I'm quite curious about Esrim Edition that you mentioned on the story title, is that means there also another version?
So, here's the comment:
I love how you consider the meaning about the names that you used on your Sims, I always wonder about that part as well when I looking into someone stories, but I thought maybe someone plan over it and the other just random. Her hairstyle reminds me of current Miley Cyrus though...
I also love how you did for narrate your own story; it seems natural like when you talking with someone, it's not like reading a story at all, as if that you're talking to us. You also good at capturing some moments, I love Amos part as a toddler when he frown; I think that was nice and deep for interpretation. Also I never had my Sims doing street art while naked, she is quite unique one on her way isn't she? And some reference also neat being put into story, which is great for people who really know that.
...and table of contents always something neat to consider.
