Author Topic: Between Dreams and Sunset - COMPLETE  (Read 22377 times)

Offline Caterina

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Re: Between Dreams and Sunset - COMPLETE
« Reply #45 on: August 10, 2013, 10:58:13 AM »
Wow!  I really liked this story.  Melody is a very pretty child.  I hope the grandparents will mend their relationship with their daughter and be a part of this family and the wedding.

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Re: Between Dreams and Sunset - COMPLETE
« Reply #46 on: August 10, 2013, 11:28:52 AM »
I enjoyed your story very much. Melody is a very smart little girl.



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Offline chetanhaobijam

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Re: Between Dreams and Sunset - COMPLETE
« Reply #47 on: August 10, 2013, 01:53:44 PM »
I love happy endings and the ending was perfect. I had great fun time reading this story. All credit to Melody for the hard work on uniting her parents. Hoping for a sequel to come.:)
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Offline Namaya

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Re: Between Dreams and Sunset - COMPLETE
« Reply #48 on: August 10, 2013, 05:22:36 PM »
Thank you all for the nice comments! I had great fun creating this story and was able to finish it mainly because of you readers :). It was also a great way for me as a sims 3 newbie to get to know the game better! ^^
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Between Dreams and Sunset
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Offline jasjam

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Re: Between Dreams and Sunset - COMPLETE
« Reply #49 on: August 17, 2013, 06:08:47 AM »
I love the story! I was expecting Halinor to be with Chris xD so it was a really good surprise for me! Melody is BOTH pretty and smart, contradicting what she commented about her mom: 'But ah well, I guess you can never really have beauties and brains...'

Really interesting how the game since to be helping you when you're stuck :) hoping to see the sequel soon! Good luck with your current novel (and all your other future stories)