 11:03:16 PM »
Since it isn't too soon to update, here we go. No pics this time, something to leave while I work on the next part. I'm telling this from Sophie's point of views, it's the chaos going on back at the house.

Meanwhile, back at the school . . . . . .
   
  "Sophie!" A voice yells from outside the sheets. "GO AWAY!" I yell at it, it's sleep time. I want to sleep. "Did you just tell me to leave?" I almost say 'Yeah, I kinda just did.' but then I recognize the voice, it's Julie. I gently pull the sheets away from my face. "Can I help you?" I say sweetly. "Hailey and Warren are gone." I gasp at her. Am I hearing things? I thought I heard her say that Hailey and Warren were gone. I laugh. "Why are you laughing?" SHe asks, she's not laughing. "Wait, they are seriously, truly, up mostly gone?" She nods. I jump out of bed and follow her down the stairs. Julie stands in the middle of everyone.
 "Dear Sophie, Julie, Kayla, Benjamin and Tommy,
    I don't mean to sound like every other person who runs away but, by the time you read this, me and Warren will be gone. How far I don't know. We left last night, it's weird talking about what is yet to happen like it's already happened. I just wanted to say that it was nice getting to know you all. Sophie, thanks for keeping the peace between everyone and cooking dinner and breakfast. Julie, thanks for being there when I need help, logical help and just plain help." Julie stops reading for a moment, wipes a tear from her eyes and continues. "Kayla, i know we had our ups and downs but I did consider you as a friend, you may have said things about me but I forgive you for them all. And if I ever see you again, I'll be more then happy to tell you why I won't go swimming." Kayla turns away from everyones glances, she leaves the room. "Benjamin, I never knew you very well, but you seemed nice enough. You are very handy with computers and I will always remember when you helped me unfreeze my computer and help me save my English report. And Tommy, you always seemed built like a rock, in the sense that you stand your ground. Don't prove me wrong now." We all look over at Tommy he is the only one who seems to understand what was said about him.  He chokes back tears, "I knew her when we were little." Is all he says.
  "I will miss you all, and if I don't see any of you ever again, I want you to know that I will remember all of you for the little things you gave me. The best of luck + Love, Hailey" We all stand, unsure what to say next. "She meant a lot to us all and we never knew." Julie said. Tommy nods, then Benjamin surprises  with his words. " Who would have known that her leaving would effect us all so much, I always thought she was the quiet one in the back of the room who never spoke. There was a whole side of her we never knew."
   We all stand in silence, no one mentions that they miss Warren. But he was that guy that you don't have to say you miss him,because you know you will. I clear my throat. "She wrote like a official goodbye letter. Like she would never see us again.  She cares so much about all of us, and most of us didn't even give her a second glance." "Then we know what we have to do then?" Julie asked, her eyes bright. We nod in union.

Hope you liked the update! The next one will be very action packed, so be ready!

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Re: In The Dark- Newest Log-Leaving?
« Reply #53 on: June 26, 2012, 09:01:42 AM »
Oh, I bet they will go after them. Great updates! The fog looked so cool. I'm prepared for the action!

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Re: In The Dark- Newest Log-Leaving?
« Reply #54 on: June 26, 2012, 09:02:21 AM »
Oh, I bet they will go after them. Great updates! The fog looked so cool. I'm prepared for the action!
We'll have to see, thanks!

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Re: In The Dark- Newest Log-Leaving?
« Reply #55 on: June 26, 2012, 10:17:32 AM »
Aww... I hope they see each other again.

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Re: In The Dark- Newest Log-Leaving?
« Reply #56 on: June 26, 2012, 10:23:52 AM »
Aww... I hope they see each other again.

I'm working on the next update now, I don't know when it will be up since what I have to do is complicated. :-\

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Re: In The Dark- Newest Log-Leaving?
« Reply #57 on: June 26, 2012, 01:35:19 PM »

I'm working on the next update now, I don't know when it will be up since what I have to do is complicated. :-\
Ooooo complicated! That sounds fun!!!

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« Reply #58 on: June 26, 2012, 02:33:33 PM »
Now it's the action packed episode!

