Oh, I just love the conversation, it flows so natural. It’s funny to remember that I was smiling when I read their conversation. It’s adorable. It’s nothing wrong to laugh at your own joke that means you’re enjoying yourself, it’s good for health, really
I want to see this feat more in your story; it looks like one of your strengths. I enjoyed ‘em a lot. And it’s nice to see different view of points plus a different kind style of writing. As long that you enjoying yourself, I see nothing’s wrong with that.
Good luck with the rest of your story
