Author Topic: The Watcher's Challenge - Chapter 4: Time Flies  (Read 6958 times)

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Re: The Watcher's Challenge - Chapter 3: Family
« Reply #15 on: November 15, 2013, 03:06:06 PM »
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I've been stalled in this game since I got too far ahead and didn't want to give up writing.

In my case, usually the progress for both game and story are balanced each other. Well, I quickly lost interest for what I do, including play the Sims. The way to make my interest high is making stories and gathers idea for what will come next. I didn’t always take what happens at screenshots as my main story, because before the story published I usually write down about my story and then I took the corresponding and additional screenshots.

When I play the game usually I took so many screenshots, just for one hour only I could reap 500-600 screenshots. And usually just looking at many screenshots that I took, it quickly gives me idea for what will come next. I know that will affect slow gaming progress but I still can keep both progress balances.

I know how that feel, sometimes we feel too lazy to write just because we just far ahead  x_x

So, good luck! You’re doing great :3

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It was so fast for Gavin to reach Elder-hood stage x_x, is he older than Pepper? Like a Young Adult and an Adult?
You did a good job with the screenshots, so far I really enjoying it. Bravo! :3
I can't wait to see Lightning in his childhood years!
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Re: The Watcher's Challenge - Chapter 3: Family
« Reply #16 on: November 18, 2013, 09:24:33 PM »
He is adorable although he was a vampire. I guess that I will need to see the next chapter.

I was glad he was since I'm hoping to get 8 vampires in this house by the end of the story.

It was so fast for Gavin to reach Elder-hood stage x_x, is he older than Pepper? Like a Young Adult and an Adult?

I was really surprised, too. Gavin must have been adult when the game started because when I got control of him he wasn't more than a couple days from Elder! Luckily that means he can do his part in the story and move on more quickly and Pepper won't be able to get so attached to him.

Glad you're all enjoying it! It's been very different to write and play than I expected. But still fun.

Rae



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Re: The Watcher's Challenge - Chapter 3: Family
« Reply #17 on: December 03, 2013, 12:28:03 AM »
Sorry for the delay, I struggled with this chapter looking for the story among the screenshots. Finally I changed the character focus and it finally seemed to work.

Chapter 4: Time Flies

"Hold still, you're wiggling again."
"But mom, I'm going to be late!"
"The bus won't leave without you." Pepper took the picture quickly. It would have to do.



Lightning wasn't sure what to expect from his first day of school. His mother said she'd never gone and his father claimed that end elementary school didn't really matter. Peach was sulking since Lightning had said that dolls couldn't go to school. But it was in school that he found his passion, art class to be precise. It didn't take long for Pepper to buy him an easel and paints.



"Can't we play yet? This is boring." Peach was less appreciative of Lightning's talent but Lightning was pretty sure most artists lived in obscurity a first. After he painted a decent portrait of his friend, Peach was more forgiving.



"You're done! Great, time for a pillow fight?"



Plus if he was in his room, he didn't have to watch his parents. Not that they fought, but there was always a tension in the room that he didn't enjoy. His father spent all his free time cooking and learning new recipes. But his mother never ate a bite.



"Dad, does plasma taste good?"
"What?"
"Plasma packs. That's all Mom ever drinks."
"Ah, erm. Eat your soup. You're growing and there's no need for you to drink that junk."



Plasma packs did taste good, but he was careful not to let his father know.
"I'll tell on you."
"Try, they can't hear you."



His mother threw him a big party for his birthday, but he suspected it was more of a political move and a chance to show off her mixology skill judging by the invitees. Then again, he didn't really have many friends his age. Outside of Peach his best friend was the babysitter.



"Painting's more fun anyway." His parent's built him an art studio in the backyard near where his mother's new party room had been built.



Time passed both slowly and quickly in the White household. Lightning went alone to prom, and came back alone.



He did however try to make friends. He invited his classmates over after school, but it was awkward.



Lightning was painting when it happened. Although Gavin still worked at the hospital everyday, Death surprised them all by visiting one evening. "I'm glad I had this second chance at life. It wasn't what I expected, but I wouldn't have had it any other way."



That night, Lightning choked down a bowl of soup his father had made. He left the rest to spoil in the fridge.



The next day, after school, Pepper took Lightning to the cemetery. They drove through the town as dusk fell, Lightning wasn't sure what to say to his mother so they didn't speak. Gavin White. Age 94. Rest in Peace.



The house felt empty without him. But it wouldn't stay empty for long.




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Re: The Watcher's Challenge - Chapter 4: Time Flies
« Reply #18 on: December 03, 2013, 01:53:16 PM »
Great decoration for the house and I love Lightning's painting and as well Lightning interaction with his imaginary friend. Aww, Gavin could have a bigger tombstone that was too sad... :(
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Re: The Watcher's Challenge - Chapter 4: Time Flies
« Reply #19 on: December 03, 2013, 02:16:52 PM »
Aww, Gavin could have a bigger tombstone that was too sad... :(

Yeah, I did not take good care of him at all. I like to think he was getting happier at the end, but it wasn't enough to make up for everything.

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Re: The Watcher's Challenge - Chapter 4: Time Flies
« Reply #20 on: December 03, 2013, 02:24:08 PM »
You can always create additional scene if you don't have anything to tell. I always do that when I don't have any material that I wanted.  So, what you need to do just prepare another save. Your actual game play would be no harm and you still have your fun playing around with story.
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