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Re: Winds of Change - Immortal Dynasty (Completed 9/23/12)
« Reply #90 on: October 28, 2012, 04:07:57 AM »
I just wanted to touch on this for a second. I haven't forgotten the story, and in fact, it's finished.

But I'm actually waiting for Seasons to come out, because I want the slow dancing (it's perfect for Her Grace - and for His Grace too). I could post the story, but in this case, I think it's actually better served with some pictures to accompany it.

@SimBlip - I hope that when I can get the rest of the story out (with pictures!), your curiosity will be satisfied indeed! ;D In this case, though, I can clarify that while Her Grace may or may not have died, Valor isn't her son; he is her great-grandson.

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« Reply #91 on: November 27, 2012, 02:14:05 AM »

He took a breath, then let it out slowly, his gaze fixed on some distant point in the blue sky.


"So be it. My name is Valor, gifted to me by my mother. In our native tongue, it is impossible for the mortal tongue to speak, but in the mortal tongue, I am simply Valor.

"But I was not always so. Once I was Prince Valor, the son of the mortal prince, Naheem, and the immortal princess now known to history as the Breaker. As is always the case, politics and power, betrayal and intrigue, this broke my home when I was little more than a toddler. My mother's people came and slew my father, for the Elder's Council had deemed my father imperfect, unfit to be my mother's mate.

"They then ordered my mother to dispose of me, for I too was deemed imperfect. My mother was to dispose of me and mate with the prince they had chosen. But my mother was clever, and so she both obeyed and disobeyed. She obeyed by disposing of me - and giving me to her grandmother, Her Royal Grace. And then she disobeyed by disappearing, warning them she would never mate with the prince they had chosen, that I was her heir. And then she warned them that if I ever died, so too would the peace that Her Royal Grace's wedding had brought."






"But I speak too soon. Let me return to the beginning. The land from which I come from is very far away, very old. It was still a new land when Her Royal Grace inherited from her sire, the Dragon Emperor. Unfortunately, the Dragon Emperor was very arrogant and conceited, and very indifferent. His only weakness was his daughter, she who was the Fireborn. And when he relinquished the throne to her, the fractured land demanded unity. The Elder's Council came to her and demanded she execute her sire for his numerous crimes, and to mate with the prince they had chosen."


"Aye, Grace, a familiar tale already. But Her Royal Grace had inherited her sire's stubborn nature. She refused to execute him, but agreed to mate with one of theirs. Alas, the Elder's Council was also very arrogant and conceited. They had chosen for her a warrior hardened by battle, a male who would be a worthy king, so that she might do a female's duty and bear him sons. So they did not know how to react when the male she chose was one they had never expected."








"As a boy, the one they called the Flamesword had always been ever present in the company of the Fireborn. Not as a companion, nor as a lover, simply as a friend. And while she learned the tactics of war from the Dragon Emperor, he learned the gentler healing arts. When she returned from the training field, he is the one who tended her injuries.

"History tells that they fell in love, and when the Council tried to force the Fireborn into marriage, she quietly married the Flamesword. The Council had no choice but to acquiesce, for the Flamesword was not afraid to defend and protect his Queen."


"In time, their eldest daughter, Alexa Sunjewel, married also. Her choice was one of her mother's best allies, called Carter the Brave. But by this time, peace also prevailed over the land."


"And then Juliana the Breaker met Prince Naheem. And so I am here."

"Father...you said that your mother died for me?"

"Aye. The Elder's Council found me, after all these years. I was too strong for them, but you were not. And so the Breaker willingly fell on her sword to protect you. After all, if she was not around to teach you the women's magic, then you were no threat."


"But...now what?"

"It is done. That you regained your magics tells me that the Elder's Council no longer binds us. We are free to live our lives as we truly wish."



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« Reply #92 on: November 27, 2012, 02:15:29 AM »

"I told them that with the bindings on our family now broken, Her Royal Grace and His Royal Grace would return to life, once again the Queen Fireborn and her Prince the Flamesword. That the Sunjewel now shone radiantly in the royal palace.

