I love the story! I was expecting Halinor to be with Chris xD so it was a really good surprise for me! Melody is BOTH pretty and smart, contradicting what she commented about her mom: 'But ah well, I guess you can never really have beauties and brains...'
Really interesting how the game since to be helping you when you're stuck
hoping to see the sequel soon! Good luck with your current novel (and all your other future stories)