Author Topic: [New Story] Hate That I Love You - Based on True Life Story  (Read 2078 times)

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[New Story] Hate That I Love You - Based on True Life Story
« on: February 23, 2018, 02:28:11 AM »


Hate That I Love You
You can never control what your heart desires even when your mind doesn't want to.





Faitherine Swan
A girl who dreams of being in love and being loved fully by someone.



Christopher Hamilton
A man who never trusted love until he found the one that worth to be loved.



Website : Hate That I Love You
Sims games featured : Sims 4
Update schedule : Monthly
Disclaimer : PG-13
Summary : Based on a true story about a gangster falling in love with an innocent girl.

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Re: [New Story] Hate That I Love You - Based on True Life Story
« Reply #1 on: March 07, 2018, 11:23:05 AM »
Hello Simmers .

I have been writing the story called "Hate That I Love You" @ www.hatethatily.blogspot.sg
I hope some of you guys would comment and maybe tell me what I can improve on .
It is my 7th Chapter now including Prologue .
There are quite a handful of views but I am curious about the readers' views .

Here's a Prologue for those Simmers who are new to my story .



(((Faitherine Swan)))

She was just a simple girl who always wonders who her true love is. She dated her best friend of four years but never felt a spark with him. She always treated Zayn as her own brother. When they were officially together, it felt too awkward for her.

"No more jokes please!" Zayn told Faith.
"You should have seen the look on your face! You were totally speechless!" Faith laughed so hard.
"You asking for a break-up and going steady with Harry is not funny! I could have killed Harry if it was really happening. Stop laughing!"

Harry was their best friend. They loved to go out together. They practically did everything together.

"Aww, come on! Harry is your best friend, OUR best friend. He will never betray you like that!" Faith said, still laughing.
"He was in love with you before. It could have been real you know! Babe, stop laughing!"
"But I chose you, didn't I?"
"Well, true."
"Smack that grin off your face!"

Zayn had always been jealous of Harry since forever. Harry was not only cute but he was naturally kind and very patient. Faith is only 13 going on 14. However, she felt that this love could last even though she didn't feel a spark with him. She wanted Zayn to be hers forever. She always did.


(((Christopher Hamilton)))

He believed that when anyone does something bad towards him, revenge awaits. He never let anyone go that easily. He was in love. He was deep in love with Lydia. After they had been together for 5 months, he tattooed her name on the back of his neck. He was so in love that made him trust her every word. Before knowing Lydia, he was a playboy. He had many girls running after him. People call him Casanova because he once slept with tonnes of girls a day! But after knowing Lydia, he decided to change.

But he was wrong. He was blinded by her words. Lydia wasn't the girl whom he thought she was. A huge news broke out from his own brother that Lydia had been sleeping around with Chris' OWN friends! Chris only knew 4 of them and confronted them. None of his friends able to tell the truth. They denied every time they were asked. Only God knows the rest!

Since the day Chris knew about the true Lydia, he was never the same. He wanted Lydia to feel the hurt he got when he heard the news. Lydia didn't know that Chris knew about her doings. Since then, he did not even care about anything that Lydia is going to do or doing. He stopped showing interest in her.

The real him is somewhere inside, waiting to come out. He wanted to feel loved. He wanted to feel special from a girl. He wanted someone who would do anything for him. He could only hope that one day there will be the one special girl. And it will definitely NOT be the girl he tattooed her name on.



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