I have lost count of how many days we've been here, weeks or even months. I don't know what time it is, when day or night is. Right now day is when I wake up and night is when I sleep. I have reread all the boos we brought and walked around aimlessly just to waste time. My eyes flutter open, but I immediately shut them. Because something bright shines in my eyes. Something bright.... My eyes fly open and I jump up, then I look at the window. It's not dark, it's a tree and grass and a blue sky and clouds.  I nearly fainted, "Warren, " I said shaking his shoulder to wake him up. I point to the window and his jaw drops. "Oh. My. Gosh." "Let's go outside!" I say as I run to grab my shoes. I just want to go outside, but Warren grabs my arm. "Hailey," He says sternly, I try to pull out of his grasp, but he keeps his hold. "We don't know how much as changed, we don't know who or what is out there. We just need to wait a bit, okay?" I nod and pull out of his grasp. I trudge down stairs and look out the window, every thing seems fine. Warren just isn't happy that I woke up before him and saw it first. But I obey, and start cooking breakfast.  I pour the gooey oatmeal into two bowls, we are getting low on supplies. I almost call Warren, but a knock leaves the words stuck in my throat.
  A knock, must be my imagination, but I hear it again. Plus a, "HELLOOO? Is any body home?" I walk towards the door and open it, "Hello!" She says, she reminds me of someone.
 But who? Then it hits me, and weighs down on my shoulders, and my head feels fuzzy. "Kayla?" I ask, she looks at me like I'm crazy. Maybe I am crazy, it wouldn't surprise me. "I'm not Kayla." She said sounding a whole lot like Kayla. "I'm Shirley, Shirley Salt. I had a great, great, great, great, great, great, great Aunt Kayla." My hand starts to shake, I am going crazy. This isn't happening, this little girl is a figment of my imagination, I am dreaming. It is still dark outside. The trees are fake, the sky is fake, the grass is fake and the breeze is fake.
    I start to laugh, and when I start I can not stop. "What happened to your great whatever aunt?" I ask in-between laughs. She now knows I'm crazy. "Well, when we had the big storm, she got trapped in a school." I stop laughing, this isn't real, you are dreaming. " She was there with six other kids, they are now historic figures. They were Kayla Salt, Tommy Wendell, Sophie Thompson,  Julie Barc, Benjamin Pole, Warren Abnegation and Hailey Finnly. My blood turns cold. You are dreaming! I yell at my self. Then why does it hurt when I pinch myself? "Wha...what happened to them?" I ask shakily. "Well, they looked in the school, but found no one. So they condemned the school over two hundred years ago." Then how come we only left no more then two years ago, how come I am still sixteen? "What year is it?" She furrows her eyebrows, "It's 2712." "What?" She nods, "They kept the school open as a memorial for five hundred years, then decided to close it because it wasn't structurally sound." "Warren!" I gasp. He comes down the stairs and stops, "Kayla?" He asked, like I did. "I'm not Kayla!" She cries again. "i'm Shirley! What's your guys problems?" "But she looks like Kayla." Warren whispers in my ear. "She said it's 2712. And Kayla's her seven times grab aunt." I whisper back.
    "Can we see the school?" She nods and brings us outside, we follow her till we see a large building. All the window are boarded up, and the walls seem to want to fall on us. I start to cry, "There was no survivors found in the school." Kayla says matter of factly, which makes me sob. She stares at me, but I don't care. I just want to know what, as far as I know, Warren and I are the only ones that survived from the school."Hey?" asks Warren, "Mind if my friends come over?" Warren shakes his head and puts his arms around me. "I'm just as confused as you are." He says into my ear.
    Kayla walks back over to us, with a small group in behind her. "That's Isaac Abnegation," she says pointing to a small boy, who looks just like Warren. "That's Becky, Isaac's older sister." she says pointing to a taller girl who looked to be my age. She looked like Warren as well. "She looks just like my sister." He whispers in my ear." "That's Dale Barc," pointing to a boy who's hand is casually laced with Becky's, Sophie's look alike. "And that's Micah Thompson." Almost a miniature version of Julie.
  "Who are you guys?" She asks, Warrens arms that are wrapped around me tighten a bit. He's tense, why? "I'm Warren." He says, "Hailey." "What are your last names?" She asks, why does she need our last names? Warren hesitates, "Abnegation." Their faces fall open, "And don't tell me your last name is Finnly?" She looks at frowning. "It is." I say bitting my lip. "Oh," Kayla stops smiling, "I guess you we better go tell my mom, she's been waiting."

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In The Dark- Newest Log-Leaving?
« Reply #59 on: June 26, 2012, 02:35:28 PM »
I love your story! Good job!

 

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