"Justice married his Sara, and found a residence with their daughter Claire. I revealed to them the secret of resurrecting the dead. Mercy was finally able to marry her Rian, and they are expecting another child. Prudence and Octavio adopted a girl child, naming her Joy. Charity and Jared simply enjoyed their time together, making no plans, only having fun. Constance and Carmen made plans to travel the world. Grace and Antonio are also expecting another child. Faith and Sam moved into the house next door. I did also resurrect my son Billy, and his mother Kara."


"As for me, I have my Agnes back."


"I have missed you, Mother. Welcome back."

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Re: Winds of Change - Immortal Dynasty (Completed 9/23/12)
« Reply #93 on: November 27, 2012, 09:58:09 AM »
That was absolutely beautiful and well worth the wait!
I loved the pictures and Valor's voice remained authentic until the very end.
Thank you so much for writing!  :D

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Re: Winds of Change - Immortal Dynasty (Completed 9/23/12)
« Reply #94 on: November 27, 2012, 01:11:29 PM »
Thank you very much for following the story, I'm thrilled you enjoyed it! :)

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Re: Winds of Change - Immortal Dynasty (Completed 9/23/12)
« Reply #95 on: November 27, 2012, 06:24:48 PM »
Yay you finished it.  Brilliant job!   I'm so glad that everyone got to move on and live the lives that they truly wanted.  Cute little nooboos and all.
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« Reply #96 on: November 28, 2012, 01:19:36 AM »
Yay, I'm glad I finally finished it! (Amidst much eye-rolling from my roommate)

I'm kinda ready to try another Immortal Dynasty too... :o



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Winds of Change - Immortal Dynasty (Completed 9/23/12)
« Reply #97 on: November 28, 2012, 01:24:17 AM »
Yay, I'm glad I finally finished it! (Amidst much eye-rolling from my roommate)

I'm kinda ready to try another Immortal Dynasty too... :o

Don't feel bad.  I've been thinking the same thing and I'm not even done.
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Re: Winds of Change - Immortal Dynasty (Completed 9/23/12)
« Reply #98 on: November 28, 2012, 03:07:15 AM »
Yay, I'm glad I finally finished it! (Amidst much eye-rolling from my roommate)

I'm kinda ready to try another Immortal Dynasty too... :o

I already have at the very least two more ideas for Immortal Dynasties in my head and my Gen one isn't even immortalized!  ::)

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Re: Winds of Change - Immortal Dynasty (Completed 9/23/12)
« Reply #99 on: April 28, 2014, 07:11:39 PM »
Good job!
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Re: Winds of Change - Immortal Dynasty (Completed 9/23/12)
« Reply #100 on: April 29, 2014, 01:48:09 PM »
 :)

Thank you so much!

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Re: Winds of Change - Immortal Dynasty (Completed 9/23/12)
« Reply #101 on: April 29, 2014, 06:29:36 PM »
I hope you do a decadestiny :) ( I know I spelled it wrong :D, I did the best I can )

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Re: Winds of Change - Immortal Dynasty (Completed 9/23/12)
« Reply #102 on: April 29, 2014, 07:15:02 PM »
A DecaDynasty is somewhere in the vague future.

I am actually working on a 4x4 Dynasty, founded by Justice's daughter, Claire - I just have to start writing it. After that, I plan to do another Life States Dynasty with the next Wind descendant.

After that, I'll either start on the DecaDynasty, or be locked away in an asylum to break me of my Sims 3 addiction. ;D

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Re: Winds of Change - Immortal Dynasty (Completed 9/23/12)
« Reply #103 on: April 29, 2014, 07:23:00 PM »
Smuggle the game into the asylum as contraband; you can never leave it ever. ;)

I never commented on this dynasty. I don't think so, anyways. It's well-written, but I don't know what else I'd expect from you.
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Re: Winds of Change - Immortal Dynasty (Completed 9/23/12)
« Reply #104 on: April 29, 2014, 08:15:39 PM »
 :D

Thank you, Trip.

Also, if I do wind up in that asylum, I expect you to keep me company! :P

 

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